2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---露营遇狼求生 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写核心考点，涵盖文本分析（角色、视角、时空线、情节线等）、情节构造及语言表达等模块，通过问题导向（如细节问答）和任务驱动（如情节衔接句设计）引导学生自主构建知识网络，形成从文本解读到情节续写的完整认知体系。 亮点在于自主诊断与方法指导结合，开篇设置细节问答自测文本分析能力，中段通过续写框架（如“唤醒家人—借鉴方法—对峙狼群”步骤）引导逻辑构建，培养思维品质与学习能力。每个模块配有反思总结（如主题启示提炼），帮助学生自主发现薄弱点并优化策略，教师可依据学情精准指导，实现个性化复习提升。

阅读下列材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 We had been looking forward to our camping trip for months. My two kids and my wife had spent weeks preparing our stuff, stocking up on food and studying trail maps. We wanted a quiet weekend away from the noise of city life, surrounded by pine trees, fresh mountain air and starry skies. We had no idea that a peaceful night would turn into a fight for survival. We arrived at the campsite late afternoon and set up our tents near a small stream. Our neighbour, Matt, a friendly outdoorsman from Alberta, was camping just a few metres away. We chatted briefly, shared tips about the area, and joked about keeping an eye out for wildlife. We even teased about what we would do if wolves showed up. Matt proudly recalled how he once scared off a hungry wolf by making loud noises and waving sticks years ago. However, we all treated it as nothing more than an amusing camping tale and neither of us took it seriously. By midnight, everyone was asleep. The fire had died down to glowing ashes, still giving off faint warmth against the freezing mountain night. The forest was deathly quiet except for the occasional hoot of an owl echoing in the distance. Half-asleep, I vaguely remembered Matt’s wolf story that afternoon, but I brushed it off as pointless nonsense. Moments later, I woke suddenly, my heart pounding wildly against my ribs. Something was terribly wrong. A low, guttural howl cut sharply through the darkness, startlingly close by. I unzipped my tent and peeked out cautiously. Pale moonlight filtered through dense pine branches, casting twisted, lengthy shadows across the ground. To my horror, two large wolves stationed in front of our campsite silently, their eyes glowing eerily pale yellow in the dim light. The strong smell of leftover barbecue food scattered beside our tents had drawn them here. Without warning, one bold wolf lunged at our torn food bag, tearing it wide open with its razor-sharp powerful jaws. 注意：1、续写词数应为150左右； 2、请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 “Wolves!” I shouted, blood rushing to my head. After what felt like hours, the wolves finally left us. 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 作者一家筹备数月，期待郊外露营，渴望远离城市喧嚣、享受山野静谧时光--- _________________ ---抵达营地安顿下来，偶遇户外经验丰富的邻居Matt，闲聊时听闻其驱狼经历，众人只当趣谈、并未放在心上--- _________________ ---深夜山林寂静，众人熟睡，作者半梦半醒间想起驱狼故事却不以为意--- _________________ ---刺耳狼嚎划破夜空，作者惊醒，发现两只野狼因露营食物残渣闯入营地，撕咬食物袋 4. 细节问答 Why did the family look forward to the camping trip? ：___________________________________ What did the family do to prepare for the trip?：_________________________________ Who was Matt and what experience did he share?：________________________________________________ How did the author’s family feel about Matt’s wolf story?：__________________________________________ What caused the wolves to appear at the campsite?：_____________________________________________ What was the environment like at midnight in the forest?：_________________________________________________ What did the wolves do when they arrived?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者一家精心筹备露营，期盼静谧山野之旅，放松身心→偶遇资深户外爱好者Matt，听闻其成功驱狼的亲身经历→众人轻视风险，将警示故事当作趣味闲谈，毫无戒备→深夜山林寂静寒冷，食物残渣吸引野狼突袭营地→野狼撕咬食物袋，危机骤然爆发→（续写）作者紧急呼喊众人，借鉴Matt的方法合力驱狼，紧张对峙→（续写）狼群久攻无果最终撤离，一家人惊魂未定，收获深刻的安全启示 6．情感线 The family：relaxed and expectant→___________→drowsy and careless→___________→grateful and cautious（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；独立主格 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长启示类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: “Wolves!” I shouted, blood rushing to my head. 衔接句1——What did the author and others do to drive off the wolves? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: After what felt like hours, the wolves finally left us. 衔接句2——How did they feel? What lesson did they learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：“有狼！”我大喊一声，瞬间头皮发麻。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：仿佛过了许久，狼群终于离开了。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 “Wolves!” I shouted, blood rushing to my head. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After what felt like hours, the wolves finally left us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 The author（细心警觉、遇事冷静的家长）；author’s wife and kids（一同露营的家人）；Matt（经验丰富、熟知野外生存技巧的邻居户外爱好者）；two fierce wolves（被食物吸引、闯入营地的野狼） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 作者一家筹备数月，精心准备物资、研究路线，期盼远离城市喧嚣的静谧露营之旅--- 傍晚抵达山间溪边营地、搭建帐篷，偶遇资深户外爱好者邻居Matt，闲聊野外注意事项--- Matt分享自己靠制造巨响、挥舞树枝成功驱狼的经历，众人仅当作趣味闲谈，轻视野外风险、未加戒备--- 深夜山林寂静寒冷，篝火化为余烬，众人沉沉入睡，作者恍惚想起驱狼故事却并未放在心上--- 凄厉狼嚎惊醒作者，发现两只野狼被帐篷旁的烧烤食物残渣吸引，闯入营地撕咬食物袋，危机爆发 4. 细节问答 Why did the family look forward to the camping trip? ：They wanted to escape the noisy city life and enjoy a quiet and relaxing weekend in the wild mountains. What did the family do to prepare for the trip?：They prepared camping equipment, stocked up on food and studied trail maps for weeks. Who was Matt and what experience did he share?：Matt was the author’s neighbor and an experienced outdoorsman, who once scared off a hungry wolf by making loud noises and waving sticks. How did the author’s family feel about Matt’s wolf story?：They treated it as an amusing camping tale and didn’t take it seriously at all. What caused the wolves to appear at the campsite?：The strong smell of leftover barbecue food scattered beside the tents attracted the two wolves. What was the environment like at midnight in the forest?：It was freezing, deathly quiet, with only faint warm ashes of the fire and occasional owl hoots in the distance. What did the wolves do when they arrived?：They stationed in front of the campsite and one wolf lunged at the food bag, tearing it open with sharp jaws. What does the story tell us?：We should never ignore others’ valuable experience and underestimate potential risks. Proper caution and preparation are essential for safety. 5．情节线 作者一家精心筹备露营，期盼静谧山野之旅，放松身心→偶遇资深户外爱好者Matt，听闻其成功驱狼的亲身警示经历→众人轻视野外风险，将实用警示当作趣味闲谈，毫无防备之心→深夜寒冷寂静，营地食物残渣吸引两只野狼突袭，撕碎食物袋，生死危机骤然降临→作者紧急呼喊家人，借鉴Matt的驱狼方法，众人合力制造声响、挥舞树枝对峙狼群→狼群被震慑、无从下手，最终悻悻离去→一家人惊魂未定、平安脱险，深刻吸取教训，敬畏野外风险、重视他人经验 6．情感线 The family：relaxed and expectant→casual and careless→drowsy and relaxed→shocked and terrified→grateful and cautious（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者一家野外露营时轻视邻居的驱狼警示，因食物残留吸引野狼突袭，危急时刻借鉴邻居的野外经验合力驱狼，最终平安脱险，懂得敬畏风险、重视他人经验的重要性。 English：During a camping trip, the author’s family ignored others’ valuable wolf-prevention experience and encountered a wolf attack. They finally drove off the wolves with the learned method and learned to respect potential risks in life. 8. 句式 状语从句：We wanted a quiet weekend away from the noise of city life. 非谓语动词：Pale moonlight filtered through dense pine branches, casting twisted, lengthy shadows across the ground. 宾语从句：we joked about what we would do if wolves showed up. 定语从句：The strong smell of leftover barbecue food scattered beside our tents had drawn them here. 独立主格：The fire had died down to glowing ashes, still giving off faint warmth. 9. 本文主题 成长启示类：切勿轻视他人的经验之谈，生活处处暗藏未知风险，保持敬畏与谨慎，方能规避危机、守护自身安全。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: “Wolves!” I shouted, blood rushing to my head. 衔接句1——What did the author and others do to drive off the wolves? The author woke up his family immediately, followed Matt’s method, made loud noises and waved sticks aggressively to scare the wolves, starting a tense confrontation. Paragraph 2: After what felt like hours, the wolves finally left us. 衔接句2——How did they feel? What lesson did they learn? They felt exhausted and terrified but relieved to survive. They learned never to take potential risks lightly and always value others’ practical experience. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：“有狼！”我大喊一声，瞬间头皮发麻。 →①我立刻唤醒家人，众人瞬间清醒、满心恐惧→②牢记Matt的驱狼方法，众人大声呼喊、挥舞树枝制造声势→③野狼被突如其来的威慑震慑，不敢贸然进攻，双方陷入紧张对峙； 第二段：仿佛过了许久，狼群终于离开了。 →①紧绷的神经终于放松，一家人惊魂未定、身心疲惫→②看着狼消失在夜色中，众人由衷庆幸得以平安脱险→③此次惊险经历让大家彻底醒悟，绝不轻视未知风险、忽视他人经验。 四.段落续写范文 “Wolves!” I shouted, blood rushing to my head. I instantly woke up my terrified wife and kids. Remembering Matt’s words, I grabbed a thick branch and waved it wildly. Meanwhile, all of us shouted loudly to create intimidating noises. The wolves were startled and stepped back warily, yet still refused to leave. They stared at us with greedy eyes, lingering around the campsite stubbornly. The tense standoff continued in the cold, silent night, making our hearts race with fear. After what felt like hours, the wolves finally left us. We collapsed on the ground, sweating despite the freezing night breeze. Trembling with fear, we exchanged relieved glances, grateful to survive the terrifying encounter. It was a narrow escape. We no longer treated Matt’s camping tale as a joke. This unforgettable experience taught us a precious lesson: never underestimate potential risks, and always respect the practical experience of others. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $