Unit 7 Traditional festivals（写作突破专项训练）英语鲁科版五四制五年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 聚焦传统节日写作，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-写作实践”三阶训练体系，系统提炼介绍、记录、创意三类写作方法，强化语言能力与文化意识培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|----|----|----| |写作方法指引|3类写作（介绍节日/记录经历/创意节日，含原文指路）|介绍节日：时间-习俗-活动-特色；记录经历：总述-节前-核心时刻-特色体验；创意节日：名称-时间-活动设计|从具体写作步骤提炼通用框架，形成可迁移的写作逻辑| |核心词汇与句型|分类词汇（3类）+句型（4类，含常规/过去/创意）|按“节日要素”分类词汇，按“功能意念”整理句型|词汇-句型-语篇层层递进，为写作提供语言支撑| |写作任务|2个任务（介绍春节/回忆春节，含基础/提高范文）|结合方法指引与词汇句型，通过分层范文展示表达升级|从基础描述到丰富表达，实现方法与知识的综合应用|

Unit7 Traditional festivals 写作方法指引- 原文指路（介绍传统节日） It's on December 25. 点明节日时间：精准说明节日的具体日期，让读者快速掌握节日的时间信息。 My family get together. 介绍核心习俗：描述节日最具代表性的团聚活动，体现节日的核心氛围。 We have a big dinner and sing Christmas songs. 列举具体活动：用并列结构详细列举节日中的多项活动，丰富节日内容。 We get presents from family, friends and Santa. 补充特色元素：介绍节日独有的礼物文化，增强节日的辨识度和趣味性。 写作方法指引- 原文指路（记录节日经历） Tom and Danny had a wonderful Spring Festival with Li Ming's family. 开篇总述：概括节日经历的整体感受，引出后续具体事件。 Before the Spring Festival, they cleaned the house and put up the Spring Festival couplets. 按序记录节前准备：用时间状语“Before”明确节点，描述节日前的筹备活动。 On the Spring Festival eve, they had a big dinner with Li Ming's family. 聚焦节日核心时刻：用“On the Spring Festival eve”点明关键时间，记录重要活动。 The next morning, they got lucky money from Li Ming’s grandparents. 记录特色体验：写下节日专属的幸运时刻，让经历更真实生动。 写作方法指引- 原文指路（创意新节日） I want to have a new festival. 开篇点明创意：直接表达设计新节日的想法，开启内容。 Its name is . 明确节日名称：给出新节日的专属名字，让节日形象清晰。 It's on... 设定节日时间：为新节日确定具体日期，使节日更完整合理。 We... 设计节日活动：描述新节日的活动内容，体现节日的意义与乐趣。 一、核心词汇 1. 节日名称类 Christmas Day（圣诞节） Spring Festival（春节） Mid-Autumn Festival（中秋节） Tomb-sweeping Day（清明节） 2. 节日活动类 get together（团聚） have a big dinner（吃大餐） sing Christmas songs（唱圣诞歌） get presents（收到礼物） clean the house（打扫房子） do some shopping（购物） visit relatives and friends（拜访亲友） eat jiaozi（吃饺子） watch fireworks（看烟花） put up Spring Festival couplets（贴春联） get lucky money（收压岁钱） set off fireworks（放烟花） 3. 相关物品/人物类 Santa（圣诞老人） Christmas card（圣诞卡片） lucky money（压岁钱） fireworks（烟花） Spring Festival couplets（春联） jiaozi（饺子） 二、参考句型 1. 介绍节日时间 Christmas Day is on December 25. The Spring Festival is usually in February, sometimes in January. The Mid-Autumn Festival is in autumn. 2. 介绍节日常规活动 My family get together at Christmas. We have a big dinner and sing Christmas songs at Christmas. We get presents from family, friends and Santa at Christmas. We clean the house and do some shopping before the Spring Festival. We visit our relatives and friends at the Spring Festival. We often eat jiaozi and watch fireworks at the Spring Festival. On the Spring Festival eve, we have a big dinner with family. We put up the Spring Festival couplets before the Spring Festival. We get lucky money from grandparents on the Spring Festival morning. 3. 介绍过去的节日经历 Tom and Danny had a wonderful Spring Festival with Li Ming's family. We had a big dinner, watched TV and played games on the Spring Festival eve last year. We cleaned the house and put up the Spring Festival couplets before last Spring Festival. We got lucky money from grandparents and visited relatives last Spring Festival. 4. 介绍想象的新节日（部分为拓展句型） I want to have a new festival. Its name is Book Day.（拓展示例） It's on May 20.（拓展示例） We read interesting books together and share our favourite stories on Book Day.（拓展示例） 易错点提示 1.大小写规范：节日名称属于专有名词，每个单词首字母需大写，比如Spring Festival不能写成spring festival，Christmas Day不能写成christmas day。 2.介词搭配：具体日期前用介词on，比如on December 25；月份、季节前用介词in，比如in February、in autumn。 3.动词时态区分：描述通常的节日习俗用一般现在时，比如We eat jiaozi at the Spring Festival.；描述过去的节日经历用一般过去时，比如We ate jiaozi last Spring Festival.，注意动词过去式的变化（如eat变为ate，clean变为cleaned）。 4.固定短语搭配：注意短语的正确使用，比如“贴春联”是put up Spring Festival couplets，“放烟花”是set off fireworks，不要混淆动词和介词的搭配。 写作一 写作主题要求：请你介绍你最喜欢的传统节日——春节，向大家说明春节的时间，以及你们家在春节期间通常会开展的活动。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： Spring Festival, usually in February, clean the house, put up Spring Festival couplets, have a big dinner, eat jiaozi, get lucky money, visit relatives and friends 写作二 写作主题要求：请你回忆并描述去年春节的经历，分享你们一家人在春节前后做的事情，以及你度过节日的感受。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： last Spring Festival, cleaned the house, put up Spring Festival couplets, had a big dinner, ate jiaozi, got lucky money, visited relatives, watched fireworks 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is usually in February, sometimes in January. （点明节日）Before the festival, we clean the house and put up Spring Festival couplets. On the Spring Festival eve, we have a big dinner and eat jiaozi. On the festival morning, I get lucky money from my grandparents. We also visit relatives and friends. （节日活动）I love the Spring Festival very much. （抒发喜爱） 范文（提高版）： My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is usually in February, sometimes in January. （点明节日） First, we clean the house and do some shopping before the festival. We also put up red Spring Festival couplets. On the Spring Festival eve, we have a big family dinner and eat delicious jiaozi together. On the morning of the festival, I get warm lucky money from my grandparents. Then we visit our relatives and friends and say "Happy Spring Festival" to them. （节日活动）I always have a great time during the Spring Festival. （抒发喜爱） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Last Spring Festival was wonderful. （总起事件）Before the festival, my family cleaned the house and put up Spring Festival couplets. On the Spring Festival eve, we had a big dinner. We ate jiaozi and watched TV. On the festival morning, I got lucky money from my grandparents. Then we visited our relatives. In the evening, we watched beautiful fireworks. （活动记叙）I was very happy. （内心感受） 范文（提高版）： Last Spring Festival was really fun. （总起事件）A few days before the festival, my family and I cleaned our house carefully and put up nice Spring Festival couplets. On the Spring Festival eve, we had a big dinner with all my family members. We ate tasty jiaozi and played small games after dinner. On the morning of the festival, I got lucky money from my grandparents and said "Thank you" to them. Then we visited our relatives and shared our happy stories. In the evening, we set off fireworks and watched the bright sky. （活动记叙）I had a great time last Spring Festival. （内心感受） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $