Unit 6 Going Green （写作突破专项训练）英语译林版三起六年级上册（新教材）

Unit6 Going Green 写作方法指引 - 原文指路 Every year, people in many countries turn off their lights for an hour. 开篇引入：通过具体环保活动切入，点明绿色生活主题背景。 It tells people to save electricity. 深化主题：说明活动的环保意义，强化节约资源的理念。 I’ll save water. 明确计划：用一般将来时清晰表达个人的环保行动计划。 We should turn off the tap when we brush our teeth. 细化做法：用should提出具体可操作的环保建议，让计划更详实。 Let’s work together! 结尾号召：发出共同行动的呼吁，升华绿色生活的主题。 一、核心词汇 1. 环保行为类 walk to school save electricity save water save paper turn off the lights turn off the tap eat up all our food use both sides of the paper take part in Earth Hour use a cloth bag 2. 相关物品/活动类 Earth Hour electricity tap cloth bag poster cardboard box 3. 其他相关词汇 Project chore supermarket vegetables eggs fish 二、参考句型 1. 表达个人环保计划 I’ll save water. I’ll save paper. I won’t waste food. We’ll do some shopping in the new supermarket. We’ll buy some vegetables, eggs and fish. We’ll go on foot. 2. 提出环保建议 We should turn off the tap when we brush our teeth. We should always eat up all our food. We should use both sides of the paper. 3. 描述环保活动信息 Earth Hour is on the last Saturday of March. It lasts from 8:30 to 9:30 in the evening. It tells people to save electricity. 4. 表达环保行动的意义 It’ll be great to help the Earth. These small things will help our Mother Earth in a big way. It’s good for us. And it’s good for the Earth too! 易错点提示 11.will的用法易错：will后必须接动词原形，否定形式是won’t，注意缩写形式的正确书写（如I’ll, won’t），不要漏写省略符号或写错形式。 22.should的用法易错：should作为情态动词，后接动词原形，主语无论单复数，should的形式保持不变，不要根据主语变化形式。 33.词汇搭配易错：正确搭配：save electricity/water/paper；turn off the lights/tap；错误搭配：save electric/water/paper；turn off on the lights 44.固定短语易错： “ 参加活动”用take part in，不要写成take part on；“步行”用on foot，不要写成by foot 55.时间表达易错：使用“from...to...”表示时间段时，注意时间的顺序和格式，如“It lasts from 8:30 to 9:30 in the evening.”，不要颠倒时间顺序。 写作一 写作主题要求： 请以“My Green Plan”为题，写一篇短文介绍你的环保小计划，内容需包含具体的环保行为，以及这些行为对地球的意义。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： walk to school, save water, save paper, cloth bag, won’t waste food, turn off the tap, use both sides of the paper 写作二 写作主题要求： 请写一篇短文，向同学们介绍“地球一小时（Earth Hour）”的相关信息，并给大家提出几条日常环保的小建议。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： Earth Hour, save electricity, turn off the lights, use both sides of paper, eat up food, take part in, last 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： My Green Plan I have a green plan this term. （点明主题）First, I’ll walk to school every day. Second, I’ll save water. I’ll turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. Third, I’ll save paper by using both sides of it. I won’t waste food either. （列举环保行动）These small things are good for the Earth. They will help our Mother Earth in a big way.（点明行动意义） 范文（提高版）： My Green Plan I have a great green plan to help the Earth.（点明主题） Every day, I’ll walk to school instead of taking a car. When I go shopping with my mom, I’ll use a cloth bag, not plastic bags. I’ll turn off the tap to save water and use both sides of the paper to save paper. I also won’t waste any food.（列举环保行动） I think if everyone does these small things, our Earth will become cleaner and nicer.（点明行动意义） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Earth Hour and Green Tips Earth Hour is on the last Saturday of March. It lasts from 8:30 to 9:30 in the evening. It tells people to save electricity. （介绍地球一小时）Here are some green tips for us. We should turn off the lights when we leave the room. We should eat up all our food. We should use both sides of the paper.（列举环保方法） It’s good for us and the Earth too!（总结益处） 范文（提高版）： Earth Hour and Green Tips Do you know Earth Hour? It’s an important green activity. It’s on the last Saturday of March and lasts from 8:30 to 9:30 in the evening. People turn off lights to save electricity. Last year, my family took part in it. （介绍活动与自身经历）Now I have some tips for everyone: we should turn off the tap when we don’t use it, eat up all our food, and walk to school. （给出环保建议）Let’s do these small things to help our Mother Earth!（发出倡议） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $