Unit 1 Period 3 Assessing Your Progress（写作课分层作业）英语人教版选择性必修第一册

**基本信息** 本同步练习以分层设计为核心，通过基础巩固、能力进阶到高考衔接的三级梯度，构建从词汇句型到语篇思辨的知识巩固路径，兼顾语言能力培养与思维品质提升。 **分层设计** |层次|知识覆盖|设计特色| |----|----------|----------| |基础层|核心短语（be passionate about等）、基础句型（强调句、as倒装）|短语填空、句型转换等题型夯实基础，小作文（80词）初步构建语篇能力| |进阶层|高阶短语（undergo countless sufferings等）、复杂语法（非限制性定语从句+强调句）|综合升格改写提升句式多样性，高阶书面表达（Modesty Is Eternal Glory）强化逻辑结构| |拔高层|辩证逻辑（In contrast等连接词）、思辨翻译、高考题型|反向辩证句式改写培养批判性思维，高考真题续写（2023浙江卷）实现学考衔接|

分层作业 Unit 1 Period 3 Assessing Your Progress 一、短语填空 be passionate about, stick to, overcome difficulties, be devoted to, set a good example to 1. Einstein ________________ physics and maths in his early life. 2. No matter what trouble he met, he ________________ his scientific research firmly. 3. Having to flee his country, he managed to ________________ and carried on his study. 4. The great scientist ________________ exploring the truth throughout his whole life. 5. Einstein ________________ young people with his perseverance and modesty. 二、语法句型转换（本课三大必考点） 1. Perseverance helped Einstein achieve great success.（改为强调句 It is…that…） 2. Einstein was extremely brilliant. He remained modest all the time.（as引导让步倒装） 3. He published four landmark papers in 1905. The papers shocked the whole science world.（合并为非限制性定语从句） 三、根据汉语提示完成句子（写作万能句） 1. 在众多美好品质中，毅力对成功起到关键作用。 Among all fine qualities, perseverance ________________________ to success. 2. 正是持续的努力而非天赋造就了伟人。 It is continuous efforts ________________________ that create great men. 3. 他的经历提醒我们面对困境绝不能轻言放弃。 His experience reminds us that we should never give up ________________________. 四、书面表达小作文 Perseverance Leads to Success 要求： 1. 三段式：提出观点→举例爱因斯坦论证→个人感悟 2. 词数：80词左右 3. 必须使用至少：1处定语从句 + 1处强调句 五、高阶提分短语填空 undergo countless sufferings; be committed to; far outweigh; live up to; serve as an inspiration for 1. Hard work and persistence ________ natural talent in achieving lifelong success. 2. Einstein ________ scientific truth and never compromised under political pressure. 3. The physicist ________ during the war but never gave up his academic pursuit. 4. His noble character ________ teenagers to chase dreams bravely. 5. We should try our best ________ the expectations of our teachers and parents. 六、语法综合升格改写 1. Efforts made Einstein successful.（强调句 + 对比结构 rather than） 2. Einstein had outstanding intelligence. He refused to show off his achievements.（as倒装 + 非限制性定语从句两句合并） 3. He stuck to research in spare time. He made historic breakthroughs.（现在分词作结果状语） 七、辩证观点句子汉译英（写作结尾升华专用） 1. 比起卓越的科研成就，爱因斯坦谦逊的品格拥有更长久的精神价值。 2. 真正支撑人们走过困境的不是天赋，而是永不言弃的意志力。 八、高阶书面表达 Modesty Is Eternal Glory 写作要求： 1. 结构：总论点→论据举例→辩证升华+个人启示 2. 词数：80词左右 3. 强制语法：至少包含 强调句、as让步倒装、非限制性定语从句 三类结构各一处 4. 禁止简单句堆砌，多用并列逻辑词：nevertheless, apart from, in reality 一、辩证逻辑连接词填空（拔高过渡词） In contrast; Apart from; Indeed; Therefore; More importantly 1. ________ his revolutionary physical theories, Einstein’s virtue deserves greater praise. 2. Many talented people become arrogant after success. ________, Einstein kept modest forever. 3. ________, perseverance is the foundation of almost all great achievements. 4. Einstein set a positive role model for the whole world. ________, we should follow his spirit in daily study. 5. We admire Einstein for his breakthroughs. ________, his perseverance shapes his greatness. 二、反向辩证句式改写（先抑后扬/对比反衬） 1. 基础句：Einstein had superb talent. He still insisted on hard work.（要求：用as倒装让步 + 对比副词still） 2. 基础句：Talent is important. Continuous efforts matter more.（要求：强调句型+rather than做辩证对比） 3. 基础句：Some people gain fame but lose virtue. Einstein stayed humble after success.（要求：用in contrast衔接，后半句加非限制性定语从句） 三、中英思辨翻译（作文结尾高分句） 1. 伟大从来不是天赋的特权，而是长久自律与坚持的馈赠。 2. 比起一时的成就，终身保持谦逊才是跨越时代的精神财富。 四、高阶议论文写作 Virtue Outshines Achievement 写作要求： 1. 逻辑四层：总论点 → 正面举例爱因斯坦 → 反向对比普通有才者骄傲自满 → 双重升华（社会意义+学生自身做法） 2. 必含语法：as让步倒装、非限制性定语从句、强调句型，三类齐全 3. 词数：100词左右 4. 使用至少2个高级过渡词：In contrast, More importantly (2023年浙江省1月高考真题) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 / 8 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 分层作业 Unit 1 Period 3 Assessing Your Progress 一、短语填空 【答案】 1. was passionate about 解析：描述儿时状态，一般过去时，酷爱某物。 2. stuck to 解析：stick to 坚持，过去式 stuck to。 3. overcome difficulties 解析：manage to do 结构，不定式用原形。 4. was devoted to 解析：be devoted to doing 致力于，一生的动作用一般过去时。 5. sets a good example to 解析：表示长期榜样作用，用一般现在时。 二、语法句型转换（本课三大必考点） 【答案】 1. It is perseverance that helped Einstein achieve great success. 解析：强调主语perseverance，事物强调一律用that。 2. Brilliant as Einstein was, he remained modest all the time. 解析：as让步倒装，表语形容词前置。 3. He published four landmark papers in 1905, which shocked the whole science world. 解析：非限制性定语从句，which指代整件事，不能用that。 三、根据汉语提示完成句子（写作万能句） 【答案】 1. plays a vital role 2. rather than natural talent 3. when faced with difficulties 四、书面表达小作文 【参考范文】 Perseverance Leads to Success Perseverance plays a vital role on the way to success. Take Einstein as an example. He failed his first college exam, but he never gave up. He worked as a clerk to support himself and kept researching, which brought him amazing achievements in 1905. It is continuous efforts rather than talent that make him a physics giant. His story inspires us to hold on to goals bravely whenever we meet difficulties in study. 五、高阶提分短语填空 【答案】 1. far outweigh 解析：远胜过，主语为复数，一般现在时，议论文通用时态。 2. was committed to 解析：be committed to 全身心致力于，描述生平用一般过去时。 3. underwent countless sufferings 解析：undergo 经历（磨难），过去式 underwent。 4. serves as an inspiration for 解析：长期榜样作用，一般现在时，激励……。 5. to live up to 解析：try one’s best to do；live up to 不辜负。 六、语法综合升格改写 【答案】 1. It is continuous efforts rather than natural talent that made Einstein successful. 解析：强调主语，加入对比结构，作文明显提档。 2. Outstanding intelligence as Einstein possessed, he refused to show off his achievements, which won wide respect from people. 解析：as让步倒装前置名词短语，后半句用which定语从句衔接。 3. He stuck to research in spare time, making historic breakthroughs eventually. 解析：现在分词doing表自然而然的结果，高考高分替换定语从句。 七、辩证观点句子汉译英（写作结尾升华专用） 【答案】 1. Apart from his remarkable scientific achievements, Einstein’s modest personality carries far more lasting spiritual value. 2. It is never-say-die willpower rather than inborn talent that supports people to go through difficulties. 八、高阶书面表达 【参考范文】 Modesty Is Eternal Glory Modesty is a priceless quality that can bring people lasting respect beyond fame. Brilliant as Einstein was, he remained humble and easy-going all through his life. He won the Nobel Prize and rewrote modern physics, which brought him global popularity. Nevertheless, he never took pride in his status and treated ordinary people equally. It is modesty rather than great achievements that makes Einstein a timeless role model. For us students, we ought to keep modest and keep making progress even when we gain small success. 一、辩证逻辑连接词填空（拔高过渡词） 【答案】 1. Apart from 解析：除……之外，用于引出多层优点，由成就过渡到品格。 2. In contrast 解析：相比之下，用于正反对比论证，是议论文拔高核心标志词。 3. Indeed 解析：诚然、的确，用于强化观点语气。 4. Therefore 解析：因此，表因果总结，衔接榜样与个人行动。 5. More importantly 解析：更为重要的是，递进升华，由表象成就深入内在品质。 二、反向辩证句式改写（先抑后扬/对比反衬） 【答案】 1. Superb talent as Einstein possessed, he still stuck to constant hard work. 解析：名词短语前置as倒装，突出“天赋顶尖却依旧努力”的辩证反差。 2. It is continuous efforts rather than natural talent that play a decisive role in success. 解析：强调结构直接做辩证取舍，否定天赋至上，立意更深。 3. Some people become arrogant and lose fine virtues after gaining fame. In contrast, Einstein remained humble all his life, which earned him lasting respect worldwide. 解析：反向对比反衬人物品质，which定语从句补充结果，说理更饱满。 三、中英思辨翻译（作文结尾高分句） 【答案】1. Greatness is never a privilege of talent, but a reward for long-term self-discipline and persistence. 2. Compared with temporary achievements, lifelong modesty is spiritual wealth that lasts across ages. 四、高阶议论文写作 【参考范文】 Virtue Outshines Achievement Scientific achievements can bring temporary fame, while noble virtues win eternal respect. Brilliant as Einstein was, he never took pride in his groundbreaking success in physics. He won the Nobel Prize and enjoyed global popularity, which made him one of the most famous scientists in history. In contrast, many gifted people become self-satisfied and stop making progress once they gain small success. It is good virtues rather than outstanding contributions that make a person truly remarkable. More importantly, as teenagers, we should pursue progress while keeping modest, just as Einstein did in his whole life. 1. 逻辑结构四层完整 总论点→爱因斯坦正面例证→反向对比论证→双重结尾升华 2. 三大强制语法全部覆盖 (1) as让步倒装：Brilliant as Einstein was (2) 非限制性定语从句：..., which made him one of the most famous scientists in history (3) 强调句型：It is good virtues rather than outstanding contributions that make a person truly remarkable 3. 指定高级过渡词：In contrast、More importantly 4. 思维亮点：跳出只夸爱因斯坦，加入反面群体对比，论证说服力大幅提升；结尾从伟人价值落地中学生日常行为，贴合考场评分偏好。 (2023年浙江省1月高考真题) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 【答案】 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive? I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。 ②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。 2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①思绪回到……：thoughts drift back to/thoughts return to ②匆匆回到：rush back to/hurry back to ③盯着：eyes locked on/eyes staring at 情绪类 ①宽慰：feel a surge of relief/feel relieved ②感激：grateful/thankful 【点睛】[高分句型1] As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. (由that引导的主语从句) 4 / 8 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 分层作业 Unit 1 Period 3 Assessing Your Progress 一、短语填空 be passionate about, stick to, overcome difficulties, be devoted to, set a good example to 1. Einstein ________________ physics and maths in his early life. 2. No matter what trouble he met, he ________________ his scientific research firmly. 3. Having to flee his country, he managed to ________________ and carried on his study. 4. The great scientist ________________ exploring the truth throughout his whole life. 5. Einstein ________________ young people with his perseverance and modesty. 【答案】 1. was passionate about 解析：描述儿时状态，一般过去时，酷爱某物。 2. stuck to 解析：stick to 坚持，过去式 stuck to。 3. overcome difficulties 解析：manage to do 结构，不定式用原形。 4. was devoted to 解析：be devoted to doing 致力于，一生的动作用一般过去时。 5. sets a good example to 解析：表示长期榜样作用，用一般现在时。 二、语法句型转换（本课三大必考点） 1. Perseverance helped Einstein achieve great success.（改为强调句 It is…that…） 2. Einstein was extremely brilliant. He remained modest all the time.（as引导让步倒装） 3. He published four landmark papers in 1905. The papers shocked the whole science world.（合并为非限制性定语从句） 【答案】 1. It is perseverance that helped Einstein achieve great success. 解析：强调主语perseverance，事物强调一律用that。 2. Brilliant as Einstein was, he remained modest all the time. 解析：as让步倒装，表语形容词前置。 3. He published four landmark papers in 1905, which shocked the whole science world. 解析：非限制性定语从句，which指代整件事，不能用that。 三、根据汉语提示完成句子（写作万能句） 1. 在众多美好品质中，毅力对成功起到关键作用。 Among all fine qualities, perseverance ________________________ to success. 2. 正是持续的努力而非天赋造就了伟人。 It is continuous efforts ________________________ that create great men. 3. 他的经历提醒我们面对困境绝不能轻言放弃。 His experience reminds us that we should never give up ________________________. 【答案】 1. plays a vital role 2. rather than natural talent 3. when faced with difficulties 四、书面表达小作文 Perseverance Leads to Success 要求： 1. 三段式：提出观点→举例爱因斯坦论证→个人感悟 2. 词数：80词左右 3. 必须使用至少：1处定语从句 + 1处强调句 【参考范文】 Perseverance Leads to Success Perseverance plays a vital role on the way to success. Take Einstein as an example. He failed his first college exam, but he never gave up. He worked as a clerk to support himself and kept researching, which brought him amazing achievements in 1905. It is continuous efforts rather than talent that make him a physics giant. His story inspires us to hold on to goals bravely whenever we meet difficulties in study. 五、高阶提分短语填空 undergo countless sufferings; be committed to; far outweigh; live up to; serve as an inspiration for 1. Hard work and persistence ________ natural talent in achieving lifelong success. 2. Einstein ________ scientific truth and never compromised under political pressure. 3. The physicist ________ during the war but never gave up his academic pursuit. 4. His noble character ________ teenagers to chase dreams bravely. 5. We should try our best ________ the expectations of our teachers and parents. 【答案】 1. far outweigh 解析：远胜过，主语为复数，一般现在时，议论文通用时态。 2. was committed to 解析：be committed to 全身心致力于，描述生平用一般过去时。 3. underwent countless sufferings 解析：undergo 经历（磨难），过去式 underwent。 4. serves as an inspiration for 解析：长期榜样作用，一般现在时，激励……。 5. to live up to 解析：try one’s best to do；live up to 不辜负。 六、语法综合升格改写 1. Efforts made Einstein successful.（强调句 + 对比结构 rather than） 2. Einstein had outstanding intelligence. He refused to show off his achievements.（as倒装 + 非限制性定语从句两句合并） 3. He stuck to research in spare time. He made historic breakthroughs.（现在分词作结果状语） 【答案】 1. It is continuous efforts rather than natural talent that made Einstein successful. 解析：强调主语，加入对比结构，作文明显提档。 2. Outstanding intelligence as Einstein possessed, he refused to show off his achievements, which won wide respect from people. 解析：as让步倒装前置名词短语，后半句用which定语从句衔接。 3. He stuck to research in spare time, making historic breakthroughs eventually. 解析：现在分词doing表自然而然的结果，高考高分替换定语从句。 七、辩证观点句子汉译英（写作结尾升华专用） 1. 比起卓越的科研成就，爱因斯坦谦逊的品格拥有更长久的精神价值。 2. 真正支撑人们走过困境的不是天赋，而是永不言弃的意志力。 【答案】 1. Apart from his remarkable scientific achievements, Einstein’s modest personality carries far more lasting spiritual value. 2. It is never-say-die willpower rather than inborn talent that supports people to go through difficulties. 八、高阶书面表达 Modesty Is Eternal Glory 写作要求： 1. 结构：总论点→论据举例→辩证升华+个人启示 2. 词数：80词左右 3. 强制语法：至少包含 强调句、as让步倒装、非限制性定语从句 三类结构各一处 4. 禁止简单句堆砌，多用并列逻辑词：nevertheless, apart from, in reality 【参考范文】 Modesty Is Eternal Glory Modesty is a priceless quality that can bring people lasting respect beyond fame. Brilliant as Einstein was, he remained humble and easy-going all through his life. He won the Nobel Prize and rewrote modern physics, which brought him global popularity. Nevertheless, he never took pride in his status and treated ordinary people equally. It is modesty rather than great achievements that makes Einstein a timeless role model. For us students, we ought to keep modest and keep making progress even when we gain small success. 一、辩证逻辑连接词填空（拔高过渡词） In contrast; Apart from; Indeed; Therefore; More importantly 1. ________ his revolutionary physical theories, Einstein’s virtue deserves greater praise. 2. Many talented people become arrogant after success. ________, Einstein kept modest forever. 3. ________, perseverance is the foundation of almost all great achievements. 4. Einstein set a positive role model for the whole world. ________, we should follow his spirit in daily study. 5. We admire Einstein for his breakthroughs. ________, his perseverance shapes his greatness. 【答案】 1. Apart from 解析：除……之外，用于引出多层优点，由成就过渡到品格。 2. In contrast 解析：相比之下，用于正反对比论证，是议论文拔高核心标志词。 3. Indeed 解析：诚然、的确，用于强化观点语气。 4. Therefore 解析：因此，表因果总结，衔接榜样与个人行动。 5. More importantly 解析：更为重要的是，递进升华，由表象成就深入内在品质。 二、反向辩证句式改写（先抑后扬/对比反衬） 1. 基础句：Einstein had superb talent. He still insisted on hard work.（要求：用as倒装让步 + 对比副词still） 2. 基础句：Talent is important. Continuous efforts matter more.（要求：强调句型+rather than做辩证对比） 3. 基础句：Some people gain fame but lose virtue. Einstein stayed humble after success.（要求：用in contrast衔接，后半句加非限制性定语从句） 【答案】 1. Superb talent as Einstein possessed, he still stuck to constant hard work. 解析：名词短语前置as倒装，突出“天赋顶尖却依旧努力”的辩证反差。 2. It is continuous efforts rather than natural talent that play a decisive role in success. 解析：强调结构直接做辩证取舍，否定天赋至上，立意更深。 3. Some people become arrogant and lose fine virtues after gaining fame. In contrast, Einstein remained humble all his life, which earned him lasting respect worldwide. 解析：反向对比反衬人物品质，which定语从句补充结果，说理更饱满。 三、中英思辨翻译（作文结尾高分句） 1. 伟大从来不是天赋的特权，而是长久自律与坚持的馈赠。 2. 比起一时的成就，终身保持谦逊才是跨越时代的精神财富。 【答案】1. Greatness is never a privilege of talent, but a reward for long-term self-discipline and persistence. 2. Compared with temporary achievements, lifelong modesty is spiritual wealth that lasts across ages. 四、高阶议论文写作 Virtue Outshines Achievement 写作要求： 1. 逻辑四层：总论点 → 正面举例爱因斯坦 → 反向对比普通有才者骄傲自满 → 双重升华（社会意义+学生自身做法） 2. 必含语法：as让步倒装、非限制性定语从句、强调句型，三类齐全 3. 词数：100词左右 4. 使用至少2个高级过渡词：In contrast, More importantly 【参考范文】 Virtue Outshines Achievement Scientific achievements can bring temporary fame, while noble virtues win eternal respect. Brilliant as Einstein was, he never took pride in his groundbreaking success in physics. He won the Nobel Prize and enjoyed global popularity, which made him one of the most famous scientists in history. In contrast, many gifted people become self-satisfied and stop making progress once they gain small success. It is good virtues rather than outstanding contributions that make a person truly remarkable. More importantly, as teenagers, we should pursue progress while keeping modest, just as Einstein did in his whole life. 1. 逻辑结构四层完整 总论点→爱因斯坦正面例证→反向对比论证→双重结尾升华 2. 三大强制语法全部覆盖 (1) as让步倒装：Brilliant as Einstein was (2) 非限制性定语从句：..., which made him one of the most famous scientists in history (3) 强调句型：It is good virtues rather than outstanding contributions that make a person truly remarkable 3. 指定高级过渡词：In contrast、More importantly 4. 思维亮点：跳出只夸爱因斯坦，加入反面群体对比，论证说服力大幅提升；结尾从伟人价值落地中学生日常行为，贴合考场评分偏好。 (2023年浙江省1月高考真题) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive? I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。 ②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。 2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①思绪回到……：thoughts drift back to/thoughts return to ②匆匆回到：rush back to/hurry back to ③盯着：eyes locked on/eyes staring at 情绪类 ①宽慰：feel a surge of relief/feel relieved ②感激：grateful/thankful 【点睛】[高分句型1] As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. (由that引导的主语从句) 4 / 8 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $