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英 语
七年级下册 人教版
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Unit 6 Rain or Shine
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
How do we feel about
the weather?
Period 5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.多云的;阴天的 ________
2.影响 ________
3.大量地;沉重地 _________
cloudy
affect
heavily
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4.不论是雨或是晴;不管发生什么事 _______________
rain or shine
【解析】知识拓展
rain or shine是固定短语,意为“无论是雨或是晴;不管发生什么事”。近义表
达:come what may意为“不管怎样”;no matter what意为“无论如何;不管怎
样”。
5.取得进展 _______________
6.因为 ________________
make progress
because (of)
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】What are you doing? (现在进行时)
→仿写:你和你的朋友们在做什么?
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What are you and your friends doing?/What are you doing with your
friends?
8.【教材原句】It feels like a magical place.(feel like)
→仿写:他感到自己像一个真正的老师。
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He feels like he is a real teacher.
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9.【教材原句】Everything looks grey, and you can’t see much because of the
heavy fog.(because of)
→仿写:地上很湿,因为大雨我们不能在外面玩。
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The ground is wet, and we can’t play outside because of the heavy rain.
10.【教材原句】It is difficult for people to use their umbrellas.(It is +adj.+ to
do sth)
→仿写:当阳光灿烂时,在外面玩耍真是太棒了。
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It is wonderful to play outside when the sun is shining brightly.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
The Weather in My City
Hi, everyone. Today I want to talk about the weather in my city and how it
changes.
Usually, in spring, the weather is nice and warm (描述天气).We often see
blue skies and feel a gentle breeze.Many people can fly kites in the park or have
picnics (介绍该天气下人们的活动).It’s a good time for outdoor activities.#1.1.1
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But sometimes, the weather can change quickly (点明天气的特点).For
example, this morning it is sunny, but now, look! Dark clouds are gathering
(对比天气变化).The wind is getting stronger. I think it is going to rain. When
it rains, people usually stay indoors.Some people can read books or watch TV at
home (天气影响下的行为).
I like sunny days best because I can play outside (说明喜欢的天气及原
因).What about you? How is the weather in your city?#1.1.3
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
假如你是李华,是学校的广播员,你每天为大家播报天气信息。下面表格列
出了今、明、后三天的天气,请你为大家播报。
要点:
星
期 Friday Saturday Sunday
天
气
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议 天气凉爽,适合课后与同学
进行室外活动 雨天,最好待在家做作
业、做家务 天气晴朗,适合和家人
去公园游玩
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注意:(1)内容应包括所有提示内容,行文要通顺连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Hua.___________________________
That’s all.
第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:第二人称、第三人称
内容要点:天气信息播报
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列#5
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Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Hua.Now
I’d like to tell you ① the weather report for today
and the following two days.
It’s cloudy today, so it’s cool.It’s a good time
to play outside with your classmates after class. ②
But tomorrow you have to stay at home because
it’s rainy. You can do your homework and do
some housework at home. On Sunday, the sun
comes out ③ again. It’s sunny and warm. It’s great
to go to the park with your family.
That’s all. ________________________________
①用“Now I’d like to tell
you…”来引出要讲述的内
容,自然地开启话题;
②用“It’s a good time to…”
介绍可以做的事情,使文章
内容更丰富;
③the sun comes out形象地
表达太阳出来的意思,比It’s
sunny更生动。
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文章开门见山,直接表明要播报今天及未来两天的天气情况,没有多余的铺垫;
使用的词汇和句式都非常基础、常见,符合天气预报面向大众、易于理解的需
求;使用so、and 等连词使逻辑关系更加清晰。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025浙江舟山调研】假如你是李华,你在美国的笔友David要来中国参观,
向你询问中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你根据提示给你的笔友写
一封邮件,介绍一下中国的天气特点,并为他的参观提供一些建议。
要点提示:(1)How many seasons are there in your country?
(2)What’s the weather like in each season?
(3)What’s your advice?
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写作要求:(1)参考提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名等);
(4)词数不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear David,
I’m very glad that you will come to visit China.________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
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【参考范文】
Dear David,
I’m very glad that you will come to visit China.
There is something about the weather in China.There are four
seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter.Summer is the hottest season
of the year.It often rains heavily.And winter is the coldest.Sometimes
it snows, especially in the north of China.If you like snow, you can
come at this time of a year.But I think the best time to visit China is
in spring or autumn because the weather is not too cold or too
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hot.It’s very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such
as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai.
I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Value statement:Enjoy your day, come rain or shine.
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