摘要:
本讲义聚焦初中英语书面表达中“饮食习惯评价”核心知识点,系统梳理用enjoy、prefer、dislike等动词描述习惯,用healthy、good、bad等词评价习惯的语言技能。通过审题立意、提纲构建、语料积累、范文点拨及评价表等学习支架,帮助学生从词汇短语积累过渡到完整短文写作,形成“输入-内化-输出”的学习脉络。
该资料特色在于以核心素养为导向,语言能力层面提供“保持健康”“对……有益”等短语及实用句型,夯实表达基础;思维品质层面通过家庭饮食评价、网上点餐利弊分析任务,培养学生分析与评价能力;学习能力层面设计自评他评表,引导主动反思。实例丰富如家庭饮食写作范文与网上点餐写作指导,课中辅助教师高效教学,课后助力学生自查补缺,提升写作综合能力。
内容正文:
第5课时 Section B(2a-2c)
本单元的书面表达要求同学们能用英语表达对饮食习惯的评价。
1.能用enjoy, prefer, dislike等动词来描述一个人的饮食习惯;
2.能用healthy, good, bad等不同的词语来评价一个人的饮食习惯。
假如你是王梅,你的英语老师做了一个关于家庭饮食的小调查,请你根据调查内容写一篇短文,在英语课上与同学们分享。
1.Who often prepares and cooks meals in your family?
2.What are your family’s eating habits?
3.What do you think of your family diet (日常饮食) and what’s your advice for it?
注意:1.短文必须包括以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.词数80左右。
【审题立意】
主题
人称
时态
family’s eating habits
第一人称、第三人称
一般现在时
【巧列提纲】
【语料积累】
常用短语
1.保持健康 keep healthy/fit
2.好的饮食习惯 good eating habits
3.对……有益 be good for
4.一日三餐 three meals a day
5.按时吃饭 have meals on time
常用句子
1.It is a good way to improve our health.
这是改善我们健康的好方法。
2.Having balanced eating habits can build up our bodies.
有均衡的饮食习惯可以增强我们的体质。
3.Mary is careful with her diet because she wants to live a healthy life.
玛丽对她的饮食很小心,因为她想过健康的生活。
4.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
一天一苹果,医生远离我。
5.Eating fast food too often makes us put on weight and may cause heart problems later.
吃快餐过于频繁会让我们发胖,日后还可能引发心脏问题。
【高分点拨】
I’m happy to share my family diet with you today.
In my family, my mother and father often prepare and cook meals for us. Sometimes my brother and I help them in our free time. ①My family all like eating all kinds of meat, especially beef and chicken except my mother. She prefers vegetables. Every day we also have different food groups, such as fruits, protein foods and calcium foods. What’s more, both my brother and I drink one cup of milk every day.
②In my opinion, our family diet is a little unhealthy. ③To make it better and more balanced, I think we need to have more vegetables and less meat in future.
①用like, prefer, have, drink等动词说明家庭成员的饮食爱好和习惯。
②用in my opinion来评价家庭成员的饮食习惯。
③对家庭饮食习惯给予建议。
现如今,很多人喜欢网上点餐。请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈网上点餐的利与弊,并阐述你的观点。可适当发挥,不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。词数80左右。
Ordering food online
Advantages
(优点)
save time; don’t go out;
many kinds of food …
Disadvantages
(缺点)
bad eating habits; not clean;
…
Your opinion
…
参考词汇:convenient (方便), plastic packages (塑料包装), pollute the environment (污染环境) …
内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
书写:
Advice:
Good writing makes your article better.
Nowadays, many people prefer ordering food online. Some people think it is good to order food online. It is more convenient and faster than they cook at home, so they can save much time to do other things. Besides, there are many kinds of take-away food and most of them are delicious. What is more, ordering food online can reduce going out.
However, other people hold a different opinion. They say some restaurants may have food safety problems and plastic packages are bad for the environment and people’s health. In addition, this kind of eating habits is unhealthy.
In my opinion, we can order food online sometimes, but for our health, we had better cook it by ourselves.
【写作指导与评价】
步骤
要点
自评
他评
是(√) 否(×)
审
正确使用第一人称、第三人称介绍网上点餐的优缺点
篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾)
润
正确介绍网上点餐的优缺点,并发表评价
运用不同的表达来表述网上点餐的优缺点
查
介绍他人的看法
对网上点餐进行评价,并适当增加理由
拼写、语法、标点无误
达到词数要求
书写美观、卷面整洁
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