Unit 1 Laugh out loud! 大声笑出来（单元写作精练）英语外研版选择性必修第一册

**基本信息** 以“介绍喜剧演员”为载体，构建“词汇-句型-模板-应用”四级写作方法体系，系统培养人物介绍类记叙文的语言组织与逻辑表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |核心考点|3类（生平/性格/意义）|时间状语从句、非谓语动词等语法结构与such a...that...等功能句型结合|从基础语言要素到意义升华，形成“客观叙述-特征刻画-价值评价”逻辑链| |写作句型|20个功能句|分生平、性格、评价三部分模块化呈现，覆盖人物介绍全维度|句型与考点一一对应，实现“语法知识-功能表达”转化| |写作模板|1个框架|含出生背景、天赋挑战、作品影响等固定模块，提供可迁移结构|模板整合核心句型，构建“输入-内化-输出”闭环| |真题与练习|1道高考真题+多梯度练习|从汉译英、句型仿写过渡到不同情境写作任务，强化方法迁移|练习难度递进，适配从基础语言能力到思维品质提升需求|

Unit 1 Laugh out loud大声笑出来主题 单元写作精练 【主题】Writing about a comedian（介绍一位喜剧演员） 【高频写作题型】 人物介绍类记叙文（介绍喜剧演员的生平、性格、表演风格、代表作品及人们评价） 【核心考点】 1. 生平经历描写：掌握时间状语从句（While studying...）、非谓语动词（devote...to）等进行生平事迹的客观叙述 2. 人物性格刻画：运用such a...that...、have a gift for等句型突出人物性格特点与天赋 3. 作品意义升华：运用tell us that...、make contributions to等句型对人物作品及其影响进行评价 【写作词汇短语】 1. devote 献身；用心于 2. seek 寻找；探索 3. patience 耐心 4. be curious about... 对……感到好奇 5. lose heart 丧失勇气或信心 6. bring up 抚养；培养；教育 7. take a chance 冒险 8. as for 至于；关于 9. have a gift for 有……天赋 10. make friends with 和……交朋友 11. a lively and smart girl 一个活泼聪明的女孩 12. warm-hearted and good-looking 热心肠而且漂亮 13. be ready to help others 乐于助人 14. learn from each other and help each other 相互帮助相互学习 15. be highly praised by 得到……的高度称赞 16. make great contributions to 对……做出巨大贡献 17. be highly thought of by 受到……的高度评价 18. fall in love with 爱上（某事物/某人） 19. be famous around the world for 因……而闻名于世 20. an international star 一位国际明星 【写作句型】 第一部分：生平介绍句（出生时间、地点、早年经历） 1. He is famous around the world for his character Mr. Bean. 他因扮演憨豆先生而闻名于世。 2. He was an excellent actor all over the world. 他是一位世界著名演员。 3. While studying for a Master's degree at Oxford University, he fell in love with acting and comedy. 在牛津大学攻读硕士学位时，他爱上了表演和喜剧。 4. It was eventually made into a movie which made Atkinson an international star. 它最终被拍成了一部使艾金森成为国际明星的电影。 5. He was born in a small town in England in 1955 and was brought up by his parents. 他于1955年出生在英格兰的一个小镇上，由父母抚养长大。 6. As a child, he was curious about everything around him, which later contributed to his comedy style. 小时候，他对周围的一切都感到好奇，这后来促成了他的喜剧风格。 7. After graduating from university, he devoted himself to the study of comedy and performance. 大学毕业后，他致力于喜剧和表演的研究。 第二部分：人物性格与事迹叙述句（通过事例佐证性格） 8. He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是一个如此博学/意志坚强的人，以至于我们都钦佩/尊敬他/她。 9. He/She devoted all his/her life to the work. 他/她毕生都致力于这项工作。 10. When it comes to famous comedians, I think Charlie Chaplin was the best. 当提及著名喜剧演员的时候，我认为查理·卓别林是最好的。 11. He had a gift for making people laugh with his unique body language and facial expressions. 他有天赋用独特的肢体语言和面部表情逗人们发笑。 12. Facing failures in his early career, he never lost heart and kept seeking his own style. 早年在职业生涯中面临失败时，他从未丧失信心，继续探索自己的风格。 13. He was willing to take a chance and try new forms of comedy, which made him stand out. 他愿意冒险尝试新形式的喜剧，这让他脱颖而出。 14. She was warm-hearted and always ready to help others, which made her popular among her colleagues. 她热心肠而且乐于助人，这使她在同事中很受欢迎。 第三部分：作品意义与人们评价句 15. Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life. 她的故事告诉我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的东西，努力克服生活中的任何困难。 16. He/She made great contributions to our country. 他/她对我们国家做出了巨大贡献。 17. He/She was highly thought of by many people. 他/她受到很多人的高度评价。 18. He/She was highly praised by both audiences and critics for his/her outstanding performance. 他/她因其出色的表演受到了观众和评论家的高度赞扬。 19. His comedies not only entertain people but also inspire them to think deeply about life. 他的喜剧不仅娱乐了人们，还启发人们对生活进行深刻思考。 20. Through his characters, he teaches us that laughter is the best medicine in difficult times. 通过他扮演的角色，他教会我们在困难时期笑声是最好的良药。 【写作模板】 When it comes to famous comedians, ______（姓名） is definitely one of the best. Born in ______（出生地） in ______（出生年份）, he/she was brought up by ______（抚养人）. While studying at ______（学校/大学）, he/she fell in love with ______（爱好/领域）. ______（姓名） has a gift for ______（天赋）. Facing ______（困难/挑战）, he/she never lost heart and kept seeking ______（目标）. For example, ______（具体事例）. His/Her unique ______（风格/特点） made him/her stand out. His/Her famous work, ______（作品名称）, was eventually made into ______（形式） which made him/her an international star. His/Her story tells us that ______（启示/道理）. He/She was highly praised by ______（评价者） for ______（成就）. In short, ______（姓名） is a comedian who not only entertains people but also inspires them. 【原题呈现】 （2023·全国甲卷·高考真题）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） Group 1 序号 中文句子 你的翻译 ① 孔子是中国历史上一位伟大的思想家和教育家。 ___________________________________________________ ② 他提倡仁爱、尊重长辈和社会和谐。 ___________________________________________________ ③ 他的思想塑造了中国文化的道德基础。 ___________________________________________________ ④ 即使在今天，他的观念仍然指引着中国人民。 ___________________________________________________ ⑤ 孔子教会我们做一个好人是最重要的事情。 ___________________________________________________ Group 2 序号 中文句子 你的翻译 ① 鲁迅是中国现代文学史上最伟大的作家之一。 ___________________________________________________ ② 他用他的作品唤醒了无数中国人的精神。 ___________________________________________________ ③ 他的著作对中国的文化和社会产生了深远的影响。 ___________________________________________________ ④ 今天，他的文章仍然受到许多年轻人的喜爱和阅读。 ___________________________________________________ ⑤ 鲁迅的故事告诉我们，文字可以拥有巨大的力量。 ___________________________________________________ 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） Group 1 基础仿写：人物身份与背景 例句： Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. （孔子是中国历史上一位著名人物。） 仿写： ① 李白（Li Bai） —— 中国文学史上一位著名人物。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ② 林巧稚（Lin Qiaozhi） —— 中国现代医学史上一位著名人物。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Group 2 进阶仿写：分词作状语 例句： Born into a time of great change, he devoted his life to teaching and spreading ideas. （他出生于一个巨变的时代，毕生致力于教育和传播思想。） 仿写： ③ 岳飞（Yue Fei） —— 出生于一个动荡的时代，毕生致力于保卫他的国家。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ④ 屠呦呦（Tu Youyou） —— 出生于一个普通家庭，毕生致力于科学研究。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Group 3 进阶仿写：非谓语作状语 例句： He traveled across the country, spreading his wisdom and shaping the thoughts of countless followers. （他游历全国，传播智慧，塑造了无数追随者的思想。） 仿写： ⑤ 郑和（Zheng He） —— 七次扬帆远航，探索海洋，并促进了文化交流。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑥ 徐霞客（Xu Xiake） —— 游历中国各地，记录了他的所见所闻，并留下了珍贵的著作。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【提升必做】 1．（25-26高一上·湖南长沙·阶段练习）假如你是李华.你的英国笔友Peter在孔子课堂(the Confucius Academy)了解到了中国古典四大名著(China's four great classic novels)的知识并写信与你交流。作为一名古典文学爱好者，你读之后很高兴。回信给他，介绍你最爱的四大名著屮的某个人物(character)以及原因。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以增加适当的细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．（25-26高二上·黑龙江省龙东联盟·月考）你校英语报正在开展以“Campus Person of the Year in My Heart”为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物事迹； 2.意义或启示。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Campus Person of the Year in My Heart ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（25-26高二上·山东·大联考）假定你是李华,你校英语报正在举办“A Great Person in My Heart”征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1. 介绍你心中的伟人；2. 该人物对你的影响。 注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Great Person in My Heart ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（25-26高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习）我校正在组织学雷锋活动。请以“身边乐于助人的人”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 试举一例简述他（她）助人为乐的事。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 短文题目已为你写好； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The person who helps others most ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（25-26高一上·广东河源·阶段练习）假定你是李华。你校英语节组织了“A hero in my heart—Hua Mulan”英语征文评选。请根据以下提示写一篇短文参加评选： 1.简述木兰替父从军的故事； 2.你喜欢这一人物的理由； 3.对你的影响。 注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：disguise herself as a man女扮男装, character人物 A hero in my heart—Hua Mulan ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展选做】 学校英文报征文“幽默的力量”，谈幽默在人际交往中的重要性，结合个人经历说明（100词左右） The Power of Humor ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Laugh out loud大声笑出来主题 单元写作精练 【主题】Writing about a comedian（介绍一位喜剧演员） 【高频写作题型】 人物介绍类记叙文（介绍喜剧演员的生平、性格、表演风格、代表作品及人们评价） 【核心考点】 1. 生平经历描写：掌握时间状语从句（While studying...）、非谓语动词（devote...to）等进行生平事迹的客观叙述 2. 人物性格刻画：运用such a...that...、have a gift for等句型突出人物性格特点与天赋 3. 作品意义升华：运用tell us that...、make contributions to等句型对人物作品及其影响进行评价 【写作词汇短语】 1. devote 献身；用心于 2. seek 寻找；探索 3. patience 耐心 4. be curious about... 对……感到好奇 5. lose heart 丧失勇气或信心 6. bring up 抚养；培养；教育 7. take a chance 冒险 8. as for 至于；关于 9. have a gift for 有……天赋 10. make friends with 和……交朋友 11. a lively and smart girl 一个活泼聪明的女孩 12. warm-hearted and good-looking 热心肠而且漂亮 13. be ready to help others 乐于助人 14. learn from each other and help each other 相互帮助相互学习 15. be highly praised by 得到……的高度称赞 16. make great contributions to 对……做出巨大贡献 17. be highly thought of by 受到……的高度评价 18. fall in love with 爱上（某事物/某人） 19. be famous around the world for 因……而闻名于世 20. an international star 一位国际明星 【写作句型】 第一部分：生平介绍句（出生时间、地点、早年经历） 1. He is famous around the world for his character Mr. Bean. 他因扮演憨豆先生而闻名于世。 2. He was an excellent actor all over the world. 他是一位世界著名演员。 3. While studying for a Master's degree at Oxford University, he fell in love with acting and comedy. 在牛津大学攻读硕士学位时，他爱上了表演和喜剧。 4. It was eventually made into a movie which made Atkinson an international star. 它最终被拍成了一部使艾金森成为国际明星的电影。 5. He was born in a small town in England in 1955 and was brought up by his parents. 他于1955年出生在英格兰的一个小镇上，由父母抚养长大。 6. As a child, he was curious about everything around him, which later contributed to his comedy style. 小时候，他对周围的一切都感到好奇，这后来促成了他的喜剧风格。 7. After graduating from university, he devoted himself to the study of comedy and performance. 大学毕业后，他致力于喜剧和表演的研究。 第二部分：人物性格与事迹叙述句（通过事例佐证性格） 8. He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her. 他/她是一个如此博学/意志坚强的人，以至于我们都钦佩/尊敬他/她。 9. He/She devoted all his/her life to the work. 他/她毕生都致力于这项工作。 10. When it comes to famous comedians, I think Charlie Chaplin was the best. 当提及著名喜剧演员的时候，我认为查理·卓别林是最好的。 11. He had a gift for making people laugh with his unique body language and facial expressions. 他有天赋用独特的肢体语言和面部表情逗人们发笑。 12. Facing failures in his early career, he never lost heart and kept seeking his own style. 早年在职业生涯中面临失败时，他从未丧失信心，继续探索自己的风格。 13. He was willing to take a chance and try new forms of comedy, which made him stand out. 他愿意冒险尝试新形式的喜剧，这让他脱颖而出。 14. She was warm-hearted and always ready to help others, which made her popular among her colleagues. 她热心肠而且乐于助人，这使她在同事中很受欢迎。 第三部分：作品意义与人们评价句 15. Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life. 她的故事告诉我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的东西，努力克服生活中的任何困难。 16. He/She made great contributions to our country. 他/她对我们国家做出了巨大贡献。 17. He/She was highly thought of by many people. 他/她受到很多人的高度评价。 18. He/She was highly praised by both audiences and critics for his/her outstanding performance. 他/她因其出色的表演受到了观众和评论家的高度赞扬。 19. His comedies not only entertain people but also inspire them to think deeply about life. 他的喜剧不仅娱乐了人们，还启发人们对生活进行深刻思考。 20. Through his characters, he teaches us that laughter is the best medicine in difficult times. 通过他扮演的角色，他教会我们在困难时期笑声是最好的良药。 【写作模板】 When it comes to famous comedians, ______（姓名） is definitely one of the best. Born in ______（出生地） in ______（出生年份）, he/she was brought up by ______（抚养人）. While studying at ______（学校/大学）, he/she fell in love with ______（爱好/领域）. ______（姓名） has a gift for ______（天赋）. Facing ______（困难/挑战）, he/she never lost heart and kept seeking ______（目标）. For example, ______（具体事例）. His/Her unique ______（风格/特点） made him/her stand out. His/Her famous work, ______（作品名称）, was eventually made into ______（形式） which made him/her an international star. His/Her story tells us that ______（启示/道理）. He/She was highly praised by ______（评价者） for ______（成就）. In short, ______（姓名） is a comedian who not only entertains people but also inspires them. 【原题呈现】 （2023·全国甲卷·高考真题）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 1. 体裁： 应用文（征文投稿）。 2. 人称： 以第三人称（介绍历史人物）为主，可适当使用第一人称（发表感想）。 3. 时态： 介绍人物生平时以一般过去时为主，阐述其意义和启示时以一般现在时为主。 4. 三段式写作提纲： 第一段（引入与事迹） 点明要介绍的历史人物是谁，并简要概述其主要贡献或核心事迹（如著作、主张、重要经历）。 第二段（意义与影响） 阐述该人物及其思想/事迹对中国文化、社会或后世产生的深远影响。 第三段（启示与感悟） 结合当代或自身，谈谈从该人物身上获得的启发，点明其精神的现实意义。 【范文呈现】 基础标准版（保底得分） Confucius was a great teacher and thinker in ancient China. He lived about 2,500 years ago. He believed that people should be kind to each other, respect their parents and elders, and follow proper rules in life. He traveled to many places and taught a large number of students. His ideas were later written down in a book called The Analects. Confucius is very important to Chinese culture. For thousands of years, his teachings have guided Chinese people on how to behave well and live in peace with others. His thoughts also influenced many other countries in Asia. Confucius teaches us to be better people. He said we should always keep learning and improving ourselves. His words still encourage us to be honest, kind, and responsible in our daily lives. 高分进阶版（培优提分） Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. Born into a time of great change, he devoted his life to teaching and spreading ideas about how people should treat each other. He believed that kindness, respect for parents and elders, and good behavior were the foundations of a peaceful society. His wisdom was passed down through many students and later recorded in The Analects. For over two thousand years, Confucius's thoughts have shaped Chinese culture and values. His emphasis on harmony, self-discipline, and the love of learning has guided generations of people. Even today, his ideas are not only studied in China but also admired in many other countries around the world. From Confucius, we learn that becoming a better person is a lifelong journey. He taught us to reflect on ourselves, to respect others, and to never stop seeking knowledge. In a world that changes so fast, his words still give us the strength to live with honesty, kindness, and a sense of duty. 【亮点解析】 基础标准版（保底得分） 类别 具体内容 核心素材 准确点出孔子是“teacher and thinker”，涵盖“kind, respect parents, follow rules”等思想，提及《论语》和亚洲影响。 基础句式 ①“He believed that...”宾语从句；②“His words still encourage us to...”简单动宾结构。 得分保障 要点齐全，时态准确，语法正确，词汇全部为初中基础词，内容平实流畅，稳拿及格以上分数。 进阶标准版（培优提分） 类别 具体内容 高分句式① “Born into a time of great change, he devoted his life to...” —— 过去分词短语作状语，表背景原因，高级但常见。 高分句式② “His wisdom was passed down through many students...” —— 被动语态，增加句式变化。 高分句式③ “...not only studied in China but also admired in many other countries...” —— not only...but also...并列结构，连接两个被动语态。 高分句式④ “In a world that changes so fast, his words still give us the strength...” —— 定语从句 + 介词短语提前，句式灵活。 高分句式⑤ “From Confucius, we learn that becoming a better person is a lifelong journey.” —— 介词短语开头 + that引导的宾语从句，打破“主语开头”的单调。 核心素材 涵盖“人物身份 + 时代背景 + 核心思想 + 《论语》+ 文化影响 + 国际影响 + 当代启示”七大要素，内容饱满。 词汇难度 全部为高中常见词汇（well-known, devoted, kindness, respect, harmony, self-discipline, generations, admired, reflect, honesty, duty等），无生词。 提升关键 与基础版相比，句式从“简单句为主”升级为“多种从句 + 非谓语 + 被动语态 + 并列结构”，内容从“点到为止”升级为“有细节有深度”。 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） Group 1 序号 中文句子 你的翻译 ① 孔子是中国历史上一位伟大的思想家和教育家。 ___________________________________________________ ② 他提倡仁爱、尊重长辈和社会和谐。 ___________________________________________________ ③ 他的思想塑造了中国文化的道德基础。 ___________________________________________________ ④ 即使在今天，他的观念仍然指引着中国人民。 ___________________________________________________ ⑤ 孔子教会我们做一个好人是最重要的事情。 ___________________________________________________ Group 2 序号 中文句子 你的翻译 ① 鲁迅是中国现代文学史上最伟大的作家之一。 ___________________________________________________ ② 他用他的作品唤醒了无数中国人的精神。 ___________________________________________________ ③ 他的著作对中国的文化和社会产生了深远的影响。 ___________________________________________________ ④ 今天，他的文章仍然受到许多年轻人的喜爱和阅读。 ___________________________________________________ ⑤ 鲁迅的故事告诉我们，文字可以拥有巨大的力量。 ___________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 Group 1 ① Confucius was a great thinker and educator in Chinese history. ② He advocated kindness, respect for elders, and social harmony. ③ His ideas shaped the moral foundation of Chinese culture. ④ Even today, his ideas still guide the Chinese people. ⑤ Confucius teaches us that being a good person is the most important thing. Group 2 ① Lu Xun is one of the greatest writers in modern Chinese literary history. ② He awakened the spirits of countless Chinese people through his works. ③ His writings had a profound influence on Chinese culture and society. ④ Today, his articles are still loved and read by many young people. ⑤ Lu Xun's story tells us that words can have great power. 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） Group 1 基础仿写：人物身份与背景 例句： Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. （孔子是中国历史上一位著名人物。） 仿写： ① 李白（Li Bai） —— 中国文学史上一位著名人物。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ② 林巧稚（Lin Qiaozhi） —— 中国现代医学史上一位著名人物。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 ① Li Bai is a well-known figure in Chinese literary history. ② Lin Qiaozhi is a well-known figure in modern Chinese medical history. Group 2 进阶仿写：分词作状语 例句： Born into a time of great change, he devoted his life to teaching and spreading ideas. （他出生于一个巨变的时代，毕生致力于教育和传播思想。） 仿写： ③ 岳飞（Yue Fei） —— 出生于一个动荡的时代，毕生致力于保卫他的国家。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ④ 屠呦呦（Tu Youyou） —— 出生于一个普通家庭，毕生致力于科学研究。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 ③ Born into a time of great change, Yue Fei devoted his life to defending his country. ④ Born into an ordinary family, Tu Youyou devoted her life to scientific research. Group 3 进阶仿写：非谓语作状语 例句： He traveled across the country, spreading his wisdom and shaping the thoughts of countless followers. （他游历全国，传播智慧，塑造了无数追随者的思想。） 仿写： ⑤ 郑和（Zheng He） —— 七次扬帆远航，探索海洋，并促进了文化交流。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑥ 徐霞客（Xu Xiake） —— 游历中国各地，记录了他的所见所闻，并留下了珍贵的著作。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 ⑤ Zheng He sailed across the ocean seven times, exploring the sea and promoting cultural exchange. ⑥ Xu Xiake traveled around China, recording what he saw and left behind valuable works. 【提升必做】 1．（25-26高一上·湖南长沙·阶段练习）假如你是李华.你的英国笔友Peter在孔子课堂(the Confucius Academy)了解到了中国古典四大名著(China's four great classic novels)的知识并写信与你交流。作为一名古典文学爱好者，你读之后很高兴。回信给他，介绍你最爱的四大名著屮的某个人物(character)以及原因。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以增加适当的细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, 　　How are you doing? Thanks for sharing with me your experience of learning China's four great classic novels and your personal understanding. There is no denying that so many fantastic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists. I am glad to tell you about my favorite character, Sun Wukong in Journey to the West. 　　In the novel, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, is a monkey born from a stone who acquires supernatural powers through Taoist practices, from which he knows the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform into various animals and objects. That is the most important reason why I consider Sun as my favorite character. 　　Classics open up a window to different worlds and different cultures. I do hope that Chinese classic literature helps you understand China better. 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua 【解析】 这是一篇应用文写作。 根据提示可知，本篇为一封邮件；假如你是李华.你的英国笔友Peter在孔子课堂(the Confucius Academy)了解到了中国古典四大名著(China's four great classic novels)的知识并写信与你交流。作为一名古典文学爱好者，你读之后很高兴。回信予他，介绍你最爱的四大名著中的某个人物(character)以及原因。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：share with（分享），China's four great classic novels（四大名著），be glad to（高兴）；character（人物）；Journey to the West（西游记）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如There is no denying that so many fantastic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists.运用了There is no denying that...句型；In the novel, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, is a monkey born from a stone who acquires supernatural powers through Taoist practices, from which he knows the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform into various animals and objects.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 2．（25-26高二上·黑龙江省龙东联盟·月考）你校英语报正在开展以“Campus Person of the Year in My Heart”为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物事迹； 2.意义或启示。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Campus Person of the Year in My Heart ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Campus Person of the Year in My Heart Consistently devoted to public welfare and spreading warmth through small acts, my classmate Li Tao deserves the title of Campus Person of the Year in my eyes. Last month, Li Tao launched a book-donation campaign at our school. He appealed to students to share unused books and sent them to kids in a remote mountain village. Besides, he volunteers at community clean-ups every month, picking up litter and sorting recyclables carefully, which has inspired more citizens to engage in safeguarding the environment. Li Tao's actions prove that being kind and responsible isn't just a slogan, but something we can practice in everyday life. He is truly worthy of this honor. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以《我心中的校园年度人物》为题，撰写一篇短文投稿至校英语报，内容涵盖所选人物的事迹及其带来的意义或启示。 【详解】1.词汇积累 发起：launch → initiate 呼吁：appeal to → call on 偏远的：remote → isolated 参与：engage in → participate in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：He appealed to students to share unused books and sent them to kids in a remote mountain village. 拓展句：He appealed to students to share unused books and sent them to kids who live in a remote mountain village. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, he volunteers at community clean-ups every month, picking up litter and sorting recyclables carefully, which has inspired more citizens to engage in safeguarding the environment.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Li Tao's actions prove that being kind and responsible isn't just a slogan, but something we can practice in everyday life.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、省略引导词that的定语从句） 3．（25-26高二上·山东·大联考）假定你是李华,你校英语报正在举办“A Great Person in My Heart”征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1. 介绍你心中的伟人；2. 该人物对你的影响。 注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Great Person in My Heart ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Great Person in My Heart The great person in my heart is Yuan Longping, the “Father of Hybrid Rice”, whose decades of pursuit revolutionized agriculture. He spent his whole life researching hybrid rice, which helped feed millions of people around the world. Despite his great achievements, he remained modest and hard-working. He once said his dream was to let everyone have enough to eat, and he kept pursuing it until his last day. Yuan Longping has planted far more than rice in my heart. His spirit encourages me to face difficulties bravely. I'll learn from him and try my best to make contributions to our society in the future. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生介绍自己心中的一位伟人，并阐述其生平成就及对个人的深刻影响。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 ①养育：feed → nourish ②帮助：help →assist ③谦虚的：modest → humble/unassuming ④勤奋的：hard-working → diligent/industrious 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Despite his great achievements, he remained modest and hard-working. 拓展句：Although he made great achievements he remained modest and hard-working. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The great person in my heart is Yuan Longping, the “Father of Hybrid Rice”, whose decades of pursuit revolutionized agriculture.(运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】He once said his dream was to let everyone have enough to eat, and he kept pursuing it until his last day.(运用了省略that的宾语从句) 4．（25-26高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习）我校正在组织学雷锋活动。请以“身边乐于助人的人”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 试举一例简述他（她）助人为乐的事。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 短文题目已为你写好； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The person who helps others most ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The person who helps others most Who never fails to give others a hand? Kent, as a senior two student, he does well academically. To my admiration, his charming personality fascinates us. Not only is he humble and polite, but he is also considerate and helpful. Here comes a touching example. The other day Kent's classmate Henry got his right ankle hurt, so it was never convenient for him to walk. Without hesitation, he offered to support and carry Henry frequently. Additionally, he spared much time to assist Henry with his lessons. In a word, Kent sets an impressive example to us all: care makes the world warmer. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。考生校正在组织学雷锋活动。请以“身边乐于助人的人”为题，写一篇短文参赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 帮助：give sb. a hand→help 提出：offer→propose 谦虚的：humble→modest 此外：additionally→besides 2.句式拓展 并列句变复合句 原句：The other day Kent's classmate Henry got his right ankle hurt, so it was never convenient for him to walk. 拓展句：Since the other day Kent's classmate Henry got his right ankle hurt, it was never convenient for him to walk. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only is he humble and polite, but he is also considerate and helpful.(运用了部分倒装) [高分句型2]Here comes a touching example. (运用了完全倒装句) 5．（25-26高一上·广东河源·阶段练习）假定你是李华。你校英语节组织了“A hero in my heart—Hua Mulan”英语征文评选。请根据以下提示写一篇短文参加评选： 1.简述木兰替父从军的故事； 2.你喜欢这一人物的理由； 3.对你的影响。 注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：disguise herself as a man女扮男装, character人物 A hero in my heart—Hua Mulan ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A hero in my heart—Hua Mulan I'm delighted to share the hero in my heart—Mulan with you, who is my favourite cartoon movie character. Living in ancient times, Mulan was a young girl. She disguised herself as a man to trick the officers so that she could join the army as a way to help her family. Finally the young girl made it! I really love this character because she is brave and determined when fighting against the enemies. History saw the great contributions she has made to the country. Mulan sets a good example and also has great effects on me in all aspects. Whenever I meet with difficulties, I will think of her and be hugely inspired. Mulan is a true hero! 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写一篇短文，参加学校组织的“A hero in my heart—Hua Mulan”英语征文评选。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：说明文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.简述木兰替父从军的故事； 2.你喜欢这一人物的理由； 3.对你的影响。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） delighted; cartoon movie character; ancient times; disguise oneself as; join the army; make it; determined; fight against; contributions; set a good example; have great effects on; meet with difficulties; true hero 第三步：连词成句 1. I'm delighted to share the hero in my heart—Mulan with you, who is my favourite cartoon movie character. 2. Living in ancient times, Mulan was a young girl. 3. She disguised herself as a man to trick the officers so that she could join the army as a way to help her family. 4. Finally the young girl made it! 5. I really love this character because she is brave and determined when fighting against the enemies. 6. History saw the great contributions she has made to the country. 7. Mulan sets a good example and also has great effects on me in all aspects. 8. Whenever I meet with difficulties, I will think of her and be hugely inspired. 9. Mulan is a true hero! 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 表文章结构顺序：Finally 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm delighted to share the hero in my heart—Mulan with you, who is my favourite cartoon movie character. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] I really love this character because she is brave and determined when fighting against the enemies. (运用了because引导原因状语从句) 【拓展选做】 学校英文报征文“幽默的力量”，谈幽默在人际交往中的重要性，结合个人经历说明（100词左右） The Power of Humor ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Power of Humor Humor is a valuable tool in daily communication. It helps ease tension and strengthen relationships. Last month, I spilled coffee on my classmate's notebook. Instead of getting angry, he joked, “My notes now have a coffee aroma!” His humor calmed me down instantly, and we became closer. Humor resolves conflicts gently and creates a positive atmosphere. In short, a sense of humor makes us more approachable and helps build better connections with others. 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $