Unit 8 Then and now（写作突破专项训练）英语译林版三起六年级上册（新教材）

Unit8 Then and now 写作方法指引 - 原文指路 I’m doing a project on life in the past and now. 开篇引入：点明写作主题，自然引出对生活今昔变化的探讨。 In the past, I wrote letters to my family and friends. 回顾过去：具体描述过去的交流方式，展现旧时生活场景。 Now I chat with them on the internet. 描写现在：呈现如今便捷的线上交流模式，体现生活的变化。 And we spent a lot of time on the road then. Now high-speed trains travel very fast. 对比差异：通过出行场景的今昔对比，突出科技带来的出行便利。 Twenty years ago, I went to shops and paid in cash. Now I often shop online and pay on my smartphone. 多角度举例：拓展购物场景的变化，丰富文章对生活变化的描写维度 It is great! 抒发感受：直接表达对生活变化的积极评价，传递正向情感。 一、核心词汇 1. 通讯方式类 过去：write letters（写信） 现在：chat on the internet（网上聊天）、use a smartphone（使用智能手机）、write emails（写邮件） 2. 购物方式类 过去：go to shops（去商店购物）、pay in cash（用现金支付） 现在：shop online（网上购物）、pay on the smartphone（用手机支付） 3. 出行方式类 过去：walk（步行） 现在：take the metro（坐地铁）、take high-speed trains（坐高铁）、ride an e-bike（骑电动车） 4. 科技产品类 robot（机器人）、smartphone（智能手机）、high-speed train（高铁）、metro（地铁）、e-bike（电动车） 5. 其他动作短语类 cook a big dinner（做一顿丰盛的晚餐）、play Chinese chess（下中国象棋）、do a project（做项目）、have an online meeting（开线上会议） 二、参考句型 1. 过去与现在对比句型 In the past, I wrote letters to my family and friends. Now I chat with them on the internet. Twenty years ago, I went to shops and paid in cash. Now I often shop online and pay on my smartphone. Fifty years ago, my grandmother walked to different places. Now she goes to different places by e-bike or metro. In the past, we spent a lot of time on the road. Now high-speed trains travel very fast. 2. 描述机器人功能句型 The robot cooked a big dinner for Bobby’s family. The robot played Chinese chess with Bobby. We have a robot helper to help us. 3. 表达生活变化感受句型 It is great to chat with my grandmother on the internet. High-speed trains make our trips faster and easier. Shopping online saves a lot of time for us. 易错点提示 11.时态与动词形式区分：描述过去的动作必须用动词过去式（如walked, wrote, went）；描述现在经常性、习惯性的动作，主语是第三人称单数时，动词要变第三人称单数形式（如she goes, he uses, my grandmother writes），主语是其他人称时用动词原形。 22.时间状语搭配：in the past twenty years ago fifty years ago等过去时间状语要和一般过去时连用；now often sometimes等现在时间状语要和一般现在时连用，不能混淆。 33.固定短语介词搭配：注意固定短语的介词使用，比如“在网上聊天”是chat on the internet（用on不用in）；“用现金支付”是pay in cash（用in不用with）；“用手机支付”是pay on the smartphone（用on不用with）。 44.第三人称单数细节：主语是单数名词（如the robot, my father）或第三人称代词（she, he, it）时，一般现在时的动词要加s/es，比如The robot cooks dinner. He shops online.，不要遗漏词尾变化。 写作一 写作主题要求： 请结合生活实际，谈谈你的家庭在过去和现在，在通讯、购物或者出行方式上的变化，并说说你对这些变化的感受。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： write letters, chat on the internet, go to shops, shop online, pay in cash, pay on the smartphone, walk, take the metro, high-speed train 写作二 写作主题要求： 假如你家有一个机器人助手，请介绍它能为你们做的事情，再对比过去没有机器人时的生活，说说它给你们带来的便利。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： robot, cook a big dinner, play Chinese chess, do a project, helper, great, easy 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： Twenty years ago, my mother went to shops and paid in cash. She wrote letters to her friends too. （描写过去的生活方式）Now she shops online and pays on her smartphone. She often chats with her friends on the internet. My father walked to work in the past. Now he takes the metro. High-speed trains make our trips faster and easier.（对比现在的生活变化） I love these changes!（表达感受） 范文（提高版）： Twenty years ago, life was different for my family.（总起句） My mother went to shops every weekend and paid in cash. She wrote letters to her friends and waited for weeks to get replies. Now she shops online at home and pays on her smartphone. She can chat with her friends on the internet anytime. My father walked to work in the past, which took him 40 minutes. Now he takes the metro, and it only takes 15 minutes. When we visit my grandparents, we take high-speed trains. It saves a lot of time. （分点对比今夕生活）These changes make our life much better!（总结主旨） 写作二 范文（基础版）： We have a robot helper at home. The robot can cook a big dinner for us. It can also play Chinese chess with me. （介绍机器人的本领）In the past, my mother spent a lot of time cooking. Now she has more time to read books. I often play chess with the robot when I am free.（对比生活发生的变化） It is great to have a robot helper!（抒发感受） 范文（提高版）： We have a cute robot helper at home. It can do many nice things for us. Every evening, it cooks a big dinner for my family. When I finish my homework, it plays Chinese chess with me. Sometimes it even helps my father do his project.（介绍机器人的工作） In the past, my mother spent two hours cooking every day and felt tired. Now the robot does the cooking, and my mother can relax and watch her favourite TV shows. （对比过去和现在的生活）The robot makes our life easy and happy. I like it very much!（总结全文） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $