Unit 4 Heroes 单元话题书面表达10篇-2026-2027学年九年级英语上册单元练习（外研版）

**基本信息** 初中英语Unit 4“著名人物”话题书面表达专项单元卷，含10篇分层训练（基础5篇+提升5篇），覆盖中外名人与平凡英雄，适配单元复习，强化语言表达与文化理解。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |书面表达|10篇|屠呦呦、袁隆平、王兰花等人物介绍，涉及成就描述、品质分析、个人启示|情境融合科技前沿（如AI研究者）与社会热点（社区工作者），问题设计从基础要点提示到开放讨论，梯度清晰，注重语言能力培养与文化意识渗透，符合中考书面表达命题趋势|

Unit 4 Heroes 单元话题书面表达练习 单元话题：著名人物 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础，巩固自我 重难语篇提升练 专注提升，挑战自我 ◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练 1．请以The great person I admire为题，写一篇80词左右短文，要点包含： 1.你敬佩的伟人是谁，他/她的成就； 2.通过阅读、听力练习学习伟人相关英语素材，体验理解语言； 3.你从他/她身上学到的品质。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李华，你要写一篇短文介绍屠呦呦的生平与贡献。请根据以下提示写一篇90词左右的短文。 提示： 1.屠呦呦是一位伟大的药理学家，2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 2.她出生于1930年，带领团队研究传统中药。 3.1971年，她发现了青蒿素，有效治疗疟疾。 4.她的发现拯救了数百万人的生命，尤其是在发展中国家。 5.她是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖的中国女性，我们都很敬佩她。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．请根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍袁隆平的生平与贡献。 提示： 1. 袁隆平是一位伟大的水稻科学家，被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。 2. 1953年，他大学毕业后在农业学校当老师。 3. 1960年，他看到人们死于饥饿，于是开始研究杂交水稻。 4. 1975年，他培育出新型杂交水稻，比其他品种增产20%。 5. 他一生致力于水稻研究，解决了很多人的饥饿问题，我们都很敬佩他。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．我国飞速发展的科学技术极大提高了人们的生活水平。这些变化是因为有这样一群伟大的人，他们在专业的领域里默默地耕耘，毫无怨言，诠释着责任与担当。 某英文网站正在开展以“我最敬佩的科学家/发明家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位你心中最敬佩的我国的科学家或发明家，讲述他/她的故事，并谈谈你从他/她身上学到了什么。 提示词语：support, courage, develop, success 提示问题： ●Who is the scientist/inventor you admire most? ●What is his/her major achievement? ●What have you learnt from him/her? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．每个人都有自己心目中的英雄，那么你心目中的英雄是谁呢?也许是阅兵场上的军人，也许是攻克难题的科学家，也许是救死扶伤的医生，也许是你的家人，也许是你的老师或同学。请以“A Hero in My Heart”为题，写出你心目中的这位英雄。 写作要求：1.写作应包含思维导图的所有信息，可适当进行拓展； 2.词数80词左右； 3.书写工整规范，注意大小写格式； 4.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 温馨提示：请同学们将试卷的所有答案认真准确地书写到答题卡上！ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．“英雄源于人民，平凡亦铸就伟大。”在宁夏吴忠的社区里，王兰花用数十年的坚守与付出，成为百姓心中当之无愧的英雄。请你参考以下信息，以“A Hero From The People Wang Lanhua”为题，写一篇短文介绍她的事迹，并谈谈她对你的启示。 Name Wang Lanhua Job community worker (社区工作者) Working place Wuzhong, Ningxia Achievements ①start a group called “Wang Lanhua’s Kind Team” ②help people with problems (比如帮助孤寡老人做家务等……) ③do volunteer work for many years 1. What kind of quality (品质) does she have? 2. What can we learn from her? 提示信息： 写作要求： 1.内容必须包括所有要点，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； 2.词数80-100左右。 A Hero From The People—Wang Lanhua ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．在我们的生活中，总会遇到各种各样的挑战。有些人能够勇敢面对并克服困难，最终取得成功。请你以“The Hero in My Heart (我心目中的英雄)”为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍一位你所知道的克服困难取得成功的人物。 内容包括： 1. 人物基本信息； 2. 他/她面临的挑战；他/她是如何克服挑战的；取得了什么成就； 3. 你从他/她身上学到了什么。 要求： 1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 80-120词左右； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 The Hero in My Heart ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你校英语俱乐部准备举办一场以介绍名人为主题的墙报展，请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇英语短文介绍科学家居里夫人。 出生地：波兰 出生日期：1867年11月7日 经历：（1）从小就对物理感兴趣，展现出超凡天赋，读了很多这方面的书籍； （2）当时波兰不允许女子入大学，于是萌发去法国巴黎求学的梦想。为筹措去上大学的学费，她做了8年家庭教师； （3）1891年赴巴黎Sorbonne University求学两年后获得物理学位，后来又获得数学学位，并成为那里的第一位女讲师。 成就：一生获得很多奖项，最为人所知的是分别于1903年和1911年获得了诺贝尔物理学奖和诺贝尔化学奖（发现钋和镭两种元素）。 感悟：从居里夫人身上你学到了什么？ 注意： （1）参考词汇：波兰Poland    家庭教师tutor    学位degree        物理physics 化学chemistry    诺贝尔奖the Nobel Prize        钋polonium        镭radium （2）词数80-100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数） （3）不得透露姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Marie Curie Marie Curie was a famous woman scientist. She is known for her great achievements in science. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练 9．榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、潜心研究AI的梁文锋、机器人之父王兴兴、弃医从艺的饺子、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。成长的过程中，每个人都有自己的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你心中的楷模并分享你的体会。 提示： Who is your role model? Why is he/she your model? What can you learn from him/her? How can you do to be better? 要求： 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 80-100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．不论哪个时代，哪个行业，都会有永驻人心的英雄，因而诗人说：“英雄儿女耀千秋”。你的心中也一定有一位英雄，他也许是阅兵场上的军人，也许是攻克难题的科学家，也许是一位感动大家的普通人，亦或是你身边的守护者。请以“A Hero in My Heart”为题，写写你心中这位英雄的故事以及他 (她) 对你的影响。 1. 简单介绍这位英雄 (如姓名、所处时代等基本信息)； 2. 描述他/她的主要成就、贡献或故事； 3. 说明他/她身上哪些品质让你钦佩，以及对你产生了怎样的影响。 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3. 词数在100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 A Hero in My Heart When it comes to heroes, opinions are different from person to person. As for me, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 4 Heroes 单元话题书面表达练习 单元话题：著名人物 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础，巩固自我 重难语篇提升练 专注提升，挑战自我 ◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练 1．请以The great person I admire为题，写一篇80词左右短文，要点包含： 1.你敬佩的伟人是谁，他/她的成就； 2.通过阅读、听力练习学习伟人相关英语素材，体验理解语言； 3.你从他/她身上学到的品质。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The great person I admire The great person I admire is Abraham Lincoln, the 16th US president. He ended slavery and kept the nation together. He was honest and fought for justice. I read books and listened to speeches about him. They helped me understand his great speeches. They also improved my English. From Lincoln, I learned honesty and hard work. He showed me never to give up. I admire his strong will and kind heart. He is a true hero. I hope I can be as strong and fair as him. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般现在时（描述对伟人的敬佩和学到的品质）和一般过去时（叙述通过阅读和听力了解伟人的过程） 明确要点：敬佩的伟人（林肯，美国第16任总统）、成就（结束奴隶制、维护国家统一、为正义而战）、学习方式（阅读英文书籍、观看视频，帮助理解伟大演讲，提高英语水平）、学到的品质（诚实、努力、永不放弃、坚强意志和善良的心） 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第三人称（he） 注意事项：需包含所有要点，词数80左右，不得出现真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：点明敬佩的伟人及其成就 第二段：阐述通过阅读和听力学习相关英语素材及收获 第三段：总结从他身上学到的品质和感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：伟人与成就 伟人：Abraham Lincoln/the 16th US president/the great American leader等 成就一：ended slavery and kept the nation together/put an end to slavery and united the country/successfully abolished slavery and preserved the Union等 成就二：fought for justice/known for his honesty and fairness/always stood for truth and equal rights等 要点二：学习方式与收获 学习方式：read books and listened to speeches about him/read many English books and watched historical videos about his life/read stories and speeches written by him in English等 收获一：helped me understand his great speeches/helped me understand the meaning behind his famous words/helped me admire his wisdom and leadership等 收获二：improved my English/helped me learn new words and expressions/strengthened both my reading and listening skills等 要点三：学到的品质与感悟 品质一：honesty and hard work/learned the value of being honest and working hard/understood that truthfulness and effort bring respect等 品质二：never to give up/keep trying even in difficult times/stay strong no matter how hard life is等 品质三：strong will and kind heart/strong determination and a caring nature/a great leader with both power and compassion等 感悟：hope I can be as strong and fair as him/wish to have his courage and sense of justice/aim to be a person with honesty, bravery, and kindness like him等 2．假设你是李华，你要写一篇短文介绍屠呦呦的生平与贡献。请根据以下提示写一篇90词左右的短文。 提示： 1.屠呦呦是一位伟大的药理学家，2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 2.她出生于1930年，带领团队研究传统中药。 3.1971年，她发现了青蒿素，有效治疗疟疾。 4.她的发现拯救了数百万人的生命，尤其是在发展中国家。 5.她是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖的中国女性，我们都很敬佩她。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Tu Youyou is a great Chinese pharmacologist who won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 2015. She was born on 30 December 1930 in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province. In the 1960s, she led a team to research traditional Chinese medicine to find a cure for malaria. After many experiments, they discovered artemisinin in 1971, which can treat malaria effectively. Her discovery has saved millions of lives around the world, especially in developing countries. She is the first Chinese woman to win a Nobel Prize in science, and we all admire her deeply. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇人物介绍，以李华的视角介绍屠呦呦的生平与贡献； ②时态：以一般过去时为主，介绍屠呦呦的生平与成就； ③提示：需涵盖身份与奖项、出生年份与研究方向、青蒿素的发现与作用、贡献影响、敬佩之情，内容完整且符合词数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍身份与奖项：屠呦呦是一位伟大的药理学家，在2015年获得了诺贝尔生理学或医学奖； 第二步，讲述生平与研究：她出生于1930年，在20世纪60年代带领团队研究传统中药，寻找治疗疟疾的方法； 第三步，说明成就与影响：1971年发现青蒿素，能有效治疗疟疾，这一发现拯救了数百万人的生命，尤其是在发展中国家； 第四步，表达敬佩：她是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖的中国女性，我们都非常敬佩她。 [亮点词汇] ①pharmacologist药理学家 ②Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine诺贝尔生理学或医学奖 ③traditional Chinese medicine传统中药 ④artemisinin青蒿素 ⑤developing countries发展中国家 [高分句型] ①Tu Youyou is a great Chinese pharmacologist who won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 2015. (who引导定语从句，清晰介绍人物身份与成就) ②After many experiments, they discovered artemisinin in 1971, which can treat malaria effectively. (which引导非限制性定语从句，补充说明青蒿素的作用) 3．请根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍袁隆平的生平与贡献。 提示： 1. 袁隆平是一位伟大的水稻科学家，被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。 2. 1953年，他大学毕业后在农业学校当老师。 3. 1960年，他看到人们死于饥饿，于是开始研究杂交水稻。 4. 1975年，他培育出新型杂交水稻，比其他品种增产20%。 5. 他一生致力于水稻研究，解决了很多人的饥饿问题，我们都很敬佩他。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Yuan Longping is a great rice scientist known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He was born on 7 September 1930. After graduating from college in 1953, he worked as a teacher in an agriculture school. In 1960, he saw people die of hunger, so he began research into hybrid rice. In 1975, he developed a new type of hybrid rice plant, which produced 20% more rice per unit than other common kinds. He spent all his life on the research of better rice plants and solved the problem of hunger for many people. We all admire him deeply. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中袁隆平的生平与贡献的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明袁隆平的身份和称号，引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。按照时间顺序，从“大学毕业后的工作、开始研究杂交水稻的原因、新型杂交水稻的培育、一生的贡献”几个方面重点介绍袁隆平的生平与贡献； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我们都很敬佩他”的情感。 [亮点词汇] ①be known as作为……而闻名 ②die of死于 ③spend...on...在……上花费…… ④solve the problem解决问题 [高分句型] In 1975, he developed a new type of hybrid rice plant, which produced 20% more rice per unit than other common kinds.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 4．我国飞速发展的科学技术极大提高了人们的生活水平。这些变化是因为有这样一群伟大的人，他们在专业的领域里默默地耕耘，毫无怨言，诠释着责任与担当。 某英文网站正在开展以“我最敬佩的科学家/发明家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位你心中最敬佩的我国的科学家或发明家，讲述他/她的故事，并谈谈你从他/她身上学到了什么。 提示词语：support, courage, develop, success 提示问题： ●Who is the scientist/inventor you admire most? ●What is his/her major achievement? ●What have you learnt from him/her? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 The scientist I admire most is Yuan Longping, known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He spent his whole life researching and developing hybrid rice technology. Facing countless difficulties, he showed great courage and never gave up. His work greatly increased rice output, supporting millions of people in China and even around the world, bringing remarkable success. From him, I learn that perseverance and a strong sense of responsibility can help achieve great things. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：注意不要遗漏提示问题的信息，围绕人物身份、核心成就、精神品质及个人启示展开，结构清晰，可补充具体细节增强感染力。   [写作步骤] 第一步，点明人物身份与核心贡献； 第二步，描述其在科研中展现的品质； 第三步，阐述其成就的深远影响及对自己的启示。   [亮点词汇] ①known as被誉为 ②face countless difficulties面对无数困难 ③never give up永不放弃 ④remarkable success卓越成就   [高分句型] ①The scientist I admire most is Yuan Longping, known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.（同位语结构） ②From him, I learn that perseverance and a strong sense of responsibility can help achieve great things.（宾语从句）   5．每个人都有自己心目中的英雄，那么你心目中的英雄是谁呢?也许是阅兵场上的军人，也许是攻克难题的科学家，也许是救死扶伤的医生，也许是你的家人，也许是你的老师或同学。请以“A Hero in My Heart”为题，写出你心目中的这位英雄。 写作要求：1.写作应包含思维导图的所有信息，可适当进行拓展； 2.词数80词左右； 3.书写工整规范，注意大小写格式； 4.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 温馨提示：请同学们将试卷的所有答案认真准确地书写到答题卡上！ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Hero in My Heart The hero in my heart is Zhong Nanshan, a renowned medical scientist. He has a kind heart and a brave personality. With white hair and a gentle smile, he looks trustworthy. He is a hero because during the COVID-19 pandemic, he bravely stood at the forefront, providing valuable advice and treating patients. His dedication and selflessness saved countless lives. I can learn from him to be brave and responsible, always ready to help others and contribute to society. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应包含思维导图中的所有信息，如英雄的身份、外貌、英雄事迹以及自己从英雄身上学到的品质，并适当进行拓展。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明自己心目中的英雄是谁； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从英雄的外貌、性格以及英雄事迹等方面进行详细描述； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己从英雄身上学到的品质以及对自己的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①renowned著名的 ②brave勇敢的 ③trustworthy值得信赖的 ④dedication奉献精神 ⑤selflessness无私 [高分句型] ①The hero in my heart is Zhong Nanshan, a renowned medical scientist.（同位语结构） ②He is a hero because during the COVID-19 pandemic, he bravely stood at the forefront, providing valuable advice and treating patients.（because引导的原因状语从句） 6．“英雄源于人民，平凡亦铸就伟大。”在宁夏吴忠的社区里，王兰花用数十年的坚守与付出，成为百姓心中当之无愧的英雄。请你参考以下信息，以“A Hero From The People Wang Lanhua”为题，写一篇短文介绍她的事迹，并谈谈她对你的启示。 Name Wang Lanhua Job community worker (社区工作者) Working place Wuzhong, Ningxia Achievements ①start a group called “Wang Lanhua’s Kind Team” ②help people with problems (比如帮助孤寡老人做家务等……) ③do volunteer work for many years 1. What kind of quality (品质) does she have? 2. What can we learn from her? 提示信息： 写作要求： 1.内容必须包括所有要点，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； 2.词数80-100左右。 A Hero From The People—Wang Lanhua ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 A Hero From The People—Wang Lanhua Wang Lanhua is a community worker in Wuzhong, Ningxia. She is a true hero from the people. Her biggest achievement is starting “Wang Lanhua’s Kind Team”. This group helps people in the community with their problems. For example, they help lonely old people clean their houses and do other chores. Wang Lanhua has done this kind volunteer work for many, many years without stopping. She is very kind and helpful. She teaches us that even ordinary people can do great things if they care about others and never give up. Her spirit of helping people is really inspiring. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要介绍王兰花的身份和工作地点； 第二步，详细描述她的成就和品质； 第三步，结合自身谈启示。 [亮点词汇] ①true hero真正的英雄 ②ordinary people普通人 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] She teaches us that even ordinary people can do great things if they care about others and never give up.（宾语从句和条件状语从句） 7．在我们的生活中，总会遇到各种各样的挑战。有些人能够勇敢面对并克服困难，最终取得成功。请你以“The Hero in My Heart (我心目中的英雄)”为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍一位你所知道的克服困难取得成功的人物。 内容包括： 1. 人物基本信息； 2. 他/她面临的挑战；他/她是如何克服挑战的；取得了什么成就； 3. 你从他/她身上学到了什么。 要求： 1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 80-120词左右； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 The Hero in My Heart ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Hero in My Heart The hero in my heart is Helen Keller. She was an American writer who became deaf and blind at a young age. Despite these challenges, she never gave up. With the help of her teacher, Helen learned to communicate through touch. Helen worked hard and even graduated from college, becoming the first deaf-blind person to earn a Bachelor’s degree. She later wrote books and gave speeches to inspire others. From her, I learned that perseverance and courage can overcome any difficulty. Her story teaches me to face challenges bravely and never lose hope. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：主要为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作提示已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己心中的英雄是海伦·凯勒，并介绍她的相关信息，包括职业和丧失视觉和听觉的事情； 第二步，介绍海伦·凯勒面对困难不放弃，在老师的帮助下克服困难、学会交流并最终成为作家的事情； 第三步，表明自己从海伦·凯勒身上学到了面对困难时要有毅力和勇气的道理。 [亮点词汇] ①at a young age在年轻时 ②gave up放弃 ③with the help of在……的帮助下 ④face challenges bravely勇敢面对挑战 ⑤never lose hope永远不要失去希望 [高分句型] ①She was an American writer who became deaf and blind at a young age. (who引导的限制性定语从句) ②From her, I learned that perseverance and courage can overcome any difficulty. (that引导的宾语从句) 8．假如你校英语俱乐部准备举办一场以介绍名人为主题的墙报展，请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇英语短文介绍科学家居里夫人。 出生地：波兰 出生日期：1867年11月7日 经历：（1）从小就对物理感兴趣，展现出超凡天赋，读了很多这方面的书籍； （2）当时波兰不允许女子入大学，于是萌发去法国巴黎求学的梦想。为筹措去上大学的学费，她做了8年家庭教师； （3）1891年赴巴黎Sorbonne University求学两年后获得物理学位，后来又获得数学学位，并成为那里的第一位女讲师。 成就：一生获得很多奖项，最为人所知的是分别于1903年和1911年获得了诺贝尔物理学奖和诺贝尔化学奖（发现钋和镭两种元素）。 感悟：从居里夫人身上你学到了什么？ 注意： （1）参考词汇：波兰Poland    家庭教师tutor    学位degree        物理physics 化学chemistry    诺贝尔奖the Nobel Prize        钋polonium        镭radium （2）词数80-100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数） （3）不得透露姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Marie Curie Marie Curie was a famous woman scientist. She is known for her great achievements in science. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Marie Curie Marie Curie was a famous woman scientist. She is known for her great achievements in science. She was born in Poland on November 7, 1867. As a child, she loved physics and showed great talent, reading many books on it. At that time, women in Poland weren’t allowed to go to university, so she dreamed of studying in Paris. To save money for university, she worked as a tutor for eight years. In 1891, she went to Sorbonne University in Paris. After two years, she got a physics degree. Later, she earned a math degree and became the first woman teacher there. She won many awards in her life. Most famously, she received the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1911 for discovering polonium and radium. From Marie Curie, I learned that with hard work and persistence, we can overcome difficulties and achieve great things. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍居里夫人的生平事迹； 第二步，分享自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①allowed to do允许做 ②persistence坚持 ③overcome difficulties克服困难 [高分句型] ①To save money for university, she worked as a tutor for eight years.（不定式表目的） ②From Marie Curie, I learned that with hard work and persistence, we can overcome difficulties and achieve great things.（宾语从句） ◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练 9．榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、潜心研究AI的梁文锋、机器人之父王兴兴、弃医从艺的饺子、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。成长的过程中，每个人都有自己的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你心中的楷模并分享你的体会。 提示： Who is your role model? Why is he/she your model? What can you learn from him/her? How can you do to be better? 要求： 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 80-100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Role Model    Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”.     I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show his deep love for our nation.     From him, I’ve learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country’s needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先根据内容介绍自己的榜样是黄旭华，说明敬佩他的原因，包括他的工作经历、名言及爱国情怀。 第二步，再阐述从他身上学到的品质和对自己的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①be known as 被称为 ②give up 放弃 ③put...first 把……放在首位 [高分句型] ①My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”.（过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰 Huang Xuhua） ②What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.”（what 引导的主语从句，that 引导表语从句） 10．不论哪个时代，哪个行业，都会有永驻人心的英雄，因而诗人说：“英雄儿女耀千秋”。你的心中也一定有一位英雄，他也许是阅兵场上的军人，也许是攻克难题的科学家，也许是一位感动大家的普通人，亦或是你身边的守护者。请以“A Hero in My Heart”为题，写写你心中这位英雄的故事以及他 (她) 对你的影响。 1. 简单介绍这位英雄 (如姓名、所处时代等基本信息)； 2. 描述他/她的主要成就、贡献或故事； 3. 说明他/她身上哪些品质让你钦佩，以及对你产生了怎样的影响。 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3. 词数在100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 A Hero in My Heart When it comes to heroes, opinions are different from person to person. As for me, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Hero in My Heart When it comes to heroes, opinions are different from person to person. As for me, the hero in my heart is Qian Xuesen. He was a great scientist who lived in the 20th century. He is considered the pioneer of China’s space technology programme. Though he faced many difficulties, he never gave up. He worked hard to help China build its rockets and satellites. What I admire most about him is his love for his country and his strong will. His story teaches me to keep working hard and never lose heart when facing problems. I will learn from him and become a better person. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：英雄的基本信息、主要成就/故事、敬佩的品质及对自己的影响 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) + 第三人称 (he/his) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名和地名，词数100词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给出的句子，点明心中的英雄是谁 主体段：介绍英雄的基本信息、主要成就与贡献 结尾段：说明敬佩的品质，以及对自己的影响与感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：英雄基本信息与主要成就 人物选择：Qian Xuesen/Zhang Guimei/Yuan Longping等 信息描述：He was a great scientist who lived in the 20th century./He is considered the pioneer of China’s space technology programme./She is widely known for founding the first free high school for girls in China./He is known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.等 具体贡献：Though he faced many difficulties, he never gave up./He worked hard to help China build its rockets and satellites./She has helped thousands of girls from poor families go to college and change their lives./He worked hard to develop high-yield hybrid rice, which helped feed millions of people around the world.等 要点二：敬佩的品质与个人影响 品质说明：His love for his country and his strong will./Her selfless love for students and her unyielding spirit are what I admire most./His love for his country and his strong will to solve hunger problems are truly inspiring.等 影响说明：His story teaches me to keep working hard and never lose heart when facing problems./I will learn from him and become a better person./Her story teaches me to care for others and never give up on helping people in need./I will learn from him to pursue my dreams and help others in the future.等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $