摘要:
**基本信息**
聚焦“词汇-句型-语法”三维进阶,通过替换训练、句型应用与语法纠错联动,系统夯实写作基础,提升语言表达精准性与规范性。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|词汇替换|30题|基础动词/形容词替换训练|与背诵清单高频短语(如catch sight of、savor)联动,构建同义表达网络|
|句型汉译英|10题|指定状语从句(时间/让步等)翻译|聚焦复合句结构应用,强化从句连接词与逻辑关系表达|
|语法改错|10题|单句语法错误修正|针对从句时态、连接词冗余等典型错误,巩固句型应用准确性|
|背诵清单|30条|写作高频短语记忆|为词汇替换提供素材支撑,形成“输入-输出”闭环训练|
内容正文:
J's 高中写作进阶练习
课时 12
【第一部分】词汇替换(30题)
用其它词汇替换划线的基础词。
1. She saw a familiar figure standing quietly at the far end of the platform.
2. He strained his ears and could just hear the faint sound of footsteps approaching from behind.
3. The mother gently touched her child's hair as she sang a soft lullaby before bedtime.
4. The entire house smelled of the delicious aroma of freshly baked bread.
5. He closed his eyes and tasted every bite of the homemade meal his grandmother had prepared.
6. She sat by the window and looked at the stars twinkling in the vast night sky above.
7. He nodded at her suggestion and then continued to explain his own point of view.
8. The old man frowned in deep thought, trying to recall the name of the song.
9. She waved for me to follow her into the quiet garden behind the old stone house.
10. He bent down to pick up the fallen photograph from the dusty wooden floor.
11. The old couple sat themselves comfortably on the bench and watched the sunset together.
12. She stood up and wiped the tears from her eyes before turning to face the crowd.
13. He remembered the summer days when he used to play by the river with his friends.
14. She hesitated for a moment at the door, wondering whether she had made the right decision to leave.
15. He wished for nothing more than to return to the peaceful countryside where he grew up.
16. I completely forgot the appointment, and did not remember it until the next morning.
17. The sudden change in his attitude confused everyone who had known him for many years.
18. After hours of doing the same repetitive task, he grew bored and desperately needed a break.
19. I am writing to want the position of volunteer guide at the local history museum.
20. I believe my previous experience in customer service fits me for this challenging position.
21. I am particularly good at organizing group activities and communicating with people of all ages.
22. I hope to contribute my knowledge and enthusiasm to your respected organization.
23. I have sent my resume and relevant certificates for your kind consideration and review.
24. I sincerely wait for your favorable reply and hope to have the opportunity for an interview.
25. I am writing to express my unhappiness with the service I received at your restaurant last weekend.
26. I would appreciate it if you could fix this issue as soon as possible and take appropriate measures.
27. Customers should be treated with respect, regardless of the circumstances.
28. I suggest that you improve the quality of your customer service to avoid similar complaints.
29. I regret to complain about the poor condition of the room I stayed in.
30. I hope that you will take my suggestions seriously and make necessary improvements soon.
【第二部分】句型汉译英(10题)
将下列中文句子译成英文,注意使用本课句型。
1. 他刚把门关上,就突然意识到自己把钥匙落在房间里了。 (时间状语从句)
→ ______________________________________________________________
2. 我们一到达山顶,壮丽的日出就开始从地平线上升起来了。 (时间状语从句)
→ ______________________________________________________________
3. 在收到你的回复之前,我不会做出任何关于旅行计划的最终决定。 (时间状语从句)
→ ______________________________________________________________
4. 无论结果如何,我们都应该为自己的努力和付出感到骄傲和自豪。 (让步状语从句)
→ ______________________________________________________________
5. 尽管他还是个孩子,但他已经表现出了远超同龄人的成熟和独立思考能力。 (让步状语)
→ ______________________________________________________________
6. 他把声音压得很低,生怕吵醒隔壁房间里正在熟睡的婴儿。 (目的状语从句)
→ ______________________________________________________________
7. 那天的阳光如此强烈,以至于我们不得不在室内待了整整一个下午。 (结果状语从句)
→ ______________________________________________________________
8. 正如水对鱼来说不可或缺一样,书籍对热爱学习的人来说也是必不可少的。 (比较状语)
→ ______________________________________________________________
9. 她说话的样子好像亲身经历过那场可怕的灾难一样,但实际上她只是从新闻里知道的。 (方式状语从句)
→ ______________________________________________________________
10. 无论你遇到什么样的挑战,都不要轻易放弃你一直追求的梦想和目标。(让步状语)
→ ______________________________________________________________
【第三部分】语法改错(10题)
每题找出并改正一处语法错误,在原句上直接标注修改。
1. As soon as he will finish his homework, he will play basketball.
改正:__________________________________________________________
2. It will be two years before we will meet again.
改正:__________________________________________________________
3. By the time I got there, the movie already started.
改正:__________________________________________________________
4. No matter what you do, do it good.
改正:__________________________________________________________
5. He will not stop until he will achieve his goal.
改正:__________________________________________________________
6. However hard he tries, but he cannot catch up with others.
改正:__________________________________________________________
7. Since you have finished your work, so you can leave now.
改正:__________________________________________________________
8. The moment when I saw her, I fell in love.
改正:__________________________________________________________
9. He ran so fast as nobody could catch him.
改正:__________________________________________________________
10. Young as she is, but she has traveled to many countries.
改正:__________________________________________________________
【第四部分】背诵清单(30条)
熟读并背诵以下高频短语,右侧中文释义供参考。
1. catch sight of — 看见;瞥见
2. make out — 辨认出;听清
3. stroke — v. 轻抚;抚摸
4. waft — v. 飘荡;吹拂
5. savor — v. 品尝;享受
6. gaze — v. 凝视;注视
7. acknowledge with a nod — 点头示意
8. wrinkle one's brow — 皱眉;蹙额
9. gesture — v. 做手势;示意
10. stoop — v. 弯腰;俯身
11. settle — v. 安坐;安顿
12. straighten up — 挺直身子
13. flash back to — 回想起;回忆起
14. pause — v. 停顿;犹豫
15. long for — 渴望;向往
16. slip one's mind — 忘记;想不起来
17. bewilder — v. 使困惑;使糊涂
18. weary — adj. 疲倦的;厌倦的
19. apply for — 申请
20. qualify — v. 使有资格;合格
21. be skilled in — 擅长;精通
22. be eager to — 渴望做……
23. enclose — v. 附上;随信寄出
24. await — v. 等待;期待
25. dissatisfied — adj. 不满意的
26. address — v. 处理;解决
27. be supposed to — 应该;理应
28. enhance — v. 提高;增强
29. make a complaint — 投诉;抱怨
30. trust — v. 相信;确信
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J's 高中写作教材
第12课时 高中词汇替换 + 状语从句 04
板块一:高中词汇替换(30组)
【读后续写·五感动词】
1. see → catch sight of
She caught sight of a familiar figure standing quietly at the far end of the platform.
2. hear → make out
He strained his ears and could just make out the faint sound of footsteps approaching from behind.
3. touch → stroke
The mother gently stroked her child's hair as she sang a soft lullaby before bedtime.
4. smell of → waft/drift through
The delicious aroma of freshly baked bread wafted through the kitchen and filled the entire house.
5. taste → savor
He closed his eyes and savored every bite of the homemade meal his grandmother had prepared.
6. watch → gaze
She sat by the window and gazed at the stars twinkling in the vast night sky above.
【读后续写·肢体语言】
7. nod → acknowledge with a nod
He acknowledged her suggestion with a slight nod and then continued to explain his own point of view.
8. frown → wrinkle one's brow
The old man wrinkled his brow in deep thought, trying to recall the name of the song.
9. wave → gesture
She gestured for me to follow her into the quiet garden behind the old stone house.
10. bend → stoop
He stooped down to pick up the fallen photograph from the dusty wooden floor.
11. sit → settle
The old couple settled themselves comfortably on the bench and watched the sunset together.
12. stand → straighten up
She straightened up and wiped the tears from her eyes before turning to face the crowd.
【读后续写·心理描写】
13. remember → flash back to
His mind flashed back to the summer days when he used to play by the river with his friends.
14. hesitate → pause
She paused for a moment at the door, wondering whether she had made the right decision to leave.
15. wish → long for
He longed for nothing more than to return to the peaceful countryside where he grew up.
16. forget → slip one's mind
The appointment completely slipped my mind, and I didn't remember it until the next morning.
17. confuse → bewilder
The sudden change in his attitude bewildered everyone who had known him for many years.
18. bore → weary
After hours of doing the same repetitive task, he grew weary and desperately needed a break.
【应用文·申请与求职】
19. want → apply for
I am writing to apply for the position of volunteer guide at the local history museum.
20. fit → qualify
I believe my previous experience in customer service qualifies me for this challenging position.
21. good at → be skilled in
I am particularly skilled in organizing group activities and communicating with people of all ages.
22. hope → be eager to
I am eager to contribute my knowledge and enthusiasm to your respected organization.
23. send → enclose
I have enclosed my resume and relevant certificates for your kind consideration and review.
24. wait for→ await
I sincerely await your favorable reply and hope to have the opportunity for an interview.
【应用文·投诉与建议】
25. unhappy → dissatisfied
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service I received at your restaurant last weekend.
26. fix → address
I would appreciate it if you could address this issue as soon as possible and take appropriate measures.
27. should → be supposed to
Customers are supposed to be treated with respect, regardless of the circumstances.
28. improve → enhance
I suggest that you enhance the quality of your customer service to avoid similar complaints.
29. complain → make a complaint
I regret to make a complaint about the poor condition of the equipment in the fitness center.
30. hope → trust
I trust that you will take my suggestions seriously and make necessary improvements soon.
板块二:状语从句汉译英(10题)
1. 他刚把门关上,就突然意识到自己把钥匙落在房间里了。
→ Hardly had he closed the door when he suddenly realized that he had left his keys in the room.
[时间状语从句]
2. 我们一到达山顶,壮丽的日出就开始从地平线上升起来了。
→ No sooner had we reached the top of the mountain than the magnificent sunrise began to appear on the horizon.
[时间状语从句]
3. 在收到你的回复之前,我不会做出任何关于旅行计划的最终决定。
→ I will not make any final decision about the travel plan until I receive your reply.
[时间状语从句]
4. 无论结果如何,我们都应该为自己的努力和付出感到骄傲和自豪。
→ Whatever the result may be, we should be proud of our efforts and the hard work we have put in.
[让步状语从句]
5. 尽管他还是个孩子,但他已经表现出了远超同龄人的成熟和独立思考能力。
→ Child as he is, he has already shown maturity and independent thinking ability far beyond his age.
[让步状语从句]
6. 他把声音压得很低,生怕吵醒隔壁房间里正在熟睡的婴儿。
→ He lowered his voice for fear that he might wake up the sleeping baby in the next room.
[目的状语从句]
7. 那天的阳光如此强烈,以至于我们不得不在室内待了整整一个下午。
→ The sunlight was so strong that day that we had to stay indoors for the entire afternoon.
[结果状语从句]
8. 正如水对鱼来说不可或缺一样,书籍对热爱学习的人来说也是必不可少的。
→ Just as water is essential to fish, books are indispensable to those who love learning.
[比较状语从句]
9. 她说话的样子好像亲身经历过那场可怕的灾难一样,但实际上她只是从新闻里知道的。
→ She spoke as if she had personally experienced the terrible disaster, but actually she only knew about it from the news.
[方式状语从句]
10. 无论你遇到什么样的挑战,都不要轻易放弃你一直追求的梦想和目标。
→ No matter what challenges you may encounter, never easily give up the dreams and goals you have been pursuing.
[让步状语从句]
板块三:语法改错(10题)
每题给出错误句子,请找出并改正。答案附在下方。
1. As soon as he will finish his homework, he will play basketball.
→ As soon as he finishes his homework, he will play basketball.
说明:时间状语从句用一般现在时,不用will
2. It will be two years before we will meet again.
→ It will be two years before we meet again.
说明:before从句用一般现在时代替将来时
3. By the time I got there, the movie already started.
→ By the time I got there, the movie had already started.
说明:by the time+过去时,主句用过去完成时
4. No matter what you do, do it good.
→ No matter what you do, do it well.
说明:修饰动词do用副词well,不用形容词good
5. He will not stop until he will achieve his goal.
→ He will not stop until he achieves his goal.
说明:until从句用一般现在时,不用will
6. However hard he tries, but he cannot catch up with others.
→ However hard he tries, he cannot catch up with others.
说明:however和but不能同时使用
7. Since you have finished your work, so you can leave now.
→ Since you have finished your work, you can leave now.
说明:since和so不能同时使用
8. The moment when I saw her, I fell in love.
→ The moment I saw her, I fell in love.
说明:the moment本身是连词,不需要加when
9. He ran so fast as nobody could catch him.
→ He ran so fast that nobody could catch him.
说明:so...that固定搭配,不用so...as
10. Young as she is, but she has traveled to many countries.
→ Young as she is, she has traveled to many countries.
说明:as引导让步从句,主句不加but
板块四:背诵清单(30组)
1. catch sight of — 看见;瞥见
2. make out — 辨认出;听清
3. stroke — v. 轻抚;抚摸
4. waft — v. 飘荡;吹拂
5. savor — v. 品尝;享受
6. gaze — v. 凝视;注视
7. acknowledge with a nod — 点头示意
8. wrinkle one's brow — 皱眉;蹙额
9. gesture — v. 做手势;示意
10. stoop — v. 弯腰;俯身
11. settle — v. 安坐;安顿
12. straighten up — 挺直身子
13. flash back to — 回想起;回忆起
14. pause — v. 停顿;犹豫
15. long for — 渴望;向往
16. slip one's mind — 忘记;想不起来
17. bewilder — v. 使困惑;使糊涂
18. weary — adj. 疲倦的;厌倦的
19. apply for — 申请
20. qualify — v. 使有资格;合格
21. be skilled in — 擅长;精通
22. be eager to — 渴望做……
23. enclose — v. 附上;随信寄出
24. await — v. 等待;期待
25. dissatisfied — adj. 不满意的
26. address — v. 处理;解决
27. be supposed to — 应该;理应
28. enhance — v. 提高;增强
29. make a complaint — 投诉;抱怨
30. trust — v. 相信;确信
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