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Unit1 Great people
Writing
(沪教版 2024)九年级
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Pre-writing
While-writing
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Post-writing
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Summary
Assessment
Homework
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Learning objectives
Lead in
By the end of the lesson, I will be able to...
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use a mind map to plan information about a great person;
write an article about a great person with the help of given expressions;
check and revise the writing with the provided checklist.
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Learning objectives
A lot of people changed society with their skills, knowledge and ideas.📕
Teen Life Magazine will have a special column about them. Write an article about a great person and send it to us!
Q: What is the activity on the magazine?
The magazine wants us to write an article about ______________ for its special column.
a great person
Q: Who are the great people we learned in this unit?
Look and answer.
Lead-in
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Tu Youyou
Mo Yan
Pablo Picasso
Ludwig van Beethoven
Nicolaus Copernicus
Shakespeare
Madame Curie
Darwin
Einstein
Confucius
Lu Xun
Wang Zhenyi
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Think and share.
Lead-in
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Who is the great person?
What are his/her achievements?
How did he/she become a great person?
Why do people admire him/her?
What personal qualities does he/she have?
1 Discuss in pairs about the great people you know about.
Use the questions to help you.
Discuss in pairs.
Lead-in
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.…
Who is the great person?
What are his/her achievements?
How did he/she become a great person?
Why do people admire him/her?
What personal qualities does he/she have?
1 Discuss in pairs about the great people you know about.
Use the questions to help you.
For example-Lu Xun
Who:
One of the greatest writers in modern China
Achievements:
Wrote novels and essays;
led the New Culture Movement
How:
Grew up with a hard life;
gave up medicine;
chose writing to wake up people
Why :
influenced generations of people
Qualities:
thoughtful, caring, brave, responsible
Who is the great person?
He’s one of the greatest writers in modern China.
Discuss in pairs.
Lead-in
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.…
Who is the great person?
What are his/her achievements?
How did he/she become a great person?
Why do people admire him/her?
What personal qualities does he/she have?
1 Discuss in pairs about the great people you know about.
Use the questions to help you.
For example-Lu Xun
Who:
Achievements:
How:
Why :
Qualities:
It’s your turn now!
1. Tu Youyou 屠呦呦
Achievements: discovered artemisinin, won Nobel Prize
How she became great: did lots of experiments, kept researching
Qualities: patient, determined, hard-working
2. Confucius 孔子
Achievements: great educator, wise thinker
How he became great: taught many students, shared ideas
Qualities: wise, kind, knowledgeable
3. Shakespeare 莎士比亚
Achievements: famous writer, wrote many plays
How he became great: loved writing, kept creating works
Qualities: creative, talented, thoughtful
4. Darwin 达尔文
Achievements: great scientist, studied nature
How he became great: observed carefully, did long research
Qualities: careful, curious, patient
Do some research about a great person you are interested in.
and complete the mind map with the information you found.
Complete the mind map.
Pre-writing
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2 Write an article about a great person.
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Step 1 Plan
Complete the mind map.
Pre-writing
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2 Write an article about a great person.
and complete the mind map with the information you found.
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For example:
Early life and background
Qualities
Achievements and contributions
People’s opinions on him / her
born in 1881, Shaoxing;
tough childhood;
study medicine in Japan;
turn to writing
thoughtful
caring
brave
responsible
famous writer;
write novels & essays;
lead New Culture Movement
the soul of the nation;
greatly respected;
influential works
Complete the mind map.
Pre-writing
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2 Write an article about a great person.
and complete the mind map with the information you found.
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Early life and background
Qualities
Achievements and contributions
People’s opinions on him / her
It’s your turn now!
and complete the mind map with the information you found.
Shakespeare
Early life & background: born in England, loved literature
Qualities: creative, talented
Achievements & contributions: write plays & poems
People’s opinions: world-famous writer
Darwin Early
life & background: interested in nature from young
Qualities: careful, curious, patient
Achievements & contributions: study living things
People’s opinions: outstanding scientist
Tu Youyou
Early life & background: medical student, devoted to medical research
Qualities: patient, determined, careful
Achievements & contributions: discover artemisinin, win Nobel Prize
People’s opinions: great scientist, life saver
Wang Zhenyi
Early life & background
born in 1768, Nanjing; scholarly family; learn astronomy
Qualities: hard-working, curious, brave, open-minded
Achievements & contributions:explain lunar eclipses; research astronomy & maths
People’s opinions:great female scientist
Confucius
Early life & background: lived long ago, loved learning
Qualities: wise, kind, knowledgeable
Achievements & contributions: great educator, share ideas
People’s opinions: famous thinker, respected worldwide
Read and complete.
Pre-writing
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2 Write an article about a great person.
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It’s your turn now!
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Lu Xun
Lu Xun was one of the greatest writers and thinkers in modern Chinese history.
From a young age, he was born in 1881 in Shaoxing, Zhejiang. Though he had a tough childhood, he kept learning hard. Inspired by the hope of saving the nation, he went to Japan to study medicine at first, but later turned to writing to wake up the people.
A significant milestone in his life was becoming a leading voice of the New Culture Movement. Through hard work, he wrote many powerful novels and essays that challenged old ideas and called for change.
The impact of his works can still be felt today. People admire him for his thoughtful mind, brave spirit and strong sense of responsibility. He is widely known as “the soul of the nation” and is greatly respected by people around the world.
Analyze the outline.
Beginning
Middle
End
introduce the person and his main identity
Body: Describe- his early life and background- his achievements and contributions
Share people’s opinions on him and show his lasting influence
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- his early life and background
- his achievements and contributions
Pre-writing
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Analyze the outline.
... was one of the greatest ... in ... history.
From a young age, he was born in ... in ... Though he had ..., he kept learning hard. Inspired by ..., he went to ... to study ... at first, but later turned to ... to ...
A significant milestone in his life was ... Through hard work, he wrote many ... that ...
Beginning
Middle
End
introduce the person and his main identity
Body: Describe- his early life and background- his achievements and contributions
Share people’s opinions on him and show his lasting influence
The impact of ... can still be felt today. People admire him for his ... He is widely known as “...” and is greatly respected by ...
Pre-writing
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Read and write.
While-writing
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Step 2 Write
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Write about this great person.
Use the mind map in step 1
and the expressions below to help you.
From a young age, he / she showed a strong interest in ...
Inspired by ..., he / she was fond of ...
A significant milestone in his / her life was when ...
Through his / her hard work, he / she managed to ...
The impact of his / her contributions can still be seen in ...
Wang Zhenyi is a great female scientist in ancient China. From a young age, she show great interest in star and maths. She learned much knowledges from her grandfather and studied both Chinese or Western science.
She worked hard all her life. A significant milestone was she explain the cause of lunar eclipses clearly. Her hard work bring her great success.
People all admire her. She is a brave and smart girl. She is also a good role model for we students.
Post-writing
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Read and correct.
shows
stars
knowledge
and
explained
brings
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Lu Xun is one of greatest writer in modern China. When he was young, he decide go to Japan to study medicine. Later, he wanted wake people up, so he began to write article.
He wrote many good works, but he lead the New Culture Movement. All people think high of him.
Today, his books are still popular. He is called “the soul of the nation”.
Post-writing
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Read and correct.
the greatest
writers
decided to go
wanted to wake
articles
and
highly
I wrote about the person’s early life, contributions and what others think of him / her.
I used appropriate adjectives, such as ____________, to describe the person’s qualities.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Step 3 Check and revise
Tick (✓) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
Check and revise.
Post-writing
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The words we have learned
一、根据句意及提示填空
Many great people are very h____________ and never give up easily. (品质)
Tu Youyou’s a______________ in medicine have saved millions of lives. (成就)
He was i________ by his teacher and decided to work hard at science. (受启发)
Through years of hard work, he m________ to invent the new machine. (成功做到)
We should learn from the great people’s good q________ such as courage and kindness. (品质)
Summary
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ard-working
chievements
nspired
anaged
ualities
The phrases we have learned
二、短语翻译
早年生活与背景 _____________________________
个人品质 _____________________________
成就与贡献 _____________________________
他人评价 _____________________________
克服困难 _____________________________
为…… 做出巨大贡献 _____________________________
Summary
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early life and background
personal qualities
achievements and contributions
people’s opinions on him/her
overcome difficulties
make great contributions to…
The sentences we have learned
三、句子翻译
他从小就对科学表现出浓厚的兴趣。
_______________________________________________________________在他生命中一个重要的里程碑是他成功发明了这项新技术。
_______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________通过多年的努力工作,他最终实现了自己的梦想。
_______________________________________________________________他的贡献对今天的世界仍然有很大影响。
_______________________________________________________________我们应该用思维导图来整理伟人的信息。_______________________________________________________________
Summary
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He showed a strong interest in science from a young age.
A significant milestone in his life was when he managed to invent this new technology.
Through years of hard work, he finally achieved his dream.
The impact of his contributions can still be seen in the world today.
We should use mind maps to organize information about great people.
The writing structure we have learned
Summary
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... was one of the greatest ... in ... history.
From a young age, he was born in ... in ... Though he had ..., he kept learning hard. Inspired by ..., he went to ... to study ... at first, but later turned to ... to ...
A significant milestone in his life was ... Through hard work, he wrote many ... that ...
Beginning
Middle
End
introduce the person and his main identity
Body: Describe- his early life and background- his achievements and contributions
Share people’s opinions on him and show his lasting influence
The impact of ... can still be felt today. People admire him for his ... He is widely known as “...” and is greatly respected by ...
Assessment
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Self-assessment
I can use a mind map to plan information about a great person.
I can write an article about a great person with the help of given expressions.
I can check and revise the writing with the provided checklist.
Basic (基础)
Improving(提升)
Extend (拓展)
Homework
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整理本节课核心词汇与句型(如 From a young age…),每个词 / 句型造 1 个句子。
修改课堂初稿,完善文章内容,确保结构完整、维度清晰、语法正确,字数 80-100 词。
在文章结尾添加 1-2 句自己对伟人的感悟或评价,并为文章设计一个吸引读者的标题。
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