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Unit 1 Teenage Life
Reading for Writing
Write a letter of advice
(建议信)
人教版2019必修第一册
Learning objectives:
At the end of this lesson, students are able to:
1.Know the structure and language features of a letter of advice.
掌握建议信结构、语言特点
2.Organize the content of the body of a letter.
梳理书信的内容
3. Write a letter of advice.
写一封建议信
考情分析:历年高考真题:建议信
advice建议
adviser提供建议者
ask for some advice寻求一些建议
turn to sb for advice向某人寻求建议
be worried about sth担心某事
anxious焦虑的
terrible糟糕的
recommend建议
talk to sb与某人聊天
behaviour行为
unusual不寻常的
unhealthy不健康的
teenager青少年
generation一代(人)
online world网络世界
focus on集中精力于
concentrate on 集中精力于
school life校园生活
family life家庭生活
encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
hobby爱好
why not do sth为什么不做某事
listen to 听
useful有用的
reason理由
understand 理解
discuss讨论
even甚至
be attracted to喜爱, 被...吸引
Lead-in:
What problems(问题) do you have in your daily life?
Game Addiction
游戏上瘾
Bullying
霸凌
Smoking
吸烟
Lack of support from family
缺乏家人支持
Depression
抑郁
Peer-Pressure
同辈压力
Puppy love
早恋
Lead-in:
Facing these problems, how will you seek for help ?
1. turn to teachers and parents for advice
向老师和父母寻求建议
2. write a letter to a professional adviser
给专业顾问写一封信
3. talk to your friends
和你的朋友们聊聊
4. listen to light music
听轻音乐
5. spend time in the gym
花时间去健身房锻炼
6. Take part in more outdoor activities
多参加户外活动
Lead-in:
Watch a video and think about these two questions?
1. What is Worried Friend's problem(问题)?
2. What are Susan Luo's suggestions(建议)?
Lead-in
Reading
Read for information
1. What is Worried Friend's problem(问题)?
Chen Lei plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
2. What are Susan Luo's suggestions(建议)?
1. I recommend that you talk to your friend
about his behaviour.
2. I think you should encourage your friend
to try new hobbies.
3. Why not discuss the problem together?
他的朋友陈磊玩电脑游戏太频繁,上网
时间太长。
我建议你和你的朋友谈谈他的行为。
我认为你应该鼓励你的朋友尝试新的爱好。
为什么不一起讨论这个问题?
Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.(匹配)
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
D. I think my advice will help(希望).
Read and match
Study the organisation and language features.
A. I know what the problem is(问题)
B. I understand how you feel(感受).
C. This is my advice and reason(s)(建议).
Read and Find (expressions to make suggestions表达建议)
1. I recommend that +主谓:我建议...
2. I think you should +动词原形:我认为你应该
3. why not +动词原形?:为什么不做某事
4. it’s also a good choice to do sth:这也是一个很好的选择。
5. doing sth also helps: 做某事也有帮助
提建议的万能句型
建议与建议之间用过渡词串起来
First of all, 首先
Besides, 此外
What’s more,而且
建议信:写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告,以便让对方接受自己的想法并解决有关问题。
建议信模版
I am sorry to know that+主谓. I understand quite well how you feel. I’m writing to give you some suggestions.
First of all, I recommend you_____+(建议1) because___+(原因1). Besides, it’s also a good choice to ___+(建议2), which will____+(原因2).What’s more, doing sth.+(建议3) also helps. Only in this way can you ___+(原因3)
I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you. Looking forward to your reply.
很遗憾得知...我十分理解你的感受。我写信的目的是给你一些建议。
首先,我建议你……,因为……。此外,……也是个很好的选择,
这会帮助你……。而且,做……也很有用。只有这样你才能……。
希望我的建议对你有帮助。期待你的回复。
Step4 Writing
【2019年高考全国卷Ⅱ应用文试题】
假如你是李华,你的朋友James来信说,随着高考的临近,学习和心理压力日益加大,正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
1.保持好学习与休息的平衡
2.向老师和父母寻求建议
3.制定合理的学习计划表
【Translation】
Para 1:①很遗憾得知你压力很大,并且这种情绪已经影响到了
你的学习和日常生活
I'm sorry to hear that you are stressed, which has affected your study and daily life.
stressed压力大的,affect影响,has affected已经影响,daily life日常生活
②我十分理解你的感受
I understand quite well how you feel(understand理解)
③我写信的目的是给你一些建议。
I’m writing to give you some suggestions.
I’m writing to我写信的目的的,suggestion建议
【Translation】
Para 2:④首先,我建议你保持好学习与休息的平衡
First of all, I recommend that you keep a balance between study and rest
recommend建议,keep a balance保持平衡,between A and B...与...之间
④因为这样可以缓解焦虑、保持健康。
because it can help you relieve your anxiety and keep healthy.
relieve缓解,anxiety焦虑,keep healthy保持健康
⑤向老师和父母寻求建议也是一个很好的选择
Besides, it’s also a good choice to turn to your teachers and parents
for advice
choice选择,advice建议 turn to sb for advice向某人寻求建议
【Translation】
Para 2:⑤这将为您提供鼓励和指导。
which will provide you with encouragement and guidance
provide sb with sth提供某人某物,encouragement鼓励,guidance指导
⑥而且,制定一份合理的学习计划表也很有用。
What’s more, making a reasonable study schedule also helps.
reasonable合理的,schedule计划表
⑥只有这样你才能摆脱压力。
Only in this way can you get rid of stress.
Only in this way只有这样,get rid of摆脱,stress压力
【Translation】
Para 3:
⑦希望我的建议对你有帮助。
I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you.
suggestion建议,helpful有帮助的
⑧期待你的回复。
Looking forward to your reply.
look forward to期待,reply回复
I'm sorry to hear that you are stressed, which has affected your study and
daily life. I understand quite well how you feel.I’m writing to give you
some suggestions.
First of all, I recommend that you keep a balance between study and
rest, because it can help you relieve your anxiety and keep healthy. Besides,
it’s also a good choice to turn to your teachers and parents for advice, which
will provide you with encouragement and guidance. What’s more, making a
reasonable study schedule also helps. Only in this way can you get rid of stress.
I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you. Looking forward to your reply.
很遗憾得知你压力很大,并且这种情绪已经影响到了你的学习和日常
生活。我十分理解你的感受。我写信的目的是给你一些建议。
首先,我建议你平衡好学习与休息,这样可以缓解焦虑、保持健康。
此外,向老师和父母寻求建议也是一个很好的选择,这将为您提供鼓励
和指导。而且,制定一份合理的学习时间表也很有用。只有这样你才能
摆脱压力。
希望我的建议能帮到你,期待你的回复。
Thank You !
Reading for Writing
人教版2019必修第一册
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