摘要:
本讲义聚焦初中英语书面表达核心知识点,引导学生运用活动词汇及频度副词描述生活习惯,结合生活方式自我评价表完成"My Lifestyle"短文写作。学习支架涵盖审题(明确主题、人称、时态)、提纲构建、语料积累(常用短语和句子)及高分范文示例,帮助学生从素材选择到语言组织形成完整写作路径。
该资料以真实情境驱动语言能力发展,通过自我评价表引导学生结合自身实际选择饮食、睡眠等内容,增强表达真实性。语料积累模块提供结构化词汇和句式,培养学习能力,助力自主写作。高分范文及写作指导渗透思维品质,如范文用频度副词具体描述并反思生活方式,引导学生分析与评价。课中辅助教师高效开展写作教学,课后学生可借助自评表和范文查漏补缺,巩固写作技能。
内容正文:
第5课时 Section B(2a-2c)
本单元的书面表达要求同学们综合运用所学语言来介绍、描述自己或同伴的生活习惯。
1.运用有关活动的词汇和always、sometimes、seldom等频度副词描述自己和他人的生活习惯;
2.发现、感悟、加深对培养健康生活习惯的理解,促进学生养成健康的生活方式。
下面是一份生活方式自我评价表,请你在符合自己实际情况的方框中打√(可以多选),并根据你的选择和提示内容,以“My Lifestyle”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,说明你的生活方式以及你对此的看法。
Lifestyle Self-assessment
1.The food I often eat:
□vegetables □fruit □fish □meat
□hamburgers □eggs □ice cream
2.How many hours I sleep every day:
□less than 7 hours □about 8 hours
□about 9 hours □more than 10 hours
3.The sports I usually play:
□running □swimming □basketball
□volleyball □ping-pong □football
4.How to relax in my free time:
□read books □watch TV □listen to music
5.How many times I brush my teeth every day:
□once □twice □three times □never
【审题立意】
主题
人称
时态
my lifestyle
第一人称
一般现在时
【巧列提纲】
【语料积累】
常用短语
1.寒假 winter vacation/holiday
2.在家学习 study at home
3.做运动 do/play sport(s)
4.在电视上看各种节目 watch different kinds
of shows/programmes on TV
5.对我们的头脑和身体有好处 be good for our minds and bodies
6.询问她的习惯 ask (her) about her habits
常用句子
1.I love sports, such as climbing mountains and swimming.
我喜欢运动,比如爬山和游泳。
2.Mike often watches TV for more than two hours a day.
迈克经常一天看电视超过2个小时。
3.Sports teach young people how to communicate and work as a team.
运动教会年轻人如何进行团队交流和协作。
4.One of the advantages of exercise is that you will feel happier after that.
锻炼的其中一个好处是你会在那之后感到更开心。
5.In order to keep fit, we should form healthy living habits.
为了保持健康,我们应该有健康的生活习惯。
【高分点拨】
Now let me tell you something about my lifestyle. ①I often eat fruit and vegetables because they are good for my health. Apples are my favourite fruit. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. I think the best way to keep healthy is having a good eating habit. I also love junk food like ice cream. But I eat it two or three times a week. I sleep less than seven hours every day. So I feel sleepy sometimes. I love sports, such as climbing mountains and swimming. In my free time, I often watch TV for more than two hours a day. And I brush my teeth twice a day.
②Generally speaking, my lifestyle is not good enough. I shouldn’t eat too much junk food. Also, I should sleep more.
①用often, two or three times a week等来介绍自己的生活方式。
②用Generally speaking总结自己的生活方式及对其的看法。
假如你是李华,你们学校的健身俱乐部要举办一场健身经验分享活动,你打算邀请你们班的交换生Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动的时间和地点、活动安排,以及他需要做的准备。词数80左右;邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词语:fit, share, invite, experience, question
提示问题:1.When and where do you have the activity?
2.What do you do?
3.What do you advise Peter to prepare for it?
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书写:
Advice:
Good writing makes your article better.
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
There is an activity on “How to Keep Fit” in our school. I’d like to invite you to join in it. This activity starts at 6 o’clock this Friday evening in our school library. All the members of the Fitness Club take part in it. First, some of our members share their experiences of how they keep fit in their daily life, including their exercise plans, useful skills, their feelings as well as achievements they’ve made. Then, the free talk starts and everyone is free to ask questions.
You’re welcome to share your own exercise experience. You can also share your diet with us.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导与评价】
步骤
要点
自评
他评
是(√) 否(×)
审
正确使用第三人称介绍活动的时间、地点和安排,使用第二人称提出建议
篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾)
要点齐全
润
正确运用first, then等词介绍活动流程
用You’re welcome to …/You can also … 等句式提出建议
查
介绍活动的时间、地点和活动安排
为Peter提出一些适当的建议
拼写、语法、标点无误
达到词数要求
书写美观、卷面整洁
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