Unit 4 Country life（写作突破专项训练）英语鲁科版五四制五年级上册（新教材）

Unit4 Country life 写作方法指引- 原文指路（乡村生活叙事类） Guo Liang is Guo Yang’s cousin. He lives in the countryside. 开篇引入：介绍主人公身份与居住环境，明确写作主题为乡村生活。 He goes to school by school bus. He likes science. 人物铺垫：描述主人公的上学方式和兴趣爱好，丰富人物形象细节。 Sometimes he has science classes in the fields. It's very interesting. 特色场景描写：展现乡村学习的独特场景，突出乡村生活的趣味性。 After school, Guo Liang often helps his parents feed the cows. 日常活动叙述：描写乡村孩子的课后劳动日常，体现乡村生活的实践性。 At weekends, he usually goes to his father's orchard. He often picks fruits. 周末生活补充：拓展生活场景，进一步展现乡村生活的特色内容。 Look! He is picking apples. How happy he is! 情感抒发：通过画面和感叹句表达主人公的快乐，增强文章感染力。 写作方法指引- 原文指路（乡村环境描写类） Here we are! My grandparents live in this village. 开篇点题：明确要介绍的乡村地点，引出环境描写内容 The houses look nice. Wow! So many trees and flowers! 整体印象描写：从房屋、树木花草入手，描绘乡村的美好初印象。 Look! There is a river near the village. 具体景物描写：用There be句型（单数）描述乡村周边的标志性景物。 There are lots of fish in the river. 细节补充：用There be句型（复数）细化景物内容，让画面更生动。 But our village is like a big park. 形象概括：用比喻手法总结乡村的整体美感，提升描写感染力。 一、核心词汇 1. 乡村场景类 village, river, house, vegetable garden, orchard, field, countryside, ground 2. 动植物类 tree, flower, fish, duck, cow, cucumber, tomato, potato, apple tree, grape 3. 生活活动类 catch fish, go fishing, feed the cows, pick fruits, dig, have science classes, go to school 4. 人物与其他词汇 grandparents, cousin, fourth grader, interesting, lots of, after school, at weekends 二、参考句型 1. 描述乡村景物 This is a village. There is a river near the village. There are lots of fish in the river. There are many ducks in the river. There are many trees and flowers in the village. There are many apple trees in the orchard. Our village is like a big park. There are lots of vegetables in the vegetable garden. Potatoes are under the ground. 2. 描述乡村生活 My grandparents live in this village. Guo Liang lives in the countryside. He is a fourth grader. He goes to school by school bus. He likes science. Sometimes he has science classes in the fields. It's very interesting. After school, he often helps his parents feed the cows. At weekends, he usually goes to his father's orchard. He often picks fruits. He is picking apples happily. Grandpa is in the vegetable garden. 3. 描述未来村庄（标注拓展句型） This is a future village. There is a big library near the future village.（拓展） There are many smart green houses in the future village.（拓展） We have a robot farm in the future village.（拓展） There are beautiful flower fields around the future village.（拓展） 易错点提示 11.There be句型单复数易错：当后面接可数名词单数或不可数名词时用There is，接可数名词复数时用There are，例如：正确表达是"There is a river near the village."，不要写成"There are a river..."。 22.频率副词位置易错：often、usually、sometimes等频率副词要放在主语之后，谓语动词之前，比如正确表达是"He often helps his parents feed the cows."，不要写成"He helps often his parents..."。 33.固定搭配易错："lots of"可以修饰可数名词复数和不可数名词，不要漏写"s"；"feed the cows"要加定冠词the，不要写成"feed cows"；"pick fruits"中fruit表示泛指多种水果时用复数形式。 44.介词搭配易错：注意不同场景的介词使用，比如"near the village"（在村庄附近）、"in the fields"（在田地里）、"under the ground"（在地下），不要混淆介词。 写作一 写作主题要求：请你写一写你在乡村爷爷奶奶家度过的周末，介绍村庄里的景物以及你在周末做的事情。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： grandparents, village, river, duck, vegetable garden, orchard, feed the cows, pick fruits, at weekends, interesting 写作二 写作主题要求：请你发挥想象，描述一下你心中的未来村庄是什么样子的，介绍村庄里的特别设施和景物。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： future village, smart green houses, robot farm, library, flower fields, interesting, lots of 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： My grandparents live in a nice village. There is a river near the village. There are lots of ducks in the river. There is a big vegetable garden and an orchard near their house. （乡村环境） At weekends, I go to visit them. I often help my grandparents feed the cows. I also pick fruits in the orchard. （周末劳作） It's very interesting. I love the village. （抒发喜爱） 范文（提高版）： My grandparents live in a beautiful village. Our village is like a big park. There is a clean river near it, and lots of ducks swim happily in the river. There are tomatoes and potatoes in their vegetable garden. （乡村环境）At weekends, I always go there. I often help feed the cows after lunch. Grandpa takes me to pick apples in the orchard. （周末劳作） I have a great time every weekend. （抒发喜爱） 写作二 范文（基础版）： This is a future village. There is a big library near the village. There are many smart green houses in it. （整体介绍） We have a robot farm in the future village. There are beautiful flower fields around it. （设施描写） It's very interesting. I love this future village. （内心评价） 范文（提高版）： Look! This is my dream future village. There is a big library near it, and I can read lots of books there every day. There are many smart green houses in the village, where we grow fresh vegetables. （整体介绍）We have a robot farm too—robots help us pick fruits and feed animals. Beautiful flower fields are around the village. （设施描写）It's a wonderful place to live. （内心评价） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $