Unit 3 Smart Learning. 高效智慧学习（单元写作精练）英语新教材人教版九年级上册

**基本信息** 以“智慧学习”为主题，构建“语言要素积累-篇章结构搭建-实战迁移应用”的系统性写作训练体系，强化语言能力与学习能力培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作基础|词汇20+短语15+句式20+谚语5|分类积累（主题词汇/功能句式/谚语）|从基础语言要素到语篇组织，层层递进| |审题构思|1道原题|三段式结构（开头引入-主体论证-结尾总结）|遵循“审题立意-构思布局”写作流程| |范文解析|1篇范文+亮点解析|推荐理由提炼法（功能+效果）|通过真题实例验证方法有效性| |实战训练|8道不同地区期中/期末题|高阶表达升格（by doing/not only...but also...）|从仿写应用到自主创作，实现能力迁移|

Unit 3 Smart Learning .高效智慧学习 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 本单元的话题为“智慧学习”，要求能根据文字提示介绍智慧学习方法，分享学习经验，谈论学习体会及针对他人学习中遇到的困难给出合理的建议。 写作时主要用第一人称I/we和第二人称you,在陈述自己的观点及提建议时应用一般现在时，表示祝愿及希望时可用祈使句或一般将来时。 [教材典句] ①Practice makes perfect. ②He suggested that learners should read and take notes very carefully,then summarize the key points. ③In addition,studies show that students learn more when they hang out with other students who are serious about study. ④By doing hands-on experiments,Peter finds that he can connect physics with something in real life. ⑤Reading is important for learning in general. 【词汇积累】 词汇积累 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① ability n. 能力 ② learn v. 学习；学会 ③ habit n. 习惯 ④ interest n. 兴趣；爱好 ⑤ attention n. 注意力 ⑥ connect v. 联系；关联 ⑦ practice v. & n. 练习 ⑧ mistake n. 错误 ⑨ perfect adj. 完美的 ⑩ succeed v. 成功 ⑪ develop v. 培养；发展 ⑫ skill n. 技巧；技能 ⑬ review v. & n. 复习 ⑭ note n. 笔记 ⑮ explain v. 解释；说明 ⑯ question v. & n. 提问；问题 ⑰ lifelong adj. 终身的 ⑱ wise adj. 明智的；智慧的 ⑲ improve v. 提升；改善 ⑳ challenge n. & v. 挑战 短语积累 ① be born with 天生具有 ② depend on 依靠；取决于 ③ create an interest in 对……产生兴趣 ④ pay attention to 关注；注意 ⑤ connect…with… 把……和……联系起来 ⑥ get bored 感到无聊 ⑦ learn from mistakes 从错误中学习 ⑧ keep practicing 坚持练习 ⑨ take notes 记笔记 ⑩ mind maps 思维导图 ⑪ review knowledge 复习知识 ⑫ find out answers 找出答案 ⑬ study skills 学习技巧 ⑭ overcome difficulties 克服困难 ⑮ a lifelong journey 终身的旅程 【句式积累】 开头句 ① Everyone is born with the ability to learn. 每个人天生都具备学习的能力。 ② Good learning habits are the key to successful learning. 良好的学习习惯是高效学习的关键。 ③ It is important for us to learn wisely instead of studying hard blindly. 对我们来说，明智学习远比盲目苦学更重要。 ④ Many students have difficulties in learning and need good methods. 很多学生在学习中遇到困难，需要好的学习方法。 ⑤ I have some useful experience to share about smart learning. 我有一些高效学习的有用经验可以分享。 中间句 ① We should create interest in our study to avoid getting bored. 我们应该培养学习兴趣，避免感到枯燥无聊。 ② It’s helpful to connect what we learn with interesting things. 将所学知识和有趣的事物结合起来大有裨益。 ③ We must pay full attention to knowledge when we study. 学习时我们必须全身心专注所学知识。 ④ Never be afraid of making mistakes and learn from them. 不要害怕犯错，要学会从错误中吸取教训。 ⑤ We need to keep practicing what we have learned every day. 我们需要每天坚持巩固所学的知识。 ⑥ Taking notes and drawing mind maps help us study better. 记笔记、画思维导图能帮助我们更好地学习。 ⑦ It’s necessary to review our knowledge after learning new things. 学习新知识后，复习巩固是很有必要的。 ⑧ We should ask questions and find out answers in time. 我们要主动提问，及时找出问题的答案。 ⑨ If you feel tired, you can change your study ways to relax. 如果学习疲惫，可以更换学习方式放松自己。 ⑩ Working with classmates helps us solve learning problems. 和同学合作学习，能帮助我们解决学习难题。 结尾句 ① Good methods can make our learning more efficient and easy. 好的方法能让我们的学习更高效、更轻松。 ② Learning wisely helps us improve ourselves little by little. 智慧学习能帮助我们一点点提升自我。 ③ I believe we will learn better with good learning habits. 我相信拥有良好的学习习惯，我们会学得更好。 ④ Learning is a lifelong journey and we should keep learning. 学习是终身的旅程，我们应当坚持学习。 ⑤ Keep practicing and you will finally get good grades. 坚持勤学巧练，你终会取得优异的成绩。 【谚语积累】 ① Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 ② Use it or lose it. 用进废退。 ③ No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 ④ A good method is half the success. 好的方法是成功的一半。 ⑤ Learn wisely and learn well. 明智求学，笃学致远。 【原题呈现】 （25-26九年级上·河南开封·期中）假定英语课上你们进行了关于“如何学习英语”的讨论，以下是部分讨论结果。请你从中选取一种，再补充一种你常用的方式，写一篇短文向你的同学推荐这两种方式并说明理由。 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 2. 词数100个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 There are many ways of learning English for us students. As for me, I always _________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Different people have different ways of learning. There is always a best one for you. 【审题构思】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，时态主要为一般现在时 明确要点：从图中选取一种英语学习方法，并补充一种自己的方法，分别说明理由 确定人称：第一人称为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名等相关信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接开头，介绍自己两种学习英语的方式 主体段：重点介绍推荐这两种方式的理由 结尾段：总结，鼓励大家找到适合自己的学习方法 【范文欣赏】 There are many ways of learning English for us students. As for me, I always do group work and listen to the teacher carefully. Doing group work is very important for us students. We are supposed to take part in group work actively. You know, we have a lot of activities in groups. We can help each other and learn from each other this way. Listening to the teacher carefully is also very important. If not, we can’t understand what the teacher is talking about. And we can’t finish homework, either. What’s more, listening carefully shows that we respect our teacher. Different people have different ways of learning. There is always a best one for you. Just keep trying and you will make great progress in English. 【亮点解析】 要点一：从图中选取的方式 方式：do group work/take notes/use a dictionary等 理由：help each other and learn from each other/understand what the teacher has taught us better/help memorize new words等 要点二：你常用的方式 方式：listen to the teacher carefully/ask our teachers and classmates for help等 理由：understand what the teacher is talking about/show that we respect our teacher/solve problems in time等 【基础必做】 一、高分句式训练。 1.教材原句：He’s going to give us some ideas for learning English. 仿写：我今年寒假要去哈尔滨。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I’m going to Harbin this winter vacation. 2.教材原句：Well, it doesn’t mean you have to study all the time. 仿写：他犯了个错误，但不代表他很粗心。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】He made a mistake, but it didn’t mean he was careless. 3.教材原句：As an active learner, Hua Lougeng stayed positive no matter what difficulties he met in his life and studies. 仿写：无论我们做什么，我认为必须安全第一。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】No matter what we do, I think safety must come first. 4.教材原句：However, many students do not realize this, and they have trouble learning. 仿写：大部分学生早起有困难。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Most of the students have trouble getting up early in the morning. 5.教材原句：The more we practise, the better we learn. 仿写：你锻炼得越多，你的身体就会越健康。 ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The more you exercise, the healthier your body will become. 二、高阶表达应用。 1.I read and I find that my spoken English has greatly improved.（用by doing升格） ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I find that my spoken English has greatly improved by reading. 2.In a word, reading brings me much joy and helps me make progress in English learning.（用“not only...but also...”升格） ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】In a word, reading not only brings me much joy but also helps me make progress in English learning. 【提升必做】 1．（25-26九年级上·河南洛阳·期中）时光飞逝，九年级上学期已过半。在英语学习中，你一定有过努力、收获或困惑。请以“My Experience of Improving English”为题，写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.过去你在英语哪方面(如听力、写作、词汇等)存在明显不足，具体表现是什么； 2.为改变现状，你采取了哪些具体方法(如每日练习、请教他人等)； 3.对比过去与现在，分享你的进步和从中获得的感悟。 要求：1)词数100左右； 2)要点齐全，逻辑清晰(突出“过去-努力-现在”的对比)； 3)文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Experience of Improving English Time flies, and the first half of Grade 9 has passed. Among all subjects, English once made me worried because I used to be weak in writing. I couldn’t organize my ideas clearly, and I always made many grammar mistakes. To improve, I started reading an English passage every day and copying good sentences into a notebook; I also asked my teacher for help. Now, I can write smooth passages, and I feel confident to express my own thoughts in English. This experience lets me realize that as long as we find the right way and keep trying, we’ll surely make progress. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文(个人学习经历)，全文以一般过去时、一般现在时为主， 明确要点： 过去英语薄弱板块+具体表现； 针对性采取的学习办法； 今昔对比体现进步，总结学习感悟 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：词数100词左右；三点内容完整覆盖；不出现真实校名、人名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：结合题干 “九年级上学期过半” 引入话题，点明自己曾经英语写作薄弱。 第二段：分层展开，先写过去写作的具体问题，再写自己为提升采取的两项具体行动，最后描述当下写作的改变与进步。 结尾段：总结这段经历带来的学习感悟，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去英语薄弱及具体表现 具体表现：be weak in writing/have trouble organizing ideas clearly/make grammar mistakes/lack proper linking words /fail to express personal opinions/feel nervous when writing compositions/my articles were full of mistakes等 要点二：提升英语的具体做法 具体做法：read short English passages daily/copy wonderful sentences into a notebook/turn to teachers for advice/ask teachers to check my writings/memorize useful sentence patterns/keep an English diary every day/learn from excellent model essays/correct mistakes in time after class等 要点三：如今的进步+学习感悟 进步：write smooth passages with fewer mistakes/make far fewer grammar mistakes/gain confidence in English writing/express my true thoughts freely in English/get higher marks in composition tests等 感悟：keep trying/make progress/as long as we keep practicing/find the proper learning methods hard/work pays off eventually等 2．（25-26九年级上·河南信阳·期中）阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面信息，以“How reading improves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 ① improve my spoken English ② make my writing easier ③ develop my thinking ability …… 写作要求：1）文中须包含上面提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：improve 提高 How reading improves my English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. _________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How reading improves my English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. It gives me confidence when I talk in English. Secondly, reading helps make writing easier for me. When I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled correctly. So I make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops my thinking ability. What I’ve read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. What’s more, reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English. In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：阅读对英语学习的帮助（口语提升、写作提升、思维能力、学习习惯） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：围绕"reading"这一核心展开，不得偏离主题 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，概括阅读在英语学习中的重要作用 主体段：分别介绍阅读对口语、写作、思维、习惯四个方面的帮助 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题——阅读带来快乐与兴趣 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：口语提升 核心表达：spoken English has greatly improved 拓展词汇：oral English, speaking skills, fluency, pronunciation, confidence 作用效果：It gives me confidence when I talk in English. / makes me more confident / improves my fluency 要点二：写作提升 核心表达：reading helps make writing easier 拓展词汇：spelling, grammar, vocabulary, sentence structure, accuracy 具体说明：reminds me how words are spelled correctly 作用效果：make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing / improves my writing accuracy 要点三：思维能力 核心表达：reading develops my thinking ability 拓展词汇：open-minded, think more, critical thinking, broaden horizons 具体说明：What I've read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more 作用效果：develops my thinking ability / broadens my mind 要点四：学习习惯 核心表达：reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English 拓展词汇：good habit, learning habit, self-discipline, consistency 作用效果：develop a good habit of learning English / form a regular study routine 要点五：总结升华 核心表达：reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest 拓展词汇：pleasure, satisfaction, passion, enthusiasm, fulfillment 句式结构：not only... but also...（并列结构） 作用效果：brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning 3．（24-25九年级上·北京顺义·期中）当今社会，英语被广泛使用，这充分说明了英语的重要性。作为中学生，我们有必要学好英语。请写一篇短文，谈谈如何学好英语。根据所给的中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词仅供选用，请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。 提示词语：take notes, talk with, make mistakes, guess, keep a diary 内容提示： 1. What are your suggestions for studying English? 2. What is your hope? As we know, English is widely used in the world. It plays an important part in our life. As students, we should learn English well. Now let me give you some suggestions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As we know, English is widely used in the world. It plays an important part in our life. As students, we should learn English well. Now let me give you some suggestions. First, we should take notes carefully in class. It helps us remember key knowledge. Second, talk with classmates in English. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, guess the meaning of new words when reading. Also, keeping a diary in English is a good way to improve our writing. I hope these suggestions help you learn English better. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：学好英语的建议、对学好英语的希望 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出学英语的重要性及给出建议的主题 主体段：分别给出学好英语的具体建议 结尾段：表达希望，总结全文 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：学好英语的建议 建议内容：take notes/talk with/guess/keep a diary等 作用效果：help us remember key knowledge/improve our writing等 要点二：对学好英语的希望 希望内容：these suggestions can help you learn English better等 4．（25-26九年级上·河南周口·期末）题目：假设你是李华，你校英语社团将举办一场主题为“The Best Way to Learn English”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。提示：你认为学习英语最好的方法是什么(如：多听多说、阅读英文书籍、看英文电影等)。说明你为什么认为这个方法最好。分享你使用这个方法的一些具体例子或经验。 要求：词数：90-110词。文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Best Way to Learn English There are many ways to learn English, but I think the best way is to use it as much as possible.___________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Best Way to Learn English There are many ways to learn English, but I think the best way is to use it as much as possible. I believe this because English is a language, not just a subject. The more you use it, the better you will master it. For example, I try to speak English with my classmates every day. We have an English corner in our school, and I go there every Friday afternoon. It helps me improve my spoken English a lot. I also watch English movies and listen to English songs. I can learn new words and grammar from them. In a word, practice makes perfect. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Just use English, and you will learn it well. 【详解】写作步骤   [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性议论文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：学习英语的最佳方法（具体方式、效果），阐述选择该方法的理由   确定人称：第一人称(I/my/we)   注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 ，词数控制在90-110词 [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构：   开头段：总体概括学习英语的方法有很多，明确提出最佳方法是尽可能使用英语   主体段：解释选择该方法的理由，结合具体例子说明方法及效果 结尾段：总结感受，引用谚语升华主题，给出学习英语的鼓励性建议 [第三步：要点展开]（注意：本部分的词汇，以例文词汇优先，拓展词汇放在例文词汇之后）   要点一：学习英语的最佳方法及具体做法   方法选择：speak English with classmates/have an English corner/watch English movies/listen to English songs /take part in the English corner/watch English cartoons/listen to English podcasts/master new vocabulary and grammar rules 具体描述：every day/every Friday afternoon/learn new words and grammar from them   作用效果：help me improve my spoken English a lot/help me master English better /enhance my communication skills/make me more confident 要点二：选择该方法的理由   核心理由：English is a language, not just a subject./The more you use it, the better you will master it.   补充说明：language is for communication/using it is the most effective way to learn it   要点三：总结全文观点，升华主题，给出学习英语的鼓励性建议 合理建议：In a word, practice makes perfect/Don’t be afraid of making mistakes, just use English, learn it well/never fear mistakes/keep practicing/make progress/stick to using English 5．（25-26九年级上·浙江杭州·期末）假如你是李华，学校英文报“Youth Corner”专栏征集关于“My Change”的征稿活动，请你根据以下信息，完成一篇稿件。 How did you use to learn English? 1. be afraid to speak 2. make mistakes in grammar... How do you learn English now? 1. practice speaking 2. take notes... What do you learn from the change? ... 注意： 1.内容需包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3.词数80左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。 My Change A change often starts with a challenge. For me, _________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Change A change often starts with a challenge. For me, learning English used to be a big trouble. I was afraid to speak English in public, worried about making mistakes. What’s worse, I often got grammar wrong and didn’t know how to improve. Now I’ve changed a lot. I practice speaking with my classmates every day and never fear being laughed at. I also take notes carefully to remember grammar rules. When I make mistakes, I correct them at once. This change tells me that courage and persistence can help overcome difficulties. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，主要用一般过去时和一般现在时 明确要点：过去学习英语的方式（害怕说、语法常出错）、现在学习英语的方式（练习说、做笔记）、从这种变化中学到的东西 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息，词数80左右（首句不计入总词数） [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出主题，说明变化常始于挑战，点明自己过去学英语有困难 主体段：分别阐述过去和现在学习英语的不同方式 结尾段：总结从这种变化中获得的感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去学习英语的方式 害怕说英语：I was afraid to speak English in public, worried about making mistakes./I used to be too shy to speak English in front of others, fearing I would make mistakes. 语法常出错：I often got grammar wrong and didn’t know how to improve./My grammar was poor and I had no idea how to make it better. 要点二：现在学习英语的方式 练习说英语：I practice speaking with my classmates every day and never fear being laughed at./I frequently engage in English conversations with my classmates and don't care about being laughed at. 做笔记：I also take notes carefully to remember grammar rules./I make detailed notes to help me remember grammar rules. 及时改错：When I make mistakes, I correct them at once./Once I make mistakes, I correct them right away. 要点三：从变化中学到的东西 感悟：This change tells me that courage and persistence can help overcome difficulties./From this change, I realize that having courage and being persistent can help us get over difficulties. 鼓励：As long as we keep trying, nothing is impossible. 6．（25-26九年级上·山东济宁·期末）某英文公众号正在举办以“Growth and Progress”为主题的征文活动，下设子主题“How My Learning Methods Changed My Life”。假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示信息，并结合你自身学习英语的经历撰写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1. 须包括以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息； 3. 100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 How My Learning Methods Changed My Life The way I learn English has completely changed, and it has made all the difference in my life.___________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How My Learning Methods Changed My Life The way I learn English has completely changed, and it has made all the difference in my life. I used to be afraid to speak English in public, and it was hard to remember new words. Later, I joined a study group which was started by my deskmate. I memorized words by making short sentences, so words were easily remembered in this way. I also watched English movies and took notes of useful phrases. Now, I am brave enough to speak English. My English has improved a lot, and I find that I can even talk with foreign visitors who come to our town. I know that proper methods are the key to success. I believe that we will make more progress. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般过去时和一般现在时结合 明确要点：过去学习英语的问题（害怕、记单词困难）、改变的方法（加入学习小组、通过特定方式记单词、看英语电影）、成果（勇敢、英语进步大）、感受（正确方法是成功的关键、表达相信会取得更多进步） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实身份信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出英语学习方法的改变对生活产生影响 主体段：分别阐述过去的问题、改变的方法、取得的成果 结尾段：表达感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去学习英语的问题 害怕方面：used to be afraid to do sth.（过去害怕做某事），如“I used to be afraid to speak English in public”（我过去害怕在公共场合说英语） 记单词困难：it was hard to do sth.（做某事很困难），如“it was hard to remember new words”（记新单词很困难） 要点二：改变的方法 加入学习小组：join a study group（加入学习小组），如“I joined a study group which was started by my deskmate”（我加入了一个由同桌发起的学习小组） 记单词方式：memorize words by doing sth.（通过做某事记单词），如“I memorized words by making short sentences”（我通过造短句记单词） 看英语电影：watch English movies（看英语电影），如“I also watched English movies and took notes of useful phrases”（我也看英语电影并记录有用的短语） 要点三：取得的成果 勇敢方面：be brave enough to do sth.（足够勇敢做某事），如“Now, I am brave enough to speak English”（现在，我足够勇敢说英语） 英语进步：My... has improved a lot（我的……进步很大），如“My English has improved a lot”（我的英语进步很大）；talk with sb.（和某人交谈），如“I find that I can even talk with foreign visitors who come to our town”（我发现我甚至能和来我们镇的外国游客交谈） 要点四：感受 正确方法是成功的关键：proper methods are the key to success（正确的方法是成功的关键） 表达相信会取得更多进步：I believe that we will make more progress（我相信我们会取得更多进步） 7．（25-26九年级上·河南信阳·期末）假如你是李华，已升入高中，现应邀回校向同学们介绍英语学习方法。请你结合下图信息，以“To Be a Successful English Learner”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你的英语学习方法。 写作提示： 写作要求： 1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 To Be a Successful English Learner Good morning, everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today I want to show you some useful ways to learn English. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I truly hope these methods can be helpful to you. 【答案】 Good morning everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today I want to show you some useful ways to learn English. Firstly, you can develop some hobbies, such as listening to English songs, watching English movies and so on. They’re very helpful in improving listening and speaking abilities. When meeting new words, you should look them up in a dictionary. What’s more, keeping a diary about what happened during the day is the best way to improve your English writing skills. Thirdly, you should learn Chinese culture as well as Western culture, because language learning is always connected with culture. Last but not least, you may meet many difficulties on the road of learning English, but never be afraid of them and never give up. As long as you stick to it, you will make great progress! I truly hope these methods can be helpful to you. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时” ③提示：文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥。 【写作步骤】第一步，点明主旨，引入话题； 第二步，围绕主旨，从不同维度给出具体建议，并进行充分论证； 第三步，总结全文。 【亮点词汇】①what’s more更重要的是 ②be afraid of害怕 ③as well as也 ④make great progress取得巨大的进步 【亮点句型】①What’s more, keeping a diary about what happened during the day is the best way to improve your English writing skills. （动名词短语作主语） ②As long as you stick to it, you will make great progress!（as long as“只要”引导条件状语从句） 8．（25-26九年级上·云南保山·期末）假设你是李华，你校即将迎来一批英国交换生，学校为了帮助他们学好中文，请你作为学生代表进行一次以学习经验为主题的演讲。请你根据提示，写一篇英文演讲稿，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Topic Ways Suggestions How to Learn Chinese Concentrating on Plans and Skills 1. Make a study plan. 2. Watch Chinese cartoons. … Dealing with New Words Guess the meaning from the context. … … … 要求：1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。 Good afternoon, dear British exchange students! Welcome to our school! Today I’m glad to be here to give a speech about methods for learning Chinese. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 【答案】 Good afternoon, dear British exchange students! Welcome to our school! Today I'm glad to be here to give a speech about methods for learning Chinese. Learning Chinese can be interesting if you plan well. I suggest you first make a clear study plan to review regularly. Watching Chinese cartoons is also helpful because they use simple and fun language. When you come across new words, try to guess their meanings from the context instead of looking them up immediately. Also, don't be afraid to make mistakes. Speak more with local friends and listen to Chinese songs in your free time. Learning takes time, so be patient and keep practicing. I’m sure you will make great progress. Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，并突出重点，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示欢迎并引出演讲主题； 第二步，围绕“制定计划与技巧运用”及“处理生词”两大方面提出具体学习建议； 第三步，书写结语，给予鼓励。 [亮点词汇] ①make a clear study plan制定清晰的学习计划 ②guess…meanings from the context根据上下文猜测……意思 ③make mistakes犯错 ④make great progress取得巨大进步 [高分句型] ①Learning Chinese can be interesting if you plan well.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②I suggest you first make a clear study plan to review regularly.（省略that的宾语从句，动词不定式作目的状语） ③When you come across new words, try to guess their meanings from the context instead of looking them up immediately.（When引导的时间状语从句，instead of doing结构表示替代） $Unit 3 Smart Learning .高效智慧学习 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 本单元的话题为“智慧学习”，要求能根据文字提示介绍智慧学习方法，分享学习经验，谈论学习体会及针对他人学习中遇到的困难给出合理的建议。 写作时主要用第一人称I/we和第二人称you,在陈述自己的观点及提建议时应用一般现在时，表示祝愿及希望时可用祈使句或一般将来时。 [教材典句] ①Practice makes perfect. ②He suggested that learners should read and take notes very carefully,then summarize the key points. ③In addition,studies show that students learn more when they hang out with other students who are serious about study. ④By doing hands-on experiments,Peter finds that he can connect physics with something in real life. ⑤Reading is important for learning in general. 【词汇积累】 词汇积累 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① ability n. 能力 ② learn v. 学习；学会 ③ habit n. 习惯 ④ interest n. 兴趣；爱好 ⑤ attention n. 注意力 ⑥ connect v. 联系；关联 ⑦ practice v. & n. 练习 ⑧ mistake n. 错误 ⑨ perfect adj. 完美的 ⑩ succeed v. 成功 ⑪ develop v. 培养；发展 ⑫ skill n. 技巧；技能 ⑬ review v. & n. 复习 ⑭ note n. 笔记 ⑮ explain v. 解释；说明 ⑯ question v. & n. 提问；问题 ⑰ lifelong adj. 终身的 ⑱ wise adj. 明智的；智慧的 ⑲ improve v. 提升；改善 ⑳ challenge n. & v. 挑战 短语积累 ① be born with 天生具有 ② depend on 依靠；取决于 ③ create an interest in 对……产生兴趣 ④ pay attention to 关注；注意 ⑤ connect…with… 把……和……联系起来 ⑥ get bored 感到无聊 ⑦ learn from mistakes 从错误中学习 ⑧ keep practicing 坚持练习 ⑨ take notes 记笔记 ⑩ mind maps 思维导图 ⑪ review knowledge 复习知识 ⑫ find out answers 找出答案 ⑬ study skills 学习技巧 ⑭ overcome difficulties 克服困难 ⑮ a lifelong journey 终身的旅程 【句式积累】 开头句 ① Everyone is born with the ability to learn. 每个人天生都具备学习的能力。 ② Good learning habits are the key to successful learning. 良好的学习习惯是高效学习的关键。 ③ It is important for us to learn wisely instead of studying hard blindly. 对我们来说，明智学习远比盲目苦学更重要。 ④ Many students have difficulties in learning and need good methods. 很多学生在学习中遇到困难，需要好的学习方法。 ⑤ I have some useful experience to share about smart learning. 我有一些高效学习的有用经验可以分享。 中间句 ① We should create interest in our study to avoid getting bored. 我们应该培养学习兴趣，避免感到枯燥无聊。 ② It’s helpful to connect what we learn with interesting things. 将所学知识和有趣的事物结合起来大有裨益。 ③ We must pay full attention to knowledge when we study. 学习时我们必须全身心专注所学知识。 ④ Never be afraid of making mistakes and learn from them. 不要害怕犯错，要学会从错误中吸取教训。 ⑤ We need to keep practicing what we have learned every day. 我们需要每天坚持巩固所学的知识。 ⑥ Taking notes and drawing mind maps help us study better. 记笔记、画思维导图能帮助我们更好地学习。 ⑦ It’s necessary to review our knowledge after learning new things. 学习新知识后，复习巩固是很有必要的。 ⑧ We should ask questions and find out answers in time. 我们要主动提问，及时找出问题的答案。 ⑨ If you feel tired, you can change your study ways to relax. 如果学习疲惫，可以更换学习方式放松自己。 ⑩ Working with classmates helps us solve learning problems. 和同学合作学习，能帮助我们解决学习难题。 结尾句 ① Good methods can make our learning more efficient and easy. 好的方法能让我们的学习更高效、更轻松。 ② Learning wisely helps us improve ourselves little by little. 智慧学习能帮助我们一点点提升自我。 ③ I believe we will learn better with good learning habits. 我相信拥有良好的学习习惯，我们会学得更好。 ④ Learning is a lifelong journey and we should keep learning. 学习是终身的旅程，我们应当坚持学习。 ⑤ Keep practicing and you will finally get good grades. 坚持勤学巧练，你终会取得优异的成绩。 【谚语积累】 ① Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 ② Use it or lose it. 用进废退。 ③ No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 ④ A good method is half the success. 好的方法是成功的一半。 ⑤ Learn wisely and learn well. 明智求学，笃学致远。 【原题呈现】 （25-26九年级上·河南开封·期中）假定英语课上你们进行了关于“如何学习英语”的讨论，以下是部分讨论结果。请你从中选取一种，再补充一种你常用的方式，写一篇短文向你的同学推荐这两种方式并说明理由。 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 2. 词数100个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 There are many ways of learning English for us students. As for me, I always _________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Different people have different ways of learning. There is always a best one for you. 【审题构思】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，时态主要为一般现在时 明确要点：从图中选取一种英语学习方法，并补充一种自己的方法，分别说明理由 确定人称：第一人称为主 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名等相关信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接开头，介绍自己两种学习英语的方式 主体段：重点介绍推荐这两种方式的理由 结尾段：总结，鼓励大家找到适合自己的学习方法 【范文欣赏】 There are many ways of learning English for us students. As for me, I always do group work and listen to the teacher carefully. Doing group work is very important for us students. We are supposed to take part in group work actively. You know, we have a lot of activities in groups. We can help each other and learn from each other this way. Listening to the teacher carefully is also very important. If not, we can’t understand what the teacher is talking about. And we can’t finish homework, either. What’s more, listening carefully shows that we respect our teacher. Different people have different ways of learning. There is always a best one for you. Just keep trying and you will make great progress in English. 【亮点解析】 要点一：从图中选取的方式 方式：do group work/take notes/use a dictionary等 理由：help each other and learn from each other/understand what the teacher has taught us better/help memorize new words等 要点二：你常用的方式 方式：listen to the teacher carefully/ask our teachers and classmates for help等 理由：understand what the teacher is talking about/show that we respect our teacher/solve problems in time等 【基础必做】 一、高分句式训练。 1.教材原句：He’s going to give us some ideas for learning English. 仿写：我今年寒假要去哈尔滨。 ________________________________________________________________ 2.教材原句：Well, it doesn’t mean you have to study all the time. 仿写：他犯了个错误，但不代表他很粗心。 ________________________________________________________________ 3.教材原句：As an active learner, Hua Lougeng stayed positive no matter what difficulties he met in his life and studies. 仿写：无论我们做什么，我认为必须安全第一。 ________________________________________________________________ 4.教材原句：However, many students do not realize this, and they have trouble learning. 仿写：大部分学生早起有困难。 ________________________________________________________________ 5.教材原句：The more we practise, the better we learn. 仿写：你锻炼得越多，你的身体就会越健康。 ________________________________________________________________ 二、高阶表达应用。 1.I read and I find that my spoken English has greatly improved.（用by doing升格） ________________________________________________________________ 2.In a word, reading brings me much joy and helps me make progress in English learning.（用“not only...but also...”升格） ________________________________________________________________ 【提升必做】 1．（25-26九年级上·河南洛阳·期中）时光飞逝，九年级上学期已过半。在英语学习中，你一定有过努力、收获或困惑。请以“My Experience of Improving English”为题，写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.过去你在英语哪方面(如听力、写作、词汇等)存在明显不足，具体表现是什么； 2.为改变现状，你采取了哪些具体方法(如每日练习、请教他人等)； 3.对比过去与现在，分享你的进步和从中获得的感悟。 要求：1)词数100左右； 2)要点齐全，逻辑清晰(突出“过去-努力-现在”的对比)； 3)文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（25-26九年级上·河南信阳·期中）阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面信息，以“How reading improves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 ① improve my spoken English ② make my writing easier ③ develop my thinking ability …… 写作要求：1）文中须包含上面提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：improve 提高 How reading improves my English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. _________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（24-25九年级上·北京顺义·期中）当今社会，英语被广泛使用，这充分说明了英语的重要性。作为中学生，我们有必要学好英语。请写一篇短文，谈谈如何学好英语。根据所给的中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词仅供选用，请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。 提示词语：take notes, talk with, make mistakes, guess, keep a diary 内容提示： 1. What are your suggestions for studying English? 2. What is your hope? As we know, English is widely used in the world. It plays an important part in our life. As students, we should learn English well. Now let me give you some suggestions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（25-26九年级上·河南周口·期末）题目：假设你是李华，你校英语社团将举办一场主题为“The Best Way to Learn English”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。提示：你认为学习英语最好的方法是什么(如：多听多说、阅读英文书籍、看英文电影等)。说明你为什么认为这个方法最好。分享你使用这个方法的一些具体例子或经验。 要求：词数：90-110词。文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Best Way to Learn English There are many ways to learn English, but I think the best way is to use it as much as possible.___________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（25-26九年级上·浙江杭州·期末）假如你是李华，学校英文报“Youth Corner”专栏征集关于“My Change”的征稿活动，请你根据以下信息，完成一篇稿件。 How did you use to learn English? 1. be afraid to speak 2. make mistakes in grammar... How do you learn English now? 1. practice speaking 2. take notes... What do you learn from the change? ... 注意： 1.内容需包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3.词数80左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。 My Change A change often starts with a challenge. For me, _________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（25-26九年级上·山东济宁·期末）某英文公众号正在举办以“Growth and Progress”为主题的征文活动，下设子主题“How My Learning Methods Changed My Life”。假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示信息，并结合你自身学习英语的经历撰写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1. 须包括以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息； 3. 100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 How My Learning Methods Changed My Life The way I learn English has completely changed, and it has made all the difference in my life.___________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（25-26九年级上·河南信阳·期末）假如你是李华，已升入高中，现应邀回校向同学们介绍英语学习方法。请你结合下图信息，以“To Be a Successful English Learner”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你的英语学习方法。 写作提示： 写作要求： 1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 To Be a Successful English Learner Good morning, everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today I want to show you some useful ways to learn English. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I truly hope these methods can be helpful to you. 8．（25-26九年级上·云南保山·期末）假设你是李华，你校即将迎来一批英国交换生，学校为了帮助他们学好中文，请你作为学生代表进行一次以学习经验为主题的演讲。请你根据提示，写一篇英文演讲稿，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Topic Ways Suggestions How to Learn Chinese Concentrating on Plans and Skills 1. Make a study plan. 2. Watch Chinese cartoons. … Dealing with New Words Guess the meaning from the context. … … … 要求：1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。 Good afternoon, dear British exchange students! Welcome to our school! Today I’m glad to be here to give a speech about methods for learning Chinese. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. $