2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---与小外甥的暖心蜕变- 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统覆盖读后续写核心考点，将文本分析（角色、视角、时空线）、情节构造、语言表达（句式运用）等考点按“理解-构建-表达”逻辑组织，通过细节问答、情节线填空等问题链设计，引导学生自主梳理文本要素，形成续写思维框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层指导设计，开篇细节问答帮助学生定位文本理解薄弱点，续写框架通过“问题-衔接-表达”步骤引导情节构建，培养语言能力与思维品质。每个模块配情感线分析表和句式仿写任务，助力学生个性化提升，教师可依学情精准指导，提升备考实效。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I found out I had become an uncle at the age of 22, I was studying languages and spending my exchange year in Madrid back in 1997. I got the unexpected phone call from my mother, who told me that my sister had just given birth to a baby boy, Leo. At that moment, the news sounded abstract and distant, far away from my wild late-night parties. I was lost in the free-spirited local lifestyle and could hardly picture myself playing the role of an uncle, a responsible family member. I planned to fly home three months later once my semester finished, but before the reunion, unpleasant childhood experiences came into my mind and made me afraid of meeting the newborn. Growing up, I lived in a crowded neighbourhood filled with noisy kids. I was often disturbed. Whenever I tried to focus on reading, the kids would interrupt me or mess up my belongings. Those annoying encounters left me with a strong dislike for small children. For years, I kept away from little kids, convinced babies were noisy and troublesome to get along with. I never imagined I would form a close bond with a child someday. When I finally stepped into my sister’s living room three months later, the smell of baby and warm milk immediately made me want to turn around. I crossed my arms and kept my distance from his cradle (摇篮), refusing to even touch the baby’s blanket. Beside the bed, Mum sang softly to calm the baby. She said, “All kids are angels (天使).” Her words stayed in my head, but his cries still brought back bad memories of noisy children. I made up my mind to leave soon. The next day after my first visit, my mother and sister had something urgent to deal with. They rang me up and told me to take care of the baby. Though unwilling, I still showed up. They left, leaving us alone in the bedroom. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly, Little Leo burst into loud, helpless cries. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, he calmed down and smiled at me. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I studied abroad in Madrid and became an uncle unexpectedly--- _________________ --- Childhood noisy experiences made me dislike kids--- _________________ --- I returned home and kept distant from newborn Leo--- _________________ --- I was forced to babysit Leo alone 4. 细节问答 Where was the author when he knew he became an uncle? ：___________________________________ Why did the author fear and dislike little kids?：_________________________________ What was the author’s attitude towards newborn Leo at first?：________________________________________________ What did Mom tell the author about kids?：__________________________________________ Why did the author have to look after Leo alone?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 我在马德里留学时意外得知自己当了舅舅→_________________ →童年被吵闹孩童打扰的经历让我极度反感小孩→_________________ →放假回家后，我刻意疏远小外甥Leo，不愿亲近→临时被托付独自照看婴儿Leo→_________________（续写手忙脚乱安抚婴儿、被童真治愈、改变固有偏见） 6．情感线 I：unbelievable and distant→___________→repellent and resistant→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Suddenly, Little Leo burst into loud, helpless cries. 衔接句1——How did the author feel and what did he do to comfort Leo?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Finally, he calmed down and smiled at me. 衔接句2——What change took place in the author’s mind? What did he realize?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：突然，小利奥无助地大哭起来。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：终于，他安静下来，对着我笑了。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Suddenly, Little Leo burst into loud, helpless cries. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, he calmed down and smiled at me. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（因童年经历反感孩童、最终被童真治愈、学会接纳与担当的年轻舅舅）；Little Leo（懵懂可爱、纯真温柔的小婴儿）；Mom（温柔通透、善于引导的母亲）；Sister（诞下幼子的姐姐） 2．视角 第 一 人称 3．时空线 I studied abroad in Madrid and became an uncle unexpectedly--- I indulged in free lifestyle and resisted the role of an uncle--- Childhood noisy experiences made me dislike kids--- I held prejudice against little children for years--- I returned home and kept distant from newborn Leo--- Mom’s words failed to change my mind--- I was forced to babysit Leo alone 4. 细节问答 Where was the author when he knew he became an uncle? ：He was on an exchange study in Madrid in 1997. Why did the author fear and dislike little kids?：His childhood was often disturbed by noisy kids, leaving him a bad impression of children. What was the author’s attitude towards newborn Leo at first?：He was resistant and kept his distance, unwilling to get close to the baby. What did Mom tell the author about kids?：Mom told him that all kids are angels. Why did the author have to look after Leo alone?：His mother and sister had something urgent to deal with and had to leave. 5．情节线 我在马德里留学时意外得知自己当了舅舅→沉迷自由随性的海外生活，无法接受舅舅的责任身份→童年被吵闹孩童打扰的经历让我极度反感小孩→多年来我一直刻意疏远孩童，认为孩子吵闹麻烦→放假回家后，我刻意疏远小外甥Leo，不愿亲近→母亲的开导未能改变我的固有偏见→临时被托付独自照看婴儿Leo→我手忙脚乱安抚哭闹的Leo，被孩子的纯真治愈，彻底改变偏见、收获亲情与成长（续写手忙脚乱安抚婴儿、被童真治愈、改变固有偏见） 6．情感线 I：unbelievable and distant→repulsive and prejudiced→resistant and impatient→softened and grateful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： 我因童年糟糕的经历一直反感孩童，成为舅舅后也刻意疏远小外甥，在一次独自照看哭闹的小外甥的经历中，我耐心安抚、慢慢陪伴，最终被孩子的纯真笑容治愈，摒弃偏见，懂得了孩童的温柔与亲情的珍贵。 英文： Having long disliked children due to unpleasant childhood experiences, I resisted getting close to my newborn nephew Leo. However, when taking care of the crying baby alone, I patiently comforted him, and his pure smile cured my prejudice, making me realize the warmth of children and family bond. 8. 句式 状语从句：When I found out I had become an uncle, I was studying abroad in Madrid. 定语从句：I got the unexpected phone call from my mother, who told me my sister gave birth to a baby boy. 宾语从句：I was convinced babies were noisy and troublesome to get along with. 非谓语：Though unwilling, I still showed up to look after the baby. 并列句：The news sounded abstract and distant, far away from my wild late-night parties. 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：固有偏见会隔绝美好，童真温柔治愈人心，亲情的陪伴能打破刻板印象，带来成长与蜕变。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Suddenly, Little Leo burst into loud, helpless cries. 衔接句1——How did the author feel and what did he do to comfort Leo?Leo’s cries made me anxious, but I forced myself to calm down and tried various ways patiently to soothe the helpless baby. Paragraph 2: Finally, he calmed down and smiled at me. 衔接句2——What change took place in the author’s mind? What did he realize?The baby’s pure smile melted my long-held prejudice, and I understood Mom’s words and cherished the precious family bond. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：突然，小利奥无助地大哭起来。 →①刺耳的哭声勾起我过往的糟糕回忆，让我无比慌乱焦躁→②我压下不耐与抵触，尝试轻轻摇晃、温柔哼唱安抚他→③我耐心陪伴、轻声安抚，一点点缓解他的不安； 第二段：终于，他安静下来，对着我笑了。 →①纯粹柔软的笑容瞬间治愈我所有的抵触与偏见→②我终于明白母亲所说的孩童皆是天使的深意→③我放下刻板印象，接纳了舅舅的身份，珍惜这份温暖的亲情。 四.段落续写（标准答案） Suddenly, Little Leo burst into loud, helpless cries. The sharp cries instantly triggered my old bad memories, making me feel extremely anxious and annoyed. For a moment, I wanted to run away immediately. But seeing his tiny, helpless body kicking gently, my heart softened at once. I had no choice but to try my best to comfort him. I held him carefully in my arms, patted his back gently and walked slowly around the bedroom. I also hummed soft tunes quietly, trying my hardest to soothe the crying baby. Finally, he calmed down and smiled at me. His big bright eyes looked at me innocently, and his cute smile was pure and warm, like a sunbeam piercing my cold prejudice. All my previous resistance and dislike faded away completely. I finally understood what Mom had told me—all kids are angels. From then on, I no longer avoided Leo. Instead, I learned to take on the role of an uncle and cherish every warm moment spent with my lovely nephew. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $