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Unit 1 The Changing World
第六课时 Section B 3a-3c
课型:读写课
主讲人:XXX
Pre-writing
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While-writing
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Lead-in
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Post-writing
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CONTENTS
Language points
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Exercise
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Summary
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Homework
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学习目标
通过阅读3a范文,获取作者在school, home, study三个方面的过去与现在信息,完成3b表格;识别范文的篇章结构(总—分—总),感知used to do和现在完成时在文中的功能;概括范文的写作框架(Introduction → Body → Conclusion),整合可用于自身写作的句型表达。
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分析范文的段落功能和逻辑连接方式,判断哪些表达可以迁移到自己的写作中;运用范文中的核心句型和连接词,完成3c的个人变化笔记整理;运用目标语言,口头描述自己在学校、家庭、学习等方面的变化。
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运用所学结构和语言,独立完成一篇关于自身变化的短文写作;依据评价标准进行自评和互评,反思自己的写作。
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通过本节课学习,学生能够:
01 Lead-in
Boys and girls, next week we will have a 'Growing Up Story Sharing' activity. You need to write a short passage about the changes in your life since primary school.
What changes have taken place in your life since primary school?
Think about yourself and brainstorm.
Changes in My Life
School
Home
Study
……
location(远近)
way to school(上学方式)
house/flat(住房)
family members(家人)
confidence(自信)
learning style(学习方式)
Now, let's read a passage written by a student about his changes. Let's see how he organized his ideas and what we can learn from him.
02 Pre-writing
Read the text and answer the questions.
3a
What is the passage mainly about?
What has stayed the same in the student's life?
The passage is about the changes in the student's life since primary school.
The feeling of love and happiness shared by his family has stayed the same.
Read and match each part with the main topic.
Beginning
Body:
changes about school, home and study
Ending
Read and fill in the chart.
Aspect Past Present
school
home
study
primary school was near home; used to walk to school with parents
junior high is farther; takes a bus with friends every day
used to live in a small flat
moved to a much larger one; grandma lives with us
(not directly mentioned)
more confident; attends group discussions; enjoys studying with friends
Make a mind map of the passage.
Beginning
Body:
changes about school, home and study
Ending
Changes in My Life
life is different now
School & transport
(上学方式的变化)
Home(家庭的变化)
Study(学习方式的变化)
any changes + one thing stays the same
Find and underline: Sentences that describe the past and the present.
描述过去(Past)
描述现在(Present)
03 While-writing
Complete the table with the information from the text.
3c
Aspect Past Present
school
home
study
neighbourhood
transport
environment
Choose three changes. Write a short passage about them. End with one thing that has stayed the same.
3d
方面 可用词汇
School near / far, walk / take a bus / ride a bike, primary school / junior high
Home small / large, flat / house, live with, own room
Study confident, shy, group discussions, by myself, achieve
Transport bus, bike, car, subway, on foot
Feeling happy, proud, grateful, amazing
Choose three changes. Write a short passage about them. End with one thing that has stayed the same.
3d
功能 句型
总起 Great changes have taken place in my life. / My life is different from before.
描述过去 I used to... / My family used to... / There used to be...
描述现在 Now I... / But now... / I have become... / We have moved to...
对比连接 However, / But now, / On the other hand,
总结变化 My life has changed in many ways. / I have changed a lot.
描述不变 But one thing has stayed the same: ... / One thing remains unchanged: ...
04 Post-writing
Writing Task
假设你是李华,下周你班的英语课堂分享将以“变化中的我们”为主题。请你根据下面提示,以“Changes in My Life”为题,用英语写一篇发言稿,与同学们分享你进入初中以来的变化。
要求:从school, home, study, transport中选择3个方面进行对比;正确使用used to do和现在完成时;结尾说出至少一个不变的东西;词数:80-100词
审题维度 内容
文体 发言稿/记叙文
主题 自身变化(Changes in My Life)
时态 一般过去时(过去)+ 一般现在时/现在完成时(现在)
人称 第一人称 I
内容要点 ①过去的样子 ②现在的样子 ③不变的东西
Write the first draft based on the mind map.
Changes in My Life
开头
My life has changed a lot since I entered junior high.
Introduction(自我介绍 + 总起):
正文
Change 1: School / Transport
Past: used to... Now: ...
结尾
总结变化+不变之处
My life has changed in many ways.
But one thing has stayed the same...
Change 2: Home
Past: used to... Now: ...
Change 3: Study
Past: used to... Now: ...
Some useful expressions for writing.
段落 实用句型
开头段 Great changes have taken place in my life. / My life is quite different from before. / I have changed a lot since I entered junior high.
正文段
(过去) I used to... / My family used to... / There used to be... / When I was in primary school, I...
正文段
(现在) But now... / Now I... / I have become... / We have moved to... / I take... / I enjoy...
对比连接 However, / But, / On the other hand, / Unlike before,
结尾段 My life has changed in many ways. / I have changed a lot. / But one thing has stayed the same: ... / One thing remains unchanged: ...
Sample writing:
Changes in My Life
Great changes have taken place in my life since I entered junior high school.
My primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my
parents. Now my junior high is farther, and I take a bus with my friends every day.
My home has changed too. My family used to live in a small flat, but we have moved to a larger house. My grandma lives with us now, and I am glad to see her
every day.
I have also changed in my studies. I used to be shy and study alone, but now I
am more confident and enjoy group discussions with my classmates.
My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the love and happiness shared by my family. I am proud of how much I have grown.
05 Summary
Summary
Unit 1 The Changing World (Section B 3a-3d)
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Language points
Let's learn and take notes.
junior / ˈdʒuːniə(r) / adj. 初级的;低年级的
固定搭配:junior high school(初中)
词性转换:junior 也可作名词,表示“级别较低者”或“三年级以下的学生”
反义词:senior(高级的;高年级的)
辨析:junior 指“级别较低的”或“年龄较小的”;primary 指“小学的”。
词
讲
练
Now my junior high school is farther from home.(现在我的初中离家更远了。)
She is a junior student.(她是一名低年级学生。)
例
填空:I am a ______ high school student.
翻译:我哥哥上高中,我上初中。
junior
My brother is in senior high school, and I am in junior high school.
Let's learn and take notes.
flat / flæt / n. 公寓
词性转换:flat 也可作形容词,表示“平坦的”
固定搭配:live in a flat(住在公寓里)
辨析:flat 为英式英语,意为“公寓”;apartment 为美式英语,同样表示“公寓”。
用法:可数名词,复数形式为 flats。
词
讲
练
My family used to live in a small flat.(我家过去住在一间小公寓里。)
They bought a new flat in the city centre.(他们在市中心买了一套新公寓。)
例
填空:My grandparents live in a big ______.
翻译:我们搬进了一间更大的公寓。
flat
We moved into a larger flat.
Let's learn and take notes.
discussion / dɪˈskʌʃn / n. 讨论
词性转换:动词 discuss(讨论)
固定搭配:group discussion(小组讨论),have a discussion about(就……进行讨论)
用法:可数或不可数名词,表示“讨论”的行为或场合。
辨析:discussion 强调“讨论、商议”;conversation 强调“对话、交谈”。
词
讲
练
I often attend group discussions.(我经常参加小组讨论。)
We had a discussion about the changes in our hometown.(我们就家乡的变化进行了讨论。)
例
填空:The students are having a __________ (discuss) about environmental protection.
翻译:我们下周将就这个话题进行讨论。
discussion
We will have a discussion about this topic next week.
Let's learn and take notes.
aspect / ˈæspekt/ n.方面
固定搭配:in many aspects(在许多方面),every aspect of life(生活的方方面面)
用法:可数名词,常用来描述事物或问题的不同方面。
辨析:aspect 强调“事物的某个侧面”;side 更口语化。
词
讲
练
My life has changed in many aspects.(我的生活在许多方面都改变了。)
We need to consider every aspect of this problem.(我们需要考虑这个问题的每一个方面。)
例
填空:We should look at every ______ of the question.
翻译:他在学习的各个方面都取得了进步。
aspect
He has made progress in all aspects of his study.
Let's learn and take notes.
confident / ˈkɒnfɪdənt/ adj. 自信的
词性转换:名词 confidence(自信),副词 confidently(自信地)
固定搭配:be confident about/in(对……有信心)
用法:常与 about 或 in 连用,表示“对某事有信心”。
辨析:confident 强调“自信的”;sure 强调“确信的”。
词
讲
练
I have become more confident in my studies.(我在学习上变得更加自信了。)
She is confident about passing the exam.(她对通过考试很有信心。)
例
填空:He feels _________ (confidence) about his future.
翻译:我们对自己解决问题的能力有信心。
confident
We are confident in our ability to solve problems.
07 Exercise
一、选词填空。
My life has (1) _________ a lot since I started (2) _________ high school. I used to live in a small (3) _________ with my family. Now we live in a bigger house. I used to walk to (4) _________ school, but now I take a (5) _________ every day. In the past, I was shy in class, but now I have become more (6) _________ and often take part in group (7) _________. I have also (8) _________ a lot with my classmates. The most important (9) _________ is that I have changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same: the love and happiness I (10) _________ with my family.
changed
junior flat discussion aspect confident primary achieve share bus change
junior
flat
primary
bus
confident
discussions
achieved
aspect
share
My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one.
我家过去住在一间小公寓里,但现在我们已经搬进了一间大得多的公寓。
I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions.
我在学习上变得更加自信了,经常参加小组讨论。
It's amazing how much we have achieved together.
我们一起取得了这么多成就,真是令人惊叹。
我的生活在许多方面都变了,但有一件事没有变。
My life has changed in many aspects, but one thing has stayed the same.
我很高兴每天都能见到奶奶。
I am glad that I get to see my grandma every day.
二、翻译。
08 Homework
基础作业:用“used to... but now...”造句5个,分别描述school, home, study, transport, friendship方面的变化。
进阶作业:为“Changes in My Hometown”写一个写作提纲(三段式),列出每个段落要写的内容和计划使用的句型。
拓展作业:将你的作文配上2-3张照片(过去vs现在),制作一张英文海报“My Growth Story”,在班级“成长故事分享会”中展示。
Homework
Thank you
for listening!
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