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第20讲：读后续写（二）+题型综合练+高考核心词汇进阶 内容导航 目录 内容 专题精选：读后续写 （情感线） 考点聚焦、情绪描写 要点01 情感驱动法的核心逻辑 要点02情绪描写语料库：（常用词汇与表达） 要点03实例展示：（情感驱动法的续写应用） 题型组合练 七选五+阅读理解议论文 高考核心词汇积累 WXYZ字母高考核心词汇 课堂精讲 前言：考情定位与教学目标 一、评分对标 一档高分核心标准：情感有完整递进链条，拒绝生硬跳转；阅卷老师重点查看情绪过渡细节，无缓冲直接从悲伤转开心直接扣 2–3 分。 情感驱动法是读后续写 “灵魂”，解决三大学生痛点： · 直白抒情泛滥（I was very happy / I felt extremely sad）； · 情绪无层次，转折突兀； · 情节空洞，文章没有感染力、无法升华主旨。 二、课时教学目标 · 吃透情感驱动法三大核心逻辑：情感锚定、以形传情、情感递进； · 掌握六大高频情绪全套素材（动作 + 神态 + 内心 + 环境烘托四维度）； · 学会 “原文抓情绪→选描写载体→搭建情绪转变链条” 三步万能写作法； · 掌握亲情 / 友情 / 成长类真题情感分层续写，写出无痕情绪过渡； · 积累万能情感升华结尾，适配所有主题，提升文章深度。 第一部分 理论精讲：情感驱动法三大核心逻辑 逻辑 1：情感锚定 —— 续写必须紧扣原文结尾基准情绪，不能凭空跳转 操作步骤：阅读原文划出心理、动作关键词，锁定初始情绪，续写前半段保留该情绪，不能立刻反转。 示例：原文结尾 “I felt a lump in my throat, watching my friend’s taxi drive away.” 关键词：a lump in throat → 锚定初始情绪：失落、不舍 扣分反面案例：续写第一句直接写 I became extremely happy，无任何过渡，情绪割裂，降档。 逻辑 2：以形传情 —— 拒绝直白心理句，四大载体侧面烘托情绪 四大描写载体（组合使用画面感最强）： 1. 肢体动作（动作链专题内容联动教学）； 2. 面部神态（眼神、嘴唇、脸色）； 3. 随身道具（手链、信件、礼物、宠物）； 4. 环境景物（风雨、阳光、落叶、黄昏）。 低分直白句：I was extremely sad after my best friend left. 高分载体融合句：My fingers clenched the friendship bracelet tightly, cold autumn wind swirling fallen dead leaves around my trembling feet. 逻辑 3：情感递进 —— 情绪必须分层转变，设置缓冲过渡环节 标准情绪转变通用链条（高考 90% 记叙文适用）： 负面基准情绪 → 内心挣扎缓冲 → 外部细节触发转机 → 情绪反转（释然 / 温暖 / 感动） 人际和解类固定逻辑链：僵持冷漠→愧疚挣扎→试探破冰→和解温暖 成长突破类固定逻辑链：恐惧自卑→犹豫退缩→微小尝试→自信释然 第二部分 全维度情绪素材库（六大高频情绪，四维度全覆盖） 1. 紧张 / 恐惧（考场、黑夜、迷路、危机场景高频） 维度 高分表达 动作 tremble all over, grip clothes tightly, freeze on the spot, wipe cold sweat repeatedly 神态 pale face, wide eyes, shaky voice, breathless 内心 My heart pounded wildly; I had butterflies in my stomach; Panic seized me completely 环境 howling wind, dark shadows, thunder cracking, dim flickering lamplight 2. 喜悦 / 惊喜 / 感动（礼物、重逢、善意、和解场景） 维度 高分表达 动作 skip forward, jump and cheer, hug tightly, clap hands wildly, spin around 神态 eyes sparkle with joy, a broad smile spreading across cheeks, tears of gratitude 内心 A wave of joy flooded my body; Warmth welled up inside me; A sense of relief washed over me 环境 golden sunshine, soft breeze, blooming flowers, bright warm lamplight 3. 失落 / 难过 / 失望（丢失物品、离别、愿望落空） 维度 高分表达 动作 hang head, drag feet, hold back tears, sigh deeply 神态 red wet eyes, trembling lips, gloomy face 内心 A heavy sense of loss weighed on my heart; A lump formed in my throat 环境 falling leaves, gray cloudy sky, empty quiet room, cold wind 4. 震惊 / 意外（得知消息、撞见惊喜、突发状况） 维度 高分表达 动作 gasp loudly, drop sth out of hands, stand rooted to the ground, stare blankly 神态 open-mouthed, speechless, wide-eyed 内心 My heart skipped a beat; I could hardly believe my own eyes 环境 dead silent air, everything seemed to freeze instantly 5. 愧疚 / 懊悔（争吵、误解、伤害亲友，亲情和解高频） 维度 高分表达 动作 lower head, drag feet slowly, scratch head awkwardly, pat others’ shoulders apologetically 神态 face flushed with shame, eyes wet with regret 内心 Regret crowded into my heart; A strong sense of guilt washed over me 环境 dim dim light, heavy silent atmosphere, gray dusk 6. 释然 / 温暖（矛盾化解、困难解决、顿悟成长，结尾主旋律） 维度 高分表达 动作 relax shoulders, smile gently, hold hands tightly together 神态 soft bright eyes, relaxed facial expression 内心 All anxiety faded away; A warm current rose in my heart 环境 sun breaking through clouds, gentle wind, soft sunset glow 第三部分 情感驱动法万能三步实操法（课堂模板，直接套用） 步骤 1：锚定原文基准情绪，确定全文情感主线 划出原文结尾心理、动作关键词，锁定初始负面 / 正面情绪，规划两段情绪走向。 例文原文结尾：Lily watched her best friend’s taxi drive away, feeling a lump in her throat. 关键词：a lump in throat → 初始情绪：失落不舍 步骤 2：选取四大描写载体组合烘托情绪（动作 + 道具 + 环境） 载体搭配示例： 动作：clench 手链、dash 冲上前；道具：friendship bracelet 友谊手链、note 纸条；环境：cold wind 冷风、sun break through clouds 乌云散去 步骤 3：设计情节转机，搭建分层情绪转变链条 情绪链条：失落压抑→发现纸条（心生期待）→读懂留言（释然喜悦） 完整示范续写（配套例文，标注情绪变化）： Lily’s fingers clenched the friendship bracelet Anna had given her last week. The rough strings hurt her palm, just like the unspoken words between them. Cold autumn wind swept past, swirling dead leaves around her feet. She was about to walk away when a thin piece of paper fluttered down from the taxi window. She dashed forward and caught the note before it flew off. On the back, Anna wrote their secret meeting time. Lily’s trembling lips slowly curved into a big smile. Warm sunshine broke through heavy clouds, wrapping her whole body in soft comfort. 技法联动提示：动作链专题与本专题融合教学 所有情绪描写必须搭配连续动作链，避免单一静态神态句，做到 “以动作承载情绪”。 第四部分 情感描写避坑指南 · 情绪强行跳转：负面情绪直接切换为喜悦，无内心挣扎、细节缓冲； · 通篇直白抒情：高频重复 I was happy / I felt sad，无动作、神态、环境烘托； · 情绪与原文割裂：续写情绪和原文结尾基调完全相反，无合理情节触发； · 升华生硬说教：结尾直接写 We should help others / We must understand family，无画面铺垫； · 情绪单一无层次：全文只有一种情绪，无起伏、无转变，情节平淡如水。 课堂精练 分层课堂精练（梯度训练，逐层突破） 一、基础练习：直白低分句改写（以形传情专项训练） 原低分句：I was shocked when I heard the surprising news. 改写高分参考（动作 + 神态 + 内心）： __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The shocking news made the phone slip out of my grasp. I stood rooted to the ground, mouth wide open, too stunned to utter a single word. A wave of disbelief washed over me instantly. 二、进阶练习：情绪递进仿写（两层情绪 + 环境烘托） 要求：描写人物 “内心愧疚→下定决心登门道歉” 完整情绪过渡，搭配环境景物烘托 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： Heavy guilt weighed on my heart, dragging my steps as I paced the dim living room. Gray dusk outside deepened my loneliness, and endless regret lingered in my mind. After struggling for a long time, I grabbed the warm biscuits my wife baked, mixed nervousness and hope filling my chest, determined to fix the broken bond with my brother. 三、综合训练（亲情和解类真题，高频母题） 以 2025 年全国高考一卷试题为例，一起拆解续写思路，让大家轻松应对这类题。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作指导： I realized that it was I who was at fault.  续写大意：我准备去道歉。 1.羞愧（内心活动等）：反问自己；脸/手/眼动作 （时间过渡：妻子看到我的表情后，……） 2.安慰（妻子建议带上biscuits)：脸/手/眼动作；说话+声音 （时间过渡：我听完妻子的话后，……） 3.决心（我同意妻子建议）：直接说明determined to... With the biscuits that my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. 续写大意：我去道歉。 4.纠结（敲门前的犹豫）: 内心想法 5.温和：我的说话+声音；弟弟的接受+表情；狗的欢迎（弟弟从不满到表情温和；我从尴尬到欣慰；狗的开心迎接） 6.欣慰/感激：我的表情（眼，手的动作） 主题：和好如初（如何反应主题？1.感悟；2.行动方式 3.话语 4. 照应前文的主要线索） 原文梗概 家中夏日聚会突降大雨，主人公担心大狗 Toby 撞伤小孩，让弟弟带狗先行离开，弟弟心生不满，二人两个月互不联系。主人公醒悟弟弟妻子离世，Toby 是他唯一精神寄托，内心满是愧疚。 两段续写开头： 1. I realized it was me who was at fault. 2. With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. 满分范文（情绪变化线：愧疚压抑→忐忑期待→僵持冷漠→释然温暖） Para 1（情绪：愧疚→忐忑期待） I realized it was me who was at fault. That rainy day’s awkward scene kept replaying in my mind, heavy guilt weighing on my heart all day long. Why couldn’t I understand his loneliness after losing his beloved wife? My conscience nagged me nonstop, making it impossible to focus on daily work. My wife spotted the worry covering my face and comforted me softly, suggesting I visit him with homemade warm biscuits. Holding the fragrant baked treats, mixed nervousness and faint hope rose inside my chest. I made up my mind to offer a sincere apology and set off without delay. Para 2（情绪：紧张不安→僵持冷漠→破冰和解→温暖释然） With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. Taking a deep breath to calm my racing heart, I knocked hesitantly. When the door slowly opened, his face was cold and indifferent at first, no trace of his usual warm smile. Before I finished my stammered apology, Toby rushed toward me at once, wagging his tail wildly and rubbing against my legs. My brother’s hard expression softened instantly. He patted my shoulder gently and invited me in for hot coffee. Toby secretly stole two biscuits, and light laughter gradually cleared the long-time awkward silence between us. Sitting side by side, I truly understood that family lies in tolerance, and a late sincere apology can heal all misunderstandings. 赏析（重点） 1. That rainy day’s awkward scene kept replaying in my mind, heavy guilt weighing on my heart all day long. 经典心理烘托：往事反复浮现，愧疚压满心头，替代低级 I felt guilty； 2. mixed nervousness and faint hope rose inside my chest 情绪叠加描写，层次感拉满，阅卷加分； 3. his face was cold and indifferent / My brother’s hard expression softened 人物神态对比，直观体现内心情绪转变，过渡自然无突兀； 4. light laughter gradually cleared the long-time awkward silence 环境氛围烘托情绪，无声体现二人和解，含蓄高级不生硬。 参考范文： I realized that it was I who was at fault. The scene from that day kept replaying in my mind, weighing on me heavily. Why hadn’t I been more understanding? My conscience nagged at me, making it hard to focus on anything else. My wife noticed the worry on my face. “People make mistakes. Why not visit him now—take some of those biscuits I just baked? ” Her voice was warm and reassuring. Holding the warm biscuits, I felt a bit of hope ignited inside, mixed with nervous anticipation. Determined to make things right, I quickly set off. With the biscuits that my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.Taking a deep breath, I knocked, hesitant and nervous. The door opened. My brother looked at me, his face at first clouded with indifference. I looked him in the eye and stammered, “I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have treated Toby that way...” Before I could finish, Toby rushed over, tail waggingexcitedly. My brother’s expression immediately softened. He patted my shoulder and said, “Come in.Let’s have a cup of coffee together.” There was warmth in his voice. The biscuits were gone quickly—Toby managed to steal two—and laughter slowly replaced the awkwardness.  逐句赏析： I realized that it was I who was at fault.  经典表达1：一幕幕脑海里回放 The scene from that day kept replaying in my mind, weighing on me heavily.  那天的那一幕不断在我脑海中回放，沉甸甸地压在我心头。 经典表达2：对自己的反问：我什么不能……？ Why hadn’t I been more understanding? 为什么我当时不能更体谅些呢？ 经典表达3：良心上的折磨 My conscience nagged at me, making it hard to focus on anything else.  我的良心不停地谴责着我，让我难以专注其他任何事。 经典表达4：ta的安慰 My wife noticed the worry on my face. “People make mistakes. Why not visit him now—take some of those biscuits I just baked? ” Her voice was warm and reassuring.  妻子留意到了我脸上的忧虑。“人都会犯错。何不现在就去看看他——带上我刚烤的那些饼干？”她的声音温暖而令人安心。 经典表达5：希望重燃，期待和紧张交织 Holding the warm biscuits, I felt a bit of hope ignited inside, mixed with nervous anticipation. 手里捧着温热的饼干，我感到心中燃起了一丝希望，但同时又混杂着紧张的期待。 经典表达6：下决心改正 Determined to make things right, I quickly set off. 我决心要弥补这个过失，便立刻出发了。 With the biscuits that my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. 经典表达7：犹豫不觉；做任何事情前先深呼吸 Taking a deep breath, I knocked, hesitant and nervous.  经典表达8：脸上的些许不满 The door opened. My brother looked at me, his face at first clouded with indifference.  经典表达9：真诚道歉，吞吞吐吐说（吞吞吐吐也可以是激动，感恩，万能词） I looked him in the eye and stammered, “I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have treated Toby that way...”  经典表达10：狗、猫的摇尾巴动作 Before I could finish, Toby rushed over, tail waggingexcitedly.  经典表达11：从消极到积极的情绪——soften My brother’s expression immediately softened.  经典表达12：向对方示好：pat  He patted my shoulder and said, “Come in.Let’s have a cup of coffee together.” There was warmth in his voice.  经典表达13：从消极到积极的气氛： The biscuits were gone quickly—Toby managed to steal two—and laughter slowly replaced the awkwardness.  经典表达14：结尾感悟式点题（配合对方的动作） A. That day, I understood: Toby and my brother are both family I truly cherish, forever. B. As I left, he gave me a hug and smiled, the same way he always had. I knew, at that moment, our bond was as strong as ever. C. Sitting together, I realized that family is about opening your door, not closing it, and that a heartfelt apology, though late, can still heal old wounds. 题型组合练 演练 一、七选五 Choosing a career path is difficult, and the decision never becomes easier as you grow older. 1 Their advice is to choose what you love and make your passion your source of income. But should passion be the main factor when deciding on a career? When someone participates in an activity they love, they’re happier. Many link this happiness to increased motivation, resulting in professional growth even during tough times. 2 Accordingly, individuals prove that the saying “Turn your passion into a job, and the money will follow” can be true. However, the quote overlooks that people may have multiple passions. For that reason, some choose to pursue their passion outside of work in the hope of not regretting limiting themselves to one love. Another misunderstanding is that one has to master what they’re passionate about. While passion pushes you to learn, one can be passionate about dancing but not necessarily good at it. 3 Ultimately, the decision comes down to you. If you fear your passion evolving into a burden, perhaps you can find a job leaving you time to create art after work. Instead, maybe your passion is the necessary fuel that guides you to work your hardest. 4 There will be uninteresting tasks required to turn your passion into income. 5 While getting asked “What are you passionate about?” can be stressful, here is a secret: Try everything. Even if you try a million things and can’t find what you love, you’ll learn what you don’t like. These discoveries can be just as important. A．Passion can push you to spare no efforts. B．If so, remember that it won’t always be fun. C．In tough times, your passion will fade away. D．Luckily, some claim to have found the secret. E．Actually, few individuals know what their passion is. F．The love for their passion outweighs negative moments. G．For them, enjoying the activity regardless of skill level is the most important. 【答案】1．D 2．F 3．G 4．B 5．E 【导语】文章主要介绍人们将热爱和激情作为择业依据的观点，分析了以激情择业存在的误区，并给出了结合自身情况、多尝试探索择业方向的相关建议。 【详解】1．根据前文“Choosing a career path is difficult, and the decision never becomes easier as you grow older.(选择职业道路很困难，而且随着年龄增长，这个抉择并不会变得更容易)”以及后文“Their advice is to choose what you love and make your passion your source of income.(他们的建议是选择自己热爱的事物，让激情成为收入的来源)”可知，前文提出择业难题，后文引出他人的择业秘诀与建议，D选项“Luckily, some claim to have found the secret.(幸运的是，有些人声称找到了秘诀)”承接前文困难，引出后文这些人的建议，符合语境。 2．根据前文“When someone participates in an activity they love, they’re happier. Many link this happiness to increased motivation, resulting in professional growth even during tough times.(当人们参与自己热爱的活动时，会更加快乐。很多人将这种快乐与动力提升联系起来，即便身处困境也能实现职业成长)”以及后文“Accordingly, individuals prove that the saying “Turn your passion into a job, and the money will follow” can be true.(因此，人们证实了“把热爱变成工作，财富自然随之而来”这句话是有道理的)”可知，本段讲述激情对职业发展的积极作用，空处承接前文，解释人们能在困境中成长的原因，F选项“The love for their passion outweighs negative moments.(对热爱之事的热忱胜过消极时刻)”承接前文，概括热爱超过困难，并与后文形成因果，符合语境。 3．根据前文“Another misunderstanding is that one has to master what they’re passionate about. While passion pushes you to learn, one can be passionate about dancing but not necessarily good at it.(另一个误区是人们必须精通自己热爱的事物。虽然激情会推动人学习，但一个人可以热爱跳舞，却未必擅长跳舞)”可知，前文指出择业的误区，说明热爱一件事不代表一定要精通它，G选项“For them, enjoying the activity regardless of skill level is the most important.(对他们而言，无论技能水平如何，享受这件事本身才是最重要的)”承接前文，进一步说明对这类人而言享受比擅长更重要，符合语境。 4．根据前文“Ultimately, the decision comes down to you. If you fear your passion evolving into a burden, perhaps you can find a job leaving you time to create art after work. Instead, maybe your passion is the necessary fuel that guides you to work your hardest.(最终，决定权在你。如果你害怕热情变成负担，也许你可以找一份下班后留有时间创作艺术的工作。或者，你的热情可能是指导你全力以赴的必要燃料)”可知，前文提出两种选择；后文“There will be uninteresting tasks required to turn your passion into income.(把热情变成收入需要做一些无趣的任务)”说明无论哪种选择，都会遇到无趣的任务。B选项“If so, remember that it won’t always be fun.(如果是这样，请记住它不会总是充满乐趣)”中的“If so”指代前文选择将热情作为职业的情况，后文进一步解释原因，符合语境。 5．根据后文“While getting asked “What are you passionate about?” can be stressful, here is a secret: Try everything. Even if you try a million things and can’t find what you love, you’ll learn what you don’t like.(当被问到“你对什么充满热情？”时，可能会让人感到有压力，但这里有个秘诀：什么都去尝试。即便你尝试了无数件事，却依然没能找到自己所热爱的，你也会明白自己不喜欢什么)”可知，后文提出很多人其实不清楚自己的热情所在，并提到了尝试的重要性，E选项“Actually, few individuals know what their passion is.(事实上，很少有人知道自己的热情是什么)”提到很少有人知道自己的热情是什么，符合语境。 二、阅读理解 I do a lot of public speaking and am always looking for ways to improve. To that end, I regularly give talks in Spanish and Catalan, which I learned as an adult. Just like the explorers in history who braved the unknown to discover new lands, I venture (敢于去) into unfamiliar linguistic territory. Although I can carry on an ordinary conversation in these languages, I have a foreign accent and can’t express myself as well as I do in English. So delivering a formal lecture is uncomfortable. Yet each time I do it, my speaking skills in both these languages and in my native English improve. This is a specific example of what turns out to be a broader truth: Doing something you’re bad at can make you better at what you’re good at, as well as potentially making you good at something new. Understanding this dynamic can give you an advantage in your own area of excellence, and enhance your life generally. To be great at what you do, take a chance on flunking something else. Perhaps you can relate to this finding when, pushed to perform outside your comfort zone at work, you discover that you have greater motivation in your regular job afterward. If you’re a student, take a class far outside your area of skills and interests. Knowing that the struggle to cope with a very novel challenge may improve your performance in the subjects you do like. Enjoy the difficulty of it and study the mistakes you make closely, and you will almost certainly find that you’re doing even better in your preferred subject. None of us wants to be unhappy. But inviting sources of unhappiness into life can be extremely beneficial. Resolve not to be afraid of fear, anger, or sadness. They are normal and natural parts of life, after all. Dealing with them openly, though uncomfortable, will improve your skills at doing so. And if you choose to face them, they will help you enjoy the joys of life all the more. 6．Why does the author give talks in Spanish and Catalan? A．To become a translator. B．To overcome fear of speaking. C．To improve his native language. D．To prove he learns languages fast. 7．What does the underlined part “flunking something else” in paragraph 2 mean? A．Avoiding hard tasks. B．Mastering another skill. C．Teaching something new. D．Failing in a different thing. 8．What do new challenges help students do according to the text? A．Keep them from failing in their main field. B．Acquire an entirely fresh interest and ability. C．Enhance their performance in a subject they favor. D．Improve their enthusiasm for the subject they dislike. 9．What is the author’s view on unhappiness? A．It is the only path to success. B．It should be avoided at all costs. C．It is harmful to personal growth. D．It can bring unexpected benefits. 【答案】6．C 7．D 8．C 9．D 【导语】作者结合自身多语言演讲经历提出观点，主动尝试不擅长的事能够反向精进擅长领域，直面负面情绪也大有裨益。 【详解】6．细节理解题。根据第一段中的“I do a lot of public speaking and am always looking for ways to improve. To that end, I regularly give talks in Spanish and Catalan, which I learned as an adult.(我经常公开演讲，一直在寻找提升自我的方法。为此，我常用西班牙语和加泰罗尼亚语做演讲，这两门语言是我成年后才学习的。)”以及“Yet each time I do it, my speaking skills in both these languages and in my native English improve.(但每一次演讲过后，我这两门外语以及母语英语的表达能力都得到了提升。)”可知，作者用另外两门语言演讲，目的是提升自己的母语水平。 7．词句猜测题。根据第二段中的“This is a specific example of what turns out to be a broader truth: Doing something you’re bad at can make you better at what you’re good at, as well as potentially making you good at something new.(这是一个具体例子，印证了一个普遍道理：去做自己不擅长的事，既能把原本擅长的事做得更好，还有可能掌握新技能。)”可知，前文主张主动涉足自己不擅长、容易做不好的领域，因此画线短语指“在另一件事上遭遇失败”。 8．细节理解题。根据第三段中的“Knowing that the struggle to cope with a very novel challenge may improve your performance in the subjects you do like. Enjoy the difficulty of it and study the mistakes you make closely, and you will almost certainly find that you’re doing even better in your preferred subject.(要明白，努力应对全新挑战，能够提升你在自己喜爱科目上的表现。坦然接纳其中的难处，认真钻研自己犯下的错误，你几乎肯定会发现，自己擅长的科目学得愈发出色了。)”可知，全新的挑战可以帮助学生提升擅长科目的学习表现。 9．推理判断题。根据第四段中的“But inviting sources of unhappiness into life can be extremely beneficial.(但主动接纳生活里不愉快的事物，会带来极大益处。)”以及“And if you choose to face them, they will help you enjoy the joys of life all the more.(倘若你选择直面负面情绪，它们反而会让你更能体会生活中的快乐。)”可知，作者认为不愉快的情绪能够带来意想不到的好处。 高考核心词汇 演练 · 高考高频词汇精选背诵（WXYZ字母） 1. wander 2. wicked 3. withdraw 4. wrinkle 5. ward 6. wit 7. witness 8. weep 9. weird 10. wreck 11. wrap 12. workshop 13. woollen 14. yogurt 15. yawn 16. yard 17. yell 18. yield 19. zone 20. zeal · 高考核心词汇检测 1. I made the choice to _________ from college to care for her. A. undertake B.worship C. withdraw D. weep 2. I don't know why, but this is so __________ to me. A. weird B.urgent C.wicked D. worthwhile 3. Police have appealed for anyone who ____________ the incident to contact them. A. wrapped B.whistled C.weakened D. witnessed 4. He has such a strong __________ that he is sure to spare no effort to finish the task ahead of time. A. wit B. zeal C. zone D. will 5. People looked out for one another and were concerned about the_________ of their fellows. A. wreck B. worm C. ward D. welfare 6. The skin on her cheeks and around her eyes was beginning to _________. A. wrinkle B.yawn C.weave D. wrestle 7. _________ is used to describe people who travel around rather than staying in one place for a long time. A. Warning B.Wandering C.Violating D. Wiping 8. The attempts to make changes in such a brief period of time will not ____________ results A. yell B.weave C.yawn D. yield 参考答案： 1~8 CADDD ABD 第 1 页 共 14 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 第20讲：读后续写（二）+题型综合练+高考核心词汇进阶 内容导航 目录 内容 专题精选：读后续写 （情感线） 考点聚焦、情绪描写 要点01 情感驱动法的核心逻辑 要点02情绪描写语料库：（常用词汇与表达） 要点03实例展示：（情感驱动法的续写应用） 题型组合练 七选五+阅读理解议论文 高考核心词汇积累 WXYZ字母高考核心词汇 课堂精讲 前言：考情定位与教学目标 一、评分对标 一档高分核心标准：情感有完整递进链条，拒绝生硬跳转；阅卷老师重点查看情绪过渡细节，无缓冲直接从悲伤转开心直接扣 2–3 分。 情感驱动法是读后续写 “灵魂”，解决三大学生痛点： · 直白抒情泛滥（I was very happy / I felt extremely sad）； · 情绪无层次，转折突兀； · 情节空洞，文章没有感染力、无法升华主旨。 二、课时教学目标 · 吃透情感驱动法三大核心逻辑：情感锚定、以形传情、情感递进； · 掌握六大高频情绪全套素材（动作 + 神态 + 内心 + 环境烘托四维度）； · 学会 “原文抓情绪→选描写载体→搭建情绪转变链条” 三步万能写作法； · 掌握亲情 / 友情 / 成长类真题情感分层续写，写出无痕情绪过渡； · 积累万能情感升华结尾，适配所有主题，提升文章深度。 第一部分 理论精讲：情感驱动法三大核心逻辑 逻辑 1：情感锚定 —— 续写必须紧扣原文结尾基准情绪，不能凭空跳转 操作步骤：阅读原文划出心理、动作关键词，锁定初始情绪，续写前半段保留该情绪，不能立刻反转。 示例：原文结尾 “I felt a lump in my throat, watching my friend’s taxi drive away.” 关键词：a lump in throat → 锚定初始情绪：失落、不舍 扣分反面案例：续写第一句直接写 I became extremely happy，无任何过渡，情绪割裂，降档。 逻辑 2：以形传情 —— 拒绝直白心理句，四大载体侧面烘托情绪 四大描写载体（组合使用画面感最强）： 1. 肢体动作（动作链专题内容联动教学）； 2. 面部神态（眼神、嘴唇、脸色）； 3. 随身道具（手链、信件、礼物、宠物）； 4. 环境景物（风雨、阳光、落叶、黄昏）。 低分直白句：I was extremely sad after my best friend left. 高分载体融合句：My fingers clenched the friendship bracelet tightly, cold autumn wind swirling fallen dead leaves around my trembling feet. 逻辑 3：情感递进 —— 情绪必须分层转变，设置缓冲过渡环节 标准情绪转变通用链条（高考 90% 记叙文适用）： 负面基准情绪 → 内心挣扎缓冲 → 外部细节触发转机 → 情绪反转（释然 / 温暖 / 感动） 人际和解类固定逻辑链：僵持冷漠→愧疚挣扎→试探破冰→和解温暖 成长突破类固定逻辑链：恐惧自卑→犹豫退缩→微小尝试→自信释然 第二部分 全维度情绪素材库（六大高频情绪，四维度全覆盖） 1. 紧张 / 恐惧（考场、黑夜、迷路、危机场景高频） 维度 高分表达 动作 tremble all over, grip clothes tightly, freeze on the spot, wipe cold sweat repeatedly 神态 pale face, wide eyes, shaky voice, breathless 内心 My heart pounded wildly; I had butterflies in my stomach; Panic seized me completely 环境 howling wind, dark shadows, thunder cracking, dim flickering lamplight 2. 喜悦 / 惊喜 / 感动（礼物、重逢、善意、和解场景） 维度 高分表达 动作 skip forward, jump and cheer, hug tightly, clap hands wildly, spin around 神态 eyes sparkle with joy, a broad smile spreading across cheeks, tears of gratitude 内心 A wave of joy flooded my body; Warmth welled up inside me; A sense of relief washed over me 环境 golden sunshine, soft breeze, blooming flowers, bright warm lamplight 3. 失落 / 难过 / 失望（丢失物品、离别、愿望落空） 维度 高分表达 动作 hang head, drag feet, hold back tears, sigh deeply 神态 red wet eyes, trembling lips, gloomy face 内心 A heavy sense of loss weighed on my heart; A lump formed in my throat 环境 falling leaves, gray cloudy sky, empty quiet room, cold wind 4. 震惊 / 意外（得知消息、撞见惊喜、突发状况） 维度 高分表达 动作 gasp loudly, drop sth out of hands, stand rooted to the ground, stare blankly 神态 open-mouthed, speechless, wide-eyed 内心 My heart skipped a beat; I could hardly believe my own eyes 环境 dead silent air, everything seemed to freeze instantly 5. 愧疚 / 懊悔（争吵、误解、伤害亲友，亲情和解高频） 维度 高分表达 动作 lower head, drag feet slowly, scratch head awkwardly, pat others’ shoulders apologetically 神态 face flushed with shame, eyes wet with regret 内心 Regret crowded into my heart; A strong sense of guilt washed over me 环境 dim dim light, heavy silent atmosphere, gray dusk 6. 释然 / 温暖（矛盾化解、困难解决、顿悟成长，结尾主旋律） 维度 高分表达 动作 relax shoulders, smile gently, hold hands tightly together 神态 soft bright eyes, relaxed facial expression 内心 All anxiety faded away; A warm current rose in my heart 环境 sun breaking through clouds, gentle wind, soft sunset glow 第三部分 情感驱动法万能三步实操法（课堂模板，直接套用） 步骤 1：锚定原文基准情绪，确定全文情感主线 划出原文结尾心理、动作关键词，锁定初始负面 / 正面情绪，规划两段情绪走向。 例文原文结尾：Lily watched her best friend’s taxi drive away, feeling a lump in her throat. 关键词：a lump in throat → 初始情绪：失落不舍 步骤 2：选取四大描写载体组合烘托情绪（动作 + 道具 + 环境） 载体搭配示例： 动作：clench 手链、dash 冲上前；道具：friendship bracelet 友谊手链、note 纸条；环境：cold wind 冷风、sun break through clouds 乌云散去 步骤 3：设计情节转机，搭建分层情绪转变链条 情绪链条：失落压抑→发现纸条（心生期待）→读懂留言（释然喜悦） 完整示范续写（配套例文，标注情绪变化）： Lily’s fingers clenched the friendship bracelet Anna had given her last week. The rough strings hurt her palm, just like the unspoken words between them. Cold autumn wind swept past, swirling dead leaves around her feet. She was about to walk away when a thin piece of paper fluttered down from the taxi window. She dashed forward and caught the note before it flew off. On the back, Anna wrote their secret meeting time. Lily’s trembling lips slowly curved into a big smile. Warm sunshine broke through heavy clouds, wrapping her whole body in soft comfort. 技法联动提示：动作链专题与本专题融合教学 所有情绪描写必须搭配连续动作链，避免单一静态神态句，做到 “以动作承载情绪”。 第四部分 情感描写避坑指南 · 情绪强行跳转：负面情绪直接切换为喜悦，无内心挣扎、细节缓冲； · 通篇直白抒情：高频重复 I was happy / I felt sad，无动作、神态、环境烘托； · 情绪与原文割裂：续写情绪和原文结尾基调完全相反，无合理情节触发； · 升华生硬说教：结尾直接写 We should help others / We must understand family，无画面铺垫； · 情绪单一无层次：全文只有一种情绪，无起伏、无转变，情节平淡如水。 课堂精练 分层课堂精练（梯度训练，逐层突破） 一、基础练习：直白低分句改写（以形传情专项训练） 原低分句：I was shocked when I heard the surprising news. 改写高分参考（动作 + 神态 + 内心）： __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、进阶练习：情绪递进仿写（两层情绪 + 环境烘托） 要求：描写人物 “内心愧疚→下定决心登门道歉” 完整情绪过渡，搭配环境景物烘托 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、综合训练（亲情和解类真题，高频母题） 以 2025 年全国高考一卷试题为例，一起拆解续写思路，让大家轻松应对这类题。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作指导： I realized that it was I who was at fault.  续写大意：我准备去道歉。 1.羞愧（内心活动等）：反问自己；脸/手/眼动作 （时间过渡：妻子看到我的表情后，……） 2.安慰（妻子建议带上biscuits)：脸/手/眼动作；说话+声音 （时间过渡：我听完妻子的话后，……） 3.决心（我同意妻子建议）：直接说明determined to... With the biscuits that my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. 续写大意：我去道歉。 4.纠结（敲门前的犹豫）: 内心想法 5.温和：我的说话+声音；弟弟的接受+表情；狗的欢迎（弟弟从不满到表情温和；我从尴尬到欣慰；狗的开心迎接） 6.欣慰/感激：我的表情（眼，手的动作） 主题：和好如初（如何反应主题？1.感悟；2.行动方式 3.话语 4. 照应前文的主要线索） 原文梗概 家中夏日聚会突降大雨，主人公担心大狗 Toby 撞伤小孩，让弟弟带狗先行离开，弟弟心生不满，二人两个月互不联系。主人公醒悟弟弟妻子离世，Toby 是他唯一精神寄托，内心满是愧疚。 两段续写开头： 1. I realized it was me who was at fault. 2. With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. 满分范文（情绪变化线：愧疚压抑→忐忑期待→僵持冷漠→释然温暖） Para 1（情绪：愧疚→忐忑期待） I realized it was me who was at fault. That rainy day’s awkward scene kept replaying in my mind, heavy guilt weighing on my heart all day long. Why couldn’t I understand his loneliness after losing his beloved wife? My conscience nagged me nonstop, making it impossible to focus on daily work. My wife spotted the worry covering my face and comforted me softly, suggesting I visit him with homemade warm biscuits. Holding the fragrant baked treats, mixed nervousness and faint hope rose inside my chest. I made up my mind to offer a sincere apology and set off without delay. Para 2（情绪：紧张不安→僵持冷漠→破冰和解→温暖释然） With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. Taking a deep breath to calm my racing heart, I knocked hesitantly. When the door slowly opened, his face was cold and indifferent at first, no trace of his usual warm smile. Before I finished my stammered apology, Toby rushed toward me at once, wagging his tail wildly and rubbing against my legs. My brother’s hard expression softened instantly. He patted my shoulder gently and invited me in for hot coffee. Toby secretly stole two biscuits, and light laughter gradually cleared the long-time awkward silence between us. Sitting side by side, I truly understood that family lies in tolerance, and a late sincere apology can heal all misunderstandings. 赏析（重点） 1. That rainy day’s awkward scene kept replaying in my mind, heavy guilt weighing on my heart all day long. 经典心理烘托：往事反复浮现，愧疚压满心头，替代低级 I felt guilty； 2. mixed nervousness and faint hope rose inside my chest 情绪叠加描写，层次感拉满，阅卷加分； 3. his face was cold and indifferent / My brother’s hard expression softened 人物神态对比，直观体现内心情绪转变，过渡自然无突兀； 4. light laughter gradually cleared the long-time awkward silence 环境氛围烘托情绪，无声体现二人和解，含蓄高级不生硬。 逐句赏析： I realized that it was I who was at fault.  经典表达1：一幕幕脑海里回放 The scene from that day kept replaying in my mind, weighing on me heavily.  那天的那一幕不断在我脑海中回放，沉甸甸地压在我心头。 经典表达2：对自己的反问：我什么不能……？ Why hadn’t I been more understanding? 为什么我当时不能更体谅些呢？ 经典表达3：良心上的折磨 My conscience nagged at me, making it hard to focus on anything else.  我的良心不停地谴责着我，让我难以专注其他任何事。 经典表达4：ta的安慰 My wife noticed the worry on my face. “People make mistakes. Why not visit him now—take some of those biscuits I just baked? ” Her voice was warm and reassuring.  妻子留意到了我脸上的忧虑。“人都会犯错。何不现在就去看看他——带上我刚烤的那些饼干？”她的声音温暖而令人安心。 经典表达5：希望重燃，期待和紧张交织 Holding the warm biscuits, I felt a bit of hope ignited inside, mixed with nervous anticipation. 手里捧着温热的饼干，我感到心中燃起了一丝希望，但同时又混杂着紧张的期待。 经典表达6：下决心改正 Determined to make things right, I quickly set off. 我决心要弥补这个过失，便立刻出发了。 With the biscuits that my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. 经典表达7：犹豫不觉；做任何事情前先深呼吸 Taking a deep breath, I knocked, hesitant and nervous.  经典表达8：脸上的些许不满 The door opened. My brother looked at me, his face at first clouded with indifference.  经典表达9：真诚道歉，吞吞吐吐说（吞吞吐吐也可以是激动，感恩，万能词） I looked him in the eye and stammered, “I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have treated Toby that way...”  经典表达10：狗、猫的摇尾巴动作 Before I could finish, Toby rushed over, tail waggingexcitedly.  经典表达11：从消极到积极的情绪——soften My brother’s expression immediately softened.  经典表达12：向对方示好：pat  He patted my shoulder and said, “Come in.Let’s have a cup of coffee together.” There was warmth in his voice.  经典表达13：从消极到积极的气氛： The biscuits were gone quickly—Toby managed to steal two—and laughter slowly replaced the awkwardness.  经典表达14：结尾感悟式点题（配合对方的动作） A. That day, I understood: Toby and my brother are both family I truly cherish, forever. B. As I left, he gave me a hug and smiled, the same way he always had. I knew, at that moment, our bond was as strong as ever. C. Sitting together, I realized that family is about opening your door, not closing it, and that a heartfelt apology, though late, can still heal old wounds. 题型组合练 演练 一、七选五 Choosing a career path is difficult, and the decision never becomes easier as you grow older. 1 Their advice is to choose what you love and make your passion your source of income. But should passion be the main factor when deciding on a career? When someone participates in an activity they love, they’re happier. Many link this happiness to increased motivation, resulting in professional growth even during tough times. 2 Accordingly, individuals prove that the saying “Turn your passion into a job, and the money will follow” can be true. However, the quote overlooks that people may have multiple passions. For that reason, some choose to pursue their passion outside of work in the hope of not regretting limiting themselves to one love. Another misunderstanding is that one has to master what they’re passionate about. While passion pushes you to learn, one can be passionate about dancing but not necessarily good at it. 3 Ultimately, the decision comes down to you. If you fear your passion evolving into a burden, perhaps you can find a job leaving you time to create art after work. Instead, maybe your passion is the necessary fuel that guides you to work your hardest. 4 There will be uninteresting tasks required to turn your passion into income. 5 While getting asked “What are you passionate about?” can be stressful, here is a secret: Try everything. Even if you try a million things and can’t find what you love, you’ll learn what you don’t like. These discoveries can be just as important. A．Passion can push you to spare no efforts. B．If so, remember that it won’t always be fun. C．In tough times, your passion will fade away. D．Luckily, some claim to have found the secret. E．Actually, few individuals know what their passion is. F．The love for their passion outweighs negative moments. G．For them, enjoying the activity regardless of skill level is the most important. 二、阅读理解 I do a lot of public speaking and am always looking for ways to improve. To that end, I regularly give talks in Spanish and Catalan, which I learned as an adult. Just like the explorers in history who braved the unknown to discover new lands, I venture (敢于去) into unfamiliar linguistic territory. Although I can carry on an ordinary conversation in these languages, I have a foreign accent and can’t express myself as well as I do in English. So delivering a formal lecture is uncomfortable. Yet each time I do it, my speaking skills in both these languages and in my native English improve. This is a specific example of what turns out to be a broader truth: Doing something you’re bad at can make you better at what you’re good at, as well as potentially making you good at something new. Understanding this dynamic can give you an advantage in your own area of excellence, and enhance your life generally. To be great at what you do, take a chance on flunking something else. Perhaps you can relate to this finding when, pushed to perform outside your comfort zone at work, you discover that you have greater motivation in your regular job afterward. If you’re a student, take a class far outside your area of skills and interests. Knowing that the struggle to cope with a very novel challenge may improve your performance in the subjects you do like. Enjoy the difficulty of it and study the mistakes you make closely, and you will almost certainly find that you’re doing even better in your preferred subject. None of us wants to be unhappy. But inviting sources of unhappiness into life can be extremely beneficial. Resolve not to be afraid of fear, anger, or sadness. They are normal and natural parts of life, after all. Dealing with them openly, though uncomfortable, will improve your skills at doing so. And if you choose to face them, they will help you enjoy the joys of life all the more. 6．Why does the author give talks in Spanish and Catalan? A．To become a translator. B．To overcome fear of speaking. C．To improve his native language. D．To prove he learns languages fast. 7．What does the underlined part “flunking something else” in paragraph 2 mean? A．Avoiding hard tasks. B．Mastering another skill. C．Teaching something new. D．Failing in a different thing. 8．What do new challenges help students do according to the text? A．Keep them from failing in their main field. B．Acquire an entirely fresh interest and ability. C．Enhance their performance in a subject they favor. D．Improve their enthusiasm for the subject they dislike. 9．What is the author’s view on unhappiness? A．It is the only path to success. B．It should be avoided at all costs. C．It is harmful to personal growth. D．It can bring unexpected benefits. 高考核心词汇 演练 · 高考高频词汇精选背诵（WXYZ字母） 1. wander 2. wicked 3. withdraw 4. wrinkle 5. ward 6. wit 7. witness 8. weep 9. weird 10. wreck 11. wrap 12. workshop 13. woollen 14. yogurt 15. yawn 16. yard 17. yell 18. yield 19. zone 20. zeal · 高考核心词汇检测 1. I made the choice to _________ from college to care for her. A. undertake B.worship C. withdraw D. weep 2. I don't know why, but this is so __________ to me. A. weird B.urgent C.wicked D. worthwhile 3. Police have appealed for anyone who ____________ the incident to contact them. A. wrapped B.whistled C.weakened D. witnessed 4. He has such a strong __________ that he is sure to spare no effort to finish the task ahead of time. A. wit B. zeal C. zone D. will 5. People looked out for one another and were concerned about the_________ of their fellows. A. wreck B. worm C. ward D. welfare 6. The skin on her cheeks and around her eyes was beginning to _________. A. wrinkle B.yawn C.weave D. wrestle 7. _________ is used to describe people who travel around rather than staying in one place for a long time. A. Warning B.Wandering C.Violating D. Wiping 8. The attempts to make changes in such a brief period of time will not ____________ results A. yell B.weave C.yawn D. yield 第 1 页 共 14 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $