Unit 2 School life（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材译林版八年级上册

本讲义聚焦初中英语“校园生活”主题建议信写作，系统梳理书信结构（开头点明目的、中间分点提建议及理由、结尾礼貌收尾）、校园话题核心词汇（如dining hall, school clubs等）、建议类句型（如I am writing to make suggestions...）及数量比较语法（如fewer...than）。通过话题解读引入，思维导图构建框架，词汇句式积累打基础，佳句仿写和范例分析学习应用，最后10个实战任务巩固，形成完整学习支架。 该资料以“真实情境任务”为特色，融合语言能力与思维品质培养。如范例中建议信运用单元语法fewer...than，提升语言准确性，实战任务（如季节活动建议、社团选择）引导学生观察生活、理性分析，培养逻辑表达。思维导图辅助梳理结构，分层练习适配不同水平，课中助教师系统教学，课后学生可借助素材库和练习查漏补缺，提升自主学习能力。

Unit 2 School life单元同步写作讲义 本单元主题属于“人与自我”主题范畴，聚焦校园生活、校园问题与校园优化建议。 本单元旨在培养学生观察校园生活、理性发现校园现存问题、礼貌提出合理改进方案的书面表达能力；通过阅读多国校园博文、学习数量比较语法、积累校园类话题词汇，让学生掌握正式书信的行文结构与礼貌书面用语。这有助于学生学会有条理表达观点、规范运用建议类句型，同时树立珍惜校园生活、主动思考优化生活的意识，提升书面沟通与逻辑思辨能力。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 school life 校园生活 school uniform 校服 dining hall 食堂 lunch hours 午餐时长 ping-pong tables 乒乓球台 school clubs 校园社团 library books 图书馆藏书 school trips 校园出游 start/finish school 上学 / 放学时间 plenty of 大量的 hands-on activities 实践活动 environment 环境 creative 有创造力的 improve 改善，改进 suggestion /advice 建议 provide more… 提供更多…… open our minds 开阔眼界 search online 上网查阅资料 polite 礼貌的 head teacher 校长 句式积累 开头句（书信开篇，点明写信目的） I am writing this letter to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life. 我写这封信是为了提出一些改善校园生活的建议。 I hope to share my ideas with you about making our school better. 我希望和您分享让校园变得更好的想法。 I have some useful suggestions for our school. 我有几条关于学校的实用建议。 中间句（分点提建议 + 说明理由） First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables. 首先，我建议学校增设更多乒乓球台。 Second, it will be a good idea to buy more new books for the school library. 其次，为图书馆添置更多新书会是个好主意。 Moreover, we need more computers in the library so we can search information easily. 此外，图书馆需要更多电脑，方便我们查阅资料。 More school clubs can help us develop different hobbies after class. 更多社团能帮助我们课后培养多样爱好。 If we have longer lunch hours, we can rest well and talk with classmates. 如果午餐时间更长，我们能好好休息、和同学交流。 结尾句（礼貌收尾，表达期待） I hope you will find my suggestions helpful. 希望您觉得我的建议有帮助。 I am looking forward to seeing great changes in our school. 我期待校园能出现可喜的变化。 Thank you for reading my letter. 感谢您阅读我的信件。 佳句仿写 教材原句1：I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life. 仿写1：__________________________________________________________________________ 教材原句2：First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables, so more students can play ping-pong during breaks. 仿写2：__________________________________________________________________________ 教材原句3：I hope my suggestions help improve our school life. 仿写3：__________________________________________________________________________ 典例 假定你是李华，请给校长写一封建议信，针对校园生活提出 2-3 条改进建议。 注意： 1.词数 80-100 词； 2.注意书信格式、语气礼貌。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：应用文 —— 建议信（正式书信体裁） ② 人称：第一人称 I，第二人称 you（校长） ③ 提示：需提 2-3 条校园优化建议，每条建议附带理由；格式完整，语气礼貌；词数 80-100。 谋篇布局 开头 问候校长，直接说明写信目的 —— 为改善校园生活提建议。 中间 分 First/Second/Moreover 分层给出建议，每条搭配简单理由，使用本单元比较级词汇。 结尾 礼貌感谢，表达期待，标准书信落款。 佳作展示 Dear Mr. Zhang, I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life. First, I hope the dining hall can offer more kinds of hot food. Now we have fewer dishes than students need. Second, our library needs more new storybooks, because many old books are not popular anymore. Moreover, we can have more art clubs after school to make our free time colourful. I hope you find my suggestions useful. Thank you for reading my letter. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① offer 提供（替代普通单词 give） ② colourful 丰富多彩的（形容课余生活，高级形容词） ③ popular 受欢迎的，贴合图书馆场景 高分句型： ① I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life.（书信标准开篇句，教材原句改编，点明写作意图） ② Now we have fewer dishes than students need.（运用本单元核心语法 fewer…than 数量比较，贴合单元知识点） ③ I hope you find my suggestions useful.（礼貌收尾万能句型，正式书面用语） （一） 四季更迭，万象焕新。假如你是国际学校的李华，请你向校长Mr White写一封信，建议学校在某个季节开展一项特色活动。 内容包括： 1. 简述该季节的特点 （如天气、自然景观等）； 2. 提出一项贴合该季节的活动建议，并说明如何开展； 3. 活动的意义。 注意： 1. 内容必须包含要点中的所有信息； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露个人真实信息； 4. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：season (n. 季节）, pleasant (adj. 令人舒适的）, organize (v. 组织）, nature (n. 自然） Dear Mr White, I’m writing to make some suggestions on carrying out an activity. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （二） 假如你是 Green School 的学生李华，学校将组织本学期的学校郊游活动。请从以下两个方案中选取一个，给校长Ms Mendozer写一封80词左右的信，说明选择该方案的理由，介绍活动内容并增加一项活动。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Plan A: Protect nature★know more about plants in the park ★put up posters around the park ★organize a clean-up activity ... Plan B: Know our hometown★visit the history museum ★take photos of its streets ★ask old people about hometown ... 参考词汇：poster海报 organize 组织 Dear Ms Mendozer, I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan _________ is a better choice. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua （三） 我校即将开展社会实践活动（social practice activity），学校正向同学们征集活动建议。假如你是李华，请你根据如下内容给校长写一封建议信。注意： （1）短文必须包含所有提示内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； （3）字数要求：80~100词； （4）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。 Dear headmaster, I’m glad to hear that we’re going to have a social practice activity soon. In order to have a meaningful activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua （四） 假如你是绣山中学的学生李平，你的学校将在每周三下午设立一小时的集体活动课，现学校请全体学生就乒乓球和篮球两个项目投票选择其一，请你给校长写一封信，选择一个更适合大家的运动，并给出你的理由， 要求：(1)不能出现真实的个人身份信息： (2)词数：90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear headmaster, I'm Li Ping from Class 11. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping （五） 为了更好地落实“双减”政策，使同学们健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是李华，用英语给校长写一封建议信。 要求：1. 内容应包括所有要点，并适当发挥； 2. 词数：不少于80词； Dear headmaster, These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （六） 假如你是Wen Hua Middle School的学生李华，你们学校即将创办一个新社团，为此在学校网站上发布通知向全校师生征集建议，请你从以下三个社团中选择一个社团，用英文给校长Mr. White写一封信，说明创办该社团的理由以及该社团的特色和可以开展的活动。 注意： (1)文中不可出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 (2)须涵盖所提供的内容要点，可适当发挥。 (3)80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. White, I’m glad to hear that there is going to be a new club in our school.    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （七） 假定你是李华，深圳某国际学校的学生。你校正在征集下个月 “中国文化节” 的活动建议及其负责人。现在请你给校长Mr. Green写一封建议信。内容要点如下： 1. 活动介绍（名称、内容）； 2. 活动目的： 3. 活动所需； 4. 推荐自己负责该活动。 要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥 2. 语言连贯、条理清晰、语法正确、书写规范 Dear Mr. Green, Hello! I’m Li Hua from Class One, Grade Nine. I’m writing to recommend an activity for the Chinese Culture Festival next month. It is called ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua （八） 假设你是国际学校学生李华。你参加了上周学校的美育活动，你发现该活动既有创新亮点，也有改进空间。请你就此给校长 Mr.William写一封建议信，表达你对此次活动的看法并就学校美育活动提出建议。 参考词汇: aesthetic education activity美育活动 写作要求： 1.80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 Dear Mr. William, I’m Li Hua from Grade 9. I’m writing to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua （九） 在“共建美丽多彩校园”活动中，校长鼓励全校学生为此活动提建议。假设你是九年级学生王华，请根据以下提示，写一封信给校长，跟他谈谈学校存在的问题和你的建议。 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词左右（信件的基本格式和开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Headmaster, I am a student of Grade 9. I am excited to participate in the “Building a Beautiful and Colourful Campus Together” activity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours respectfully, Wang Hua （十） 你跟你的同学计划一个筹钱捐款活动去帮助有需要的孩子。你需要写一封英文信给你的国际学校校长征求他的同意。 Money-raising activities Activity Names Activity Contents (内容) Reasons Book fair sell old books exchange old books reuse old books reduce waste Food fair make food sell food improve skills to make food and sell things Model fair make models show beautiful models develop model-making skills ? ? ? Dear Headmaster, My classmates and I are planning money-raising activities to help children in need. We are writing to ask your permission for the activities. In the activities, we will_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Jack $Unit 2 School life单元同步写作讲义 本单元主题属于“人与自我”主题范畴，聚焦校园生活、校园问题与校园优化建议。 本单元旨在培养学生观察校园生活、理性发现校园现存问题、礼貌提出合理改进方案的书面表达能力；通过阅读多国校园博文、学习数量比较语法、积累校园类话题词汇，让学生掌握正式书信的行文结构与礼貌书面用语。这有助于学生学会有条理表达观点、规范运用建议类句型，同时树立珍惜校园生活、主动思考优化生活的意识，提升书面沟通与逻辑思辨能力。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 school life 校园生活 school uniform 校服 dining hall 食堂 lunch hours 午餐时长 ping-pong tables 乒乓球台 school clubs 校园社团 library books 图书馆藏书 school trips 校园出游 start/finish school 上学 / 放学时间 plenty of 大量的 hands-on activities 实践活动 environment 环境 creative 有创造力的 improve 改善，改进 suggestion /advice 建议 provide more… 提供更多…… open our minds 开阔眼界 search online 上网查阅资料 polite 礼貌的 head teacher 校长 句式积累 开头句（书信开篇，点明写信目的） I am writing this letter to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life. 我写这封信是为了提出一些改善校园生活的建议。 I hope to share my ideas with you about making our school better. 我希望和您分享让校园变得更好的想法。 I have some useful suggestions for our school. 我有几条关于学校的实用建议。 中间句（分点提建议 + 说明理由） First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables. 首先，我建议学校增设更多乒乓球台。 Second, it will be a good idea to buy more new books for the school library. 其次，为图书馆添置更多新书会是个好主意。 Moreover, we need more computers in the library so we can search information easily. 此外，图书馆需要更多电脑，方便我们查阅资料。 More school clubs can help us develop different hobbies after class. 更多社团能帮助我们课后培养多样爱好。 If we have longer lunch hours, we can rest well and talk with classmates. 如果午餐时间更长，我们能好好休息、和同学交流。 结尾句（礼貌收尾，表达期待） I hope you will find my suggestions helpful. 希望您觉得我的建议有帮助。 I am looking forward to seeing great changes in our school. 我期待校园能出现可喜的变化。 Thank you for reading my letter. 感谢您阅读我的信件。 佳句仿写 教材原句1：I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life. 仿写1：__________________________________________________________________________ 教材原句2：First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables, so more students can play ping-pong during breaks. 仿写2：__________________________________________________________________________ 教材原句3：I hope my suggestions help improve our school life. 仿写3：__________________________________________________________________________ 【仿写答案】 1.I am writing to offer my advice on making our dining hall food more delicious. 2.First, I would like to suggest that our school should hold more school trips, so we can learn more outside textbooks. 3.I hope my advice can make our school life much more wonderful. 典例 假定你是李华，请给校长写一封建议信，针对校园生活提出 2-3 条改进建议。 注意： 1.词数 80-100 词； 2.注意书信格式、语气礼貌。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：应用文 —— 建议信（正式书信体裁） ② 人称：第一人称 I，第二人称 you（校长） ③ 提示：需提 2-3 条校园优化建议，每条建议附带理由；格式完整，语气礼貌；词数 80-100。 谋篇布局 开头 问候校长，直接说明写信目的 —— 为改善校园生活提建议。 中间 分 First/Second/Moreover 分层给出建议，每条搭配简单理由，使用本单元比较级词汇。 结尾 礼貌感谢，表达期待，标准书信落款。 佳作展示 Dear Mr. Zhang, I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life. First, I hope the dining hall can offer more kinds of hot food. Now we have fewer dishes than students need. Second, our library needs more new storybooks, because many old books are not popular anymore. Moreover, we can have more art clubs after school to make our free time colourful. I hope you find my suggestions useful. Thank you for reading my letter. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ① offer 提供（替代普通单词 give） ② colourful 丰富多彩的（形容课余生活，高级形容词） ③ popular 受欢迎的，贴合图书馆场景 高分句型： ① I am writing to make some suggestions on how to improve our school life.（书信标准开篇句，教材原句改编，点明写作意图） ② Now we have fewer dishes than students need.（运用本单元核心语法 fewer…than 数量比较，贴合单元知识点） ③ I hope you find my suggestions useful.（礼貌收尾万能句型，正式书面用语） （一） 四季更迭，万象焕新。假如你是国际学校的李华，请你向校长Mr White写一封信，建议学校在某个季节开展一项特色活动。 内容包括： 1. 简述该季节的特点 （如天气、自然景观等）； 2. 提出一项贴合该季节的活动建议，并说明如何开展； 3. 活动的意义。 注意： 1. 内容必须包含要点中的所有信息； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露个人真实信息； 4. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：season (n. 季节）, pleasant (adj. 令人舒适的）, organize (v. 组织）, nature (n. 自然） Dear Mr White, I’m writing to make some suggestions on carrying out an activity. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Mr White, I’m writing to make some suggestions on carrying out an activity. I think autumn is perfect for this activity. It is cool and pleasant in this season. The sky is clear and the fallen leaves turn golden, which makes our school look beautiful. I would like to suggest that our school should organize an “Autumn Leaf Art Festival”. Students can collect colourful leaves and use them to create artworks like leaf paintings or make something special. This activity can not only help us relax after class, but also improve our creativity. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点清晰，包括写信目的、活动时间建议、具体活动内容和活动意义，考生应注意语言礼貌得体，并可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接引出主题，说明写信是为了提出开展活动的建议； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从活动时间、具体活动形式等方面详细说明建议； 第三步，书写结语。说明活动的意义和好处。 [亮点词汇] ①carry out开展 ②cool and pleasant凉爽宜人 ③fallen leaves落叶 ④artworks艺术品 ⑤not only...but also...不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①The sky is clear and the fallen leaves turn golden, which makes our school look beautiful.（使用which引导非限制性定语从句） ②This activity can not only help us relax after class, but also improve our creativity.（使用not only...but also...结构） （二） 假如你是 Green School 的学生李华，学校将组织本学期的学校郊游活动。请从以下两个方案中选取一个，给校长Ms Mendozer写一封80词左右的信，说明选择该方案的理由，介绍活动内容并增加一项活动。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Plan A: Protect nature★know more about plants in the park ★put up posters around the park ★organize a clean-up activity ... Plan B: Know our hometown★visit the history museum ★take photos of its streets ★ask old people about hometown ... 参考词汇：poster海报 organize 组织 Dear Ms Mendozer, I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan _________ is a better choice. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Ms Mendozer, I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan A is a better choice. We are always busy with schoolwork, why don’t we choose to get close to nature? We can visit the city park. It’s a good chance to know more about plants in the park. We can also make some posters and put them up around the park so that more people will get to know about nature. We can also organize a clean-up activity to keep the park beautiful. Besides, I’d like to hold a drawing competition so that students can paint the wonderful scenery. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，认为学校旅行很棒，并支持A方案； 第二步，具体阐述A方案的活动内容； 第三步，书写结语，期待回复。 [亮点词汇] ①be always busy with sth总是忙于某事 ②so that以便 ③would like to do sth想要做某事 [高分句型] ①We can also make some posters and put them up around the park so that more people will get to know about nature. (so that引导目的状语从句) （三） 我校即将开展社会实践活动（social practice activity），学校正向同学们征集活动建议。假如你是李华，请你根据如下内容给校长写一封建议信。注意： （1）短文必须包含所有提示内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； （3）字数要求：80~100词； （4）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。 Dear headmaster, I’m glad to hear that we’re going to have a social practice activity soon. In order to have a meaningful activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear headmaster , I’m glad to hear that we’re going to have a social practice activity soon. In order to have a meaningful activity, I’d like to offer some useful suggestions. First of all, I believe that it’s important for teenagers to be independent. So it’s an excellent chance for us to do our own chores in the dormitories. For example, we can make the bed after getting up and sweep the floor with roommates. Secondly, volunteering makes it possible for students to have some hands-on social practice and develop a sense of responsibility. We can go to old people’s home and care for them. Thirdly, we’re really looking forward to having some interesting activities, such as flying kites, planting trees and so on! I truly hope that you can consider my suggestions. Best wishes, Li Hua 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封信； ②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写作意图开头已给出。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“社会实践活动的好处”和“建议”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①be glad to do sth很高兴做某事 ②would like to do sth想要做某事 ③First of all首先 ④do chores做家务 ⑤For example例如 ⑥care for照料 ⑦look forward to doing sth期待做某事 ⑧and so on等等 [高分句型] ①First of all, I believe that it’s important for teenagers to be independent. (that引导的宾语从句) ②So it’s an excellent chance for us to do our own chores in the dormitories. (it固定句型) （四） 假如你是绣山中学的学生李平，你的学校将在每周三下午设立一小时的集体活动课，现学校请全体学生就乒乓球和篮球两个项目投票选择其一，请你给校长写一封信，选择一个更适合大家的运动，并给出你的理由， 要求：(1)不能出现真实的个人身份信息： (2)词数：90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear headmaster, I'm Li Ping from Class 11. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【参考范文】 Dear headmaster, I’m Li Ping from Class 11. I’m glad to hear that there will be after-class activities for one hour on Wednesday afternoon every week. I think basketball is more suitable for us. There are two reasons. One is that I like playing basketball best. I think it is very interesting and relaxing. Playing basketball is good for our body. The other reason is that it is a sport which needs team work. It needs more members to play it. Students can learn how to work together from playing. I think my advice is useful and helpful. Yours, Li Ping 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文。 ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示材料介绍自己认为哪种运动适合学生，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己的观点； 第二步，介绍自己认为篮球更适合的两点原因； 第三步，希望自己的建议能有帮助； [亮点词汇] ① be suitable for 适合某人 ② like best 最喜欢 ③ be good for 对……有好处 [高分句型] ① I’m glad to hear that there will be after-class activities for one hour on Wednesday afternoon every week（there be句型） ② Playing basketball is good for our body（动名词作主语） （五） 为了更好地落实“双减”政策，使同学们健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是李华，用英语给校长写一封建议信。 要求：1. 内容应包括所有要点，并适当发挥； 2. 词数：不少于80词； Dear headmaster, These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear headmaster, These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggest our school organize fewer exams as well. As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less and speak more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，一封建议信； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍对于学校的建议； 第二步，介绍对于学校老师的建议； 第三步，最后是表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ① as well也 ② As for对于 ③ be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ① Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities.（think后为省略that的宾语从句） ② And if they can talk less and speak more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice.（if 引导的条件状语从句） （六） 假如你是Wen Hua Middle School的学生李华，你们学校即将创办一个新社团，为此在学校网站上发布通知向全校师生征集建议，请你从以下三个社团中选择一个社团，用英文给校长Mr. White写一封信，说明创办该社团的理由以及该社团的特色和可以开展的活动。 注意： (1)文中不可出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 (2)须涵盖所提供的内容要点，可适当发挥。 (3)80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. White, I’m glad to hear that there is going to be a new club in our school.    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 （一） Dear Mr White, I’m glad to hear that there is going to be a new club in our school. Among the English Club, Sports Club and the Animal Saving Club, I am most interested in the English Club. We all know that English is more and more useful in the world. Many students feel it hard to learn it. We start the club to teach the students how to learn English well. And there are many good ways to learn it such as taking English notes, reading English stories, magazines, newspapers, singing English songs, watching English films and so on. In this club students can find their own best ways and they will be good at English by listening, speaking, reading and writing. We will learn together for one hour a day on weekdays. And we believe our club members will get better grades in the future. I really hope that our school can set up the English Club. Thank you. Yours, Li Hua （二） Dear Mr White, I’m glad to hear that there is going to be a new club in our school. Among the English Club, Sports Club and the Animal Saving Club, I am most interested in the sport Club. We all know that students spend most time learning in the school. They don’t have enough time to do sports. Their health gets worse and worse. I think it’s more and more important for students to spend more time doing exercise. There are all kinds of sports, ball games such as playing volleyball, football, basketball, table tennis as well as running, swimming, jumping and so on. To keep healthy, we make plans for our club members. Club members can choose their own favourite sports, we plan to do exercise for forty minutes in the morning and thirty minutes in the afternoon. We believe students will get healthier and stronger in the sport club. I really hope that our school can set up the sport Club. Thank you. Yours, LiHua （三） Dear Mr White, I’m glad to hear that there is going to be a new club in our school. Among the English Club, Sports Club and the Animal Saving Club, I am most interested in the Animal Saving Club. We all know that animals are our friends. We live together on the same earth. We should live in peace. But now because farmers are taking away their land and forests, many animals don’t have a safe place to live in. And often some animals don’t have enough water to drink, the number of wild animals is getting smaller and smaller. We must try to protect them. We can plant more trees and let more animals have their own homes. We can stop people killing animals for food and money. Let’s find out what we can do to save as many animals as possible. We also make every student know that protecting the environment is not only protecting animals, but also protecting ourselves . I really hope that our school can set up the Animal Saving Club. Thank you. Yours, LiHua 【写作分析】 1.题干解读：题干要求给校长写一封信，从三个社团当中挑选一个，建议学校创办。说明具体理由，介绍社团特色，并描述该社团可以开展的活动。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时，以第一人称为主进行写作。可分为四段，第一段陈述挑选哪个社团，第二段说明理由、介绍特色，第三段描述活动具体内容，最后一段表达希望。写作时注意时态的切换，做到无拼写和语法错误。 （七） 假定你是李华，深圳某国际学校的学生。你校正在征集下个月 “中国文化节” 的活动建议及其负责人。现在请你给校长Mr. Green写一封建议信。内容要点如下： 1. 活动介绍（名称、内容）； 2. 活动目的： 3. 活动所需； 4. 推荐自己负责该活动。 要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥 2. 语言连贯、条理清晰、语法正确、书写规范 Dear Mr. Green, Hello! I’m Li Hua from Class One, Grade Nine. I’m writing to recommend an activity for the Chinese Culture Festival next month. It is called ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Mr. Green, Hello! I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m writing to recommend an activity for the Chinese Culture Festival next month. It is called Dumpling-Making Contest. First, teams of five students will learn to make dumplings from a volunteer. Then, they need to create as many well-shaped dumplings as possible in thirty minutes. The winner will win a set of traditional Chinese tea cups. The materials needed are bowls, spoons, chopsticks, fillings, and wrappers. The purpose of the activity is to make cultural learning fun and memorable. At the same time, it helps students develop team spirit as well. I would like to organize the contest, because I am crazy about traditional Chinese food, especially dumplings. Besides, I am good at English and I used to be a host. Could you please consider my idea? Looking forward to your reply! Yours Li Hua 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇建议信； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍这次活动介绍的名称、内容、目的以及活动所需并推荐自己负责该活动。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①learn to do sth学习做某事 ②a set of一套…… ③be crazy about迷上…… ④be good at擅长…… [高分句型] ①I would like to organize the contest, because I am crazy about traditional Chinese food, especially dumplings. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②I am good at English and I used to be a host. (并列句) （八） 假设你是国际学校学生李华。你参加了上周学校的美育活动，你发现该活动既有创新亮点，也有改进空间。请你就此给校长 Mr.William写一封建议信，表达你对此次活动的看法并就学校美育活动提出建议。 参考词汇: aesthetic education activity美育活动 写作要求： 1.80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4.标点正确，书面整洁。 Dear Mr. William, I’m Li Hua from Grade 9. I’m writing to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Mr. William, I’m Li Hua from Grade 9. I’m writing to share my thoughts on last week’s aesthetic education activity. It was really innovative, like the art-creation workshop where we made unique handicrafts. But it also had room for improvement. The activity time was a bit short, so some of us couldn’t finish our works. Also, the venue was a bit crowded. For future activities, I suggest extending the time and choosing a larger place. Moreover, inviting artists to give lectures could make us learn more about beauty. Best regards, Li Hua 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是书信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表达对此活动的积极看法。 第二步：提出不足。 第三步：提出改进的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①a bit crowded有点拥挤 ②Moreover而且 ③make sb. do sth.使某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It was really innovative, like the art-creation workshop where we made unique handicrafts. (定语从句） ②Moreover, inviting artists to give lectures could make us learn more about beauty. (动名词作主语) （九） 在“共建美丽多彩校园”活动中，校长鼓励全校学生为此活动提建议。假设你是九年级学生王华，请根据以下提示，写一封信给校长，跟他谈谈学校存在的问题和你的建议。 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词左右（信件的基本格式和开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Headmaster, I am a student of Grade 9. I am excited to participate in the “Building a Beautiful and Colourful Campus Together” activity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours respectfully, Wang Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Headmaster, I am a student of Grade 9. I am excited to participate in the “Building a Beautiful and Colourful Campus Together” activity. First, I would like to talk about the problems of our campus. The school roads are not very clean, and there are not enough trees which can provide shade in summer and make the school more beautiful. In addition, there are few after-school activities for us to take part in, which can help us out of the stress of hard study. What’s more, some facilities and equipment at school are old, such as computers and projectors. Here are my suggestions. First of all, I hope that we can do something to make the environment more pleasant and beautiful, such as planting more trees, repairing school buildings and improving school roads. Secondly, organize more after-school activities, such as lectures and competitions so that we can have more opportunities to show our talents and abilities. It can also help us relax ourselves. Last but not least, update the teaching and classroom equipment in order to improve the effect of teaching and learning. I will feel very happy if my advice is taken. I hope our campus will be more beautiful and colourful. Yours respectfully, Wang Hua 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍学校的问题，然后提出改进意见。思维导图描述完整，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，提出学校存在的问题； 第二步，提出改进意见； 第三步，总结并表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ① take part in参加 ② In addition除此之外 ③ What’s more另外 ④ Last but not least最后但是也是最重要的 ⑤ First of all首先 ⑥ in order to为了 [高分句型] ① there are not enough trees which can provide shade in summer and make the school more beautiful.（限制性定语从句） ② In addition, there are few after-school activities for us to take part in, which can help us out of the stress of hard study.（非限制性定语从句） ③ I will feel very happy if my advice is taken.（条件状语从句） ④ First of all, I hope that we can do something to make the environment more pleasant and beautiful, such as planting more trees, repairing school buildings and improving school roads. （宾语从句） ⑤ Secondly, organize more after-school activities, such as lectures and competitions so that we can have more opportunities to show our talents and abilities.（目的状语从句） （十） 你跟你的同学计划一个筹钱捐款活动去帮助有需要的孩子。你需要写一封英文信给你的国际学校校长征求他的同意。 Money-raising activities Activity Names Activity Contents (内容) Reasons Book fair sell old books exchange old books reuse old books reduce waste Food fair make food sell food improve skills to make food and sell things Model fair make models show beautiful models develop model-making skills ? ? ? Dear Headmaster, My classmates and I are planning money-raising activities to help children in need. We are writing to ask your permission for the activities. In the activities, we will_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Jack 【参考范文】 Dear Headmaster, My classmates and I are planning money-raising activities to help children in need. We are writing to ask for your permission for the activities. In the activities, we will have a Book fair, a Food fair, a Model fair and a Picture fair. We will sell old books and exchange old books at the Book fair because we want to reuse old books and reduce waste. At the Food fair, we will make food and sell food, which can improve the skills to make food and sell things. As for the Model fair, we will make models and show beautiful models in order to develop our model-making skills. And at the Picture fair, we will draw and sell the pictures created by ourselves. It can improve our drawing skills. We hope you will agree to our plan. We are looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Jack 【写作分析】 1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，要求根据提示内容，向校长介绍筹钱捐款活动并征求他的同意。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：本题写作时用第一人称，时态主要用一般将来时。承接开头详细介绍了各项活动的内容及举办原因，最后一段收尾并表达希望。要保证语言连贯、层次分明、无语法和拼写错误。 $