摘要:
**基本信息**
聚焦高中英语写作基础能力提升,通过“词汇替换—句型构建—语法纠错—短语积累”四维训练,形成语言能力递进链条。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|词汇替换|30题|基础词替换训练|衔接背诵清单高频词汇,实现基础表达向高级表达升级|
|句型汉译英|10题|复合句汉译英(定语从句/名词性从句)|聚焦关系代词及what引导从句,强化复杂句型构建能力|
|语法改错|10题|定语从句语法纠错|针对关系代词/副词误用,提升语法精准运用能力|
|背诵清单|30条|高频词汇短语积累|为词汇替换与句型构建提供语言素材,夯实语言能力基础|
内容正文:
J's 高中写作教材
第7课时 高中词汇替换 + 定语从句 03
适用对象:词汇量1500+,目标:应用文14-15分 / 读后续写23-25分
本课时预计用时:约1小时
板块一:高中词汇替换(30组)
每组先给出「中考基础词」,再给出对应的「高考升级词」,所有升级词均不超出高考3500词大纲。
【写作常用副词】
1. truly → genuinely
I am genuinely sorry for the trouble I have caused you.
2. nearly → approximately
Approximately 500 students took part in the activity.
3. suddenly → abruptly
The meeting ended abruptly when the fire alarm went off.
4. completely → thoroughly
She thoroughly enjoyed her trip to the countryside.
5. hardly → barely
He could barely stay awake after working all night.
6. especially → particularly
I am particularly interested in environmental science.
【写作常用动词】
7. get → obtain
You need to obtain permission before using the equipment.
8. have → possess
She possesses a remarkable talent for music.
9. make → create
The artist created a masterpiece that amazed everyone.
10. do → conduct
The scientists conducted a series of experiments last month.
11. put → place
Please place your bags on the shelf above your seat.
12. take off→ remove
Please remove your shoes before entering the room.
【写作常用形容词】
13. true → genuine
He showed genuine interest in learning about Chinese culture.
14. wrong → incorrect
Your answer is incorrect; please try again.
15. clear → obvious
It is obvious that she has put a lot of effort into this project.
16. special → unique
Every person has their own unique way of learning.
17. terrible → horrible
The horrible accident could have been prevented.
18. wonderful → remarkable
He has made remarkable progress in English this semester.
【写作常用名词】
19. work → effort
Your effort will be rewarded in the end.
20. place → location
The location of the new school has not been decided yet.
21. job → career
She is considering a career in education after graduation.
22. help → assistance
Thank you for your assistance during the difficult time.
23. plan → strategy
We need a clear strategy to deal with this situation.
24. skill → ability
The course aims to improve students' writing ability.
【写作常用短语】
25. a lot of → a variety of
The library offers a variety of books on different subjects.
26. more and more → increasingly
People are becoming increasingly aware of health issues.
27. in my opinion → from my perspective
From my perspective, honesty is the most important quality.
28. as a result → consequently
He didn't study; consequently, he failed the test.
29. in short → in conclusion
In conclusion, I believe everyone can benefit from reading.
30. on the other hand → in contrast
In contrast, city life offers more entertainment options.
板块二:定语从句汉译英(10题)
1. 我昨天遇到的那位女士是一位著名的作家。
→ The lady whom I met yesterday is a famous writer.
[关系代词whom]
2. 他给了我一个我无法拒绝的理由。
→ He gave me a reason that I could not refuse.
[关系代词that]
3. 那些故事很有趣的孩子都在这里。
→ The children whose stories are interesting are all here.
[关系代词whose]
4. 你有没有去过我们上次提到的那家餐厅?
→ Have you been to the restaurant that we mentioned last time?
[关系代词that]
5. 这就是我想要跟你说的事情。
→ This is what I wanted to tell you.
[what引导的表语从句]
6. 任何值得做的事情都值得做好。
→ Anything that is worth doing is worth doing well.
[关系代词that]
7. 她是我见过的对学生最有耐心的老师。
→ She is the most patient teacher that I have ever met.
[关系代词that]
8. 你刚才说的话让我深受启发。
→ What you just said inspired me greatly.
[what引导的主语从句]
9. 我们讨论过的那个问题还没有解决。
→ The problem that we discussed has not been solved yet.
[关系代词that]
10. 这是唯一一本我想推荐给你的书。
→ This is the only book that I want to recommend to you.
[关系代词that]
板块三:语法改错(10题)
每题给出错误句子,请找出并改正。答案附在下方。
1. The person to who you spoke is my professor.
→ The person to whom you spoke is my professor.
说明:介词后只能用whom,不能用who
2. This is the room which window faces the sea.
→ This is the room whose window faces the sea.
说明:所属关系用whose,不用which
3. I will never forget the day on when we met.
→ I will never forget the day when we met.
说明:when=on which,不能再加介词on
4. He is the student whom won the first prize.
→ He is the student who won the first prize.
说明:won缺主语,用who作主语,不用whom
5. The house that I live is very old.
→ The house where I live is very old.
说明:live是不及物动词,用where作地点状语
6. Everything what you need is in this box.
→ Everything that you need is in this box.
说明:everything后用that不用what
7. She is one of the students who has passed the exam.
→ She is one of the students who have passed the exam.
说明:先行词是students(复数),从句谓语用have
8. The way how he solved the problem was clever.
→ The way that he solved the problem was clever.
说明:way作先行词用that/in which或省略,不用how
9. I don't know the reason why he gave for being late.
→ I don't know the reason that he gave for being late.
说明:gave的宾语是reason,用that/which,不用why
10. Those who is interested can sign up here.
→ Those who are interested can sign up here.
说明:先行词Those是复数,从句谓语用are
板块四:背诵清单(30组)
1. genuinely — adv. 真诚地;真正地
2. approximately — adv. 大约;近似地
3. abruptly — adv. 突然地;唐突地
4. thoroughly — adv. 彻底地;完全地
5. barely — adv. 几乎不;勉强
6. particularly — adv. 特别地;尤其
7. obtain — v. 获得;得到
8. possess — v. 拥有;具有
9. create — v. 创造;创建
10. conduct — v. 进行;实施
11. place — v. 放置;安置
12. remove — v. 移除;拿走
13. genuine — adj. 真正的;真诚的
14. incorrect — adj. 不正确的
15. obvious — adj. 明显的;显然的
16. unique — adj. 独特的;唯一的
17. horrible — adj. 可怕的;糟糕的
18. remarkable — adj. 显著的;非凡的
19. effort — n. 努力;尽力
20. location — n. 地点;位置
21. career — n. 职业;事业
22. assistance — n. 帮助;援助
23. strategy — n. 策略;战略
24. ability — n. 能力;才能
25. a variety of — 各种各样的
26. increasingly — adv. 越来越;日益
27. from my perspective — 在我看来
28. consequently — adv. 因此;结果
29. in conclusion — 总之;最后
30. in contrast — 相比之下
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J's 高中写作进阶练习
课时7
【第一部分】词汇替换(30题)
用其它词汇替换划线的基础词。
1. I am truly sorry for the trouble I have caused you.
2. Nearly 500 students took part in the activity.
3. The meeting ended suddenly when the fire alarm went off.
4. She completely enjoyed her trip to the countryside.
5. He could hardly stay awake after working all night.
6. I am especially interested in environmental science.
7. You need to get permission before using the equipment.
8. She has a remarkable talent for music.
9. The artist made a masterpiece that amazed everyone.
10. The scientists did a series of experiments last month.
11. Please put your bags on the shelf above your seat.
12. Please take off your shoes before entering the room.
13. He showed true interest in learning about Chinese culture.
14. Your answer is wrong; please try again.
15. It is clear that she has put a lot of effort into this project.
16. Every person has their own special way of learning.
17. The terrible accident could have been prevented.
18. He has made wonderful progress in English this semester.
19. Your work will be rewarded in the end.
20. The place of the new school has not been decided yet.
21. She is considering a job in education after graduation.
22. Thank you for your help during the difficult time.
23. We need a clear plan to deal with this situation.
24. The course aims to improve students' writing skill.
25. The library offers a lot of books on different subjects.
26. People are becoming more and more aware of health issues.
27. In my opinion, honesty is the most important quality.
28. He didn't study; as a result, he failed the test.
29. In short, I believe everyone can benefit from reading.
30. On the other hand, city life offers more entertainment options.
【第二部分】句型汉译英(10题)
将下列中文句子译成英文,注意使用本课句型。
1. 我昨天遇到的那位女士是一位著名的作家。 (提示:whom,关系代词whom)
→ ______________________________________________________________
2. 他给了我一个我无法拒绝的理由。 (提示:that,关系代词that)
→ ______________________________________________________________
3. 那些故事很有趣的孩子都在这里。 (提示:whose,关系代词whose)
→ ______________________________________________________________
4. 你有没有去过我们上次提到的那家餐厅? (提示:that,关系代词that)
→ ______________________________________________________________
5. 这就是我想要跟你说的事情。 (提示:what,what引导的表语从句)
→ ______________________________________________________________
6. 任何值得做的事情都值得做好。 (提示:that,关系代词that)
→ ______________________________________________________________
7. 她是我见过的对学生最有耐心的老师。 (提示:that,关系代词that)
→ ______________________________________________________________
8. 你刚才说的话让我深受启发。 (提示:What,what引导的主语从句)
→ ______________________________________________________________
9. 我们讨论过的那个问题还没有解决。 (提示:that,关系代词that)
→ ______________________________________________________________
10. 这是唯一一本我想推荐给你的书。 (提示:that,关系代词that)
→ ______________________________________________________________
【第三部分】语法改错(10题)
每题找出并改正一处语法错误,在原句上直接标注修改。
1. The person to who you spoke is my professor.
改正:__________________________________________________________
2. This is the room which window faces the sea.
改正:__________________________________________________________
3. I will never forget the day on when we met.
改正:__________________________________________________________
4. He is the student whom won the first prize.
改正:__________________________________________________________
5. The house that I live is very old.
改正:__________________________________________________________
6. Everything what you need is in this box.
改正:__________________________________________________________
7. She is one of the students who has passed the exam.
改正:__________________________________________________________
8. The way how he solved the problem was clever.
改正:__________________________________________________________
9. I don't know the reason why he gave for being late.
改正:__________________________________________________________
10. Those who is interested can sign up here.
改正:__________________________________________________________
【第四部分】背诵清单(30条)
熟读并背诵以下高频短语,右侧中文释义供参考。
1. genuinely — adv. 真诚地;真正地
2. approximately — adv. 大约;近似地
3. abruptly — adv. 突然地;唐突地
4. thoroughly — adv. 彻底地;完全地
5. barely — adv. 几乎不;勉强
6. particularly — adv. 特别地;尤其
7. obtain — v. 获得;得到
8. possess — v. 拥有;具有
9. create — v. 创造;创建
10. conduct — v. 进行;实施
11. place — v. 放置;安置
12. remove — v. 移除;拿走
13. genuine — adj. 真正的;真诚的
14. incorrect — adj. 不正确的
15. obvious — adj. 明显的;显然的
16. unique — adj. 独特的;唯一的
17. horrible — adj. 可怕的;糟糕的
18. remarkable — adj. 显著的;非凡的
19. effort — n. 努力;尽力
20. location — n. 地点;位置
21. career — n. 职业;事业
22. assistance — n. 帮助;援助
23. strategy — n. 策略;战略
24. ability — n. 能力;才能
25. a variety of — 各种各样的
26. increasingly — adv. 越来越;日益
27. from my perspective — 在我看来
28. consequently — adv. 因此;结果
29. in conclusion — 总之;最后
30. in contrast — 相比之下
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