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专题02 写作综合训练二(新媒体类与通知报道)
1.假定你是学生会主席李华。为了通过短视频展示家庭的爱与温暖,你校学生会将于5月10日至5月30日开展主题为“我爱我家”(I Love My Family)短视频比赛(Short Video Contest),请用英语拟一份书面活动通知,内容包括:
(1) 活动介绍(目的、主题、时间);
(2) 拍摄内容(围绕“我爱我家”主题,展现家庭生活);
(3) 参赛要求(不超过10分钟、原创);
(4) 其它要求:5月25日前交到Students’ Union@163.com
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总次数。
NOTICE
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Students’ Union
【答案】
【范文1】
NOTICE
As scheduled, a Short Video Contest themed “I Love My Family” will be held by our school from May 10 to May 30 so as to raise the students’ awareness of showing gratitude to their family.
Here are some relevant details. First and foremost, what calls for special attention is that you are supposed to film heartwarming daily activities or family traditions, which is of great importance. Besides, it has to be noticed that your video should be no longer than 10 minutes and must be original. More significantly, I would like to attach great necessity to the point that please submit your work to Students’ Union@163.com before May 25.
By taking part in the contest, not only will we record our daily life but also it will strengthen our sense of responsibility. Welcome your participation!
Students’ Union
【范文2】
NOTICE
To capture and share the touching moments of family life and foster a deeper appreciation for family bonds, the Students’ Union is going to hold a Short Video Contest with the theme of “I Love My Family” running from May 10th to May 30th.
The competition invites you to submit original short videos that capture the spirit of family life. You may film heartwarming daily interactions, family traditions, joyful gatherings, or even challenges overcome together. Your video entry should be no longer than 10 minutes. Submit your work to Students’ Union@163.com by May 25th.
Don’t miss this chance to share your family's story and inspire others with its warmth! For more details, contact us at the Students’ Union. Welcome your participation!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于通知。要求考生用英语拟一份书面通知,介绍学校学生会将于5月10日至30日开展的主题为“我爱我家”的短视频比赛活动,说明拍摄内容、参赛要求和其它要求。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
提高:raise→improve
重要:importance→significance
意识:awareness→sense
增强、加强:strengthen→enhance
2. 句式拓展:
同义句转换:
原句:As scheduled, a Short Video Contest themed “I Love My Family” will be held by our school from May 10 to May 30 so as to raise the students’ awareness of showing gratitude to their family.
拓展句:As scheduled, a Short Video Contest whose theme is “I Love My Family” will be held by our school from May 10 to May 30 so as to raise the students’ awareness of showing gratitude to their family.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First and foremost, what calls for special attention is that you are supposed to film heartwarming daily activities or family traditions, which is of great importance. (运用了以连接代词what引导的主语从句和连接词that引导的表语从句,以及关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, it has to be noticed that your video should be no longer than 10 minutes and must be original. (运用了it作形式主语,连接词that引导的主语从句)
2.假设你是晨光中学的李津,你校近期举办了“航天科技主题展”(Aerospace Technology Exhibition),通过图片和视频等多种方式,展示了中国航天事业的飞速发展和伟大成就。请你以“Reaching for the Stars”为题,为学校公众号英文栏目写一篇活动报道。
内容提示:
(1)主题展的主要内容(天宫空间站建设、月球探测成果、航天工作者贡献等);
(2)师生们对展览活动的反响;
(3)你参观展览后的感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:月球探测 lunar exploration;自主创新 independent innovation
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【答案】One possible version:
Reaching for the Stars
Our school recently held an Aerospace Technology Exhibition, showcasing China’s remarkable achievements in space exploration. The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, highlighting its construction and scientific missions. Visitors also learned about lunar exploration, including the Chang’e missions, and the dedication of Chinese aerospace scientists through independent innovation.
Both teachers and students were deeply impressed. Many said they felt proud of China’s rapid progress in space technology. Some students even expressed interest in pursuing careers in aerospace after seeing the inspiring stories of scientists and astronauts.
Personally, I was amazed by how far China has come in space exploration. The exhibition not only broadened my knowledge but also strengthened my belief that with hard work and creativity, we can achieve even greater milestones in the future.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生以“Reaching for the Stars”为题,为学校公众号英文栏目写一篇活动报道,报道学校近期举办的“航天科技主题展”(Aerospace Technology Exhibition)的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold →host
成就:achievement →accomplishment
强调:highlight →emphasize
以……为骄傲:feel proud of →take pride in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, highlighting its construction and scientific missions.
拓展句:The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, which highlighted its construction and scientific missions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Personally, I was amazed by how far China has come in space exploration. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The exhibition not only broadened my knowledge but also strengthened my belief that with hard work and creativity, we can achieve even greater milestones in the future.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
3.假定你是校英文报记者李华,为引导学生了解中国历史,培养爱国情怀,你校上周举办了主题为“溯史寻踪,礼敬千秋”(Trace History, Honor Ages)的历史文化节。请你给校英文报写一篇活动报道,具体内容包括:
1.活动过程(至少三个环节) ;
2.师生反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:patriotism爱国主义
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【答案】Trace History, Honor Ages
To enrich students’ knowledge of Chinese history and cultivate noble patriotism among teenagers, our school successfully held a grand History and Culture Festival themed "Trace History, Honor Ages" last week.
The festival consisted of three activities. First, our school invited professional historians, who specialize in Chinese history and ancient civilizations, to deliver a vivid lecture covering traditional Chinese history and splendid ancient civilizations. Then, an exciting history knowledge competition was held to test students’ learning outcomes. Finally, talented students put on fantastic traditional cultural shows, bringing history to life.
The activity received high praise from the whole school. All students gained deeper insights into our profound history and traditional culture.
【导语】本文要求考生以校英文报记者的身份,报道学校举办的主题为“溯史寻踪,礼敬千秋”的历史文化节
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold → host
由……组成:consist of → be made up of
传统的:traditional → conventional
培养:cultivate→foster
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The activity received high praise from the whole school.
拓展句:The activity which received high praise from the whole school was a great success.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, our school invited professional historians, who specialize in Chinese history and ancient civilizations, to deliver a vivid lecture covering traditional Chinese history and splendid ancient civilizations.(使用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Finally, talented students put on fantastic traditional cultural shows, bringing history to life.(使用了现在分词作伴随状语)
4.Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着 AI 作业助手 (AI homework assistants) 的普及,越来越多中学生开始用它们完成作业、解答难题。有人认为这类工具能帮学生高效解决学习难点,节省时间;也有人担心过度依赖会削弱学生的独立思考能力和解题能力。假设你是高中生李华,在校园论坛上看到相关讨论,决定回帖表达你的看法。回帖内容应包括:
1.你对中学生使用 AI 作业助手的态度;
2.你的理由(至少两点)。
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【答案】 Nowadays, AI homework assistants are widely used among middle school students, causing heated debates online. As Li Hua, I hold the view that we should use such AI tools wisely rather than rely on them blindly.
For one thing, AI assistants can effectively help us tackle difficult problems and clear up learning confusion. They offer detailed explanations, saving us much time spent thinking alone. For another, excessive dependence will do great harm to us. If we copy answers directly, we will gradually lose the ability of independent thinking and problem-solving, which is essential for our long-term study.
In short, AI is just a useful helper. We should think independently first and turn to it only when necessary. Only in this way can we make progress in our studies.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生对于随着 AI 作业助手 (AI homework assistants) 的普及,越来越多中学生开始用它们完成作业、解答难题。有人认为这类工具能帮学生高效解决学习难点,节省时间;也有人担心过度依赖会削弱学生的独立思考能力和解题能力这一情况,表达你的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激烈的:heated → intense
明智地:wisely → advisably
解决:tackle → solve
至关重要的:essential → crucial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For one thing, AI assistants can effectively help us tackle difficult problems and clear up learning confusion.
拓展句:For one thing, AI assistants can operate efficiently so that they can help us tackle difficult problems and clear up learning confusion.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If we copy answers directly, we will gradually lose the ability of independent thinking and problem-solving, which is essential for our long-term study.(运用了If引导的条件状语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Nowadays, AI homework assistants are widely used among middle school students, causing heated debates online.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语)
5.学校英文论坛发起关于“Healthy Campus Life”的讨论,假如你是李华,请你针对现在学生当中普遍存在的用眼过度这一问题,结合自身经历和观察跟帖参与讨论,内容包括:
(1)陈述看法;(2)分析影响;(3)提出建议。
参考词汇:eye strain 眼疲劳
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Li Hua
Nowadays, it is common that many students suffer from eye strain ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文:
Dear fellow students,
Nowadays, it is common that many students suffer from eye strain, They overuse their eyes due to long hours of studying or using digital devices. Last term, I often stayed up late using my tablet to finish homework, which left me with severe eye strain.
This problem not only damages our eyesight but also lowers our concentration in class. Worse still, it could even lead to potential long-term eye conditions.
To address this, we should take regular breaks during study, such as following the 20-20-20 rule: every 20 minutes, look at something 20 feet away for 20 seconds and keep doing eye exercises daily. Outdoor activities also count. Let’s work together to protect our eyes for a healthier campus life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于论坛跟帖,要求考生以李华的身份,针对学校英文论坛“Healthy Campus Life”讨论中,学生普遍用眼过度的问题,结合自身经历和观察,陈述看法、分析影响并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
保护:protect → preserve
由于:due to → owing to
导致:lead to→result in
潜在的:potential → latent
2. 句式拓展
同义句
原句:Last term, I often stayed up late using my tablet to finish homework, which left me with severe eye strain.
拓展句:Last term, because I had a lot of homework, I often stayed up late using my tablet to finish it, which left me with severe eye strain.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays, it is common that many students suffer from eye strain.(it作形式主语,that引导真正的主语从句)
【高分句型2】Last term, I often stayed up late using my tablet to finish homework, which left me with severe eye strain.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
6.近几年,越来越多的外国学生到中国留学。你校英语论坛正在就“中国成为热门留学目的地”这一现象进行讨论,请你写一篇英文帖子,表达自己的观点。
内容包括:
1、描述现象;
2、表达自己的观点及理由。
注意:词数100词左右。
China—a Hot Destination for Studying Abroad
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【答案】One possible version:
China—a Hot Destination for Studying Abroad
In recent years, an obvious trend has emerged—more and more foreign students are choosing to study in China. In my opinion, it’s a clear indication of China’s appeal as a destination for higher education and increasing global influence.
For many foreign students, the appeal of China is various. The rich cultural heritage, dynamic economy, and world-class education system all contribute to making China an attractive destination for studying abroad. Moreover, China’s position as a global leader in several fields, especially technology and research, gives students the unique opportunity to gain hands-on experience and skills that are highly valued in today’s job market.
In conclusion, I believe that this rise in popularity will continue as more foreign students discover the many benefits of studying in China.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文,要求考生描述“中国成为热门留学目的地”这一现象,并且表达自己的观点及理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
明显的:obvious→evident
吸引力:appeal→attraction
机会:opportunity→chance
重视:value→attach importance to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句:The rich cultural heritage, dynamic economy, and world-class education system all contribute to making China an attractive destination for studying abroad.
拓展句:It is the rich cultural heritage, dynamic economy, and world-class education system that all contribute to making China an attractive destination for studying abroad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Moreover, China’s position as a global leader in several fields, especially technology and research, gives students the unique opportunity to gain hands-on experience and skills that are highly valued in today’s job market.(使用了不定式作后置定语、that引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】In conclusion, I believe that this rise in popularity will continue as more foreign students discover the many benefits of studying in China. (使用了that引导宾语从句、as引导时间状语从句、动名词作宾语)
7.假定你是李华,在某国际论坛上看到一个英文帖子“Suppose you are 50 years old, what advice would you give to the present self?”,请你结合“健康生活习惯”、“志存高远”等话题用英文回复一下该帖子。内容包括:
1. 提供建议;
2. 阐述理由;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
What advice would you give to the present self?
Hello, younger me!
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From 50-year-old Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
What advice would you give to the present self?
Hello, younger me! My advice to you is to dream bigger and study harder.
As a teenager burdened with endless work, you may think little about what you can do in the future. An ideal goal-setting is of great importance, for a person without a goal is like a machine without a motor. With that big dream in mind, you’ll find yourself absorbed in study, which seems to be exceptionally interesting and charming. When confronted with unsatisfying marks, just have faith in yourself and study even harder and you will definitely be the best of whatever you are.
Younger me, dream bigger and you are bound to fly higher!
From 50-year-old Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇开放作文,要求考生结合“健康生活习惯”、“志存高远”等话题用英文回复某国际论坛上的一个英文帖子“Suppose you are 50 years old, what advice would you give to the present self ?”
【详解】1.词汇积累
负担着:be burdened with → be loaded with
重要的:be important→ be of great importance
专心于:be lost in → be absorbed in
面对:be faced with→ be confronted with
2.句式拓展
原句:With that big dream in mind, you’ll find yourself absorbed in study. It seems to be exceptionally interesting and charming.
拓展句:With that big dream in mind, you’ll find yourself absorbed in study, which seems to be exceptionally interesting and charming.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a teenager burdened with endless work, you may think little about what you can do in the future.(过去分词作后置定语和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】When confronted with unsatisfying marks, just have faith in yourself and study even harder and you will definitely be the best of whatever you are.(状语从句中的省略)
8.春节将至,你最近浏览某英语论坛时注意到关于“云过节”的热烈讨论。请就此话题回帖,内容包括:
1. 发表看法;
2. 阐明理由。
注意:词数100词左右。
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Personally, I find it to be a practical solution. As a student studying abroad, I often rely on virtual celebrations to stay connected with my family...(more)
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I understand the convenience factor, but I value face-to-face gatherings more, as nothing can replace the joy and warmth that come from being physically present with loved ones (more)
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【答案】 For me, celebrating festivals online is one of the best things technology brings to us.
Firstly, online celebration helps us maintain connection when distance keeps us away. When face-to-face gathering is not possible, video chat enables us to see and hear our beloved ones. Last Lantern Festival, while Dad was on a business trip in Yunnan, it didn't stop Mom and I from connecting with him. Through video chat, we cooked and had dinner together. Despite the three thousand kilometers between us, we felt close as if we were sitting next to each other in our dining room.
Secondly, we can explore more fun and diverse ways to celebrate traditional festivals online. For example, putting on VR headset, we can visit themed exhibitions, watch online performances, and even play games to learn more about the festival. The 3D virtual environment gives us a unique festival experience.
Online celebration breaks down the barrier of time and space, bringing people closer and enriching our festival experience. So why not embrace it?
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就英语论坛上“云过节”的话题进行回帖,发表自己的观点并阐明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
阻止某人做某事:stop sb. from doing→prevent sb. from doing
尽管:despite→in spite of
各种各样的:diverse→various
戴上:put on→wear
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Online celebration breaks down the barrier of time and space, bringing people closer and enriching our festival experience.
拓展句: Online celebration breaks down the barrier of time and space, which brings people closer and enrich our festival experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】For me, celebrating festivals online is one of the best things technology brings to us.(运用了动名词作主语,省略that的定语从句)
【高分句型2】When face-to-face gathering is not possible, video chat enables us to see and hear our beloved ones.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
9.假定你是李华,某英语网站正在讨论对“The man who has made up his mind to win will never say ‘impossible’.”的理解。你打算跟帖参与讨论,内容包括:
1. 你对此的理解;
2. 结合具体实例;
3. 你的启发与感悟。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
This quote highlights the importance of determination and devotion. To me, a strong willpower is what it takes to accomplish anything difficult.
This is apparently true to Tu Youyou. Faced with the challenges to find a cure for malaria, she encountered numerous obstacles. However, she made up her mind to settle the problem instead of acknowledging defeat. After endless attempts, she led her team to discover artemisinin and win the battle against malaria, saving hundreds of thousands of people’s lives.
Overall, I’m inspired by Tu Youyou and her team. Their contribution demonstrates that in time of difficulties, we are supposed to spare no effort to win. Hopefully, we can turn “impossible” into “I’m possible”.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就某英语网站正在讨论的“The man who has made up his mind to win will never say ‘impossible’”话题跟帖参与讨论并谈谈自己的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
突出,强调:stress →highlight
明显地:obviously → apparently
证明:show → demonstrate
完成:complete →accomplish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Faced with the challenges to find a cure for malaria, she encountered numerous obstacles.
拓展句:When she was faced with the challenges to find a cure for malaria, she encountered numerous obstacles.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To me, a strong willpower is what it takes to accomplish anything difficult.(运用了what引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Their contribution demonstrates that in time of difficulties, we are supposed to spare no effort to win.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
10.假设你是晨光中学的高三学生李津。为了弘扬中国传统文化,你校英语俱乐部在学校网站论坛上举办《论语大家谈》专题讨论,你欲发帖。请你从以下三章论语中选择一章翻译成英语,进行分析,并举例说明。
(1)子曰:“知之者不如好之者,好之者不如乐之者。”
(2)子曰:“三人行,必有我师焉。则其善者而从之,其不善者而改之。”
(3)子曰:“温故而知新,可以为师矣。”
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当增加细节。以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:《论语》the Analects of Confucius
Topic: Discussion on the chapters of Analects of Confucius
Posted by Li Jin
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【答案】范文
I would like to select the chapter from the “Analects of Confucius” which says: “The one who knows it is not as good as the one who loves it, and the one who loves it is not as good as the one who finds joy in it.” This chapter truly expresses the importance of enthusiasm and joy in acquiring knowledge. Not only should we be knowledgeable, but we should also have a deep appreciation and love for that knowledge. When we find joy in what we learn, we become more interested in pursuing it, and thus more successful in our studies.
For example, when I first started learning English, I found it difficult and boring. However, as I continued to practice and immerse myself in the language, I started to appreciate its beauty and the opportunities it opened up. Now, I find myself enjoying English classes and looking forward to improving my skills.
This chapter of the “Analects of Confucius” is a powerful reminder to always maintain a positive and interested mindset towards learning. By doing so, we can find joy in our studies and truly excel in them.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学的高三学生李津。为了弘扬中国传统文化,你校英语俱乐部在学校网站论坛上举办《论语大家谈》专题讨论,你欲发帖。请你从以下三章论语中选择一章翻译成英语,进行分析,并举例说明。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要:would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
选择:select→choose
表达:express→convey
快乐:joy→happiness
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Now, I find myself enjoying English classes and looking forward to improving my skills.
拓展句:Now, not only do I find myself enjoying English classes, but also I look forward to improving my skills.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only should we be knowledgeable, but we should also have a deep appreciation and love for that knowledge. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] When we find joy in what we learn, we become more interested in pursuing it, and thus more successful in our studies. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
11.Directions: Write an English composition in at least 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高一学生王华,你在某英语论坛上看到一个求助帖,请根据帖子内容写一篇回帖,给出你的建议和理由。
I’ve planned a family trip carefully, hoping to create cherished memories with my 16-year-old child. I’ve selected destinations rich in cultural heritage(遗产)and natural beauty. However, during the trip, my son John spends an overwhelming amount of time on the phone, barely paying attention to the wonderful sights around. I’m worried this constant phone use is ruining the travel experience and preventing us from bonding(情感联系). What should I do?
—A worried parent travelling in Xi’an, China
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【答案】
I understand your concern about your son John’s excessive phone use during your family trip in Xi’an. Here are some suggestions that might help.
Firstly, try to have an open conversation with John. Explain how much effort you’ve put into planning this trip, which is aimed at creating cherished memories for the whole family. You could say something like, “I’ve chosen these destinations because they are rich in cultural heritage and natural beauty, and I really want us to enjoy them together.” Secondly, set some phone-free time during the trip. For example, you could decide that during meals or when visiting certain attractions, phones should be put away. This way, John will have no choice but to focus on the present moment and the people around him. Lastly, involve John in the planning process for future trips. Ask him what kind of activities or destinations he would enjoy. This will make him feel more included and excited about the trip, reducing his need to rely on his phone for entertainment.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful, and I wish you a wonderful family trip!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对一位在西安旅行的家长在论坛上的求助帖,就其16岁儿子旅行中过度使用手机的问题给出建议和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心:concern → worry
建议:suggestion → advice
帮助:help → assist
专注于:focus on → concentrate on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I understand your concern about your son John’s excessive phone use during your family trip in Xi’an.
拓展句:I understand your concern, which is about your son John’s excessive phone use during your family trip in Xi’an.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here are some suggestions that might help.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Explain how much effort you’ve put into planning this trip, which is aimed at creating cherished memories for the whole family.(运用了how much引导的宾语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12.4月22日为世界地球日。你在某国际网站上看到下面两张图片。请你用英语在留言板上发一个帖子,内容包括:
1. 图片简介
2. 个人感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文:
On World Earth Day, I came across two powerful images on an international website. One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
The powerful images set me thinking. Obviously, the planet’s tears symbolize the harm caused by human activities, such as deforestation, pollution, and climate change. Yet, our generous Earth, the ultimate giver of gifts, makes us feel guilty for not fully appreciating and safeguarding its generosity. These images awakens a sense of guilt and an urgent need to protect the earth.
It’s high time that we banded together to preserve and restore our Earth. By embracing sustainable practices, minimizing our carbon footprint, and advocating for environmentally responsible policies, we are bound to pave the way for a sustainable future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生根据图片内容写一个关于地球日的帖子。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
显然:obviously→apparently
紧急的:urgent→pressing
遇到:come across→encounter with
表达:express→extend
2. 句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
拓展句:One portrays our planet shedding tears, which expresses its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
【点睛】[高分句型1] One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] By embracing sustainable practices, minimizing our carbon footprint, and advocating for environmentally responsible policies, we are bound to pave the way for a sustainable future. (运用了动名词作宾语)
13.假设你是晨光中学的李津。在某英语学习论坛上,你看到一则关于“Healthy Screen Time”的讨论,帖子里还附上了下方关于学生周末屏幕使用时间的调查图表。请你跟帖,根据图表信息,表达你的看法。
内容包括:
1.描述图表反映的主要现象;
2.分析过度屏幕娱乐可能带来的问题;
3.提出一到两条合理使用屏幕的建议。
注意:
1.词数不少于100
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯
Finding Balance in a Digital World
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【答案】Finding Balance in a Digital World
I’m Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School. After looking at the pie chart, I’d like to share my opinions on healthy screen time.
The chart shows how students spend screen time on weekends. Entertainment like games and videos takes up 45%, the largest part. Social media accounts for 30%, while learning only makes up 20%. Other uses take merely 5%. Clearly, most students waste most screen time on fun instead of study.
Too much screen entertainment causes lots of problems. It harms our eyes and ruins our sleep. Worse still, it takes up time for outdoor exercise and face-to-face communication, making us weak and less sociable.
To solve this, we should set strict time limits for entertainment. Besides, we can combine screen time with online learning to make screens serve our growth. Only in this way can we keep a healthy digital lifestyle.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生对于你在某英语学习论坛上,看到一则关于“Healthy Screen Time”的讨论,帖子里还附上了下方关于学生周末屏幕使用时间的调查图表这一情况,根据图表信息,表达你的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
看法,观点:opinions→ perspectives
显然:Clearly→ Obviously
解决:solve→ tackle
保持:keep→ maintain
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Too much screen entertainment causes lots of problems. It harms our eyes and ruins our sleep.
合并句:Too much screen entertainment causes lots of problems, which harms our eyes and ruins our sleep.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Worse still, it takes up time for outdoor exercise and face-to-face communication, making us weak and less sociable.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can we keep a healthy digital lifestyle.(运用了Only+介词短语位于句首的部分倒装结构)
14.你的家乡新建了一片向日葵观光园,计划制作英文短视频向外国游客宣传,助力乡村振兴。请你为视频写一篇英文文案,内容包括:
1.介绍向日葵园的特色与风光;
2.邀请外国游客前来打卡体验,助力家乡发展。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
A newly-built sunflower sightseeing garden has emerged in my hometown, which is a real visual feast. Stretching as far as the eye can see, countless sunflowers stand tall, their golden petals shining brightly in the sun, creating a sea of vibrant color.
Here, you can stroll along the winding paths, breathing in the fresh air filled with the faint fragrance of sunflowers. There are also local snacks and handicrafts for you to explore.
Dear foreign friends, come and experience this idyllic beauty! Your visit will surely contribute to the development of my hometown.
【导语】本文是为宣传家乡新建向日葵观光园而写的英文短视频文案,目的是向外国游客介绍观光园并邀请他们前来,助力乡村振兴。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
确定地:surely→certainly
无数的:countless→numerous
漫步:stroll→wander
有助于:contribute to→be conducive to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:There are also local snacks and handicrafts for you to explore.
拓展句:It is available that you can explore local snacks and handicrafts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】A newly-built sunflower sightseeing garden has emerged in my hometown, which is a real visual feast.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Stretching as far as the eye can see, countless sunflowers stand tall, their golden petals shining brightly in the sun, creating a sea of vibrant color.(现在分词短语Stretching as far as the eye can see作状语;their golden petals shining brightly in the sun为独立主格结构;creating a sea of vibrant color为现在分词作结果状语)
15.假定你是李华,你校微信视频号打算制作一期主题为“生命在于运动”的英文视频。请你为该视频写一份文案,内容包括:
1. 运动的重要性;
2. 呼吁大家运动起来。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
Exercise is of great importance for our lives. It can bring us a great many benefits. As we all know, regular exercise can keep our body in good condition. For example, it not only strengthens our muscles but also improves our flexibility. What’s more, it has a positive impact on our mental health. When we exercise, our body releases endorphins, which can relieve stress and make us feel happy. It can also enhance our self-confidence as we achieve fitness goals.
Let’s take action immediately. Whether it’s jogging in the park, dancing in the studio or playing sports on the field, every form of exercise counts. Embrace exercise and enjoy a more energetic and healthy life!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给校微信视频号打算制作的英文视频写一份文案,需详细说明运动的重要性,再呼吁大家运动起来。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
减轻:relieve→reduce, alleviate
实现:achieve→realize, fulfill
采取行动:take action→act, make a move
重要:count→matter, weigh
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Exercise is of great importance for our lives. It can bring us a great many benefits.
拓展句:Exercise is of great importance for our lives because it can bring us a great many benefits.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, regular exercise can keep our body in good condition. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] When we exercise, our body releases endorphins, which can relieve stress and make us feel happy. (运用了when引导时间状语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Whether it’s jogging in the park, dancing in the studio or playing sports on the field, every form of exercise counts. (运用了whether… or…引导让步状语从句)
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专题02 写作综合训练二(新媒体类与通知报道)
1.假定你是学生会主席李华。为了通过短视频展示家庭的爱与温暖,你校学生会将于5月10日至5月30日开展主题为“我爱我家”(I Love My Family)短视频比赛(Short Video Contest),请用英语拟一份书面活动通知,内容包括:
(1) 活动介绍(目的、主题、时间);
(2) 拍摄内容(围绕“我爱我家”主题,展现家庭生活);
(3) 参赛要求(不超过10分钟、原创);
(4) 其它要求:5月25日前交到Students’ Union@163.com
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总次数。
NOTICE
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Students’ Union
2.假设你是晨光中学的李津,你校近期举办了“航天科技主题展”(Aerospace Technology Exhibition),通过图片和视频等多种方式,展示了中国航天事业的飞速发展和伟大成就。请你以“Reaching for the Stars”为题,为学校公众号英文栏目写一篇活动报道。
内容提示:
(1)主题展的主要内容(天宫空间站建设、月球探测成果、航天工作者贡献等);
(2)师生们对展览活动的反响;
(3)你参观展览后的感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:月球探测 lunar exploration;自主创新 independent innovation
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3.假定你是校英文报记者李华,为引导学生了解中国历史,培养爱国情怀,你校上周举办了主题为“溯史寻踪,礼敬千秋”(Trace History, Honor Ages)的历史文化节。请你给校英文报写一篇活动报道,具体内容包括:
1.活动过程(至少三个环节) ;
2.师生反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:patriotism爱国主义
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4.Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着 AI 作业助手 (AI homework assistants) 的普及,越来越多中学生开始用它们完成作业、解答难题。有人认为这类工具能帮学生高效解决学习难点,节省时间;也有人担心过度依赖会削弱学生的独立思考能力和解题能力。假设你是高中生李华,在校园论坛上看到相关讨论,决定回帖表达你的看法。回帖内容应包括:
1.你对中学生使用 AI 作业助手的态度;
2.你的理由(至少两点)。
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5.学校英文论坛发起关于“Healthy Campus Life”的讨论,假如你是李华,请你针对现在学生当中普遍存在的用眼过度这一问题,结合自身经历和观察跟帖参与讨论,内容包括:
(1)陈述看法;(2)分析影响;(3)提出建议。
参考词汇:eye strain 眼疲劳
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Li Hua
Nowadays, it is common that many students suffer from eye strain ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.近几年,越来越多的外国学生到中国留学。你校英语论坛正在就“中国成为热门留学目的地”这一现象进行讨论,请你写一篇英文帖子,表达自己的观点。
内容包括:
1、描述现象;
2、表达自己的观点及理由。
注意:词数100词左右。
China—a Hot Destination for Studying Abroad
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7.假定你是李华,在某国际论坛上看到一个英文帖子“Suppose you are 50 years old, what advice would you give to the present self?”,请你结合“健康生活习惯”、“志存高远”等话题用英文回复一下该帖子。内容包括:
1. 提供建议;
2. 阐述理由;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
What advice would you give to the present self?
