Unit 5 Keeping our city clean（写作突破专项训练）英语译林版三起六年级上册（新教材）

Unit5 Keeping our city clean 写作方法指引 - 原文指路（清洁小组计划类写作） Hi, everyone! My name is Yang Ling. I want to start a cleaning group. 开篇引入：自我介绍并说明发起清洁小组的初衷，自然开启环保话题。 In the group, we will make posters to ask others to join. 阐述计划：运用单元核心句型“will+动词原形”，清晰说明小组的宣传行动。 We will clean a different place every Saturday. 细化安排：明确清洁行动的时间规律，让计划更具可操作性。 This weekend, we will help in Happy Tree Park. 具体部署：给出近期的行动地点，增强计划的真实性与落地性。 Who wants to join? It will be a busy but wonderful day! 发出倡议：用问句号召他人参与，同时展望行动的积极体验，激发参与意愿。 写作方法指引 - 原文指路（环保行动介绍类写作） I’ll go plogging with my family. 表达个人计划：用“I’ll”（will的缩写）简洁说明周末的环保健身计划，贴合单元核心句型。 It’s jogging and picking up rubbish at the same time. 解释行动内涵：清晰定义plogging，帮助读者快速理解行动内容。 It can keep us healthy and make our city clean! 点明行动意义：阐述行动对个人健康和城市清洁的双重益处，增强内容说服力。 That sounds great! Can I join you? 回应认可：用简单句子表达对行动的赞同，侧面体现行动的吸引力。 Let’s go plogging again next weekend! 发出延续倡议：号召持续参与，强化环保行动的持续性与号召力。 一、核心词汇 1. 清洁相关 rubbish bin 垃圾桶rubbish 垃圾banana skin 香蕉皮clean 干净的；打扫dirty 脏的sweep 打扫pick up 捡起plogging 跑步捡垃圾cleaning group 清洁小组poster 海报rubbish bag 垃圾袋 2. 地点相关 park 公园school gate 学校大门street 街道city 城市 3. 动作与状态相关 jog 慢跑help 帮助make 制作；使bring 带来meet 见面 fall down 摔倒keep healthy 保持健康make...clean 使……干净 4. 其他词汇 weekend 周末morning 早上wonderful 很棒的great 极好的 二、参考句型 1. 表达未来计划（will句型） I’ll go plogging with my family. We’ll go plogging in the park this Saturday morning. I’ll be here on time. We will clean a different place every Saturday. We will help in Happy Tree Park this weekend. I will bring the rubbish bags. 2. 描述清洁方式及作用 It’s jogging and picking up rubbish at the same time. It can keep us healthy and make our city clean! Tina cleans the street. We did a great job! We should work hard to keep our city clean. 3. 表达意愿与发起行动 I want to start a cleaning group. I’ll join! I’ll join too! 易错点提示 11.will的用法易错：will是一般将来时的助动词，后面必须接动词原形，不受主语人称和数的影响，比如不能写成"We will cleans the street."，正确应为"We will clean the street."。 22.词汇拼写易错：注意区分"rubbish"（不要少写字母b）、"plogging"（不要拼写错误）；"banana skin"是两个独立单词，不要合并书写。 33.短语搭配易错："pick up"是固定短语，接名词时，名词可放在短语中间或后面，比如"pick up rubbish"或"pick the rubbish up"；"keep"后接形容词表示保持某种状态，比如"keep clean""keep healthy"，不要误接副词。 44.时态区分易错：描述已经完成的动作要用一般过去时，比如"We did a great job!"；描述未来计划用一般将来时（will+动词原形），注意不要混淆两种时态的用法。 写作一 写作主题要求： 这个周末，你想为保持城市清洁做一些事，请写一写你的具体计划，包括和谁一起、在哪里做、做什么，以及你觉得这样做的好处。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2. 语言表达流畅。 3. 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： plogging, park, rubbish bag, family, weekend, morning, keep healthy, make...clean 写作二 写作主题要求： 上周你加入了学校的清洁小组，和同学们一起去公园打扫卫生，请描述这次活动的过程和你的感受。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： cleaning group, park, pick up, rubbish bin, poster, great, did a great job, banana skin 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： This weekend, I’ll go plogging with my family. We’ll go to Green Park on Saturday morning. （交代活动）I will bring two rubbish bags. Plogging is jogging and picking up rubbish at the same time. It can keep us healthy and make our city clean. （介绍活动和好处）I think it will be a wonderful weekend!（总结感受） 范文（提高版）： This weekend, I have a great plan to keep our city clean. I’ll go plogging with my parents and little sister in Green Park on Saturday morning.（点明计划） I will bring three big rubbish bags. We will pick up banana skins, plastic bottles and other rubbish. Plogging is fun—it keeps us healthy and makes our city clean. （行动与意义）I can’t wait for the weekend!（表达期待） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Last weekend, I joined the school cleaning group. We went to Happy Tree Park.（交代事件地点） We picked up rubbish and put it into rubbish bins. We also put up a poster to tell people not to litter. （描写具体行动）We did a great job! The park was clean again. I felt happy.（交代成果与心情） 范文（提高版）： Last Sunday morning, I joined my school’s cleaning group. We met at the school gate and walked to Happy Tree Park. （交代时间与行程）We picked up banana skins, paper and other rubbish, then put them into rubbish bins. We also put up a big poster to ask people to keep the park clean. When we finished, the park looked nice and clean. （细化劳动过程）We did a great job! I felt very happy because I helped keep our city clean.（写出收获与感悟） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $