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九上 Unit 2 Inspiring People 作文
一、写作话题
The person who inspires me / A great inspiring person
二、作文结构(三段式)
第一段:开篇点题(介绍敬佩的人)
万能开头:
1.The person I look up to most is ______________. He/She is an inspiring pioneer.
2.There are many great people in history, but _____________ touches my heart most.
加分句型(本单元重点句型)
It’s said that… 据说……
Now that we have learned about him/her, I want to share his/her story.
第二段:主体(经历 + 成就,课文人物素材)
写作逻辑:年轻时志向 → 艰苦经历 → 克服困难 → 伟大成就 必备句型:
1.He/She devoted all his/her lifetime to… 毕生致力于……
2.He/She overcame lots of hardships and never gave up.
3.Although he/she achieved great success, he/she stayed modest.
4.His/Her great work helped millions of people.
第三段:感悟升华(学到什么 + 自身行动)
1.From him/her, I learn that we should hold on to our dreams.
2.It’s important for us to learn his/her spirit.
3.It’s wise of us to keep working hard when facing challenges.
4.I will try my best to become a useful person to society in the future.
三、本单元两大句型
1.It’s said that… 据说(介绍人物背景) It’s said that Yuan Longping spent almost all his life working in rice fields.
2.It’s + adj. + of/for sb. to do(结尾感悟)
It’s brave of Tu Youyou to do so many dangerous experiments.(of 形容品质)
It’s necessary for us teenagers to learn from great people.(for 形容事情)
四、人物高分素材(可直接摘抄)
Yuan Longping
He dreamed of ending hunger all over the world. He overcame hard conditions and developed hybrid rice. His work greatly increased rice output and fed more people. Though he made great contributions to mankind, he lived a simple and modest life.
Tu Youyou
She spent years studying traditional Chinese medicine to fight malaria. She did thousands of experiments and even tested medicine on herself. Finally she found artemisinin(青蒿素). It saved millions of lives. She won the Nobel Prize and set a good example for all women scientists.
Norman Bethune
He gave up his easy life in Canada and came to China to help wounded soldiers. He worked day and night in poor field hospitals. It’s selfless of him to devote his life to saving others.
五、满分范文 1(袁隆平,96 词,可背诵)
The Person Who Inspires Me
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Now that we have learned his story in our textbook, I know he is a truly inspiring pioneer. It’s said that he devoted all his lifetime to developing hybrid rice. When young, he saw many people suffer from hunger. He overcame countless difficulties and did lots of experiments. His great achievement solved food problems around the world, but he always remained modest. It’s necessary for us to learn from him. Whenever I want to give up my study, his spirit encourages me to keep going. I will stick to my dream and work harder.
满分范文 2(屠呦呦,92 词)
An Inspiring Figure — Tu Youyou
Among all great people, Tu Youyou inspires me deeply. It’s said that she spent many years searching for medicine to beat malaria. She read thousands of ancient medical books and carried out plenty of experiments. She even risked her health to test new medicine. At last, she discovered artemisinin and saved millions of lives. She became the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize. It’s brave of her to keep trying after so many failures. Now that I know her experience, I decide to face challenges bravely and never lose heart.
六、作文万能加分词块(替换简单单词)
1.look up to = admire 敬佩
2.overcome hardships = get through difficulties 克服困难
3.devote oneself to = put one’s whole heart into 全身心投入
4.make great contributions to 为…… 做出巨大贡献
5.perseverance and determination 毅力与决心
6.set an inspiring example for sb. 为某人树立励志榜样
7.hold on to one’s dream 坚守梦想
8.live a simple and modest life 生活简朴谦逊
七、写作扣分避坑指南
1.时态统一:介绍人物一生事迹多用一般过去时;评价精神用一般现在时。
2.字数控制:不少于 80 词,不超过 120 词,三段清晰,不要一段到底。
八、写作练习题
在本单元我们认识了许多鼓舞人心的伟人:袁隆平、屠呦呦、白求恩等。他们凭借毅力克服苦难,为人类作出巨大贡献,是我们学习的榜样。
请以 A Person Who Inspires Me 为题,写一篇英语短文。
写作要求:
1.从课本人物中任选一位进行写作;
2.内容包含:人物简单经历、主要成就、你的感悟;
3.词数 80–110 词,语句通顺,无明显语法错误。
写作参考词汇(可选用)
devote oneself to全身心投入, overcome difficulties克服困难, make contributions to做出贡献, modest谦虚的, breakthrough取得突破
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