Hello, younger me!
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From 50-year-old Li Hua
8.春节将至,你最近浏览某英语论坛时注意到关于“云过节”的热烈讨论。请就此话题回帖,内容包括:
1. 发表看法;
2. 阐明理由。
注意:词数100词左右。
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9.假定你是李华,某英语网站正在讨论对“The man who has made up his mind to win will never say ‘impossible’.”的理解。你打算跟帖参与讨论,内容包括:
1. 你对此的理解;
2. 结合具体实例;
3. 你的启发与感悟。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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10.假设你是晨光中学的高三学生李津。为了弘扬中国传统文化,你校英语俱乐部在学校网站论坛上举办《论语大家谈》专题讨论,你欲发帖。请你从以下三章论语中选择一章翻译成英语,进行分析,并举例说明。
(1)子曰:“知之者不如好之者,好之者不如乐之者。”
(2)子曰:“三人行,必有我师焉。则其善者而从之,其不善者而改之。”
(3)子曰:“温故而知新,可以为师矣。”
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当增加细节。以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:《论语》the Analects of Confucius
Topic: Discussion on the chapters of Analects of Confucius
Posted by Li Jin
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11.Directions: Write an English composition in at least 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高一学生王华,你在某英语论坛上看到一个求助帖,请根据帖子内容写一篇回帖,给出你的建议和理由。
I’ve planned a family trip carefully, hoping to create cherished memories with my 16-year-old child. I’ve selected destinations rich in cultural heritage(遗产)and natural beauty. However, during the trip, my son John spends an overwhelming amount of time on the phone, barely paying attention to the wonderful sights around. I’m worried this constant phone use is ruining the travel experience and preventing us from bonding(情感联系). What should I do?
—A worried parent travelling in Xi’an, China
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12.4月22日为世界地球日。你在某国际网站上看到下面两张图片。请你用英语在留言板上发一个帖子,内容包括:
1. 图片简介
2. 个人感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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13.假设你是晨光中学的李津。在某英语学习论坛上,你看到一则关于“Healthy Screen Time”的讨论,帖子里还附上了下方关于学生周末屏幕使用时间的调查图表。请你跟帖,根据图表信息,表达你的看法。
内容包括:
1.描述图表反映的主要现象;
2.分析过度屏幕娱乐可能带来的问题;
3.提出一到两条合理使用屏幕的建议。
注意:
1.词数不少于100
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯
Finding Balance in a Digital World
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14.你的家乡新建了一片向日葵观光园,计划制作英文短视频向外国游客宣传,助力乡村振兴。请你为视频写一篇英文文案,内容包括:
1.介绍向日葵园的特色与风光;
2.邀请外国游客前来打卡体验,助力家乡发展。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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15.假定你是李华,你校微信视频号打算制作一期主题为“生命在于运动”的英文视频。请你为该视频写一份文案,内容包括:
1. 运动的重要性;
2. 呼吁大家运动起来。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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专题02 写作综合训练二(新媒体类与通知报道)
1.假定你是学生会主席李华。为了通过短视频展示家庭的爱与温暖,你校学生会将于5月10日至5月30日开展主题为“我爱我家”(I Love My Family)短视频比赛(Short Video Contest),请用英语拟一份书面活动通知,内容包括:
(1) 活动介绍(目的、主题、时间);
(2) 拍摄内容(围绕“我爱我家”主题,展现家庭生活);
(3) 参赛要求(不超过10分钟、原创);
(4) 其它要求:5月25日前交到Students’ Union@163.com
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总次数。
NOTICE
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Students’ Union
【答案】
【范文1】
NOTICE
As scheduled, a Short Video Contest themed “I Love My Family” will be held by our school from May 10 to May 30 so as to raise the students’ awareness of showing gratitude to their family.
Here are some relevant details. First and foremost, what calls for special attention is that you are supposed to film heartwarming daily activities or family traditions, which is of great importance. Besides, it has to be noticed that your video should be no longer than 10 minutes and must be original. More significantly, I would like to attach great necessity to the point that please submit your work to Students’ Union@163.com before May 25.
By taking part in the contest, not only will we record our daily life but also it will strengthen our sense of responsibility. Welcome your participation!
Students’ Union
【范文2】
NOTICE
To capture and share the touching moments of family life and foster a deeper appreciation for family bonds, the Students’ Union is going to hold a Short Video Contest with the theme of “I Love My Family” running from May 10th to May 30th.
The competition invites you to submit original short videos that capture the spirit of family life. You may film heartwarming daily interactions, family traditions, joyful gatherings, or even challenges overcome together. Your video entry should be no longer than 10 minutes. Submit your work to Students’ Union@163.com by May 25th.
Don’t miss this chance to share your family's story and inspire others with its warmth! For more details, contact us at the Students’ Union. Welcome your participation!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于通知。要求考生用英语拟一份书面通知,介绍学校学生会将于5月10日至30日开展的主题为“我爱我家”的短视频比赛活动,说明拍摄内容、参赛要求和其它要求。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
提高:raise→improve
重要:importance→significance
意识:awareness→sense
增强、加强:strengthen→enhance
2. 句式拓展:
同义句转换:
原句:As scheduled, a Short Video Contest themed “I Love My Family” will be held by our school from May 10 to May 30 so as to raise the students’ awareness of showing gratitude to their family.
拓展句:As scheduled, a Short Video Contest whose theme is “I Love My Family” will be held by our school from May 10 to May 30 so as to raise the students’ awareness of showing gratitude to their family.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First and foremost, what calls for special attention is that you are supposed to film heartwarming daily activities or family traditions, which is of great importance. (运用了以连接代词what引导的主语从句和连接词that引导的表语从句,以及关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, it has to be noticed that your video should be no longer than 10 minutes and must be original. (运用了it作形式主语,连接词that引导的主语从句)
2.假设你是晨光中学的李津,你校近期举办了“航天科技主题展”(Aerospace Technology Exhibition),通过图片和视频等多种方式,展示了中国航天事业的飞速发展和伟大成就。请你以“Reaching for the Stars”为题,为学校公众号英文栏目写一篇活动报道。
内容提示:
(1)主题展的主要内容(天宫空间站建设、月球探测成果、航天工作者贡献等);
(2)师生们对展览活动的反响;
(3)你参观展览后的感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:月球探测 lunar exploration;自主创新 independent innovation
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【答案】One possible version:
Reaching for the Stars
Our school recently held an Aerospace Technology Exhibition, showcasing China’s remarkable achievements in space exploration. The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, highlighting its construction and scientific missions. Visitors also learned about lunar exploration, including the Chang’e missions, and the dedication of Chinese aerospace scientists through independent innovation.
Both teachers and students were deeply impressed. Many said they felt proud of China’s rapid progress in space technology. Some students even expressed interest in pursuing careers in aerospace after seeing the inspiring stories of scientists and astronauts.
Personally, I was amazed by how far China has come in space exploration. The exhibition not only broadened my knowledge but also strengthened my belief that with hard work and creativity, we can achieve even greater milestones in the future.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生以“Reaching for the Stars”为题,为学校公众号英文栏目写一篇活动报道,报道学校近期举办的“航天科技主题展”(Aerospace Technology Exhibition)的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold →host
成就:achievement →accomplishment
强调:highlight →emphasize
以……为骄傲:feel proud of →take pride in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, highlighting its construction and scientific missions.
拓展句:The exhibition featured stunning images and videos of the Tiangong Space Station, which highlighted its construction and scientific missions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Personally, I was amazed by how far China has come in space exploration. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The exhibition not only broadened my knowledge but also strengthened my belief that with hard work and creativity, we can achieve even greater milestones in the future.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
3.假定你是校英文报记者李华,为引导学生了解中国历史,培养爱国情怀,你校上周举办了主题为“溯史寻踪,礼敬千秋”(Trace History, Honor Ages)的历史文化节。请你给校英文报写一篇活动报道,具体内容包括:
1.活动过程(至少三个环节) ;
2.师生反响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:patriotism爱国主义
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【答案】Trace History, Honor Ages
To enrich students’ knowledge of Chinese history and cultivate noble patriotism among teenagers, our school successfully held a grand History and Culture Festival themed "Trace History, Honor Ages" last week.
The festival consisted of three activities. First, our school invited professional historians, who specialize in Chinese history and ancient civilizations, to deliver a vivid lecture covering traditional Chinese history and splendid ancient civilizations. Then, an exciting history knowledge competition was held to test students’ learning outcomes. Finally, talented students put on fantastic traditional cultural shows, bringing history to life.
The activity received high praise from the whole school. All students gained deeper insights into our profound history and traditional culture.
【导语】本文要求考生以校英文报记者的身份,报道学校举办的主题为“溯史寻踪,礼敬千秋”的历史文化节
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold → host
由……组成:consist of → be made up of
传统的:traditional → conventional
培养:cultivate→foster
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The activity received high praise from the whole school.
拓展句:The activity which received high praise from the whole school was a great success.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, our school invited professional historians, who specialize in Chinese history and ancient civilizations, to deliver a vivid lecture covering traditional Chinese history and splendid ancient civilizations.(使用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Finally, talented students put on fantastic traditional cultural shows, bringing history to life.(使用了现在分词作伴随状语)
4.Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着 AI 作业助手 (AI homework assistants) 的普及,越来越多中学生开始用它们完成作业、解答难题。有人认为这类工具能帮学生高效解决学习难点,节省时间;也有人担心过度依赖会削弱学生的独立思考能力和解题能力。假设你是高中生李华,在校园论坛上看到相关讨论,决定回帖表达你的看法。回帖内容应包括:
1.你对中学生使用 AI 作业助手的态度;
2.你的理由(至少两点)。
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【答案】 Nowadays, AI homework assistants are widely used among middle school students, causing heated debates online. As Li Hua, I hold the view that we should use such AI tools wisely rather than rely on them blindly.
For one thing, AI assistants can effectively help us tackle difficult problems and clear up learning confusion. They offer detailed explanations, saving us much time spent thinking alone. For another, excessive dependence will do great harm to us. If we copy answers directly, we will gradually lose the ability of independent thinking and problem-solving, which is essential for our long-term study.
In short, AI is just a useful helper. We should think independently first and turn to it only when necessary. Only in this way can we make progress in our studies.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生对于随着 AI 作业助手 (AI homework assistants) 的普及,越来越多中学生开始用它们完成作业、解答难题。有人认为这类工具能帮学生高效解决学习难点,节省时间;也有人担心过度依赖会削弱学生的独立思考能力和解题能力这一情况,表达你的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激烈的:heated → intense
明智地:wisely → advisably
解决:tackle → solve
至关重要的:essential → crucial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For one thing, AI assistants can effectively help us tackle difficult problems and clear up learning confusion.
拓展句:For one thing, AI assistants can operate efficiently so that they can help us tackle difficult problems and clear up learning confusion.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If we copy answers directly, we will gradually lose the ability of independent thinking and problem-solving, which is essential for our long-term study.(运用了If引导的条件状语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Nowadays, AI homework assistants are widely used among middle school students, causing heated debates online.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语)
5.学校英文论坛发起关于“Healthy Campus Life”的讨论,假如你是李华,请你针对现在学生当中普遍存在的用眼过度这一问题,结合自身经历和观察跟帖参与讨论,内容包括:
(1)陈述看法;(2)分析影响;(3)提出建议。
参考词汇:eye strain 眼疲劳
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Li Hua
Nowadays, it is common that many students suffer from eye strain ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文:
Dear fellow students,
Nowadays, it is common that many students suffer from eye strain, They overuse their eyes due to long hours of studying or using digital devices. Last term, I often stayed up late using my tablet to finish homework, which left me with severe eye strain.
This problem not only damages our eyesight but also lowers our concentration in class. Worse still, it could even lead to potential long-term eye conditions.
To address this, we should take regular breaks during study, such as following the 20-20-20 rule: every 20 minutes, look at something 20 feet away for 20 seconds and keep doing eye exercises daily. Outdoor activities also count. Let’s work together to protect our eyes for a healthier campus life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于论坛跟帖,要求考生以李华的身份,针对学校英文论坛“Healthy Campus Life”讨论中,学生普遍用眼过度的问题,结合自身经历和观察,陈述看法、分析影响并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
保护:protect → preserve
由于:due to → owing to
导致:lead to→result in
潜在的:potential → latent
2. 句式拓展
同义句
原句:Last term, I often stayed up late using my tablet to finish homework, which left me with severe eye strain.
拓展句:Last term, because I had a lot of homework, I often stayed up late using my tablet to finish it, which left me with severe eye strain.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays, it is common that many students suffer from eye strain.(it作形式主语,that引导真正的主语从句)
【高分句型2】Last term, I often stayed up late using my tablet to finish homework, which left me with severe eye strain.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
6.近几年,越来越多的外国学生到中国留学。你校英语论坛正在就“中国成为热门留学目的地”这一现象进行讨论,请你写一篇英文帖子,表达自己的观点。
内容包括:
1、描述现象;
2、表达自己的观点及理由。
注意:词数100词左右。
China—a Hot Destination for Studying Abroad
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【答案】One possible version:
China—a Hot Destination for Studying Abroad
In recent years, an obvious trend has emerged—more and more foreign students are choosing to study in China. In my opinion, it’s a clear indication of China’s appeal as a destination for higher education and increasing global influence.
For many foreign students, the appeal of China is various. The rich cultural heritage, dynamic economy, and world-class education system all contribute to making China an attractive destination for studying abroad. Moreover, China’s position as a global leader in several fields, especially technology and research, gives students the unique opportunity to gain hands-on experience and skills that are highly valued in today’s job market.
In conclusion, I believe that this rise in popularity will continue as more foreign students discover the many benefits of studying in China.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文,要求考生描述“中国成为热门留学目的地”这一现象,并且表达自己的观点及理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
明显的:obvious→evident
吸引力:appeal→attraction
机会:opportunity→chance
重视:value→attach importance to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句:The rich cultural heritage, dynamic economy, and world-class education system all contribute to making China an attractive destination for studying abroad.
拓展句:It is the rich cultural heritage, dynamic economy, and world-class education system that all contribute to making China an attractive destination for studying abroad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Moreover, China’s position as a global leader in several fields, especially technology and research, gives students the unique opportunity to gain hands-on experience and skills that are highly valued in today’s job market.(使用了不定式作后置定语、that引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】In conclusion, I believe that this rise in popularity will continue as more foreign students discover the many benefits of studying in China. (使用了that引导宾语从句、as引导时间状语从句、动名词作宾语)
7.假定你是李华,在某国际论坛上看到一个英文帖子“Suppose you are 50 years old, what advice would you give to the present self?”,请你结合“健康生活习惯”、“志存高远”等话题用英文回复一下该帖子。内容包括:
1. 提供建议;
2. 阐述理由;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
What advice would you give to the present self?
Hello, younger me!
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From 50-year-old Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
What advice would you give to the present self?
Hello, younger me! My advice to you is to dream bigger and study harder.
As a teenager burdened with endless work, you may think little about what you can do in the future. An ideal goal-setting is of great importance, for a person without a goal is like a machine without a motor. With that big dream in mind, you’ll find yourself absorbed in study, which seems to be exceptionally interesting and charming. When confronted with unsatisfying marks, just have faith in yourself and study even harder and you will definitely be the best of whatever you are.
Younger me, dream bigger and you are bound to fly higher!
From 50-year-old Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇开放作文,要求考生结合“健康生活习惯”、“志存高远”等话题用英文回复某国际论坛上的一个英文帖子“Suppose you are 50 years old, what advice would you give to the present self ?”
【详解】1.词汇积累
负担着:be burdened with → be loaded with
重要的:be important→ be of great importance
专心于:be lost in → be absorbed in
面对:be faced with→ be confronted with
2.句式拓展
原句:With that big dream in mind, you’ll find yourself absorbed in study. It seems to be exceptionally interesting and charming.
拓展句:With that big dream in mind, you’ll find yourself absorbed in study, which seems to be exceptionally interesting and charming.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a teenager burdened with endless work, you may think little about what you can do in the future.(过去分词作后置定语和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】When confronted with unsatisfying marks, just have faith in yourself and study even harder and you will definitely be the best of whatever you are.(状语从句中的省略)
8.春节将至,你最近浏览某英语论坛时注意到关于“云过节”的热烈讨论。请就此话题回帖,内容包括:
1. 发表看法;
2. 阐明理由。
注意:词数100词左右。
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Personally, I find it to be a practical solution. As a student studying abroad, I often rely on virtual celebrations to stay connected with my family...(more)
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I understand the convenience factor, but I value face-to-face gatherings more, as nothing can replace the joy and warmth that come from being physically present with loved ones (more)
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【答案】 For me, celebrating festivals online is one of the best things technology brings to us.
Firstly, online celebration helps us maintain connection when distance keeps us away. When face-to-face gathering is not possible, video chat enables us to see and hear our beloved ones. Last Lantern Festival, while Dad was on a business trip in Yunnan, it didn't stop Mom and I from connecting with him. Through video chat, we cooked and had dinner together. Despite the three thousand kilometers between us, we felt close as if we were sitting next to each other in our dining room.
Secondly, we can explore more fun and diverse ways to celebrate traditional festivals online. For example, putting on VR headset, we can visit themed exhibitions, watch online performances, and even play games to learn more about the festival. The 3D virtual environment gives us a unique festival experience.
Online celebration breaks down the barrier of time and space, bringing people closer and enriching our festival experience. So why not embrace it?
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就英语论坛上“云过节”的话题进行回帖,发表自己的观点并阐明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
阻止某人做某事:stop sb. from doing→prevent sb. from doing
尽管:despite→in spite of
各种各样的:diverse→various
戴上:put on→wear
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Online celebration breaks down the barrier of time and space, bringing people closer and enriching our festival experience.
拓展句: Online celebration breaks down the barrier of time and space, which brings people closer and enrich our festival experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】For me, celebrating festivals online is one of the best things technology brings to us.(运用了动名词作主语,省略that的定语从句)
【高分句型2】When face-to-face gathering is not possible, video chat enables us to see and hear our beloved ones.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
9.假定你是李华,某英语网站正在讨论对“The man who has made up his mind to win will never say ‘impossible’.”的理解。你打算跟帖参与讨论,内容包括:
1. 你对此的理解;
2. 结合具体实例;
3. 你的启发与感悟。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
This quote highlights the importance of determination and devotion. To me, a strong willpower is what it takes to accomplish anything difficult.
This is apparently true to Tu Youyou. Faced with the challenges to find a cure for malaria, she encountered numerous obstacles. However, she made up her mind to settle the problem instead of acknowledging defeat. After endless attempts, she led her team to discover artemisinin and win the battle against malaria, saving hundreds of thousands of people’s lives.
Overall, I’m inspired by Tu Youyou and her team. Their contribution demonstrates that in time of difficulties, we are supposed to spare no effort to win. Hopefully, we can turn “impossible” into “I’m possible”.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就某英语网站正在讨论的“The man who has made up his mind to win will never say ‘impossible’”话题跟帖参与讨论并谈谈自己的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
突出,强调:stress →highlight
明显地:obviously → apparently
证明:show → demonstrate
完成:complete →accomplish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Faced with the challenges to find a cure for malaria, she encountered numerous obstacles.
拓展句:When she was faced with the challenges to find a cure for malaria, she encountered numerous obstacles.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To me, a strong willpower is what it takes to accomplish anything difficult.(运用了what引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Their contribution demonstrates that in time of difficulties, we are supposed to spare no effort to win.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
10.假设你是晨光中学的高三学生李津。为了弘扬中国传统文化,你校英语俱乐部在学校网站论坛上举办《论语大家谈》专题讨论,你欲发帖。请你从以下三章论语中选择一章翻译成英语,进行分析,并举例说明。
(1)子曰:“知之者不如好之者,好之者不如乐之者。”
(2)子曰:“三人行,必有我师焉。则其善者而从之,其不善者而改之。”
(3)子曰:“温故而知新,可以为师矣。”
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当增加细节。以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:《论语》the Analects of Confucius
Topic: Discussion on the chapters of Analects of Confucius
Posted by Li Jin
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【答案】范文
I would like to select the chapter from the “Analects of Confucius” which says: “The one who knows it is not as good as the one who loves it, and the one who loves it is not as good as the one who finds joy in it.” This chapter truly expresses the importance of enthusiasm and joy in acquiring knowledge. Not only should we be knowledgeable, but we should also have a deep appreciation and love for that knowledge. When we find joy in what we learn, we become more interested in pursuing it, and thus more successful in our studies.
For example, when I first started learning English, I found it difficult and boring. However, as I continued to practice and immerse myself in the language, I started to appreciate its beauty and the opportunities it opened up. Now, I find myself enjoying English classes and looking forward to improving my skills.
This chapter of the “Analects of Confucius” is a powerful reminder to always maintain a positive and interested mindset towards learning. By doing so, we can find joy in our studies and truly excel in them.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学的高三学生李津。为了弘扬中国传统文化,你校英语俱乐部在学校网站论坛上举办《论语大家谈》专题讨论,你欲发帖。请你从以下三章论语中选择一章翻译成英语,进行分析,并举例说明。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要:would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
选择:select→choose
表达:express→convey
快乐:joy→happiness
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Now, I find myself enjoying English classes and looking forward to improving my skills.
拓展句:Now, not only do I find myself enjoying English classes, but also I look forward to improving my skills.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only should we be knowledgeable, but we should also have a deep appreciation and love for that knowledge. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] When we find joy in what we learn, we become more interested in pursuing it, and thus more successful in our studies. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
11.Directions: Write an English composition in at least 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高一学生王华,你在某英语论坛上看到一个求助帖,请根据帖子内容写一篇回帖,给出你的建议和理由。
I’ve planned a family trip carefully, hoping to create cherished memories with my 16-year-old child. I’ve selected destinations rich in cultural heritage(遗产)and natural beauty. However, during the trip, my son John spends an overwhelming amount of time on the phone, barely paying attention to the wonderful sights around. I’m worried this constant phone use is ruining the travel experience and preventing us from bonding(情感联系). What should I do?
—A worried parent travelling in Xi’an, China
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【答案】
I understand your concern about your son John’s excessive phone use during your family trip in Xi’an. Here are some suggestions that might help.
Firstly, try to have an open conversation with John. Explain how much effort you’ve put into planning this trip, which is aimed at creating cherished memories for the whole family. You could say something like, “I’ve chosen these destinations because they are rich in cultural heritage and natural beauty, and I really want us to enjoy them together.” Secondly, set some phone-free time during the trip. For example, you could decide that during meals or when visiting certain attractions, phones should be put away. This way, John will have no choice but to focus on the present moment and the people around him. Lastly, involve John in the planning process for future trips. Ask him what kind of activities or destinations he would enjoy. This will make him feel more included and excited about the trip, reducing his need to rely on his phone for entertainment.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful, and I wish you a wonderful family trip!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对一位在西安旅行的家长在论坛上的求助帖,就其16岁儿子旅行中过度使用手机的问题给出建议和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心:concern → worry
建议:suggestion → advice
帮助:help → assist
专注于:focus on → concentrate on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I understand your concern about your son John’s excessive phone use during your family trip in Xi’an.
拓展句:I understand your concern, which is about your son John’s excessive phone use during your family trip in Xi’an.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here are some suggestions that might help.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Explain how much effort you’ve put into planning this trip, which is aimed at creating cherished memories for the whole family.(运用了how much引导的宾语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12.4月22日为世界地球日。你在某国际网站上看到下面两张图片。请你用英语在留言板上发一个帖子,内容包括:
1. 图片简介
2. 个人感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文:
On World Earth Day, I came across two powerful images on an international website. One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
The powerful images set me thinking. Obviously, the planet’s tears symbolize the harm caused by human activities, such as deforestation, pollution, and climate change. Yet, our generous Earth, the ultimate giver of gifts, makes us feel guilty for not fully appreciating and safeguarding its generosity. These images awakens a sense of guilt and an urgent need to protect the earth.
It’s high time that we banded together to preserve and restore our Earth. By embracing sustainable practices, minimizing our carbon footprint, and advocating for environmentally responsible policies, we are bound to pave the way for a sustainable future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生根据图片内容写一个关于地球日的帖子。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
显然:obviously→apparently
紧急的:urgent→pressing
遇到:come across→encounter with
表达:express→extend
2. 句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
拓展句:One portrays our planet shedding tears, which expresses its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
【点睛】[高分句型1] One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] By embracing sustainable practices, minimizing our carbon footprint, and advocating for environmentally responsible policies, we are bound to pave the way for a sustainable future. (运用了动名词作宾语)
13.假设你是晨光中学的李津。在某英语学习论坛上,你看到一则关于“Healthy Screen Time”的讨论,帖子里还附上了下方关于学生周末屏幕使用时间的调查图表。请你跟帖,根据图表信息,表达你的看法。
内容包括:
1.描述图表反映的主要现象;
2.分析过度屏幕娱乐可能带来的问题;
3.提出一到两条合理使用屏幕的建议。
注意:
1.词数不少于100
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯
Finding Balance in a Digital World
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【答案】Finding Balance in a Digital World
I’m Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School. After looking at the pie chart, I’d like to share my opinions on healthy screen time.
The chart shows how students spend screen time on weekends. Entertainment like games and videos takes up 45%, the largest part. Social media accounts for 30%, while learning only makes up 20%. Other uses take merely 5%. Clearly, most students waste most screen time on fun instead of study.
Too much screen entertainment causes lots of problems. It harms our eyes and ruins our sleep. Worse still, it takes up time for outdoor exercise and face-to-face communication, making us weak and less sociable.
To solve this, we should set strict time limits for entertainment. Besides, we can combine screen time with online learning to make screens serve our growth. Only in this way can we keep a healthy digital lifestyle.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生对于你在某英语学习论坛上,看到一则关于“Healthy Screen Time”的讨论,帖子里还附上了下方关于学生周末屏幕使用时间的调查图表这一情况,根据图表信息,表达你的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
看法,观点:opinions→ perspectives
显然:Clearly→ Obviously
解决:solve→ tackle
保持:keep→ maintain
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Too much screen entertainment causes lots of problems. It harms our eyes and ruins our sleep.
合并句:Too much screen entertainment causes lots of problems, which harms our eyes and ruins our sleep.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Worse still, it takes up time for outdoor exercise and face-to-face communication, making us weak and less sociable.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can we keep a healthy digital lifestyle.(运用了Only+介词短语位于句首的部分倒装结构)
14.你的家乡新建了一片向日葵观光园,计划制作英文短视频向外国游客宣传,助力乡村振兴。请你为视频写一篇英文文案,内容包括:
1.介绍向日葵园的特色与风光;
2.邀请外国游客前来打卡体验,助力家乡发展。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
A newly-built sunflower sightseeing garden has emerged in my hometown, which is a real visual feast. Stretching as far as the eye can see, countless sunflowers stand tall, their golden petals shining brightly in the sun, creating a sea of vibrant color.
Here, you can stroll along the winding paths, breathing in the fresh air filled with the faint fragrance of sunflowers. There are also local snacks and handicrafts for you to explore.
Dear foreign friends, come and experience this idyllic beauty! Your visit will surely contribute to the development of my hometown.
【导语】本文是为宣传家乡新建向日葵观光园而写的英文短视频文案,目的是向外国游客介绍观光园并邀请他们前来,助力乡村振兴。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
确定地:surely→certainly
无数的:countless→numerous
漫步:stroll→wander
有助于:contribute to→be conducive to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:There are also local snacks and handicrafts for you to explore.
拓展句:It is available that you can explore local snacks and handicrafts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】A newly-built sunflower sightseeing garden has emerged in my hometown, which is a real visual feast.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Stretching as far as the eye can see, countless sunflowers stand tall, their golden petals shining brightly in the sun, creating a sea of vibrant color.(现在分词短语Stretching as far as the eye can see作状语;their golden petals shining brightly in the sun为独立主格结构;creating a sea of vibrant color为现在分词作结果状语)
15.假定你是李华,你校微信视频号打算制作一期主题为“生命在于运动”的英文视频。请你为该视频写一份文案,内容包括:
1. 运动的重要性;
2. 呼吁大家运动起来。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
Exercise is of great importance for our lives. It can bring us a great many benefits. As we all know, regular exercise can keep our body in good condition. For example, it not only strengthens our muscles but also improves our flexibility. What’s more, it has a positive impact on our mental health. When we exercise, our body releases endorphins, which can relieve stress and make us feel happy. It can also enhance our self-confidence as we achieve fitness goals.
Let’s take action immediately. Whether it’s jogging in the park, dancing in the studio or playing sports on the field, every form of exercise counts. Embrace exercise and enjoy a more energetic and healthy life!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给校微信视频号打算制作的英文视频写一份文案,需详细说明运动的重要性,再呼吁大家运动起来。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
减轻:relieve→reduce, alleviate
实现:achieve→realize, fulfill
采取行动:take action→act, make a move
重要:count→matter, weigh
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Exercise is of great importance for our lives. It can bring us a great many benefits.
拓展句:Exercise is of great importance for our lives because it can bring us a great many benefits.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, regular exercise can keep our body in good condition. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] When we exercise, our body releases endorphins, which can relieve stress and make us feel happy. (运用了when引导时间状语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Whether it’s jogging in the park, dancing in the studio or playing sports on the field, every form of exercise counts. (运用了whether… or…引导让步状语从句)
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