高中写作进阶小册-定语从句04-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

**基本信息** 聚焦写作基础能力提升，通过词汇替换、句型应用、语法纠错与词汇积累的联动训练，构建“词汇—句型—语法”三维知识逻辑体系，助力语言理解与表达能力进阶。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |词汇替换|30题|基础动词/形容词替换训练|与背诵清单高频词汇联动，实现基础词向高阶词转化| |句型汉译英|10题|非限制性定语从句应用|聚焦as/which/who引导从句，强化复杂句型构建能力| |语法改错|10题|定语从句语法错误辨析|与汉译英形成“应用—纠错”闭环，深化语法规则理解| |背诵清单|30条|写作高频词汇短语积累|为词汇替换提供素材支撑，夯实语言输出基础|

J's 高中写作教材 第8课时 高中词汇替换 + 定语从句 04 板块一：高中词汇替换（30组） 【读后续写·动作链】 1. go → head He headed towards the door without saying a word. 2. hold → grasp She grasped my hand tightly as we crossed the busy street. 3. drop → slip The glass slipped from her fingers and shattered on the floor. 4. push → shove He shoved the door open and rushed into the room. 5. pull → drag They dragged the heavy suitcase up the stairs. 6. throw → cast She cast a quick glance at the clock on the wall. 【读后续写·情感描写】 7. cry → weep She wept silently when she heard the heartbreaking news. 8. smile → grin He grinned from ear to ear when he opened the gift. 9. shake → tremble Her hands trembled with fear as she opened the letter. 10. surprise → shock The sudden news shocked everyone in the room. 11. worry → anxiety Her face was filled with anxiety before the exam results came out. 12. calm → compose She took a deep breath to compose herself before speaking. 【读后续写·环境描写】 13. dark → dim The room was lit by a dim candle, casting long shadows on the wall dark — 笼统表示"黑暗"，缺乏画面感 dim — 表示"光线微弱/昏暗"，更精准，常用于文学描写，传递出一种朦胧、神秘或压抑的氛围 14. bright → brilliant The brilliant sunshine made the whole garden glow with warmth. 15. cold → freezing The freezing wind cut through our coats like a knife. 16. hot → burning The burning sun made it impossible to walk outside at noon. 17. wet → damp The damp air after the rain carried the scent of fresh earth. 18. wind → breeze A gentle breeze blew through the open window. 【读后续写·心理活动】 19. think about → reflect on She sat quietly, reflecting on everything that had happened. 20. remember → remind The old photo reminded him of his childhood adventures. 21. understand → grasp It took him a moment to grasp the seriousness of the situation. 22. decide → resolve She resolved to never give up no matter what happened. 23. expect → anticipate The children eagerly anticipated the arrival of the summer holiday. 24. regret → remorse He felt deep remorse for the hurtful words he had said. 【应用文·建议与请求】 25. ask for → request I am writing to request further information about the course. 26. advise → propose I propose that we hold a meeting to discuss this issue. 27. invite → welcome We warmly welcome you to attend the opening ceremony. 28. reply → response I look forward to your response at your earliest convenience. 29. thank → express gratitude I would like to express my sincere gratitude for your support. 30. sorry → apology Please accept my sincere apology for the inconvenience caused. 板块二：定语从句汉译英（10题） 1. 正如我们所知，吸烟对健康有害。 → As we all know, smoking is harmful to health. [as引导的非限制性定语从句] 2. 我的家乡，正如你在照片中看到的，变化很大。 → My hometown, as you can see in the photo, has changed a lot. [as引导的非限制性定语从句] 3. 众所周知，中国是一个有着悠久历史的国家。 → China, as is known to all, is a country with a long history. [as引导的非限制性定语从句] 4. 他通过了考试，这让他的父母非常高兴。 → He passed the exam, which made his parents very happy. [which引导的非限制性定语从句] 5. 我们参观了长城，它是世界七大奇迹之一。 → We visited the Great Wall, which is one of the seven wonders of the world. [which引导的非限制性定语从句] 6. 正如谚语所说，有志者事竟成。 → As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. [as引导的非限制性定语从句] 7. 他迟到了，这并不让我感到意外。 → He was late, which did not surprise me at all. [which引导的非限制性定语从句] 8. 正如报纸报道的那样，经济正在复苏。 → As is reported in the newspaper, the economy is recovering. [as引导的非限制性定语从句] 9. 我姐姐在北京工作，她是一名医生。 → My sister, who works in Beijing, is a doctor. [who引导的非限制性定语从句] 10. 他的房子去年被烧毁了，那是他父亲留给他的。 → His house, which was burned down last year, was left to him by his father. [which引导的非限制性定语从句] 板块三：语法改错（10题） 每题给出错误句子，请找出并改正。答案附在下方。 1. As is known to all, that the earth is round. → As is known to all, the earth is round. 说明：as引导从句后直接跟主句，不需要that 2. He failed the exam, that made his parents upset. → He failed the exam, which made his parents upset. 说明：非限制性定语从句用which，不能用that 3. As it is reported, the weather will improve soon. → As is reported, the weather will improve soon. 说明：as引导定语从句，is不能换成it 4. Tom, that is my best friend, will study abroad. → Tom, who is my best friend, will study abroad. 说明：非限制性定语从句指人用who，不能用that 5. Which we expected, he won the game. → As we expected, he won the game. 说明：句首引导定语从句用As，不能用Which 6. She bought a car which color is red. → She bought a car whose color is red. 说明：所属关系用whose，不用which 7. The earth, as we all know it, goes around the sun. → The earth, as we all know, goes around the sun. 说明：as在从句中作know的宾语，不需要再加it 8. He has three sons, all of them are teachers. → He has three sons, all of whom are teachers. 说明：非限制性定语从句用whom，不能用them 9. I lost my wallet, which made me very sad. → I lost my wallet, which made me very sad. 说明：此句正确，which指代前面整个主句 10. As we all know that practice makes perfect. → As we all know, practice makes perfect. 说明：As引导的从句后直接跟主句，删掉that 板块四：背诵清单（30组） 1. head — v. 朝……方向走 2. grasp — v. 紧握；抓住 3. slip — v. 滑落；溜走 4. shove — v. 猛推；挤 5. drag — v. 拖；拽 6. cast — v. 投；抛（目光） 7. weep — v. 哭泣；流泪 8. grin — v. 咧嘴笑 9. tremble — v. 颤抖；发抖 10. shock — v. 使震惊 11. anxiety — n. 焦虑；不安 12. compose — v. 使平静；组成 13. dim — adj. 昏暗的；模糊的 14. brilliant — adj. 明亮的；杰出的 15. freezing — adj. 极冷的；冰冻的 16. burning — adj. 灼热的；燃烧的 17. damp — adj. 潮湿的 18. breeze — n. 微风；和风 19. reflect — v. 反思；反映 20. remind — v. 提醒；使想起 21. grasp — v. 理解；领会 22. resolve — v. 决心；决定 23. anticipate — v. 期待；预期 24. remorse — n. 懊悔；自责 25. request — v./n. 请求；要求 26. propose — v. 建议；提议 27. welcome — v. 欢迎；迎接 28. response — n. 回复；回应 29. express gratitude — 表达感谢 30. apology — n. 道歉；歉意 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ J's 高中写作进阶练习 课时8 【第一部分】词汇替换（30题） 用其它词汇替换划线的基础词。 1. He went towards the door without saying a word. 2. She held my hand tightly as we crossed the busy street. 3. The glass dropped from her fingers and shattered on the floor. 4. He pushed the door open and rushed into the room. 5. They pulled the heavy suitcase up the stairs. 6. She threw a quick glance at the clock on the wall. 7. She cried silently when she heard the heartbreaking news. 8. He smiled from ear to ear when he opened the gift. 9. Her hands shook with fear as she opened the letter. 10. The sudden news surprised everyone in the room. 11. Her face was filled with worry before the exam results came out. 12. She took a deep breath to calm herself before speaking. 13. The room was dark, and I could hardly see anything. 14. The bright sunshine made the whole garden glow with warmth. 15. The cold wind cut through our coats like a knife. 16. The hot sun made it impossible to walk outside at noon. 17. The wet air after the rain carried the scent of fresh earth. 18. A gentle wind blew through the open window. 19. She sat quietly, thinking about everything that had happened. 20. The old photo brought back memories of his childhood adventures. 21. It took him a moment to understand the seriousness of the situation. 22. She decided to never give up no matter what happened. 23. The children eagerly expected the arrival of the summer holiday. 24. He felt deep regret for the hurtful words he had said. 25. I am writing to ask for further information about the course. 26. I advise that we hold a meeting to discuss this issue. 27. We warmly invite you to attend the opening ceremony. 28. I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. 29. I would like to thank you for your support. 30. I am sincerely sorry for the inconvenience caused. 【第二部分】句型汉译英（10题） 将下列中文句子译成英文，注意使用定语从句。 1. 正如我们所知，吸烟对健康有害。 （提示：as引导的非限制性定语从句） → ______________________________________________________________ 2. 我的家乡，正如你在照片中看到的，变化很大。（提示：as引导的非限制性定语从句） → ______________________________________________________________ 3. 众所周知，中国是一个有着悠久历史的国家。 （提示：as引导的非限制性定语从句） → ______________________________________________________________ 4. 他通过了考试，这让他的父母非常高兴。 （提示：which引导的非限制性定语从句） → ______________________________________________________________ 5. 我们参观了长城，它是世界七大奇迹之一。 （提示：which引导的非限制性定语从句） → ______________________________________________________________ 6. 正如谚语所说，有志者事竟成。 （提示：as引导的非限制性定语从句） → ______________________________________________________________ 7. 他迟到了，这并不让我感到意外。 （提示：which引导的非限制性定语从句） → ______________________________________________________________ 8. 正如报纸报道的那样，经济正在复苏。 （提示：as引导的非限制性定语从句） → ______________________________________________________________ 9. 我姐姐在北京工作，她是一名医生。 （提示：who引导的非限制性定语从句） → ______________________________________________________________ 10. 他的房子去年被烧毁了，那是他父亲留给他的。 （提示：which引导的非限制性定语从句） → ______________________________________________________________ 【第三部分】语法改错（10题） 每题找出并改正一处语法错误，在原句上直接标注修改。 1. As is known to all, that the earth is round. 改正：__________________________________________________________ 2. He failed the exam, that made his parents upset. 改正：__________________________________________________________ 3. As it is reported, the weather will improve soon. 改正：__________________________________________________________ 4. Tom, that is my best friend, will study abroad. 改正：__________________________________________________________ 5. Which we expected, he won the game. 改正：__________________________________________________________ 6. She bought a car which color is red. 改正：__________________________________________________________ 7. The earth, as we all know it, goes around the sun. 改正：__________________________________________________________ 8. He has three sons, all of them are teachers. 改正：__________________________________________________________ 9. I lost my wallet, which made me very sad. 改正：__________________________________________________________ 10. As we all know that practice makes perfect. 改正：__________________________________________________________ 【第四部分】背诵清单（30条） 熟读并背诵以下高频短语，右侧中文释义供参考。 1. head — v. 朝……方向走 2. grasp — v. 紧握；抓住 3. slip — v. 滑落；溜走 4. shove — v. 猛推；挤 5. drag — v. 拖；拽 6. cast — v. 投；抛（目光） 7. weep — v. 哭泣；流泪 8. grin — v. 咧嘴笑 9. tremble — v. 颤抖；发抖 10. shock — v. 使震惊 11. anxiety — n. 焦虑；不安 12. compose — v. 使平静；组成 13. dim — adj. 昏暗的；模糊的 14. brilliant — adj. 明亮的；杰出的 15. freezing — adj. 极冷的；冰冻的 16. burning — adj. 灼热的；燃烧的 17. damp — adj. 潮湿的 18. breeze — n. 微风；和风 19. reflect — v. 反思；反映 20. remind — v. 提醒；使想起 21. grasp — v. 理解；领会 22. resolve — v. 决心；决定 23. anticipate — v. 期待；预期 24. remorse — n. 懊悔；自责 25. request — v./n. 请求；要求 26. propose — v. 建议；提议 27. welcome — v. 欢迎；迎接 28. response — n. 回复；回应 29. express gratitude — 表达感谢 30. apology — n. 道歉；歉意 第 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $