Unit 7 第5课时 Section B(2a-2b)（配套word）-【全效学习】2024-2025学年七年级下册英语（人教版·新教材）浙江专版

本讲义聚焦初中英语书面表达中“记述过去事件”的核心知识点，系统梳理从单元要求（描述旅行、野营等）到具体写作任务（学校旅行日记、照顾生病妈妈）的学习脉络，通过审题立意（主题、人称、时态）、巧列提纲、语料积累（短语、句子）、范文分析及评价表等支架，帮助学生掌握人物、时间、地点、事件、感受要素，运用时间顺序词和一般过去时。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力（提供“go on a trip to”等短语及范文示范，提升表达准确性）、思维品质（通过First of all...Then...等时间顺序词培养逻辑叙事能力）和学习能力（自评他评表促进自主反思）。例如学校旅行范文用时间词清晰展开活动，照顾妈妈任务评价表助学生自查时态、细节等，课中辅助教师高效教学，课后帮助学生查漏补缺，巩固写作技能。

第5课时　Section B(2a-2b) 　　　　　　 　　　　　 　　　　　 本单元的书面表达要求同学们能用英语描述过去的事件,如记述过去的一次旅行、野营或故事等。 1.能从人物who, 时间when, 地点where, 事件what, 感受how等方面详述故事或事件; 2.能正确使用first, then, next, finally等词或者时间顺序展开事件的叙述; 3.能正确使用一般过去时。 　　学校网站正在进行征文活动。请你根据网站提出的问题,写一篇80词左右的英语日记,描述你的一次学校旅行经历。 【审题立意】 主题 人称 时态 　a school trip　  　第一人称　  　一般过去时　  【巧列提纲】 【语料积累】 常用短语 1.去……旅行 　go on a trip to …　  2.对……感兴趣 　be/get interested in …　  3.花费某人时间做某事 　it takes sb some time to do sth　  4.享受做某事 　enjoy doing sth　  常用句子 1.This experience has a special meaning for me. 这个经历对我来说有着特殊的意义。 2.I hope I can have a chance to climb Mount Taishan someday. 我希望自己有朝一日有机会爬泰山。 3.You may have a feeling of happiness when helping others. 当帮助别人时,你可能会有一种幸福感。 4.Although I’m busy, I’m happy to take care of my grandma. 虽然我很忙,但是我很乐意照顾我的祖母。 【高分点拨】 Cloudy, 1 October Last weekend, ①we went on a school trip to Sun Farm, where we enjoyed ourselves a lot. ②First of all, we took a car there and the farmer welcomed us warmly. ②Then, we went to the farm and saw lots of animals, so we decided to do some interesting activities, such as milking cows, feeding chickens and so on. Everyone felt excited like birds out of cage. ②After that, we picked and enjoyed apples. They were so sweet that we ate a lot. ②In the afternoon, we talked with the farmer and he taught us how to grow some plants patiently. ③Though we were tired, we learned a lot and got closer to nature, which would be the best memory for us. ①用enjoy oneself … 表达感受。 ②用First of all … Then … After that … 　In the afternoon … 等表示时间顺序的词叙事,体现过程。 ③用learned a lot … best memory说明活动的感受。 　　请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英文写一篇短文。记叙爸爸出差期间,妈妈生病,你照顾她的过程。 注意:1.根据上述图片内容可适当发挥,增加细节; 2.词数80左右。 参考词汇:go on a business trip出差; immediately立即; medicine 药 内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ 书写:　　　 Advice:　 　 　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　 　　  Good writing makes your article better. 　　I have a happy family. My parents are kind and they love me so much. I love them deeply and always want to do something in return.  Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning, I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then made a bowl of noodles for her. With my care, my mother got better finally. When my father came back home, my mother told him all the things. He praised me.  I felt very happy because I did something for my mother.  【写作指导与评价】 步骤 要点 自评 他评 是(√)　否(×) 审 正确使用第一人称叙事 篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾) 语句通顺,语意连贯 润 从人物who, 时间when, 地点where, 事件what, 感受how等方面叙事 正确运用first, then, next, finally等词或者时间顺序展开事件的叙述 查 清楚地叙述事情,并适当增加细节 正确使用一般过去时 拼写、语法、标点无误 达到词数要求 书写美观、卷面整洁 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $