高频文体13 应用文写作（祝贺信）（写作专练）2027年高考英语一轮复习写作高分突破

**基本信息** 以“核心三要素+结构化写作”构建祝贺信专项训练体系，融合审题逻辑、谋篇策略与技巧提炼，实现语言规范与思维递进的统一。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作指导|含审题/结构/技巧3大模块|核心三要素（事由+肯定+祝愿）、总—分—总结构、时态人称适配、虚实结合写法|从交际目的（祝贺）到要素解析，再到结构搭建与技巧应用，形成“目的—要素—结构—技巧”递进逻辑| |真题精练|2008全国I卷1题|提纲类祝贺信实战应用|依托真题验证方法体系，强化考点落地| |模拟专练|8道不同场景题（获奖/称号/竞赛等）|场景化迁移（正式/半正式语气适配、要点全覆盖）|覆盖高频祝贺场景，实现方法从通用到变式的迁移应用|

高频文体13 应用文写作（祝贺信） 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2008年 全国I卷 祝贺大熊猫苏琳生日 提纲类 祝贺信属于正式/半正式交际应用文，核心交际目的：对对方的成功、获奖、升学、晋升、夺冠等喜事表达真诚祝贺，传递赞美与美好祝愿。 1. 必抓核心三要素：点明祝贺事由 + 肯定对方付出与实力 + 表达祝愿/学习心态，三点为祝贺信万能得分要点，必须完整落地。 2. 语气适配原则：写给师长、陌生人、官方，语气正式、礼貌、谦逊；写给朋友、同龄人，语气真诚、亲切、热烈，整体积极向上、得体大方。 3. 写作核心原则：喜事具体化、赞美真诚化，不空洞吹捧，结合事实肯定对方成果，贴合英文交际逻辑。 祝贺信 Para. 1 开头：开门见山，直接祝贺 Para. 2 主体：主体展开，有理有据（核心得分段） Para. 3 结尾：结尾升华，送上祝福 1. 结构清晰，采用“总—分—总”模式 开头 无需多余铺垫，直接点明得知喜讯，开门见山表达诚挚祝贺，清晰点出祝贺事件，快速入题，简洁利落。 主体 遵循“先成果，后原因，再评价”逻辑：先肯定对方取得的优异成绩与成果；再结合细节说明对方长期的努力、坚持与付出；最后给出真诚赞美，体现成功来之不易，内容饱满不空洞。 结尾 再次表达祝贺，可表达向对方学习的态度，同时送上真诚的未来期许与美好祝福，结构闭环、立意积极向上。 2. 时态与人称的合理选择 时态 过去时：描述对方过往的努力、备考过程、参赛经历，铺垫成功的原因。 现在时：表达当下的祝贺、赞美、感受，描述当前成果与状态。 将来时：用于结尾送上未来祝福、展望对方长远发展，升华全文。 人称 全程以第一人称 I 书写祝贺心情、个人感悟与期许；以第二人称 you 指代收信人，聚焦对方的成绩与付出。全程人称统一，禁止随意替换泛指代词，保证交际视角稳定。 3.其他写作技巧 （1） 虚实结合写法 实写：对方获奖、晋级、夺冠、升学等具体成果与事实；虚写：对方坚持、自律、勤奋的优秀品质、个人带给我的启发。虚实结合避免文章空洞，提升内容厚度。 （2）要点全覆盖写法 严格紧扣题干要求，不遗漏要点、不堆砌无关内容，全文围绕“祝贺、肯定、祝福”核心展开，扣题精准，不偏题跑题。 （3）篇幅配比写法 100词标准配比：开头20词点题祝贺、主体60词详写成果与品质、结尾20词祝福升华，主体段为核心重点，篇幅占比最大，结构匀称美观。 （4）逻辑行文写法（流畅底层逻辑） 固定递进逻辑链：得知喜讯+正式祝贺 → 肯定成果+赞美付出 → 表态学习+送上祝福，层层递进，逻辑连贯无断层。 段落内部遵循“事实在前，赞美在后”，先陈述客观成绩，再抒发主观认可与感受，符合英文应用文表达习惯，规避中式抒情优先的语病。 （5）考场避雷写法（低分通病规避） 1. 时态不乱用：过去努力用过去时，当下祝贺用现在时，未来祝福用将来时，杜绝时态混用。 2. 拒绝空洞吹捧：只写“You are great”无任何事实支撑，内容单薄，直接降档，必须结合具体事件赞美。 3. 杜绝结构混乱：严禁一段到底，必须三段分层，功能清晰、层次分明。 4. 语气贴合场景：不滥用夸张口语化词汇，保持真诚得体，符合书信交际礼仪。 1.（2008年·全国I卷） 假设你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda)，一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写封信: 1.自我介绍; 2.祝贺苏琳生日; 3.感谢工作人员; 4.索取苏琳三岁生日照 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1. （2025·北大附中预科部·12月月考） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。国际部交换生Jim的摄影作品“Rhythm of Fall”在你校“银杏节”摄影展获得一等奖，你也非常喜爱这个作品。作为好友，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.祝贺获奖; 2.你喜爱的理由。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2. （2026·北京牛栏山一中·期末） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你英国好友 Jim 得知你校上周举办主题为“未来校园”的科技创新大赛，你所在团队设计的作品在比赛中获奖。他对你表示祝贺，并询问相关情况。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 作品介绍及创作理由; 2. 获奖感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3. （2025·湖南长沙·阶段测试） 假定你是李华，得知你的英国朋友 John的科技作品在2026 校园青年科学家竞赛(The Campus Contest for Young Scientists 2026)中荣获特等奖(Grand Prize)。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达祝贺； 2.肯定他付出的努力； 3.评论其科技作品。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear John, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4. （2026·高一河北石家庄·阶段测试） 假定你是李华，你班的英国交换生Jim荣获你校“最具感染力学生”（Most Inspiring Student）称号。请你给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括： 1.表达祝贺； 2.回顾他如何用热情和正能量影响班级同学； 3.表达祝愿，希望友谊长存。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5. （2026·山东德州·一模） 假设你是学校英语社团负责人李华。社团刚完成“纳新”活动，计划为新成员录制一段欢迎视频。请写出英文视频脚本，内容包括： 1.表示祝贺； 2.告知安排； 3.表达期待。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Hi everyone! I’m Li Hua, president of the English Club. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. （2026·全国一轮·专题练习） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛，并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。要求如下：1. 表达祝贺；2. 肯定努力；3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. （2024·甘肃临夏·期末） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter写信与你分享他参加了他们学校未来科技社团开展的科技创新比赛并获得了冠军的消息，请你给他写一封信。内容包括： 1.表示祝贺； 2.肯定努力； 3.表达祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80 个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8. （2024·全国·专题练习） 假如你是学生会主席李华，你校美国交换生Peter在全市机器人大赛中获得了第一名。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。要点如下： 1. 恭喜他获奖； 2. 对他的努力与成功进行积极评价； 3. 准备为他庆祝的方式。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 高频文体13 应用文写作（祝贺信） 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2008年 全国I卷 祝贺大熊猫苏琳生日 提纲类 祝贺信属于正式/半正式交际应用文，核心交际目的：对对方的成功、获奖、升学、晋升、夺冠等喜事表达真诚祝贺，传递赞美与美好祝愿。 1. 必抓核心三要素：点明祝贺事由 + 肯定对方付出与实力 + 表达祝愿/学习心态，三点为祝贺信万能得分要点，必须完整落地。 2. 语气适配原则：写给师长、陌生人、官方，语气正式、礼貌、谦逊；写给朋友、同龄人，语气真诚、亲切、热烈，整体积极向上、得体大方。 3. 写作核心原则：喜事具体化、赞美真诚化，不空洞吹捧，结合事实肯定对方成果，贴合英文交际逻辑。 祝贺信 Para. 1 开头：开门见山，直接祝贺 Para. 2 主体：主体展开，有理有据（核心得分段） Para. 3 结尾：结尾升华，送上祝福 1. 结构清晰，采用“总—分—总”模式 开头 无需多余铺垫，直接点明得知喜讯，开门见山表达诚挚祝贺，清晰点出祝贺事件，快速入题，简洁利落。 主体 遵循“先成果，后原因，再评价”逻辑：先肯定对方取得的优异成绩与成果；再结合细节说明对方长期的努力、坚持与付出；最后给出真诚赞美，体现成功来之不易，内容饱满不空洞。 结尾 再次表达祝贺，可表达向对方学习的态度，同时送上真诚的未来期许与美好祝福，结构闭环、立意积极向上。 2. 时态与人称的合理选择 时态 过去时：描述对方过往的努力、备考过程、参赛经历，铺垫成功的原因。 现在时：表达当下的祝贺、赞美、感受，描述当前成果与状态。 将来时：用于结尾送上未来祝福、展望对方长远发展，升华全文。 人称 全程以第一人称 I 书写祝贺心情、个人感悟与期许；以第二人称 you 指代收信人，聚焦对方的成绩与付出。全程人称统一，禁止随意替换泛指代词，保证交际视角稳定。 3.其他写作技巧 （1） 虚实结合写法 实写：对方获奖、晋级、夺冠、升学等具体成果与事实；虚写：对方坚持、自律、勤奋的优秀品质、个人带给我的启发。虚实结合避免文章空洞，提升内容厚度。 （2）要点全覆盖写法 严格紧扣题干要求，不遗漏要点、不堆砌无关内容，全文围绕“祝贺、肯定、祝福”核心展开，扣题精准，不偏题跑题。 （3）篇幅配比写法 100词标准配比：开头20词点题祝贺、主体60词详写成果与品质、结尾20词祝福升华，主体段为核心重点，篇幅占比最大，结构匀称美观。 （4）逻辑行文写法（流畅底层逻辑） 固定递进逻辑链：得知喜讯+正式祝贺 → 肯定成果+赞美付出 → 表态学习+送上祝福，层层递进，逻辑连贯无断层。 段落内部遵循“事实在前，赞美在后”，先陈述客观成绩，再抒发主观认可与感受，符合英文应用文表达习惯，规避中式抒情优先的语病。 （5）考场避雷写法（低分通病规避） 1. 时态不乱用：过去努力用过去时，当下祝贺用现在时，未来祝福用将来时，杜绝时态混用。 2. 拒绝空洞吹捧：只写“You are great”无任何事实支撑，内容单薄，直接降档，必须结合具体事件赞美。 3. 杜绝结构混乱：严禁一段到底，必须三段分层，功能清晰、层次分明。 4. 语气贴合场景：不滥用夸张口语化词汇，保持真诚得体，符合书信交际礼仪。 1.（2008年·全国I卷） 假设你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda)，一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写封信: 1.自我介绍; 2.祝贺苏琳生日; 3.感谢工作人员; 4.索取苏琳三岁生日照 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Staff members, I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student who loves pandas deeply. I have been following Su Lin and her mother Bai Yun through your zoo’s website ever since Su Lin was born three years ago. Knowing that Su Lin is turning three years old soon, I’m writing to send my sincere congratulations on her birthday. I’m truly grateful for your professional care and devotion, which enables the lovely panda to grow up healthily. I would appreciate it if you could send me a recent photo of Su Lin on her third birthday. Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【导语】本篇为高考经典真题应用文书信，属于祝贺+感谢+请求类复合信件。文章需完成自我介绍、祝贺熊猫生日、感谢工作人员悉心照料、索要生日照片四大要点。行文真诚自然、要点全覆盖、句式高级规整，完全贴合高考评分标准。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 深深喜爱：like very much → love deeply 密切关注：watch → follow 真诚的祝福：best wishes → sincere congratulations 悉心照料：good care → professional care and devotion 2. 句式拓展（简单句变复合句） 原句：You take good care of Su Lin, so she grows well. 拓展句：I’m truly grateful for your professional care and devotion, which enables the lovely panda to grow up healthily. 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型1] who引导定语从句（自我介绍高级句式） I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student who loves pandas deeply. [高分句型2] ever since 引导时间状语从句 I have been following Su Lin and her mother Bai Yun through your zoo’s website ever since Su Lin was born three years ago. [高分句型3] which引导非限制性定语从句 I’m truly grateful for your professional care and devotion, which enables the lovely panda to grow up healthily. [高分句型4] 委婉请求万能句型 I would appreciate it if you could send me a recent photo of Su Lin on her third birthday. 1. （2025·北大附中预科部·12月月考） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。国际部交换生Jim的摄影作品“Rhythm of Fall”在你校“银杏节”摄影展获得一等奖，你也非常喜爱这个作品。作为好友，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.祝贺获奖; 2.你喜爱的理由。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文1】 Dear Jim, Greetings! I’m really excited to congratulate you on winning the first prize in the photography exhibition of the “Ginkgo Festival” with your amazing work “Rhythm of Fall”! You really deserve this honor! I’m completely fascinated by your photo. The composition is truly remarkable. The scattered ginkgo leaves are arranged in a seemingly random yet harmonious way, guiding the viewers’ eyes through the picture. The play of light and shadow is also a highlight. The soft sunlight filtering through the leaves adds a touch of magic, making the whole image glow with a unique charm. It vividly captures the essence of autumn and beauty of our school. Once again well-done! I’m eager to see more of your excellent works. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文2】 Dear Jim, Greetings! I’m really excited to congratulate you on winning the first prize in the photography exhibition of the “Ginkgo Festival” with your amazing work “Rhythm of Fall”! What I love most about this photo is that it captures a vivid campus moment. In the picture, there are students walking under the ginkgo trees, their laughter echoing in the air. The golden leaves are fluttering down, creating a beautiful contrast against the students’ energetic faces and the school uniforms. This photo shows the harmonious coexistence of nature and the youthful spirit in our school. It’s a perfect blend of the beauty of autumn and the vitality of students. Once again, well done! I’m looking forward to seeing more of your excellent works. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给国际部交换生Jim写一封信，祝贺他获奖并说明自己喜爱他作品的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 兴奋的：excited→thrilled 展示：show→display 令人惊讶的：amazing→astonishing 精力充沛的：energetic→vigorous 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The golden leaves are fluttering down, creating a beautiful contrast against the students’ energetic faces and the school uniforms. 拓展句：The golden leaves are fluttering down, which creates a beautiful contrast against the students’ energetic faces and the school uniforms. 【点睛】[高分句型1] What I love most about this photo is that it captures a vivid campus moment.（运用了what引导主语从句，that引导表语从句） [高分句型2] The golden leaves are fluttering down, creating a beautiful contrast against the students’ energetic faces and the school uniforms.（运用了现在分词creating作状语） 2. （2026·北京牛栏山一中·期末） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你英国好友 Jim 得知你校上周举办主题为“未来校园”的科技创新大赛，你所在团队设计的作品在比赛中获奖。他对你表示祝贺，并询问相关情况。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 作品介绍及创作理由; 2. 获奖感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, Thanks a lot for your warm congratulations! Our team created a “Green Campus Monitor” — a small device that tracks energy use in classrooms and sends alerts when lights or AC are left on. We designed it because we noticed much energy waste at school, and we wanted to make our campus more eco-friendly for the future. The achievement means a lot to us. Winning the prize made us really excited, and it also encouraged us to keep using technology to solve more problems in school life. I’ll share more photos of our device with you soon. It was great to hear from you! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，给英国好友Jim介绍在“未来校园”的科技创新大赛获奖作品的情况以及自己的获奖感受。 【详解】1.词汇积累 注意：notice→observe 兴奋的：excited→thrilled 鼓励：encourage→motivate 解决：solve→handle 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Winning the prize made us really excited, and it also encouraged us to keep using technology to solve more problems in school life. 拓展句：What made us really excited was that winning the prize encouraged us to keep using technology to solve more problems in school life. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Our team created a “Green Campus Monitor” — a small device that tracks energy use in classrooms and sends alerts when lights or AC are left on.（运用了that引导的限定性定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】We designed it because we noticed much energy waste at school, and we wanted to make our campus more eco-friendly for the future.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 3. （2025·湖南长沙·阶段测试） 假定你是李华，得知你的英国朋友 John的科技作品在2026 校园青年科学家竞赛(The Campus Contest for Young Scientists 2026)中荣获特等奖(Grand Prize)。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达祝贺； 2.肯定他付出的努力； 3.评论其科技作品。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear John, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear John, Hearing that you have won the Grand Prize in The Campus Contest for Young Scientists 2026, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations to you. I know you have devoted plenty of spare time to researching and polishing your work. Your continuous efforts and perseverance finally pay off. Your tech work is creative and practical, which fully shows your outstanding scientific thinking. Again, congratulations on your amazing achievement! I am really proud of you. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文祝贺邮件。文章围绕祝贺朋友斩获科技竞赛特等奖展开，依次完成真诚祝贺、肯定个人付出、评价作品优势三大核心要点，内容完整、逻辑清晰、语气真挚，完全符合高考80词写作规范。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 诚挚的祝贺：best wishes → sincerest congratulations 投入时间：spend time → devote time to 取得回报：succeed → pay off 出色的：excellent → outstanding 2. 句式拓展（简单句变复合句） 原句：Your work is good and it shows your talent for science. 拓展句：Your tech work is creative and practical, which fully shows your outstanding scientific thinking. 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型1] 现在分词作状语开篇 Hearing that you have won the Grand Prize in The Campus Contest for Young Scientists 2026, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations to you. [高分句型2] 高频高分短语 Your continuous efforts and perseverance finally pay off. [高分句型3] which引导非限制性定语从句 Your tech work is creative and practical, which fully shows your outstanding scientific thinking. 4. （2026·高一河北石家庄·阶段测试） 假定你是李华，你班的英国交换生Jim荣获你校“最具感染力学生”（Most Inspiring Student）称号。请你给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括： 1.表达祝贺； 2.回顾他如何用热情和正能量影响班级同学； 3.表达祝愿，希望友谊长存。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, I’m writing to give my warmest congratulations to you on winning the title of “Most Inspiring Student” in our school. We are all deeply touched by your constant enthusiasm and positive energy. You always actively participate in class activities, encourage us to face difficulties bravely and bring great warmth to our whole class. I sincerely hope our friendship will last forever. Wish you greater progress in your future study and life! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文祝贺信。要求考生以李华的身份，祝贺英国交换生Jim荣获校园荣誉称号，依次完成表达祝贺、回顾其积极影响、期许长久友谊三大要点，行文真挚流畅、要点齐全，符合高考书信写作规范。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 热烈祝贺：congratulate warmly → give warmest congratulations to 持续的热情：lasting passion → constant enthusiasm 正能量：positive spirit → positive energy 友谊长存：keep friendship → friendship last forever 2. 句式拓展（简单句变复合句） 原句：You are positive and always encourage us, influencing our class a lot. 拓展句：You always actively participate in class activities, encourage us to face difficulties bravely and bring great warmth to our whole class. 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型1] 高分祝贺固定句式 I’m writing to give my warmest congratulations to you on winning the title of “Most Inspiring Student” in our school. [高分句型2] 并列谓语句式，内容饱满 You always actively participate in class activities, encourage us to face difficulties bravely and bring great warmth to our whole class. [高分句型3] 结尾祝愿万能句型 I sincerely hope our friendship will last forever. Wish you greater progress in your future study and life! 5. （2026·山东德州·一模） 假设你是学校英语社团负责人李华。社团刚完成“纳新”活动，计划为新成员录制一段欢迎视频。请写出英文视频脚本，内容包括： 1.表示祝贺； 2.告知安排； 3.表达期待。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Hi everyone! I’m Li Hua, president of the English Club. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Hi everyone! I’m Li Hua, president of the English Club. Congratulations on successfully joining our English Club! We’re delighted to have all of you new members here. A variety of interesting activities will be arranged in the coming months, including English speeches, movie watching and theme sharing sessions. These activities are designed to enrich your campus life and improve your English skills. We sincerely look forward to your active participation and hope we can grow and progress together in the club. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于口语类视频脚本，文体亲切自然、简洁大方。文章以社团负责人的身份，向新成员表达祝贺、介绍后续活动安排并寄予期待，完全贴合题目三大要点，词数标准、行文流畅，符合校园视频宣讲场景。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 成功加入：join successfully → successfully join 各式各样的：different → a variety of 主题分享会：share activities →theme sharing sessions 共同进步：improve together → grow and progress together 2. 句式拓展（简单句变复合句） 原句：We will hold many activities to help you learn English well. 拓展句：These activities are designed to enrich your campus life and improve your English skills. 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型1] 被动句式（正式得体） A variety of interesting activities will be arranged in the coming months. [高分句型2] 不定式作目的状语 These activities are designed to enrich your campus life and improve your English skills. [高分句型3] 结尾温情万能句式 We sincerely look forward to your active participation and hope we can grow and progress together in the club. 6. （2026·全国一轮·专题练习） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛，并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。要求如下：1. 表达祝贺；2. 肯定努力；3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, Hearing that you have won the championship in the Chinese Idioms Competition held by your school’s Chinese Learning Club, I’m writing to convey my warmest congratulations to you. Your achievement is totally well-deserved. I know you have kept practicing Chinese and learning idioms patiently in your spare time. Your continuous efforts finally pay off. I admire your passion for Chinese culture sincerely. Wish you greater progress in future Chinese learning! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文祝贺回信。文章针对笔友在中文成语比赛夺冠的喜讯，依次完成真诚祝贺、肯定长期付出、表达学习期许三大核心要点，行文逻辑连贯、语气真挚自然，贴合中外笔友交流场景，完全符合80词高考写作标准。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 冠军：first prize → championship 热烈祝贺：best wishes → warmest congratulations 实至名归：deserve it → well-deserved 努力获得回报：succeed → efforts pay off 2. 句式拓展（简单句变复合句） 原句：You study hard every day, so you get the prize. 拓展句：I know you have kept practicing Chinese and learning idioms patiently in your spare time. Your continuous efforts finally pay off. 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型1] 分词作状语开篇（高级句式） Hearing that you have won the championship in the Chinese Idioms Competition held by your school’s Chinese Learning Club, I’m writing to convey my warmest congratulations to you. [高分句型2] 高分评价短语 Your achievement is totally well-deserved. [高分句型3] 经典励志收尾句型 Wish you greater progress in future Chinese learning! 7. （2024·甘肃临夏·期末） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter写信与你分享他参加了他们学校未来科技社团开展的科技创新比赛并获得了冠军的消息，请你给他写一封信。内容包括： 1.表示祝贺； 2.肯定努力； 3.表达祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80 个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I’m thrilled to hear that you won the championship in the Technological Innovation Competition held by your school’s Future Technology Club. I’d like to offer my sincerest congratulations to you. Your success is absolutely well-deserved. I know you have devoted lots of spare time to researching and polishing your works. Your constant efforts and creative thinking finally paid off. I’m truly proud of you. Wish you keep exploring technology and achieve more amazing accomplishments in the future! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文祝贺回信。作者向笔友Peter祝贺其科技创新比赛夺冠，依次完成真诚祝贺、肯定长期付出与创新能力、送上未来期许三大核心要点，行文流畅、语气真挚，贴合书信交际语境，词数精准契合高考要求。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 科技创新：science and technology → technological innovation 全身心投入：spend time → devote time to 实至名归：deserve success → well-deserved 取得成就：get success → achieve accomplishments 2. 句式拓展（简单句变复合句） 原句：You worked hard on your project and finally succeeded. 拓展句：I know you have devoted lots of spare time to researching and polishing your works. Your constant efforts and creative thinking finally paid off. 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型1] 复合句开篇，信息饱满 I’m thrilled to hear that you won the championship in the Technological Innovation Competition held by your school’s Future Technology Club. [高分句型2] 高分评价主谓结构 Your success is absolutely well-deserved. [高分句型3] 并列名词短语提升句式质感 Your constant efforts and creative thinking finally paid off. 8. （2024·全国·专题练习） 假如你是学生会主席李华，你校美国交换生Peter在全市机器人大赛中获得了第一名。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封信，向他表示祝贺。要点如下： 1. 恭喜他获奖； 2. 对他的努力与成功进行积极评价； 3. 准备为他庆祝的方式。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I am writing to offer my warmest congratulations to you on winning first place in the city’s Robot Competition. Your brilliant achievement is totally well‑deserved. I have witnessed your continuous efforts. You kept polishing your robot works and adjusting your design patiently, which finally brought you great success. To celebrate your honor, the Student Union is going to hold a small celebration party for you. We sincerely hope you will have a wonderful time. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文祝贺信。以学生会主席李华的身份，向获奖美国交换生Peter表示祝贺，全文覆盖祝贺获奖、肯定努力与成功、说明庆祝方式三大要点，语言正式得体、逻辑清晰，完全符合高考80词写作要求。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 第一名：first prize → first place 实至名归：deserved → well-deserved 打磨完善：improve → polish 庆祝荣誉：celebrate the prize → celebrate the honor 2. 句式拓展（简单句变复合句） 原句：You worked hard and made great progress, so you succeeded. 拓展句：You kept polishing your robot works and adjusting your design patiently, which finally brought you great success. 【点睛】高分句型 [高分句型1] 祝贺专用高分句式 I am writing to offer my warmest congratulations to you on winning first place in the city’s Robot Competition. [高分句型2] which引导非限制性定语从句 You kept polishing your robot works and adjusting your design patiently, which finally brought you great success. [高分句型3] 现在进行时表计划，贴合语境 To celebrate your honor, the Student Union is going to hold a small celebration party for you. 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $