Unit1 Great people写作专项讲 2026-2027学年沪教版九年级英语上册

沪教牛津英语九年级上册 Unit 1 Great people写作专项精讲 一、原题梳理 写作原题 Teen Life Magazine 开设专栏，刊登依靠学识、能力、思想推动社会进步的伟人稿件，请你写一篇介绍一位伟人的短文投稿。 写作分为三步：构思思维导图→正式行文→自查修改，可借助课本给出的句型完成作文，核心主题：An article about a great person（介绍一位伟人） 写作设问提纲（写作思考方向） 1. Who is he /she? 人物身份 2. What are his /her achievements? 主要成就 3. How did he /she become great? 成长经历 4. Why do people admire him /her? 世人评价 5. What personal qualities helped him /her succeed? 人物优秀品质 二、第一步：思维导图构思（以 屠呦呦 Tu Youyou 为例 ） 思维导图四项板块（直接整理写作素材） 1. Early life and background 早年生平与背景 Born in Ningbo in 1930, Tu Youyou graduated from Beijing Medical College. She devoted herself to traditional Chinese medicine research from her youth. 译文：屠呦呦 1930 年生于宁波，毕业于北京医学院，年少时便投身中医药研究。 2. Qualities 个人品质 persistent（坚持不懈的）, hard-working（勤勉刻苦的）, devoted（乐于奉献的）, selfless（无私的）, patient（富有耐心的） 3. Achievements and contributions 成就与社会贡献 She discovered artemisinin to cure malaria, saving millions of patients worldwide. She won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 2015 and became the first Chinese female Nobel laureate. 译文：她发现青蒿素，能够治疗疟疾，拯救全球数百万病患；2015 年斩获诺贝尔生理学或医学奖，是首位获得该奖项的中国女性。 4. People’s opinions on her 大众评价 People all over the world respect her. We feel proud that she makes traditional Chinese medicine known globally. She sets a good example for young researchers. 译文：全世界人民都敬重她，我们为她让中医药走向世界感到自豪，她为科研后辈树立榜样。 三、第二步：课本核心万能句型 课本给出的 5 个功能句式，按照行文顺序嵌入文章即可，逐个解析用法： 1. From a young age, he /she showed a strong interest in ... 自幼，他 / 她就对…… 抱有浓厚兴趣（用于开篇介绍早年经历） 2. Inspired by ..., he /she was fond of ... 受…… 的启发，他 / 她热衷于……（交代投身事业的缘由） 3. A significant milestone in his /her life was when ... 他人生中一个重要里程碑就是……（引出关键成就事件） 4. Through his /her hard work, he /she managed to ... 凭借不懈奋斗，他最终成功做到……（阐述奋斗过程与成果） 5. The impact of his /her contributions can still be seen in ... 时至今日，他做出的贡献依旧影响着……（结尾升华，评述历史价值） 额外补充本单元语法考点句式：形容词 + that 从句（本单元语法），作文内穿插 1~2 句，紧扣单元知识点，例如： · We are glad that Tu Youyou brought great benefits to humanity. · Many scientists are sure that artemisinin will keep helping people fight malaria. 4、 范文 版本 1 Tu Youyou, a Great Medical Researcher From a young age, Tu Youyou showed a strong interest in traditional Chinese medicine. Born in Ningbo in 1930, she received professional medical education in Beijing. Inspired by malaria sufferers, she spent her life on medical research. A significant milestone in her life was when she found artemisinin after tough experiments. Through her hard work, she managed to cure this terrible disease. I am proud that her discovery has saved millions of lives. She won the Nobel Prize in 2015. She is persistent and selfless. The impact of her contributions can still be seen in global medical care. She is a role model worthy of our respect. 版本 2 The Great Researcher Tu Youyou Tu Youyou is a famous Chinese scientist. From a young age, she showed deep interest in herbal medicine. Inspired by patients suffering from malaria, she decided to find an effective cure. A significant milestone in her life was her discovery of artemisinin. She failed many times but never gave up. Through her efforts, she brought hope to poor people around the world. We are surprised that she succeeded without advanced equipment. She became China’s first female Nobel Prize winner. Her devotion inspires teenagers today. Her contributions still benefit global health care. We should learn from her noble spirit. 五、第三步：自查修改四项标准（课本自检栏目，写完作文逐项核对） 1. ✅ 文章包含人物早年生平、主要贡献、大众评价三大板块（行文结构完整） 2. ✅ 使用合适形容词描述人物品质：persistent、devoted、selfless 等（塑造人物形象） 3. ✅ 运用本单元知识点：形容词 + that 从句、课本给出的固定句型（紧扣单元考点） 4. ✅ 单词拼写、语法、标点符号没有错误（规避基础扣分点） 六、写作行文思路拆解（四段式通用答题模板，所有伟人作文均可套用） 第一段：开篇引入 + 早年经历（使用前两个课本句型） 开门点明写作人物，简单介绍出生日期、教育背景，讲述其选择这份事业的初心。 第二段：核心奋斗历程 + 标志性成就（中间三个核心句型 + that 从句） 按照时间顺序写关键事件，写出奋斗的坎坷与最终成果，插入本单元语法句型，体现知识点掌握。 第三段：剖析人物品格 + 世人评价 提炼 2~3 个优秀品质，结合普通人的看法，解释为什么这位人物称得上伟人。 第四段：结尾升华主旨（最后一个课本句型收尾） 评述该人物长久的社会影响力，抒发个人感悟，表达向伟人学习的想法。 七、替换素材 素材 1：Lu Xun 鲁迅 1. 早年背景：Originally studying medicine, he hoped to cure sick Chinese people. 2. 转折点：He was sad that many Chinese people lacked spiritual awareness, so he chose to become a writer. 3. 成就：He wrote lots of great works to wake up ordinary people in old China. 4. 品质：determined, insightful 素材 2：Marie Curie 居里夫人 1. 早年：From a young age, she had deep interest in physics. 2. 成就：She discovered radium and won two Nobel Prizes. 3. 评价：People are surprised that she made huge achievements in male-dominated science field. 八、考场写作素材积累 （一）高分词组 1. devote oneself to sth. 投身于，致力于 2. overcome all difficulties 克服重重困难 3. stick to one’s dream 坚守梦想 4. make great contributions to society 为社会做出巨大贡献 5. set an inspiring example for us 为我们树立鼓舞人心的榜样 6. spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力做某事 （二）形容词 noble 高尚的；remarkable 卓越的；determined 意志坚定的；modest 谦逊的；extraordinary 不凡的 （三）英文谚语（适合放在首尾，提升文采） 1. No pains, no gains. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 2. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。 3. Diligence is the mother of good luck. 勤勉乃幸运之母。 4. Success belongs to the persevering. 成功属于坚持不懈的人。 （四）万能结尾句 1. We should learn from their spirit and try to realize our own dreams. 我们应当学习他们的精神，努力实现自己的梦想。 2. Their stories encourage us to move forward bravely in daily life. 他们的事迹激励我们在生活中奋勇前行。 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $