Unit 1 My favourite things（写作突破专项训练）英语北京版五年级上册（新教材）

Unit 1 My favourite things 写作方法指引- 原文指路 （爱好介绍类） Hi, I'm Maomao. My hobby is drawing. 开篇点明：直接介绍姓名与核心爱好，让读者快速抓住写作主题。 I like drawing everything: plants, animals, my family and friends. 细节补充：列举爱好的具体内容，使爱好介绍更具体生动。 It helps me to see the beautiful world. 价值阐述：说明爱好给自己带来的积极影响，深化主题内涵。 Drawing makes me feel happy. 情感表达：抒发爱好带来的内心感受，增强内容感染力。 At the weekend, I like to find a quiet place in the park and draw there. 日常实践：描述日常践行爱好的场景，让内容更真实可信。 I really enjoy drawing. 结尾总结：再次强调对爱好的喜爱，收束全文。 写作方法指引 - 原文指路（最喜欢的学科类） My favourite subject is Maths. 开篇点题：明确说出自己最喜欢的学科，直接切入主题。 It's interesting and useful. 原因说明：从学科的趣味性和实用性角度，解释喜欢该学科的理由。 I do best in it. I can help my friends with it. 拓展延伸：提及自己在该学科的优势，以及能为朋友提供帮助，丰富写作内容。 写作方法指引 - 原文指路（Show and Tell展示稿类） Hello! I'm Tiantian. My hobby is dancing. 礼貌开场：展示时先问候并介绍自己与爱好，符合社交礼仪。 I always have a good time when I dance. I like folk dance best. It's beautiful. 说明理由：讲述爱好带来的快乐，以及具体类型的优点，让展示更有内容支撑。 Now I will dance for you. 互动展示：提出现场进行爱好展示，增强活动的互动性。 I hope you'll like it. Thank you. 礼貌收尾：表达对观众的期待并致谢，展现良好的展示素养。 一、核心词汇 1. 经典书籍类 Journey to the West, Snow White, Around the World in Eighty Days 2. 学科类 Chinese, Maths, English, PE, Art, Music, Science, Calligraphy 3. 爱好与活动类 drawing, cooking, dancing, Chinese kung fu, calligraphy, playing the piano, running 4. 描述性词汇 famous, interesting, useful, beautiful, important, difficult, delicious, happy, strong, quiet, wonderful 二、参考句型 1. 介绍喜爱的书籍 I'm reading Journey to the West. It's very famous in China. It tells about a long and difficult journey to ancient India. I like Around the World in Eighty Days better because I like travelling. It's a good book for children. 2. 介绍喜爱的学科 My favourite subject is Maths. It's interesting and useful. I like Chinese best. It's beautiful and important. I do best in Art. I can help my friends with it. 3. 介绍个人爱好 My hobby is drawing. I like drawing everything: plants, animals, my family and friends. Drawing makes me feel happy. At the weekend, I like to find a quiet place in the park and draw there. I like Chinese kung fu best. It makes me strong. I practice calligraphy every day. 4. 课堂展示句型 Hello, everyone! I'm ... . I like ... best. I can cook chicken with potatoes. I can also cook noodles. Now, I'll dance for you. I hope you'll like it. Thank you. 易错点提示 1.书名书写规范：英文书名需用斜体标注，且每个实词首字母大写，比如Journey to the West，不要遗漏斜体或大写。 2.比较级与最高级区分：表达两者之间更喜欢用like...better，表达最喜爱（三者及以上）用like...best，不要混淆使用。 3.固定搭配易错：表达“擅长某学科/活动”用do best in，不要写成do best at；表达“每天练习某事”用practice sth every day，注意practice后直接加名词，不要加介词。 4.原因状语从句逻辑：说明喜欢某事物的原因时，用because连接从句，要保证从句语义完整，比如不要只写because I like，要补充完整内容。 写作一 请你写一篇短文，介绍你最喜爱的一门学科。说说你为什么喜欢它，以及你平时在这门课上会做什么。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于50词。 参考单词： Chinese, Maths, English, interesting, useful, beautiful, important, do best in 写作二 请你写一篇短文，分享你的一项爱好。介绍你喜欢这项爱好的原因，以及你平时是怎么进行这项活动的。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： drawing, cooking, Chinese kung fu, happy, strong, practice, quiet, wonderful 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： My favourite subject is Maths. It's interesting and useful. （点明科目）I do best in Maths at school. I can help my friends with their Maths homework. Every day, I like to solve some Maths problems after class. It makes me feel happy. （日常学习） I think Maths is very important for our life. （总结意义） 范文（提高版）： My favourite subject is Chinese. It's beautiful and important. （点明科目）I do best in Chinese in my class. In Chinese classes, we read nice poems and interesting stories. I love reading ancient Chinese poems because they sound wonderful. I often share my favourite stories with my classmates after class. （课内课外） Chinese helps me learn more about our great culture. （总结意义） 写作二 范文（基础版）： My hobby is drawing. I like drawing plants, animals and my family members. Drawing makes me feel happy. （点明爱好） At the weekend, I like to find a quiet place in the park and draw there. I practice drawing every day. （日常练习）I hope I can draw more beautiful pictures in the future. （未来愿望） 范文（提高版）： Hello, everyone! My hobby is Chinese kung fu. I like it best because it makes me strong and healthy. （点明爱好）Every evening, I practice Chinese kung fu for half an hour in my living room. Sometimes I learn new moves from my PE teacher at school. When I do kung fu, I feel very happy and full of energy. （日常练习） I want to be strong like my kung fu hero one day. （未来愿望） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $