摘要:
本初中英语讲义聚焦“介绍家庭”书面表达核心知识点,系统梳理This/That is…、These/Those are…等介绍句式,handsome、tall等外貌描述词汇,以及实义动词原形与第三人称单数的灵活运用。通过审题立意明确主题、人称与时态,巧列提纲搭建写作框架,语料积累提供短语与句型支持,形成从基础语言知识到篇章写作的完整学习支架。
该资料特色在于以语言能力培养为核心,通过高分范文点评(如用and承接母亲性格与爱好,but体现家庭成员差异)提升表达逻辑,借助自评他评表(核查人称、结构、语法等)培养学习能力。课中辅助教师高效授课,课后助力学生自查自纠,兼顾语言应用与思维品质发展,实用性强。
内容正文:
第5课时 Section B(2a-2b)
本单元的书面表达要求同学们能用英语简单介绍自己的家庭,内容包括家庭成员、他们的外形和爱好等。
1.能用This/That is …/These/Those are …/Next to … is …等句式来介绍家庭成员;
2.能用handsome, beautiful, tall, big eyes等不同的词语来形容一个人的外貌特征;
3.能灵活运用实义动词的原形或第三人称单数形式介绍一个人的爱好。
假如你是李华,你的笔友Mike发来邮件,想要了解你和你的家人,请你结合图表信息,给他回一封60词左右的邮件。
People
Appearance
Personality
Hobby
Dad
tall
funny
play basketball
Mum
thin
kind
tell stories
Li Hua
not tall or short
quiet
read books
Li Ling
long black hair
clever
love animals
【审题立意】
主题
人称
时态
My family
第一人称、 第三人称
一般现在时
【巧列提纲】
【语料积累】
常用短语
1.父亲最喜欢的运动 my father’s favourite/favorite sport
2.每天/周 every day/week
3.看书 read books
4.喜欢做 like/love doing/to do
5.互相帮助对方 help each other
常用句子
1.This is a photo of my family.
这是我的一张家庭照片。
2.Next to him is my mother.
在他旁边的是我的母亲。
3.This is my little sister, Li Ling.
这是我的妹妹,李玲。
4.She is beautiful and kind.
她美丽又善良。
5.We are different, but we love and help each other.
我们互不相同,但我们热爱彼此并互相帮助。
【高分点拨】
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to get your email. I’d like to tell you something about my family and me.
I’m Li Hua. ①This is a photo of my family. Here’s my dad. He looks tall. And his favourite sport is playing basketball. ②He plays it every weekend. He is also very funny and ③makes us laugh a lot. Next to him is my mother. She’s thin and beautiful. ④She is very kind and likes telling stories to us. The boy next to my dad is me. I’m not tall or short. I’m quiet and love reading books. This is my little sister, Li Ling. She has long black hair. She’s clever and loves animals a lot. ⑤We are different, but we love and help each other.
That’s all about my family. What about yours? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
①开篇切入话题简洁明了,用This is…介绍了自己的家庭照片。
②③适当增加细节,进一步说明了父亲的爱好和性格。
④母亲善良的性格和她的爱好存在关联性,因此恰当运用连词and进行承接。
⑤We are different不仅表达了作者的观点,还起到了承接上文的作用,而love and help each other则表达了作者对这个家庭的喜爱。
假如你是Jenny,请你根据图片写一篇60词左右的英语短文,向大家介绍你的家人和他们的爱好,适当增加细节(如外貌、性格等),使行文连贯。
内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
书写:
Advice: ___________________
__________________________
Good writing makes your article better.
Hello, I’m Jenny. I like playing the piano. This is my family. My father’s name is Frank. He is handsome and funny. He is good at playing chess and he likes it. Anna is my mother. She is beautiful and kind. She is a cook and can cook delicious food. My brother, Sam, has short hair and he likes reading books. Our family members have different hobbies but we spend a lot of time having fun together.
【写作指导与评价】
步骤
要点
自评
他评
是(√) 否(×)
审
正确使用第一人称和第三人称介绍自己和家人
篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾)
润
用This is …/These are …/He likes …/She likes …/They like …等句式来介绍家人和他们的爱好
正确运用连词and承接人物的外貌和性格特点,用but表述人物之间的外貌、性格或爱好之间的差别
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介绍了家人及其外貌、性格和爱好,并适当增加细节
拼写、语法、标点无误
达到词数要求
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