Unit 4 第6课时 Developing ideas Reading for writing ⑤& Presenting ideas(Writing)（配套word）-【全效学习】2024-2025学年七年级下册英语（外研版·新教材）浙江专版

本讲义聚焦初中英语“娱乐活动”主题写作，核心知识点包括用Fun brings…/Fun keeps us…等句式描述活动益处，用We should have fun in a…way/Don’t forget to…等句式给出建议，以及正确使用时态和祈使句。通过审题指导（明确主题、人称、时态）、提纲图示、语料积累（如one’s favourite activities等短语及相关句子）、高分范文及点拨搭建学习支架，衔接阅读输入与写作输出。 该资料以真实情境任务驱动，设计给Amy回信和寒假娱乐活动调查报告两个写作任务，提升语言运用能力。语料积累与高分点拨结合，如引用“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”增强表达，培养思维品质。写作指导与评价表（自评他评）引导学生反思，发展学习能力。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后助力学生查漏补缺，巩固写作技能。

第6课时　Developing ideas: Reading for writing ⑤& Presenting ideas(Writing)[学生用书 A28] 本单元以“娱乐活动”为话题,要求同学们能用英语简单描述娱乐活动的益处并给出合理参加活动的建议。 1.能用Fun brings…/Fun keeps us…等句式来描述娱乐活动的益处; 2.能用We should have fun in a(n)…way/Don’t forget to…等句式给出合理参加活动的建议; 3.能正确使用时态和祈使句。 　　假设你是Alice, 以下是Amy的来信。请你根据邮件内容用英语写一封80词左右的回信。 Hi Alice, How are you doing? We’re doing a project at school about how different teenagers around the world have fun. I’d really like you to help me if you can! So, can you tell me the answers to the following questions? ●What things do you do to have fun? ●When do you do them? ●Why do you think having fun is important? If you can think of anything else to write, please do! Thanks very much, and write soon! Amy 【审题立意】 主题 　How to have fun　  人称 　第一人称　  时态 　一般现在时　  【巧列提纲】 【语料积累】 常用短语 1.某人最喜欢的活动 　one’s favourite activities　  2.当某人空闲的时候 　in one’s free time　  3.花时间做某事 　spend time (in) doing sth　  4.帮助某人成长 　make sb a full man　  5.减轻压力 　reduce pressure　  常用句子 1.Books are so interesting.书太有趣了。 2.When I am free, I spend lots of time reading. 当我有空的时候,我花很多时间阅读。 3.I think having fun is important. 我认为玩得开心很重要。 4.It can not only make me happy but also reduce my study pressure. 它不仅能让我快乐,还能减轻我的学习压力。 【高分点拨】 Hi Amy, I am doing well. How about you? I’m glad to hear from you. Here are my answers to your questions. I hope they can be helpful to your school project. ①Books are so interesting that I read books to have fun. When I am free, I spend lots of time reading. My favourite book is called Around the World in 80 Days. ②Every time I read it, I lose myself in it. Reading helps to make me a full man because I can learn more about the world from books. ③As an old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” I think having fun is important because it can not only make me happy but also reduce my study pressure. I hope this helps. Yours, Alice ①用so…that…表示喜爱读书的原因。 ②用lose myself描述自己读书时的状态。 ③引用谚语增强说服力。 　　为了解中学生寒假在家进行娱乐活动的情况,学校英语报社在校内做了相应的调查。你作为英语报社的编辑,请根据调查结果写一篇英文短文,汇报你所在学校学生在假期的活动情况,并分享你的观点。 注意:(1)短文中需包含图表中所给内容,可适当发挥; (2)词数80左右;短文的标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。 内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 书写:　　　 Advice:　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　  Good writing makes your article better. How did students spend the winter holiday? How was your holiday? What did you do? Recently, a survey about “How did students spend the winter holiday?” has been carried out in our school. Here are the results. 30% students watched TV or listened to music. They said catoons made them relaxed. 30% students played sports. 20% students played computer games. They felt excited when they were playing computer games. 10% students read books. They thought reading could make them wise. 4% students went travelling. 6% students did other things, such as doing housework.  In my opinion, watching TV may be interesting, but it’s not wise to spend too much time on it. Exercise is the best way for us to relax and keep healthy. Reading and travelling not only enrich our knowledge, but also open our eyes. We should balance work and rest and spend a meaningful holiday.  【写作指导与评价】 步骤 要点 自评 他评 是(√)　否(×) 审 正确使用人称和时态 篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾) 要点齐全 润 进行了适当的发挥 正确使用连词及形容词 查 介绍了中学生寒假在家进行娱乐活动的情况 对自己的观点进行阐述 在拼写、语法、标点方面正确 达到了词数要求 书写美观、卷面整洁 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $