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第5课时 Section B(2a-2b)
本单元的书面表达要求同学们能用英语描述天气状况及自己和他人正在做的活动,在活动进行中描述所见、所听、所感等。
1.能熟练运用描述天气的形容词sunny/dry/stormy/snowy/freezing/wet/windy … 表述当地的状况;
2.能熟练运用magical/glad/tiring/tired/amazing/wonderful/lovely/in high spirits/make good progress/look grey … 表达个人感受;
3.能正确使用现在进行时。
假如你是王明,你的美国网友Jane给你留言说要来你的家乡旅游,她想提前了解你那里的天气情况和活动等。请你根据以下提示用英文回复她的留言。
提示:1.What’s the weather like in your hometown?
2.What can you do?
3.What are you doing?
【审题立意】
主题
人称
时态
weather and activities
第一人称、第三人称
现在进行时、
一般现在时
【巧列提纲】
【语料积累】
常用短语
1.看起来棒极了 look amazing/wonderful/nice
2.感觉就像 feel like
3.兴高采烈 in high spirits
4.很高兴做某事 be glad/happy to do sth
5.美丽的景色 a lovely/beautiful sight
常用句子
1.It feels like a magical place. The trees and rocks look like a part of a painting.
那就像一个神奇的地方。眼前的树和岩石就像一幅画卷。
2.Although the weather is bad, many people are still in high spirits.
虽然天气很糟糕,但是人们依然很高兴。
3.The sun is shining through the clouds! What a lovely sight!
阳光明媚,透过云层!多么美好的景象啊!
4.We can see children flying kites in the park when there is a gentle breeze.
我们可以在微风吹拂的天气里看到孩子们在公园里放风筝。
5.Hangzhou is wet and rainy in spring. You can see all kinds of flowers when you come.
杭州春季潮湿多雨。你来的时候可以看到各种各样的花。
【高分点拨】
Dear Jane,
I’m so glad to hear that you’re going to visit my hometown in July. Hangzhou is in the southeast of China. It’s hot and sunny here as usual.
In summer, it’s the best time for visiting Jiuxi. ①I think it is the most attractive at this time. I often take a walk with my family through the forest. ②We can feel the fresh air, see the clean streams and hear the beautiful songs from birds in the trees. ①It’s so enjoyable. Now the sun is shining through the clouds! What a lovely sight! ③My parents and I are enjoying Longjing tea near a stream. We are talking with each other and sharing the food we all like. ①What a happy and relaxing day!
In short, ①it’s a wonderful place and I’m sure you will like it.
Yours,
Wang Ming
①attractive/enjoyable/relaxing/wonderful等描写感受。
②用see/hear/feel介绍所见、所听、所感。
③用现在进行时表达正在做的事情。
四季很美,有很多快乐的事情可做。在你眼中,你的家乡哪个季节最美?请以“ in My Hometown”为题介绍一下你家乡最美的季节。词数80左右。
in My Hometown
When is in my hometown?
Why do I like it?
weather
activities(do/see/hear)
…
How do I feel about it?
内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
书写:
Advice:
Good writing makes your article better.
Spring in My Hometown
My hometown is Hangzhou. Spring is my favourite season in Hangzhou. It usually comes in March and ends in May. It’s usually warm and sunny.
When spring comes, everything starts to grow. Trees turn green and many flowers come out. It looks so lively and beautiful. I often go hiking in spring. I like to feel close to nature and enjoy the beautiful spring scenes. Now, I’m flying a kite with my friends in the park. There are also some people having picnics on the grass. It is really enjoyable to have such a good time in spring.
Spring is great! I like it very much!
【写作指导与评价】
步骤
要点
自评
他评
是(√) 否(×)
审
正确使用人称和时态
篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾)
润
用cold/hot/sunny/windy/cloudy/rainy/snowy等表述天气
用in high spirits/look amazing/look grey等表达心情与感受
正确运用连词and, but, so, although, 副词instead, 介词短语because of等
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介绍天气、活动、心情并适当增加细节
拼写、语法、标点无误
达到词数要求
书写美观、卷面整洁
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