Unit 6 Role models（写作突破专项训练）英语鲁科版五四制五年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“结构方法+词汇句型+分层实践”构建人物写作专项，系统提炼五段式写作框架，融合语言能力与文化意识培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|1个原文示例|五段式结构（开篇点题-核心成就-精神品质-过程结果-丰富形象）|从写作框架到细节要素，构建人物描述逻辑链| |核心词汇|4类（职业/人物/动作成就/品质性格）|主题词汇分类记忆法|按人物写作要素分类，形成词汇网络| |参考句型|4类功能句型|功能句型模板化应用|从身份介绍到品质描述，覆盖写作全流程| |写作任务|2个主题（袁隆平/李时珍）+2版范文|基础-提高分层训练法|从模仿应用到拓展创新，实现能力进阶|

Unit 6 Role models 写作方法指引- 原文指路 My role model is Yuan Longping. He was a great scientist. 开篇点题：明确介绍自己的榜样及其身份。 He helped farmers get more rice. 核心成就：描述榜样的主要贡献。 He tried to plant new kinds of rice. It was not easy, but he never gave up. 精神品质：展现榜样坚持不懈的优秀品质。 He worked hard in the rice fields all year round. Finally, he succeeded. 过程结果：讲述榜样的努力过程与成功结果。 He liked playing the violin. 丰富形象：补充榜样的兴趣爱好，让人物更立体。 一、核心词汇 1. 职业类 medical scientist（医学科学家） scientist（科学家） doctor（医生） writer（作家） poet（诗人） 2. 人物相关名词 role model（榜样） medical herbs（草药） rice fields（稻田） violin（小提琴） lab（实验室） Nobel Prize（诺贝尔奖） 3. 动作与成就类 write a great book（写一本伟大的著作） help farmers get more rice（帮助农民收获更多稻谷） write many great poems（创作很多优秀诗歌） win the Nobel Prize（获得诺贝尔奖） plant new kinds of rice（种植新品种水稻） 4. 品质与性格类 hard-working（勤奋的） never give up（永不放弃） kind（善良的） 二、参考句型 1. 介绍榜样的身份与生平 My role model is Yuan Longping.He was a great scientist. He was a great medical scientist in China.He was born in 1518. 2. 描述人物的成就与贡献 He wrote a great book *Bencao Gangmu.*It's about Chinese medical herbs.It took him 27 years. He helped farmers get more rice. He tried to plant new kinds of rice. He wrote many great poems. She was the first woman who won the Nobel Prize twice. 3. 描述人物的品质与爱好 He worked hard in the rice fields all year round.Finally,he succeeded. It was not easy,but he never gave up. He liked playing the violin. He liked painting. 4. 谈论优秀学生的标准 A good student should be kind. A good student should enjoy reading. 易错点提示 1.一般过去式的正确使用：描述已故伟人的事迹必须用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形，比如write变为wrote，give变为gave，work变为worked，不要误用一般现在时。 2.职业名词拼写：注意medical scientist是两个独立单词，不要连写；violin这类乐器名词的拼写容易出错，需多加记忆。 3.be动词过去式区分：描述第三人称单数（he/she）的过去状态时用was，不要误用were。 4.固定搭配使用：It took sb. + 时间表示做某事花费某人多长时间，这个结构里不需要额外添加介词，比如正确表达是It took him 27 years.，不要错写为It took him in 27 years.。 写作一 写作主题要求：请你介绍你心中的榜样袁隆平，内容需涵盖他的身份、主要成就以及他身上的优秀品质。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： scientist, rice fields, help farmers get more rice, plant new kinds of rice, hard-working, never give up 写作二 写作主题要求：请你介绍一位你敬佩的中国古代榜样人物（如李时珍），内容需包含他的职业、主要成就和值得学习的精神品质。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： medical scientist, medical herbs, write a great book, hard-working, never give up, Bencao Gangmu 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： My role model is Yuan Longping. He was a great scientist. （介绍人物）He worked hard in the rice fields all year round. He tried to plant new kinds of rice. He helped farmers get more rice. （主要事迹） He was hard-working and never gave up. We all love and respect him very much. （人物品质） 范文（提高版）： My role model is Yuan Longping. He was a great rice scientist. （介绍人物）He worked hard in the rice fields every day, even in hot summer or cold winter. He tried many times to plant new kinds of rice. Finally, he succeeded and helped farmers get much more rice. （主要事迹）He was hard-working and never gave up. He also liked playing the violin in his free time. He is our forever hero. （人物品质） 写作二 范文（基础版）： My role model is Li Shizhen. He was a great medical scientist in ancient China. （介绍人物）He wrote a great book called Bencao Gangmu. It's about Chinese medical herbs. It took him 27 years to finish it. （主要事迹）He was hard-working and never gave up. We should learn from his spirit. （精神感悟） 范文（提高版）： My role model is Li Shizhen. He was a famous medical scientist in ancient China. （介绍人物） He traveled around many places in China to learn about different medical herbs. Then he wrote a great book Bencao Gangmu. It took him 27 years to finish this important book. （主要事迹）He was hard-working and never gave up when he met difficulties. He is a great person we should always remember. （精神感悟） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $