2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习 A Warm Christmas Gift 导学案

该高中英语读后续写导学案系统覆盖高考核心考点，包括文本分析（角色、视角、时空线）、情节构造及续写逻辑，通过梳理情节线、情感线构建知识网络，借助细节问答和任务驱动引导学生自主分析文本要素，形成对续写的系统性认知。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层指导设计，开篇“细节问答”自测文本理解，“续写框架”分步骤引导逻辑构建，培养语言能力与思维品质。模块配有参考答案对比反思，帮助学生个性化提升，教师可通过学情数据精准指导，支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was 1 a.m. on Christmas morning, but for Carla, it was still Christmas Eve. Like many other parents, she had holiday magic to make. Her 8-year-old daughter Lily had wanted nothing but a full-size piano keyboard set for Christmas. Carla had secretly ordered the gift Lily longed for online. Busy with work, she had no time to unpack the box when it arrived, so she hid it somewhere safe. With Lily sound asleep now, Carla quietly took it out, planning to set up the stand and bench (琴凳) and put the keyboard in place. However, opening the box, she was shocked to find only the stand and bench inside — no keyboard. It suddenly hit her that the keyboard was sold separately, a detail she had completely missed when rushing to place the order. Sadness washed over Carla. She still remembered her own Christmas joy of receiving a guitar at Lily’s age, a happy memory that had stayed with her for decades. She could hardly bear to think how disappointed Lily would be without the keyboard. There must be a solution, she thought. She hoped an online shop could deliver a keyboard by morning, or she might find an open store nearby. Yet both of her attempts failed. With a faint hope left, she posted her problem in a local Facebook group. Tom Brown, who lived five miles away, spotted Carla’s post. He recalled the full-size keyboard he’d bought for his daughter Molly. Now a college student, she seldom used it. Nearly new and in great condition, it was perfect for a young beginner like Lily. Tom walked down the hallway to check on Molly, who was home for the Christmas break and still awake. After he told her what was going on, Molly did not hesitate to offer help, willing to give away the unused keyboard to light up a stranger’s joy. 注意：1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Tom quickly messaged Carla, offering to send her the spare keyboard. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tom replied, “No payment needed. Just a photo of happy Lily on Christmas morning.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Carla planned a special Christmas gift of a piano keyboard for her daughter Lily--- _________________ ---She ordered the gift online but only received the stand and bench due to her carelessness--- _________________ ---Carla felt upset, fearing Lily’s disappointment and tried every means to fix the problem--- _________________ ---She posted her dilemma in a local Facebook group for help--- _________________ ---Tom spotted the post and his daughter Molly decided to donate their unused keyboard to help 4. 细节问答 What was Lily’s only Christmas wish? ：___________________________________ What mistake did Carla make when ordering the gift?：_________________________________ Why did Carla feel extremely sad?：________________________________________________ What ways did Carla try to get a keyboard before posting online?：__________________________________________ What did Tom have for helping Carla?：_____________________________________________ What decision did Molly make after knowing the story?：_________________________________________________ What warm story will happen next?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 圣诞节前夕，Carla准备给女儿Lily惊喜，满足她想要全套电子琴的圣诞心愿→匆忙网购时疏忽详情，仅买到琴架与琴凳，缺少核心的电子琴主体→Carla回忆自己儿时的圣诞美好，不忍女儿失望，万分难过→连夜尝试网购、线下寻店均失败，无奈在本地社群发帖求助→五英里外的Tom看到求助帖，家中恰好有女儿闲置的全新电子琴→Tom与女儿Molly沟通后，善良的Molly毫不犹豫愿意捐赠电子琴、传递温暖→（续写）Tom主动联系Carla、连夜送琴，Carla想要付费感谢→（续写）Tom父女婉拒报酬，只求一张女孩笑脸照片，温暖善意点亮圣诞 6．情感线 Carla：expectant and warm→___________→desperate and helpless→___________→grateful and touched（续写） Tom & Molly：kind and warm-hearted→___________→generous and selfless（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 状语从句：________________________________________________________________ 非谓语动词：________________________________________________________________ 宾语从句：________________________________________________________________ 定语从句：________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Tom quickly messaged Carla, offering to send her the spare keyboard. 衔接句1——How did Carla respond? What did Tom do next? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Tom replied, “No payment needed. Just a photo of happy Lily on Christmas morning.” 衔接句2——What happened on Christmas morning? What lesson did people learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：Tom很快给Carla发了消息，主动提出送闲置的电子琴。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：Tom回复：“不用付钱，只需一张Lily圣诞清晨的笑脸照片就好。” →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Tom quickly messaged Carla, offering to send her the spare keyboard. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tom replied, “No payment needed. Just a photo of happy Lily on Christmas morning.” _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Carla：深爱女儿、用心筹备圣诞惊喜、懂得感恩的母亲；Lily：心怀圣诞期待、热爱钢琴的小女孩；Tom：热心善良、乐于助人的暖心市民；Molly：慷慨无私、愿意传递善意的大学生 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Carla prepared a piano keyboard gift to satisfy her daughter Lily’s Christmas wish---She carelessly ordered only the stand and bench without the keyboard, ruining her plan---She tried online and offline ways to get a keyboard but failed, feeling helpless---She posted her problem in a local group for help---Tom noticed the post and his daughter Molly decided to donate their unused keyboard---Tom delivered the keyboard at night and refused payment, leaving warm Christmas kindness 4. 细节问答 What was Lily’s only Christmas wish? ：She longed for a full-size piano keyboard set as her Christmas gift. What mistake did Carla make when ordering the gift?：She missed the key detail that the keyboard was sold separately and only bought the stand and bench. Why did Carla feel extremely sad?：She cherished her own Christmas memory and couldn’t bear to see her daughter disappointed on Christmas. What ways did Carla try to get a keyboard before posting online?：She tried to order online for morning delivery and searched for open local stores nearby, but both failed. What did Tom have for helping Carla?：He had a nearly new full-size keyboard, which was seldom used by his college daughter Molly. What decision did Molly make after knowing the story?：She volunteered to give away her unused keyboard to help light up a little girl’s Christmas. What warm story will happen next?：Tom sends the keyboard to Carla at night and refuses any payment, only asking for a photo of Lily’s smile. What does the story tell us?：Kindness is the most precious Christmas magic. Selfless help and warm generosity can bring warmth and light to others. 5．情节线 母亲Carla用心为女儿Lily筹备圣诞礼物，希望用电子琴圆孩子的圣诞心愿→匆忙网购时疏忽商品详情，仅购置到琴架与琴凳，缺失核心琴体，惊喜计划落空→Carla追忆自己的童年圣诞美好，不忍女儿失望，连夜想尽办法补救却屡屡失败→无助之下在本地社群发帖求助，期盼奇迹降临→暖心市民Tom看到求助信息，家中恰好有女儿闲置的九成新电子琴→在读大学生Molly善良慷慨，主动捐赠心爱闲置物品，愿意为陌生人点亮圣诞温暖→Tom连夜配送琴具、婉拒报酬，以善意定格美好，诠释最动人的圣诞魔法 6．情感线 Carla：expectant and warm→shocked and upset→desperate and helpless→surprised and relieved→grateful and touched（续写） Tom & Molly：kind and warm-hearted→sympathetic and helpful→generous and selfless（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：母亲Carla因网购失误无法兑现女儿的圣诞钢琴心愿，陷入无助，陌生父女Tom和Molly慷慨捐赠闲置电子琴，以无私善意点亮温暖的圣诞惊喜。 English：Carla failed to prepare her daughter’s expected Christmas piano gift due to her careless order. Fortunately, a kind stranger family offered their unused keyboard selflessly, bringing warm magic to the special Christmas night. 8. 句式 状语从句：Busy with work, she had no time to unpack the box when it arrived, so she hid it somewhere safe. 非谓语动词：After he told her what was going on, Molly did not hesitate to offer help. 宾语从句：She could hardly bear to think how disappointed Lily would be without the keyboard. 定语从句：He recalled the full-size keyboard he’d bought for his daughter Molly. 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：善意是世间最温暖的圣诞魔法，无私相助、慷慨传递，让平凡的节日满是治愈与美好。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Tom quickly messaged Carla, offering to send her the spare keyboard. 衔接句1——How did Carla respond? What did Tom do next? Carla was overjoyed and expressed sincere gratitude. Tom drove to deliver the keyboard to Carla’s house immediately in the late night. Paragraph 2: Tom replied, “No payment needed. Just a photo of happy Lily on Christmas morning.” 衔接句2——What happened on Christmas morning? What lesson did people learn? Lily got the precious piano gift and wore a bright smile. Carla took a photo and sent it to Tom, realizing kindness and generosity are the best festival gifts. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：Tom很快给Carla发了消息，主动提出送闲置的电子琴。 →①Carla收到消息惊喜万分，满心感激并欣然应允→②Tom不惧深夜严寒，驱车五英里连夜配送电子琴→③顺利送达后，Carla执意付费答谢这份善意； 第二段：Tom回复：“不用付钱，只需一张Lily圣诞清晨的笑脸照片就好。” →①圣诞清晨Lily如愿收到礼物，欣喜不已、笑容灿烂→②Carla拍下女儿笑脸，将这份美好与温暖回馈Tom→③平凡善意传递温暖，诠释圣诞最动人的真谛。 四.段落续写（标准答案·150词高考满分版） Tom quickly messaged Carla, offering to send her the spare keyboard. Overjoyed and greatly relieved, Carla expressed her sincere thanks immediately. Without hesitation, Tom grabbed the keyboard and drove five miles to Carla’s house in the quiet late night. He arrived soon and handed the nearly-new keyboard to the astonished Carla. Grateful for his timely help, Carla insisted on paying him for the keyboard to repay his kindness, believing no one should offer such generous help for free. Tom replied, “No payment needed. Just a photo of happy Lily on Christmas morning.” The next morning, Lily woke up and was thrilled to see the perfect piano keyboard. Wearing a bright and pure smile, she played gentle tunes happily. Carla took a warm photo of her daughter and sent it to Tom. Touched by the stranger’s kindness, Carla realized that true Christmas magic was not fancy gifts, but selfless generosity and warm kindness passed between strangers. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $