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如何利用定语从句对写作句子进行补述
栏目投稿:向外国友人介绍我国一个城市
1.基本情况
2.特色
3.你的印象感受
1.北京是中国的政治经济文化中心
Beijing is the center of China's politics,economy and culture .
补述:更多细节内容
完整句子:Beijing,which is located in the north of China,is the center of China's politics, economy and culture.
地理位置:Beijing is located in the north of China
完整句子:
You will be amazed by the splendid scenery that unfolds before you.
2.你会被它壮丽景色所震撼
You will be shocked by the splendid scenery .
补述内容:哪儿的景色?
你所看到的(展现在你面前的)
The scenery unfolds before you .
3.紫禁城具有重要的历史文化意义。
The Forbidden City is of great historical and cultural significance.
补述细节内容:紫禁城是什么地方?古代帝王和家人居住在紫禁城
The emperor and his family lived in the Forbidden City
完整句子:The Forbidden City, where the emperor and his family lived, is of great historical and cultural significance.
4.长城也是必看的景点(attraction)
完整句子:
For tourists who visit Beijing,the Great Wall is also a must -see tourist attraction.
The Great Wall is also a must -see tourist
attraction.
补述:对于谁来说?对于去北京旅行的人来说。
for tourists who visit Beijing.
5.北京绝对是一个值得一游的地方
Beijing is definitely a place worth visiting.
整句:
Beijing,which is one of China’s most developed cities,is definitely a place worth visiting.
补述原因:北京是最发达的城市之一
Beijing is one of China’s most developed cities
练习一 . 24高考:周五你班在公园上了一节美术课,你给外国朋友分享这次经历。1.你完成的作品 2.你的感想
1.我画了公园的景色
I painted the scene of the park.
补述画作内容:公园里树枝在微风中跳舞,几只鸭子在河里欢快自在的游泳
Tree branches danced in the gentle wind and some ducks swam happily in the river in the scene.
完整句子:I painted the scene of the park where branches danced in the gentle wind and some ducks swam happily in the river
练习一 24高考:周五你班在公园上了一节美术课,你给外国朋友分享这次经历。 1.你完成的作品 2.你的感想
2.公园里还有许多盛放的鲜花,青葱的树木,还有嬉笑玩乐的孩子们。
补述与画作关系:这都为我的画作添加了色彩
3.这是一次特别的经历
补述感想:我将永远将它记在心中
完整句子:There were numerous blooming flowers,green trees and joyful children playing around in the park,which added vivid colors to my painting.
完整句子:This is a special experience which I will cherish deep in my memory forever.
练习二:我们学校将举办一个爱国演讲比赛
。时间:2026年9月3日。
完整句子:
A speech contest,which is intended to inspire students' patriotic enthusiasm and a sense of responsibility, will be held in our school on September 3, 2026.
补述目的:目的是为了激起(inspire) 学生的爱国热情(patriotic enthusiasm) 以及一种责任感(a sense of responsibility).
练习三 求助信:
你是李华,你和同学根据英文课文改编了一个短剧。你给外教写封短信,请他帮忙指导。1.剧情简介2.指导内容3.商定时间地点
我写信是为了让你指导一个短剧。
我英语语法学不好
补述结果:这给了我很大的困扰
I have difficulty learning English grammar,
which bothers me a lot.
完整句子:I am writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from our textbooks.
补述内容:是从我们的课本改编的(be adapted)
练习四:推荐一项运动:
1.打篮球能提升一种健康的积极的生活方式。
Playing basketball can help us build a positive healthy lifestyle,which is of great benefit to our physical and mental health.
2.它能提升你的专注力。
It can also improve your concentration, which makes it easier for you to stay focused in class.
补述结果
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练习五:关于读书的演讲:
书把我带到一个美妙的世界
Books lead me into a splendid world,where I can share my joys and sorrows with the characters.
练习六:24高考中国交通的发展讲演:
我很荣幸做这个关于中国交通发展的演讲。
It is my honor to deliver a speech about the development of transportation,which includes shared bicycles,high-speed trains and new-energy vehicles.
补述内容:我能与书中的人物分享我的苦与乐
补述内容:发展包括:共享单车,高铁和新能源汽车
China’s high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively,which has greatly saved travel time and promoted economic development.
练习七:1.中国的高速铁路网络有效连接了各大城市
2.新型能源汽车已融入日常生活
New-energy vehicles have entered our lives,which helps to reduce air pollution.
补述结果:大幅缩短了出行时间,促进了经济发展。
补述结果:助力减少空气污染。
练习八:读后续写
1.我们跑着跑着被困在一个狭窄的角落里
完整句子:As we fled,we found ourselves trapped in a narrow corner, where I could almost hear the bear's gasps.
补述:对场景的细节描述,展现惊险画面
:在那里我几乎可以听见它的喘息声(gasp)
2.我学会了最重要的一课
完整句子:From this unforgettable experience,
I learned a valuable lesson that I will never forget
完整句子:He missed the bus that he usually took , which made him late for the important exam.
3.他错过了他经常乘坐的那辆公共汽车
补述影响:
从这次难忘的经历我将永远不会忘记这一课
补述结果:
结果使得他没赶上这次重要的考试
课堂小结:
利用定语从句补述:
1.内容
2.原因
3.结果
4.感想
5.影响
6.目的
Thank you
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