Unit 5 Exploring space（写作突破专项训练）英语人教PEP版六年级上册（新教材）

Unit 5  Exploring space

                       

写作方法指引- 原文指路

Chinese astronauts are called taikonauts. Their life in space is special.

开篇引入：点明中国航天员的专属称呼，总述太空生活的独特性，引出写作主题

The taikonauts get up early in the morning. But getting ready is different. They can't use water to wash their faces. So taikonauts have to use a wet cloth.

细节描写：描述太空晨起洗漱的特殊方式，对比地球生活，体现太空环境的特殊性

Each day, the taikonauts are very busy. They do a lot of work. For example, they grow vegetables and rice. Sometimes, they also give classes to children and answer questions about space.

内容填充：列举航天员的核心工作内容，用"for example"举例使写作更具体充实

Every afternoon they do exercise to keep healthy and strong.

日常安排：补充下午的健康管理环节，展现太空生活的严谨性与科学性

They can see the sunrise and sunset 16 times a day. The view is amazing! There is no other job like this one.

情感升华：描述太空独有的视觉体验，抒发对航天员工作的赞叹，让文章更有感染力

一、核心词汇

1. 太空天体类

Earth（地球）Sun（太阳）Moon（月球）Mars（火星）star（恒星）planet（行星）

satellite（卫星）Venus（金星）Jupiter（木星）Neptune（海王星）Saturn（土星）

2. 太空探索工具类

telescope（望远镜）spaceship（宇宙飞船）space station（空间站）rover（火星车）

3. 宇航员相关类

astronaut（宇航员）taikonaut（中国宇航员）

4. 其他相关词汇

cloud（云）mountain（山）ocean（海洋）soil（土壤）vegetable（蔬菜）rice（水稻）

space junk（太空垃圾）wind（风）storm（风暴）

二、参考句型

1. 描述天体特征

Earth is a planet that travels around the Sun.

The Moon travels around Earth and people can often see it at night.

The Sun is a big and hot star that gives us light and keeps us warm.

Mars has water and soil but there aren't any living things on it.

Venus is the hottest planet with a temperature of about 467℃.

Jupiter's Great Red Spot is a big storm that may be more than 300 years old and wider than Earth.

Neptune has the fastest wind in the solar system, which can reach over 2,000 kilometres per hour.

Saturn has over ten moons and scientists are still looking for more of them.

Footprints on the Moon could stay there for thousands of years.

There are thousands of pieces of space junk floating around Earth and the number is growing.

2. 描述太空探索方式

We can look into space with telescopes.

Astronauts go into space by spaceship.

Astronauts work on a space station for months.

China has already put a rover on Mars to learn more about the "red planet".

3. 描述宇航员（taikonaut）的太空生活

Chinese astronauts are called taikonauts and their life in space is special.

Taikonauts get up early in the morning and use a wet cloth to wash their faces because they can't use water.

Taikonauts brush their teeth with special toothpaste and have to "eat" it.

Taikonauts grow vegetables and rice in space every day.

Sometimes taikonauts give classes to children and answer their questions about space.

Taikonauts do exercise every afternoon to keep healthy and strong.

Taikonauts can see the sunrise and sunset 16 times a day and the view is amazing.

请你介绍太阳系里你感兴趣的几个天体，说说它们的主要特点。

要求：

1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。

2.语言表达流畅。

3.不少于 50 词。

参考单词：

Earth, Sun, Mars, Venus, Saturn, planet, star