Unit 3 Family traditions（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

本初中英语讲义围绕“Family traditions”单元核心，聚焦“人与自我、人与家庭”范畴的家庭类记叙文写作，涵盖描写家庭传统习俗活动完整过程、通过日常小事体会家风与父母之爱的两大角度，强调运用一般现在时和一般过去时，结合细节描写丰富情感。通过词汇句式积累、思维导图梳理、佳句仿写及中考典例分析，构建从素材储备到写作实践的学习支架。 该资料以鲜活素材库（含15个核心词汇、8个实用句式）和思维导图搭建语言能力培养框架，通过教材原句仿写提升表达精准度。结合中考真题典例的审题与谋篇分析，引导学生逻辑梳理，培养思维品质。主题渗透家风与亲情，强化文化意识，涵养家国情怀。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后助力学生通过8篇实战演练巩固提升，有效查漏补缺。

Unit 3 Family traditions单元同步写作讲义 1. 单元主题 属于 “人与自我、人与家庭” 范畴，围绕家风、家庭传统、亲情小事，体会传统习俗与家人间含蓄深沉的爱意。 2. 写作维度 本单元聚焦家庭类记叙文写作，分为两类写作角度：一是描写自家独有的传统习俗、家庭活动，记录活动完整过程；二是通过日常小事体会家风与父母藏在细节里的爱，抒发内心真情。写作多用一般现在时、一般过去时，运用细节描写丰富情感。 3. 思维导图 词汇积累 9 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. family merit 家庭美德 2. respect the old and care for the young 尊老爱幼 3. try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事 4. pick up 捡起 5. handmade adj. 手工制作的 6. remind…of… 使…… 想起…… 7. put…into practice 把…… 付诸实践 8. warmth n. 温暖 9. support n.&v. 支持 10. thankful adj. 感恩的 11. treasure v. 珍惜 12. selfless adj. 无私的 13. care for 关心；照顾 14. hide v. 隐藏 15. homemade adj. 自制的 句式积累 开头句（2 句） 1. Family love is like warm sunshine in cold winter. 翻译：亲情如同寒冬里温暖的阳光。 2. I’d like to introduce my family and our family merits. 翻译：我想介绍我的家人以及我们家的家风美德。 中间句（4 句） 1. When we meet someone who needs help, we will be willing to help them. 翻译：当我们遇到需要帮助的人，我们愿意伸出援手。 2. However, because she is always busy with work and housework, she rarely has the chance to enjoy her hobby. 翻译：然而妈妈总是忙于工作和家务，很少有机会发展自己的爱好。 3. We can share our school life with them so that we can get closer. 翻译：我们可以和他们分享校园生活，拉近彼此的距离。 4. She didn’t blame me but encouraged me gently when I failed my exam. 翻译：我考试失利时，她没有责备我，而是温柔地鼓励我。 结尾句（2 句） 1. Whether it’s a homemade meal or a simple bunch of flowers, it can be the best gift because it is filled with a child’s love. 翻译：无论是一顿家常菜还是一束小花，都能成为最好的礼物，因为里面饱含孩子的爱意。 2. All in all, we should care for our parents just as they love us deeply. 翻译：总而言之，我们应当像父母深爱我们一样去关心他们。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句 (P36)：Such beauty was enough to fill any heart with joy. 仿写：家人团聚的画面足以填满每个人的内心。 2. 教材原句 (P37)：Ethics are simple matters of right and wrong. 仿写：家风就是一件件分辨是非的小事。 3. 教材原句 (P46)：Fathers seldom say "I love you", though the feeling is always there. 仿写：父母很少直白表达爱意，但爱意始终藏在日常里。 典例 （2023·山东德州·中考真题）作为全市文明家庭成员，请你给即将到来的交换生David写一封信，介绍你的家庭情况，除了提示内容外，至少再补充一条家庭美德（Merit）。 1. Family information: members, hobbies 2. Merits: respect the old and care for the young, protect the environment, … 要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范： 2.文中不得出现在实的姓名和学校名称： 3.80—100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, Welcome to my home! I’d like to introduce my family to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now you see what my family are like. I’m sure you will enjoy your stay in my home. Looking forward to your coming! Sincerely. Your friend 审题 ① 题材：书信应用文； ② 时态：全文使用一般现在时； ③ 写作要点：介绍家庭成员与爱好、写出尊老爱幼 / 环保等家庭美德，额外补充至少一项美德；词数 80-100，禁止出现真实姓名、学校。 谋篇布局 开头：承接给定开篇，表明要向交换生介绍自家。 中间第一段：介绍家庭成员，分别说明每个人的爱好。 中间第二段：分层列举家中家风美德，搭配简单事例。 结尾：使用给定结尾，表达期待对方来访。 佳作展示 Welcome to my home! I’d like to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my brother and I. My parents are both math teachers and they like reading books very much. My brother and I are in the same school. He likes playing football with his classmates and I like drawing. In my family, there are many merits. We respect the old and care for the young. When we meet someone who needs help, we will be willing to help them. What’s more, we try our best to protect the environment. When we see rubbish on the ground, we will pick it up. Now you see what my family are like. I’m sure you will enjoy your stay in my home. Looking forward to your coming! Sincerely. Your friend 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] 1. try our best to do sth. 尽我们最大努力做某事 2. pick up 捡起 3. respect the old and care for the young 尊老爱幼 4. protect the environment 保护环境 [高分句型] When we meet someone who needs help, we will be willing to help them.（when 时间状语从句 + who 定语从句） （一） （2025·广东深圳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，在上周学习了《麦琪的礼物》一课后，你们班决定举行一次以“The best gift for my mother”为题的作文比赛。请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文参加比赛。 要求： 1.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The best gift for my mother Mothers make great contributions to families._______________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你的好朋友Mary的父母对她期望很高，希望她每科都拿到A，她努力了但怎么也达不到。她写信给你，希望能得到你的帮助。请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文。要点提示： 1. 与父母沟通，告诉他们你已经尽了最大努力； 2. 向老师请教学习方法； 3. 付诸实践，按照父母以及老师教的方法学习, 不断努力。 要求： 1. 信中不得出现真实校名和姓名； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确； 3. 80词左右。 提示词：付诸实践 put…into practice Dear Mary, How is everything going? You’ve mentioned in your last letter that ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, （三） （2026·山西阳泉·二模）在家庭中，每个人都有着自己的家庭角色。作为孩子，我们也需要扮演好自己的角色。我们可以是家庭的小帮手，主动分担家务；可以是父母的小棉袄，关心父母的健康；也可以是家庭氛围的调节剂，让家里充满欢声笑语⋯⋯假如你校将举办一场主题是“我的家庭角色”的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括： 1．你在家扮演的角色； 2．一个你扮演的角色如何发挥作用的故事； 3．你的感受。 要求： 1．词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Good morning, everyone!____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! （四） （2026·陕西渭南·模拟预测）亲情，像冬日里的暖阳，温暖着我们，给予我们慰藉与力量。热气腾腾的家常饭菜，不厌其烦的添衣叮咛，默默无声的日夜操守……皆是亲情的模样。你校英文报正在开展题目为“Family Love Warms My Heart”的征文活动。请你根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，记录你感受到的亲情。 要点提示：1. What’s the family love in your eyes? 2. What’s your story about your family love? 3. What have you learned from it? 参考词汇：warmth, comfort, remind, care for, prepare, support, thankful, treasure, grow… 要求：1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Family Love Warms My Heart Family love is like warm sunshine in cold winter. It brings us endless comfort and power in our growth. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） （2026·江西吉安·一模）父母是世界上最爱我们的人。作为中学生，我们可以做一些力所能及的事情关爱我们的父母。请你以 “How to Care for Our Parents”为题，根据以下提示和要求，联系生活实际，用英语写一篇短文，介绍关爱父母的方式。 提示： 1．和父母一起锻炼，帮助父母做家务; 2．告诉父母吃健康的食物，保持充足的睡眠; 3．分享我们的校园生活，与他们更亲密。 要求： 1．短文须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥; 2．短文中不能出现考生真实的人名、校名、地名等信息; 3．短文不少于100词，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Care for Our Parents As we all know, our parents love us more than anyone else in the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） （2026·湖北鄂州·三模）每当听到风靡校园的《一定要跟妈妈好好说话》歌曲，我眼前闪现面带微笑的妈妈站在门口迎接我回家，闪现妈妈为全家操劳的身影，闪现妈妈…… 请以“Thank you, Mum ”为题，参照思维导图，写一篇短文感谢亲爱的妈妈。 注意： 1.根据上图所给提示，适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Thank you, Mum! My mother is a beautiful woman with long hair and big eyes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Mum, thank you for everything you do for me. I love you forever. （七） （2026·山东济南·二模）家是心之归处，爱之港湾。家庭生活中总有一些温馨的时刻，成为我们心中珍贵的回忆。学校英文报正在举办以“Home，Sweet Home”为主题的征文活动。请向校英文报投稿，内容包括： 1．讲述你和家人之间的一件小事和这件事对你的影响； 2．通过这件事，谈谈你对“家”的理解和感悟。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） （2026·安徽宣城·二模）成长路上，父母之爱如涓涓细流，藏于日常点滴。那些他们日复一日坚持的小事，却常被我们忽略。直到一件小事，让我读懂了这份深沉的爱。请从以下日常小事中任选一件描述，谈谈你对这份爱的领悟和感受，然后分享你将如何用行动回报父母的恩情。 要求：1. 80—100词；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Small Acts of Hidden (隐藏的，不易察觉的) Love: prepare breakfast; wait at the school gate; drive me to school… Why I Ignored (忽略) Their Hidden Love: focus on; be unaware (未察觉的) of; consider it quite normal… How to Repay (回报) Their Love: make them proud; be more understanding; spend time together… The Hidden Love One small act of hidden love from my parents is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 3 Family traditions单元同步写作讲义 1. 单元主题 属于 “人与自我、人与家庭” 范畴，围绕家风、家庭传统、亲情小事，体会传统习俗与家人间含蓄深沉的爱意。 2. 写作维度 本单元聚焦家庭类记叙文写作，分为两类写作角度：一是描写自家独有的传统习俗、家庭活动，记录活动完整过程；二是通过日常小事体会家风与父母藏在细节里的爱，抒发内心真情。写作多用一般现在时、一般过去时，运用细节描写丰富情感。 3. 思维导图 词汇积累 3 / 19 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. family merit 家庭美德 2. respect the old and care for the young 尊老爱幼 3. try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事 4. pick up 捡起 5. handmade adj. 手工制作的 6. remind…of… 使…… 想起…… 7. put…into practice 把…… 付诸实践 8. warmth n. 温暖 9. support n.&v. 支持 10. thankful adj. 感恩的 11. treasure v. 珍惜 12. selfless adj. 无私的 13. care for 关心；照顾 14. hide v. 隐藏 15. homemade adj. 自制的 句式积累 开头句（2 句） 1. Family love is like warm sunshine in cold winter. 翻译：亲情如同寒冬里温暖的阳光。 2. I’d like to introduce my family and our family merits. 翻译：我想介绍我的家人以及我们家的家风美德。 中间句（4 句） 1. When we meet someone who needs help, we will be willing to help them. 翻译：当我们遇到需要帮助的人，我们愿意伸出援手。 2. However, because she is always busy with work and housework, she rarely has the chance to enjoy her hobby. 翻译：然而妈妈总是忙于工作和家务，很少有机会发展自己的爱好。 3. We can share our school life with them so that we can get closer. 翻译：我们可以和他们分享校园生活，拉近彼此的距离。 4. She didn’t blame me but encouraged me gently when I failed my exam. 翻译：我考试失利时，她没有责备我，而是温柔地鼓励我。 结尾句（2 句） 1. Whether it’s a homemade meal or a simple bunch of flowers, it can be the best gift because it is filled with a child’s love. 翻译：无论是一顿家常菜还是一束小花，都能成为最好的礼物，因为里面饱含孩子的爱意。 2. All in all, we should care for our parents just as they love us deeply. 翻译：总而言之，我们应当像父母深爱我们一样去关心他们。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句 (P36)：Such beauty was enough to fill any heart with joy. 仿写：家人团聚的画面足以填满每个人的内心。 2. 教材原句 (P37)：Ethics are simple matters of right and wrong. 仿写：家风就是一件件分辨是非的小事。 3. 教材原句 (P46)：Fathers seldom say "I love you", though the feeling is always there. 仿写：父母很少直白表达爱意，但爱意始终藏在日常里。 【答案】 1. The scene of family reunion is enough to fill everyone's heart. 2. Family traditions are simple matters of right and wrong. 3. Parents seldom say "I love you" directly, though their love always lies in daily life. 典例 （2023·山东德州·中考真题）作为全市文明家庭成员，请你给即将到来的交换生David写一封信，介绍你的家庭情况，除了提示内容外，至少再补充一条家庭美德（Merit）。 1. Family information: members, hobbies 2. Merits: respect the old and care for the young, protect the environment, … 要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范： 2.文中不得出现在实的姓名和学校名称： 3.80—100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, Welcome to my home! I’d like to introduce my family to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now you see what my family are like. I’m sure you will enjoy your stay in my home. Looking forward to your coming! Sincerely. Your friend 审题 ① 题材：书信应用文； ② 时态：全文使用一般现在时； ③ 写作要点：介绍家庭成员与爱好、写出尊老爱幼 / 环保等家庭美德，额外补充至少一项美德；词数 80-100，禁止出现真实姓名、学校。 谋篇布局 开头：承接给定开篇，表明要向交换生介绍自家。 中间第一段：介绍家庭成员，分别说明每个人的爱好。 中间第二段：分层列举家中家风美德，搭配简单事例。 结尾：使用给定结尾，表达期待对方来访。 佳作展示 Dear David, Welcome to my home! I’d like to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my brother and I. My parents are both math teachers and they like reading books very much. My brother and I are in the same school. He likes playing football with his classmates and I like drawing. In my family, there are many merits. We respect the old and care for the young. When we meet someone who needs help, we will be willing to help them. What’s more, we try our best to protect the environment. When we see rubbish on the ground, we will pick it up. Now you see what my family are like. I’m sure you will enjoy your stay in my home. Looking forward to your coming! Sincerely. Your friend 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] 1. try our best to do sth. 尽我们最大努力做某事 2. pick up 捡起 3. respect the old and care for the young 尊老爱幼 4. protect the environment 保护环境 [高分句型] When we meet someone who needs help, we will be willing to help them.（when 时间状语从句 + who 定语从句） （一） （2025·广东深圳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，在上周学习了《麦琪的礼物》一课后，你们班决定举行一次以“The best gift for my mother”为题的作文比赛。请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文参加比赛。 要求： 1.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The best gift for my mother Mothers make great contributions to families. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The best gift for my mother Mothers make great contributions to families. I believe a concert ticket would be the perfect gift for my mother. My mother loves music and is skilled at playing musical instruments. However, because she is always busy with work and housework, she rarely has the chance to enjoy her hobby. I would like to get her a ticket to a piano concert performed by Lang Lang, her favourite pianist. Since the ticket might be quite expensive, I plan to start saving money right away. In my opinion, a good gift for a mother should connect with her interests or help her in some way. It doesn’t have to be expensive, but it should carry meaning. Whether it’s a homemade meal or a simple bunch of flowers, it can be the best gift because it is filled with a child’s love. 例文② The best gift for my mother Mothers make great contributions to families. The best gift for my mother is a handmade photo album. It will have pictures of our happy moments together, with short messages to show my love and thanks. This is the best gift because it is full of memories and feelings. A good gift should come from the heart, not just cost a lot of money. To prepare it, I will collect photos, decorate the pages, and write kind words. I hope this album will make my mother smile and remind her of our wonderful times. 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文属于记叙文，先讲述想送母亲音乐会门票这一具体事例，再围绕 “最佳礼物” 发表个人观点。 ②时态：全文以一般现在时为主。 ③提示：要点齐全，涵盖确定礼物、阐述原因、计划筹备以及对 “最佳礼物” 的感悟等内容，语言表达流畅，无语法和拼写错误，书写规范。 【写作步骤】 第一步，直接表明认为音乐会门票是送给母亲的完美礼物，简洁明了地引出下文，紧扣作文比赛主题。 第二步，详细阐述礼物相关内容，并说明自己计划存钱购票，使内容具体且有细节，增强可信度和感染力。 第三步，发表个人见解，强调礼物不必昂贵但要有意义，最后以“自制餐食、简单花束”为例，点明礼物承载的是孩子的爱，升华文章主旨，使文章内涵更加丰富。 【亮点词汇】 ①the perfect gift完美礼物 ②be skilled at擅长 ③rarely很少 【高分句型】 ①I believe a concert ticket would be the perfect gift for my mother.（宾语从句） ②However, because she is always busy with work and housework, she rarely has the chance to enjoy her hobby.（原因状语从句） ③Whether it’s a homemade meal or a simple bunch of flowers, it can be the best gift because it is filled with a child’s love.（让步状语从句） 范文② 【总体分析】①题材：本文属于记叙文，通过阐述送给母亲自制相册这一礼物，表达对母亲的爱与感恩。 ②时态：全文采用一般现在时和一般将来时。 ③提示：紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖所有要点，语句通顺，条理清楚，字数符合规定。 【写作步骤】第一步，文章开篇先强调母亲对家庭的贡献，顺势引出送给母亲的最佳礼物是自制相册，直接切入主题，让读者迅速了解核心内容。 第二步，解释选择自制相册作为最佳礼物的原因，指出其充满回忆与情感，同时升华主题。 第三步，说明制作相册的具体步骤，展现用心程度；最后表达希望相册能让母亲开心，传递出真挚情感，使文章结构完整。 【亮点词汇】①handmade手工制作的 ②full of充满 ③remind...of使……想起 【高分句型】①It will have pictures of our happy moments together, with short messages to show my love and thanks.（with + 名词短语”结构） ②I hope this album will make my mother smile and remind her of our wonderful times.（宾语从句） （二） （22-23九年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你的好朋友Mary的父母对她期望很高，希望她每科都拿到A，她努力了但怎么也达不到。她写信给你，希望能得到你的帮助。请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文。要点提示： 1. 与父母沟通，告诉他们你已经尽了最大努力； 2. 向老师请教学习方法； 3. 付诸实践，按照父母以及老师教的方法学习, 不断努力。 要求： 1. 信中不得出现真实校名和姓名； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确； 3. 80词左右。 提示词：付诸实践 put…into practice Dear Mary, How is everything going? You’ve mentioned in your last letter that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Tina 【答案】例文： Dear Mary, How is everything going? You’ve mentioned in your last letter that your parents have high expectations. I can understand you because my parents used to push me to get As, too. I have some advice for you. First of all, you need to talk with your parents and tell them you have tried your best. Communication will make your relationship better. What’s more, you can ask your teachers about how to study better. They may give you more effective ways to study better. Above all, you’re supposed to put their ways into practice. Action speaks louder than words. Keep working hard and you can make it. I believe you will have a good relationship with your parents. Best wishes! Yours, Tina 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封建议信，属于书信作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接书信开头，陈述对方问题并表示理解，引出话题； 第二步，按照提示的要点，给出三个建议，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，鼓励对方并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①try one’s best尽某人最大的努力 ②be supposed to do应该做 [高分句型] ①I can understand you because my parents used to push me to get As too.（because引导原因状语从句） ②What’s more, you can ask your teachers about how to study better.（疑问词+动词不定式作宾语） ③Action speaks louder than words.（引用名言名句） （三） （2026·山西阳泉·二模）在家庭中，每个人都有着自己的家庭角色。作为孩子，我们也需要扮演好自己的角色。我们可以是家庭的小帮手，主动分担家务；可以是父母的小棉袄，关心父母的健康；也可以是家庭氛围的调节剂，让家里充满欢声笑语⋯⋯假如你校将举办一场主题是“我的家庭角色”的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括： 1．你在家扮演的角色； 2．一个你扮演的角色如何发挥作用的故事； 3．你的感受。 要求： 1．词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Good morning, everyone!_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】例文： Good morning, everyone! I believe teenagers should be helpful in our families. At home, I try to spread fun and happiness to keep my family united. Once, my parents had a small argument. I saw this and decided to make them laugh. I told a funny joke and acted in a playful way, which made my parents smile. Soon, the atmosphere was much better, and the house was filled with joy. This experience taught me how small actions can make a big difference. Family isn’t just about love—it’s about growing together and creating warmth. Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿类应用文，用一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：“我”的家庭角色、“我”发挥的作用、个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/me） 注意事项：不得透露真实的人名、校名；不得少于80词；注意称呼 [第二步：构思布局] 两段式结构： 第一段：总起句，通过介绍“我”的角色引入话题 主体段：具体介绍“我的作用”和所得到的感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：“我”的家庭角色 描述作用：be helpful/spread fun and happiness to keep my family united/a good listener/I care about my parents’ health/I help stop arguments by ...等 要点二：“我”发挥的作用 事件描述：decided to make them laugh/told a funny joke/acted in a playful way/help set the table and wash the dishes/took medicine and read stories to ...等 描述结果：the house was filled with joy/make a big difference/they gave me a big hug/The argument was over等 要点三：个人感受 具体描述：Family isn’t just about love/growing together and creating warmth/That makes me feel that my role matters./I am proud of ...等 （四） （2026·陕西渭南·模拟预测）亲情，像冬日里的暖阳，温暖着我们，给予我们慰藉与力量。热气腾腾的家常饭菜，不厌其烦的添衣叮咛，默默无声的日夜操守……皆是亲情的模样。你校英文报正在开展题目为“Family Love Warms My Heart”的征文活动。请你根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，记录你感受到的亲情。 要点提示：1. What’s the family love in your eyes? 2. What’s your story about your family love? 3. What have you learned from it? 参考词汇：warmth, comfort, remind, care for, prepare, support, thankful, treasure, grow… 要求：1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Family Love Warms My Heart Family love is like warm sunshine in cold winter. It brings us endless comfort and power in our growth. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Family Love Warms My Heart Family love is like warm sunshine in cold winter. It brings us endless comfort and power in our growth. In my eyes, it means parents’ selfless care and support. Once I failed a math exam. I felt very sad and lonely. My mom didn’t blame me but encouraged me gently. She prepared delicious food for me and reminded me to keep trying. I felt warm and powerful. From it, I learned to be brave and thankful. I will treasure this love and study hard to repay them. I also want to care for them when they are old. Family love makes me grow up happily and confidently. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：眼中亲情的定义、关于亲情的具体故事、从中得到的感悟 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；词数不少于70（开头已给，不计入总词数）；选择使用参考词汇 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段（已给）：用比喻定义亲情（如冬日暖阳） 主体段：简述对亲情的理解，讲述具体事例（考试失败后母亲的鼓励与关爱），分享感悟与决心（勇敢、感恩、回报、传递爱） 结尾段：总结亲情的影响 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：眼中的亲情 观点说明：In my eyes, it means parents’ selfless care and support./Family love is about warmth, comfort and endless patience./It is the quiet care in daily life.等 要点二：关于亲情的故事 背景：Once I failed a math exam/ felt very sad and lonely/I was upset about my grades/ I felt lonely and disappointed等 家人反应：My mom didn’t blame me but encouraged me gently/She prepared delicious food/She reminded me to keep trying/She sat with me and helped me find mistakes等 我的感受：I felt warm and powerful/I was deeply moved/Her words gave me confidence等 要点三：从中得到的感悟 感悟表达：I learned to be brave and thankful/I will treasure this love/I will study hard to repay them/I want to care for them when they are old/I should also give my warmth to my family等 （五） （2026·江西吉安·一模）父母是世界上最爱我们的人。作为中学生，我们可以做一些力所能及的事情关爱我们的父母。请你以 “How to Care for Our Parents”为题，根据以下提示和要求，联系生活实际，用英语写一篇短文，介绍关爱父母的方式。 提示： 1．和父母一起锻炼，帮助父母做家务; 2．告诉父母吃健康的食物，保持充足的睡眠; 3．分享我们的校园生活，与他们更亲密。 要求： 1．短文须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥; 2．短文中不能出现考生真实的人名、校名、地名等信息; 3．短文不少于100词，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Care for Our Parents As we all know, our parents love us more than anyone else in the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Care for Our Parents As we all know, our parents love us more than anyone else in the world. They try to offer the best life and education to us, so they have too much pressure. As their children, learning to care for our parents is what we should do. Firstly, we can do sports with them to help them keep healthy and do housework as much as possible. Secondly, we should tell them to eat healthy food and not to stay up late so that they can get enough sleep. Thirdly, we should share our school life with them to get closer. All in all, we should care for our parents and love them as they love us. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确认文体：这是一篇观点倡议类说明文，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：需包含父母的付出、陪父母运动、提醒健康作息、分享校园生活以及双向关爱的感悟 确定人称：第一人称(we) 注意事项：词数不少于100词，不用复杂词汇，语言平实真诚 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，点明父母爱我们且有压力，我们该学会关心父母 主体段：分三点阐述关心父母的具体做法，用Firstly、Secondly、Thirdly衔接 结尾段：总结全文，表达要像父母爱我们那样去爱他们的观点 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：引出关心父母的话题 对应内容：As we all know, our parents love us more than anyone else. They are always under much pressure. As their children, learning to care for our parents is what we should do. 要点二：具体做法分层展开 对应内容：Firstly, we can do sports with them to help them keep healthy and do housework as much as possible. Secondly, we should tell them to eat healthy food and not to stay up late so that they can get enough sleep. Thirdly, we should share our school life with them to get closer. 要点三：结尾升华 对应内容：All in all, we should care for our parents and love them as they love us. （六） （2026·湖北鄂州·三模）每当听到风靡校园的《一定要跟妈妈好好说话》歌曲，我眼前闪现面带微笑的妈妈站在门口迎接我回家，闪现妈妈为全家操劳的身影，闪现妈妈…… 请以“Thank you, Mum ”为题，参照思维导图，写一篇短文感谢亲爱的妈妈。 注意： 1.根据上图所给提示，适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Thank you, Mum! My mother is a beautiful woman with long hair and big eyes. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Mum, thank you for everything you do for me. I love you forever. 【答案】例文： Thank you, Mum! My mother is a beautiful woman with long hair and big eyes. She is kind, patient and hard-working. She always smiles and takes good care of our family. I still remember one thing clearly. When I was ill late at night, she took me to the hospital at once and stayed with me all night without rest. She did everything for me without saying anything. To show my love, I will help her with housework, study hard and make her happy. I will also talk with her patiently and never make her angry. Dear Mum, thank you for everything you do for me. I love you forever. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，描述特征以一般现在时为主，回忆过往事件可用一般过去时，表达未来打算可用一般将来时 明确要点：妈妈的外貌与性格、妈妈为你做过的一件事、你将为妈妈做的一件事 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数约80词（开头、结尾不计入总词数） [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：给定开头，引出妈妈的外貌与性格 主体段：分述妈妈为你做的事、你将为妈妈做的事 结尾段：给定结尾，表达对妈妈的感谢与爱意 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：妈妈的形象（外貌+性格） 外貌特征描述：long hair and big eyes/short hair and warm smile/curly hair and bright eyes 性格品质描述：kind, patient and hard-working/caring and warm-hearted/gentle and helpful 要点二：妈妈的付出与你的回报 妈妈为你做过的事： 生病照顾你：took me to the hospital at once/stayed with me all night/stayed up to look after me when I was ill/cooked warm food for me when I caught a cold 你将为妈妈做的事： 日常家务分担：help her with housework/clean the room for her/cook a meal for her 情感陪伴与体谅：talk with her patiently/never make her angry/listen to her stories carefully/spend more time with her （七） （2026·山东济南·二模）家是心之归处，爱之港湾。家庭生活中总有一些温馨的时刻，成为我们心中珍贵的回忆。学校英文报正在举办以“Home，Sweet Home”为主题的征文活动。请向校英文报投稿，内容包括： 1．讲述你和家人之间的一件小事和这件事对你的影响； 2．通过这件事，谈谈你对“家”的理解和感悟。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Home，Sweet Home    Home is where love grows.     Last month, I felt really stressed before an important exam. I was so worried that I couldn’t relax myself. Seeing my worry, my mother made my favorite soup and sat with me quietly. Her simple and warm act calmed me down and I did well later. This small thing showed me that home isn’t just a place—it’s where family supports you with love and silent care. At home, we share joys and troubles, and find strength in each other. No matter what happens, home is always a warm harbor for our hearts. 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：这是一篇征文稿，用一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：发生的事、产生的影响、对家的理解与感悟 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明主题 主体段：根据题干的要点，从发生的事、产生的影响以及对家的理解和感悟三个方面进行阐述 结尾段：书写结语，总结全文。 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：发生的事 具体事情：felt really stressed before an important exam/failed in the exam and felt sad等 家人的做法：made my favorite soup and sat with me quietly/comforted me patiently instead of blaming等 要点二：产生的影响 calmed me down and I did well later/cheered me up greatly等 要点三：对家的理解与感悟 理解：it’s where family supports you with love and silent care/it’s a warm harbor full of care and support等 感悟：share joys and troubles/find strength in each other/home is always a warm harbor for our hearts/give me courage to face difficulties等 （八） （2026·安徽宣城·二模）成长路上，父母之爱如涓涓细流，藏于日常点滴。那些他们日复一日坚持的小事，却常被我们忽略。直到一件小事，让我读懂了这份深沉的爱。请从以下日常小事中任选一件描述，谈谈你对这份爱的领悟和感受，然后分享你将如何用行动回报父母的恩情。 要求：1. 80—100词；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Small Acts of Hidden (隐藏的，不易察觉的) Love: prepare breakfast; wait at the school gate; drive me to school… Why I Ignored (忽略) Their Hidden Love: focus on; be unaware (未察觉的) of; consider it quite normal… How to Repay (回报) Their Love: make them proud; be more understanding; spend time together… The Hidden Love One small act of hidden love from my parents is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Hidden Love One small act of hidden love from my parents is waiting at the school gate to pick me up every day. I used to be unaware of their effort because I focused on my own school life and considered it quite normal. But one rainy afternoon, I saw my father standing in the cold for half an hour just to make sure I wouldn’t get wet. At that moment, I truly understood his deep love. To repay their love, I will study hard to make them proud, be more understanding, and spend quality time with them. Their silent waiting is the warmest gift in my growth. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：围绕父母隐藏的爱展开，描述一件日常小事，解释过去忽略的原因，并提出如何用行动回报父母的爱 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称 [第二步：构思布局] 两段式结构： 第一段：通过日常小事描述父母的爱，并解释过去忽略父母的爱的原因 第二段：介绍如何用行动回报父母的爱 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：描述父母隐藏的爱及解释过去忽略父母的爱的原因 事件选择：waiting at the school gate to pick me up every day/preparing breakfast for me every morning等 忽略的原因：focused on my own school life/considered it quite normal/focus on my schoolwork/unaware of how early they got up等 领悟感受：I truly understood his deep love/felt the deep quiet love等 要点二：如何用行动回报父母的爱 具体行动：study hard/be more understanding/spend quality time with them/help with housework/make them proud with my efforts等 $