高频文体04 应用文写作（感谢信）（写作专练）2027年高考英语一轮复习写作高分突破

**基本信息** 以“审题-谋篇-技巧”三维体系构建感谢信写作方法论，通过真题模拟联动实现语言能力与思维品质的专项突破。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |审题指导|3要点|文体语气定位、核心必写要点、考场硬性准则|从文体特征切入，明确“事由具体+感恩落地”核心要求| |谋篇布局|3段式结构|开头点题、主体叙事+感恩、结尾升华|构建“总—分—总”逻辑框架，实现结构闭环| |写作技巧|3类技巧|结构模式、时态人称选择、虚实结合|从宏观结构到微观表达，形成完整写作链条| |真题精练|1道（2021天津卷）|提纲类命题对应解法|还原高考情境，验证方法适用性| |模拟专练|10道|多情境（寄宿/比赛/投稿等）|覆盖高频场景，强化方法迁移能力|

高频文体04 应用文写作（感谢信） 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2021年 天津卷 英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，写信感谢并介绍自己的计划。 提纲类 一、精准审题 1. 文体与语气定位 感谢信属于正式/半正式应用文书信，核心交际目的为表达真诚谢意。根据对象调整语气：写给老师、长辈、陌生人用正式、诚恳、礼貌语气；写给朋友、同龄人用亲切自然、简洁真诚的语气，杜绝口语化糟粕表达，整体庄重得体。 2. 核心必写要点 所有感谢信通用两大核心：一是点明感谢事由（对方提供的帮助、支持、指导、款待、鼓励等具体行为）；二是阐述带来的帮助与个人收获（能力提升、解决困难、获得成长、走出困境等），可选择性补充未来回馈、自我期许等升华内容。 3. 考场硬性准则 杜绝空泛抒情，必须事由具体、感恩落地；逻辑清晰分层，词数控制在100词左右；时态以一般过去时（感谢过往帮助）、一般现在时（当下感受）为主，时态统一不混乱。 感谢信 Para. 1 开头：开门见山，直接点题（开篇致谢） Para. 2 主体：核心主体，细化事由（叙事+感恩） Para. 3 结尾：升华收尾，礼貌结尾（期许+祝福） 1. 结构清晰，采用“总—分—总”模式 开头 简洁问候，直接表明写作目的，开门见山说出感谢，点明感谢的核心事件，不拖沓、不铺垫冗余内容，快速入题，符合英文书信简洁的表达习惯。 主体 全文重点段落。先具体叙述对方给予的帮助、付出的行动；再详细说明这份帮助给自己带来的实际作用、改变与收获；做到有事例、有细节、有感悟，避免通篇空话，是拉开分数的关键段落。 结尾 再次表达诚挚谢意，升华个人感悟，可补充自我未来的努力方向、回馈心意，最后附上礼貌祝福，收尾完整、得体、圆满，结构闭环。 2. 时态与人称的合理选择 时态 ① 一般过去时（主体叙事必用） 用于描述过去发生的帮助、经历、活动、指导，是感谢信最核心时态。 例：You offered me valuable guidance. / I gained much experience. ② 一般现在时（感受、评价、影响必用） 用于表达当下的感谢、个人感悟、客观影响、自我评价。 例：I am truly grateful. / Your support means a lot to me. ③ 一般将来时（结尾升华必用） 用于表达未来努力、回馈、持续精进的决心，用于结尾拔高。 例：I will keep working hard and pass on the warmth. 人称 全程以第一人称 I 为主：写信人是李华，自述感受、收获与经历，自然真实、贴合身份。 对方统一使用第二人称 you：指代帮助自己的师长、朋友、主办方等，交际指向明确，符合书信对话感。 避雷要点：禁止随意切换三单、泛指人称，杜绝 one/we 乱替换，保证全文人称统一。 3.内容虚实结合技巧（杜绝空洞作文） 严格遵循“实写事件+虚写感悟”：实写具体帮助过程、行为细节；虚写个人成长、心态变化、长远影响。只抒情无细节会空洞，只叙事无升华会平淡，二者结合即为高分内容。 1.（2021年·天津卷） 假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括： (1) 表示感谢并问候； (2) 计划与家人一起做的事情； (3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。 注意： (1) 词数不少于100； (2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； (3) 开头和结尾巳给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Nancy, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Jin 1. （2026·北京市房山区·二模） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你在“保护地球，守护家园”英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。备赛期间，外教Jim给予了你很多帮助。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表达感谢并说明原因； 2. 谈谈你的收获。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2. （2025·北京石景山区·期末） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的故事投稿被杂志Early Bird录用，你的外国好友Jim在写作方面给你提供了帮助。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达感谢； 2.回顾所提供的帮助。 注意：1.词数100字左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3. （2025·北京市十一学校·9月月考） 假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，在“世界读书日”活动中，你听了外教Jim做的关于日常阅读的讲座。请你给他写封信，内容包括： 1．你的收获并表达感谢；2．你阅读中的困惑并寻求帮助。 注意：1．词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4. （2026·陕西省县市·期末） 假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Jim利用课余时间帮你补习英语，使你的英语成绩取得显著进步。请给他写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 表达感谢； 2. 简述他的帮助对你的具体影响； 3. 表达对他未来的祝愿。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5. （2026·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末） 假设你是高中生李华，你的英国笔友 Penny 听说你在学校刚刚举办的“AI赋能校园”(AI-powered Campus)主题献计献策活动中提交了设计方案，并荣获一等奖。她写信向你表示祝贺并询问你的创意。请你根据提示给她写一封回信，内容包括： 1.表示感谢； 2.分享你的创意及灵感来源。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Penny, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6. （2026·福建福州·12月月考） 假定你是高三学生李华，笔友Tom得知你被评为“优秀志愿者(Outstanding Volunteer)”，写来祝贺信，并询问你的具体的志愿服务活动内容。请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 感谢对方的祝贺；2. 志愿服务经历；3. 你的收获。 注意：词数80左右；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7. （2026·天津南开·10月月考） 假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。上周你校成功举办了秋季运动会，一支来自澳大利亚友好学校的师生代表团应邀观看比赛并参加了趣味接力等项目，与你校同学 结下了深厚友谊。请你作为本次运动会的学生运动员代表，给友好学校带队教师Mr. Brown及所有来访同学写一封感谢邮件。内容包括： 1.感谢他们的莅临和积极参与； 2.回顾友好学校师生在运动会期间参赛和观赛的难忘瞬间； 3.表达个人感受、对未来的期待和美好祝愿。 注意： 1.词数不少于100； 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： 友好学校 twin school 秋季运动会 Autumn Sports Meet 趣味接力赛 Fun Run Relay Dear Mr. Brown and all visiting friends, I’m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you once again for your visit and friendship. Yours, Li Jin 8. （2026·天津静海·阶段测试） 假定你是李津，你班在校运动会中获得团体一等奖，交换生James打算为此庆祝，并请你调查同学们所喜欢的庆祝方式。请你根据调查结果，给James写一封邮件，内容包括： (1). 表达感谢; (2). 提出个人建议; (3). 说明理由。 图中显示的内容为： 88% -Outing at weekends 59%-Watching English movies 32%- Sharing food and drinks 注意： (1) 词数100左右; (2) 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear James, How delighted I am to write to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Jin 9. （2026·四川内江·月考） 假如你是李华，在伦敦游玩期间你的英国朋友Anne招待了你。请你给她写一封邮件，表示感谢。要点如下： 1. 写信目的； 2. 简述你的伦敦之行她的招待； 3. 再次感谢，并邀请她来北京旅游。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为100个左右。 2. 请按要求在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Anne, I am writing to express my sincere thanks for your warm reception during my trip to London. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 10. （2026·四川内江·期中） 假如你是李华，你在洛杉机（LosAngles）旅游期间，朋友Cathy带你游玩了美国黄石国家公园（Yellowstone National Park），回来后你想对她表达自己的感谢之情。请根据以下要点给Cathy写一封信。 1. 感谢Cathy的热情款待； 2. 黄石公园各种美景令人印象深刻； 3. 邀请Cathy暑期来四川旅游。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 信件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Cathy, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 高频文体04 应用文写作（感谢信） 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2021年 天津卷 英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，写信感谢并介绍自己的计划。 提纲类 一、精准审题 1. 文体与语气定位 感谢信属于正式/半正式应用文书信，核心交际目的为表达真诚谢意。根据对象调整语气：写给老师、长辈、陌生人用正式、诚恳、礼貌语气；写给朋友、同龄人用亲切自然、简洁真诚的语气，杜绝口语化糟粕表达，整体庄重得体。 2. 核心必写要点 所有感谢信通用两大核心：一是点明感谢事由（对方提供的帮助、支持、指导、款待、鼓励等具体行为）；二是阐述带来的帮助与个人收获（能力提升、解决困难、获得成长、走出困境等），可选择性补充未来回馈、自我期许等升华内容。 3. 考场硬性准则 杜绝空泛抒情，必须事由具体、感恩落地；逻辑清晰分层，词数控制在100词左右；时态以一般过去时（感谢过往帮助）、一般现在时（当下感受）为主，时态统一不混乱。 感谢信 Para. 1 开头：开门见山，直接点题（开篇致谢） Para. 2 主体：核心主体，细化事由（叙事+感恩） Para. 3 结尾：升华收尾，礼貌结尾（期许+祝福） 1. 结构清晰，采用“总—分—总”模式 开头 简洁问候，直接表明写作目的，开门见山说出感谢，点明感谢的核心事件，不拖沓、不铺垫冗余内容，快速入题，符合英文书信简洁的表达习惯。 主体 全文重点段落。先具体叙述对方给予的帮助、付出的行动；再详细说明这份帮助给自己带来的实际作用、改变与收获；做到有事例、有细节、有感悟，避免通篇空话，是拉开分数的关键段落。 结尾 再次表达诚挚谢意，升华个人感悟，可补充自我未来的努力方向、回馈心意，最后附上礼貌祝福，收尾完整、得体、圆满，结构闭环。 2. 时态与人称的合理选择 时态 ① 一般过去时（主体叙事必用） 用于描述过去发生的帮助、经历、活动、指导，是感谢信最核心时态。 例：You offered me valuable guidance. / I gained much experience. ② 一般现在时（感受、评价、影响必用） 用于表达当下的感谢、个人感悟、客观影响、自我评价。 例：I am truly grateful. / Your support means a lot to me. ③ 一般将来时（结尾升华必用） 用于表达未来努力、回馈、持续精进的决心，用于结尾拔高。 例：I will keep working hard and pass on the warmth. 人称 全程以第一人称 I 为主：写信人是李华，自述感受、收获与经历，自然真实、贴合身份。 对方统一使用第二人称 you：指代帮助自己的师长、朋友、主办方等，交际指向明确，符合书信对话感。 避雷要点：禁止随意切换三单、泛指人称，杜绝 one/we 乱替换，保证全文人称统一。 3.内容虚实结合技巧（杜绝空洞作文） 严格遵循“实写事件+虚写感悟”：实写具体帮助过程、行为细节；虚写个人成长、心态变化、长远影响。只抒情无细节会空洞，只叙事无升华会平淡，二者结合即为高分内容。 1.（2021年·天津卷） 假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括： (1) 表示感谢并问候； (2) 计划与家人一起做的事情； (3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。 注意： (1) 词数不少于100； (2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； (3) 开头和结尾巳给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Nancy, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Jin 【参考范文】 Dear Nancy, I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best. Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going to Tian'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient. Yours, Li Jin 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。 【详解】1.词汇积累 照顾：take care of→look after 另外，此外：in addition→besides→what’s more 雇佣：employ→hire 既然：now that→since 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. 拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. (运用了now that引导的原因状语从句) 1. （2026·北京市房山区·二模） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你在“保护地球，守护家园”英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。备赛期间，外教Jim给予了你很多帮助。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表达感谢并说明原因； 2. 谈谈你的收获。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you. I’m delighted to inform you that I won the first prize in the English speech contest. During my preparation, you offered me great help. Not only did you polish my speech draft, but you also patiently corrected my pronunciation and taught me some speaking skills. Thanks to your guidance, I performed confidently in the contest. Personally, I have gained plenty from this experience. I have improved my oral English and learned how to express myself logically. Again, thank you for your generous help. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】题目要求考生给外教Jim写一封邮件，对他在备赛期间提供的帮助表示感谢。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：express→convey 帮助：help→assistance 指导：guidance→instruction 获得：gain→obtain 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thanks to your guidance, I performed confidently in the contest. 拓展句：Since you have guided me patiently, I performed confidently in the contest. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m delighted to inform you that I won the first prize in the English speech contest.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） [高分句型2] Not only did you polish my speech draft, but you also patiently corrected my pronunciation and taught me some speaking skills.（运用了部分倒装） 2. （2025·北京石景山区·期末） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的故事投稿被杂志Early Bird录用，你的外国好友Jim在写作方面给你提供了帮助。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达感谢； 2.回顾所提供的帮助。 注意：1.词数100字左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, I am writing to share the exciting news that my story has been accepted for publication in the magazine Early Bird. I am truly grateful for your generous help which played a vital role in my success. I still remember when I struggled with the plot and felt stuck. It was your brainstorming that inspired me to add the unexpected twist at the end. Furthermore, you carefully polished my draft and corrected grammatical errors, which significantly improved the readability of my story. Thank you again for your time and patience. I will send you a copy of the magazine as soon as I receive it. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给Jim写一封电子邮件，表达感谢以及回顾所提供的帮助。 【详解】1.词汇积累 令人兴奋的：exciting → thrilling 记得：remember → recall 感谢的：grateful → appreciative 修改：polish → revise 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：I am truly grateful for your generous help, which played a vital role in my success. 拓展句：I am truly grateful for your generous help because it played a vital role in my success. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to share the exciting news that my story has been accepted for publication in the magazine Early Bird.（运用了that引导同位语从句） 【高分句型2】Furthermore, you carefully polished my draft and corrected grammatical errors, which significantly improved the readability of my story.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） 3. （2025·北京市十一学校·9月月考） 假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，在“世界读书日”活动中，你听了外教Jim做的关于日常阅读的讲座。请你给他写封信，内容包括： 1．你的收获并表达感谢；2．你阅读中的困惑并寻求帮助。 注意：1．词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on reading methods. I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck of my reading — how to increase the reading speed. However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in reading. For example, I find it hard to grasp the gist of the passages, and I also feel it hard to continue reading when confronted with new words. What can I do? Would you please give me some advice? I would be really grateful if you could help me out. Thank you very much again. Your earliest reply would be appreciated. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文给你校英国外教Jim写一封电子邮件，表达对他关于日常阅读讲座的感谢并简述你的收获，并说明你阅读中的困惑并寻求帮助。 【详解】1.词汇积累 困惑的：puzzled → confused 掌握：grasp → master 要点：gist→ key point 感激的：grateful → appreciative 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For example I find it hard to grasp the gist of the passages, and I also feel it hard to continue reading when I am confronted with new words. 拓展句：I’d appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on reading methods. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句) [高分句型2] I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck of my reading — how to increase the reading speed. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句) 4. （2026·陕西省县市·期末） 假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Jim利用课余时间帮你补习英语，使你的英语成绩取得显著进步。请给他写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 表达感谢； 2. 简述他的帮助对你的具体影响； 3. 表达对他未来的祝愿。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jim, I am writing to convey my sincere gratitude to you for helping me with my English study in your spare time. Previously, I struggled with English grammar and always felt nervous about English exams. Thankfully, you patiently explained key knowledge points and shared effective learning methods with me. Gradually, I built up my confidence and made remarkable progress in English. My recent exam results have improved greatly, which benefits me a lot. I truly appreciate your generous help. Wish you all the best in your study and daily life. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于高考高频应用文——感谢信。要求考生以李华的身份，写信感谢外国朋友Jim利用课余时间补习英语，需完成表达感谢、阐述具体影响、送上未来祝愿三大核心要点。文章要求语气真诚礼貌、细节充实、行文连贯，词数100词左右，贴合朋友间真诚交际的语境。 【详解】 1. 核心高分词汇 感谢：thank you → convey sincere gratitude to 空闲时间：free time → spare time 进步：make progress → make remarkable progress 耐心的：patient → patiently 受益匪浅：help me much →benefit me a lot 2. 句式升级（简单句→高分复合句） 普通句：You helped me study English, so my English improved. 升级句：Thanks to your patient guidance, I have made great progress in my English study. 普通句：I was bad at English before and felt worried about exams. 升级句：Previously, I struggled with English grammar and always felt nervous about English exams. 【点睛】高分句型 【高分句型1】which引导非限制性定语从句 My recent exam results have improved greatly, which benefits me a lot. 亮点：结尾补充学习收获，衔接前文帮助，句式高级流畅，规避简单句堆砌，升华感恩意义。 【高分句型2】并列状语结构 You patiently explained key knowledge points and shared effective learning methods with me. 亮点：精准细化对方的具体帮助，贴合题干要点，细节饱满，让感谢不空洞，贴合感谢信高分写作逻辑。 5. （2026·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末） 假设你是高中生李华，你的英国笔友 Penny 听说你在学校刚刚举办的“AI赋能校园”(AI-powered Campus)主题献计献策活动中提交了设计方案，并荣获一等奖。她写信向你表示祝贺并询问你的创意。请你根据提示给她写一封回信，内容包括： 1.表示感谢； 2.分享你的创意及灵感来源。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Penny, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Penny, I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for your warm congratulations. I’m delighted to share my winning design for the AI-powered Campus activity with you. My design is an intelligent campus assistant system. It can help students schedule study plans and search for learning resources efficiently. The inspiration comes from my daily school life, where I often hope for smarter and more convenient campus services. I’m really happy that my idea works. Hope you like it! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于回信类应用文，主题为分享科创获奖创意。要求考生以李华的身份，回复英国笔友Penny的祝贺，感谢对方并分享自己的“AI赋能校园”创意方案及灵感来源。全文需语气亲切自然、要点完整、行文流畅，严格控制80词左右，贴合中学生笔友交流场景。 【详解】 1. 核心高分词汇 真诚感谢：thank you → express sincere thanks 高兴的：happy → delighted 高效地：effectively → efficiently 灵感：idea → inspiration 便捷的：easy → convenient 2. 句式升级（简单句→高分复合句） 普通句：I want to share my design with you. 升级句：I’m delighted to share my winning design for the AI-powered Campus activity with you. 普通句：I got the idea from my daily school life. 升级句：The inspiration comes from my daily school life, where I often hope for smarter and more convenient campus services. 【点睛】高分句型 【高分句型1】where引导定语从句 The inspiration comes from my daily school life, where I often hope for smarter and more convenient campus services. 亮点：用地点定语从句修饰校园生活，精准解释灵感来源，句式高级流畅，摆脱简单句平铺直叙。 【高分句型2】不定式作后置定语 It can help students schedule study plans and search for learning resources efficiently. 亮点：清晰阐述创意功能，细节具体充实，紧扣题干“分享创意”核心要点，内容不空洞。 6. （2026·福建福州·12月月考） 假定你是高三学生李华，笔友Tom得知你被评为“优秀志愿者(Outstanding Volunteer)”，写来祝贺信，并询问你的具体的志愿服务活动内容。请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 感谢对方的祝贺；2. 志愿服务经历；3. 你的收获。 注意：词数80左右；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I’m more than grateful for your sincere congratulations on my being awarded Outstanding Volunteer. I regularly take part in voluntary activities in my community. I often help clean up the neighborhood public areas and organize reading activities for left-behind children to enrich their spare time. Besides, I assist the elderly with daily online procedures. These experiences teach me the value of dedication and make me a more responsible person. It’s truly a rewarding experience for me. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】 本篇为高考应用文回信，写作背景为回复笔友祝贺、介绍志愿经历。要求考生以李华身份，完成感谢祝贺、介绍具体志愿服务内容、阐述个人收获三大要点。全文语气真诚亲切，贴合朋友交流语境，词数控制在80词左右，逻辑连贯、细节充实。 【详解】 1. 核心高分词汇 非常感谢：very thankful → more than grateful 被授予：be given → be awarded 打扫清理：clean → clean up 奉献：devotion → dedication 有益的、值得的：valuable → rewarding 2. 句式升级（简单句→高分复合句） 普通句：Thank you for congratulating me on my prize. 升级句：I’m more than grateful for your sincere congratulations on my being awarded Outstanding Volunteer. 普通句：I do volunteer work and I have learned a lot. 升级句：These experiences teach me the value of dedication and make me a more responsible person. 【点睛】高分句型 【高分句型1】非谓语结构精炼句式 I often help clean up the neighborhood public areas and organize reading activities for left-behind children to enrich their spare time. 亮点：运用 help (to) do 及不定式目的状语，集中罗列志愿工作细节，内容具体不空洞，完美回应题干询问。 【高分句型2】并列宾语结构 These experiences teach me the value of dedication and make me a more responsible person. 亮点：精准落实“个人收获”要点，句式工整对称，立意升华，贴合志愿服务主题。 7. （2026·天津南开·10月月考） 假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。上周你校成功举办了秋季运动会，一支来自澳大利亚友好学校的师生代表团应邀观看比赛并参加了趣味接力等项目，与你校同学 结下了深厚友谊。请你作为本次运动会的学生运动员代表，给友好学校带队教师Mr. Brown及所有来访同学写一封感谢邮件。内容包括： 1.感谢他们的莅临和积极参与； 2.回顾友好学校师生在运动会期间参赛和观赛的难忘瞬间； 3.表达个人感受、对未来的期待和美好祝愿。 注意： 1.词数不少于100； 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： 友好学校 twin school 秋季运动会 Autumn Sports Meet 趣味接力赛 Fun Run Relay Dear Mr. Brown and all visiting friends, I’m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you once again for your visit and friendship. Yours, Li Jin 【参考范文】 Dear Mr. Brown and all visiting friends, I’m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your visit and active participation in our school’s Autumn Sports Meet last week. Your presence truly made the event more wonderful and memorable. I still keep in mind those touching moments. You cheered loudly for our players during fierce competitions and took an active part in the Fun Run Relay. Your enthusiasm and teamwork spirit deeply impressed all of us. During the activity, we communicated and cooperated happily, building close and precious friendship. This cross-cultural experience benefits me greatly. I hope we can keep in touch constantly and have more chances to communicate and cooperate in the future. Wish you all the best! Thank you once again for your visit and friendship. Yours, Li Jin 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于正式感谢类邮件，以学生代表身份写给外国师生代表团。文章围绕秋季运动会交流活动展开，需完成三层核心要点：致谢对方莅临参与、回顾运动会难忘瞬间、抒发个人感受并展望未来。行文需真诚得体、细节充实、逻辑递进，词数100词以上，贴合校园涉外交流正式语境。 【详解】 1. 核心高分词汇 真诚感谢：thank you → express sincere gratitude 出席、莅临：coming → presence 激烈的：exciting → fierce 热情：passion → enthusiasm 跨文化的：cross-cultural → cross-cultural 保持联系：keep contact → keep in touch constantly 2. 句式升级（简单句→高分复合句） 普通句：You joined in the Fun Run Relay and cheered for us. 升级句：You cheered loudly for our players during fierce competitions and took an active part in the Fun Run Relay. 普通句：We got along well and made good friends. 升级句：During the activity, we communicated and cooperated happily, building close and precious friendship. 【点睛】高分句型 【高分句型1】现在分词作结果状语 During the activity, we communicated and cooperated happily, building close and precious friendship. 亮点：用非谓语动词表伴随结果，句式紧凑高级，自然体现交流收获，摆脱简单句堆砌。 【高分句型2】宾语从句+并列结构 I hope we can keep in touch constantly and have more chances to communicate and cooperate in the future. 亮点：精准落实未来期待的要点，句式工整，情感真挚，贴合涉外交流主题，升华全文主旨。 8. （2026·天津静海·阶段测试） 假定你是李津，你班在校运动会中获得团体一等奖，交换生James打算为此庆祝，并请你调查同学们所喜欢的庆祝方式。请你根据调查结果，给James写一封邮件，内容包括： (1). 表达感谢; (2). 提出个人建议; (3). 说明理由。 图中显示的内容为： 88% -Outing at weekends 59%-Watching English movies 32%- Sharing food and drinks 注意： (1) 词数100左右; (2) 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear James, How delighted I am to write to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Jin 【参考范文】 Dear James, How delighted I am to write to you. I’m truly grateful for your kind idea of celebrating our class’s first prize in the school sports meeting. According to my survey, 88% of classmates prefer a weekend outing, ranking the most popular choice. Besides, 59% of students would like to watch English movies and 32% favor sharing food and drinks. Personally, I strongly recommend the weekend outing. It can relax us effectively after tight study and strengthen our class bond. Meanwhile, it satisfies most classmates’ preference perfectly. Looking forward to our wonderful celebration! Yours sincerely, Li Jin 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于信息告知类邮件。要求考生以李津的身份，回复交换生James，基于班级调查结果告知运动会庆祝方式意向，同时完成感谢对方心意、给出个人建议、说明建议理由三大核心要点。文章需准确呈现图表数据、逻辑清晰、行文连贯，词数控制在100词左右，语气友好真诚，贴合同学交际场景。 【详解】 1. 核心高分词汇 感谢：thank you → be truly grateful for 调查：research → survey 更喜欢：like best → prefer / favor 有效放松：relax well → relax effectively 增进情谊：improve relationship → strengthen class bond 2. 句式升级（简单句→高分复合句） 普通句：Most classmates like weekend outings best. 升级句：88% of classmates prefer a weekend outing, ranking the most popular choice. 普通句：I suggest we have an outing because most students like it. 升级句：I strongly recommend the weekend outing, for it satisfies most classmates’ preference and relaxes us greatly. 【点睛】高分句型 【高分句型1】现在分词作状语 88% of classmates prefer a weekend outing, ranking the most popular choice. 亮点：巧用分词结构补充排名信息，句式简洁高级，避免生硬罗列数据，行文流畅自然。 【高分句型2】并列原因状语 It can relax us effectively after tight study and strengthen our class bond. 亮点：从学业放松、班级凝聚力两个角度阐述理由，要点饱满、逻辑充分，完美贴合题干“说明理由”要求。 9. （2026·四川内江·月考） 假如你是李华，在伦敦游玩期间你的英国朋友Anne招待了你。请你给她写一封邮件，表示感谢。要点如下： 1. 写信目的； 2. 简述你的伦敦之行她的招待； 3. 再次感谢，并邀请她来北京旅游。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为100个左右。 2. 请按要求在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Anne, I am writing to express my sincere thanks for your warm reception during my trip to London. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【参考范文】 Dear Anne, I am writing to express my sincere thanks for your warm reception during my trip to London. I really enjoyed my stay there. You kindly picked me up and treated me to delicious local food. What’s more, you patiently showed me around famous local attractions, which helped me have a deeper understanding of London’s culture and customs. I truly had an unforgettable experience. Again, please accept my heartfelt gratitude. I sincerely invite you to visit Beijing in your spare time. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】 本篇为高考高频感谢信应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，写信感谢英国朋友Anne在伦敦游玩期间的热情招待，并邀请对方来北京旅游。全文需覆盖点明写信目的、简述招待细节、再次感谢并发出邀请三大核心要点，词数100词左右，语气真诚亲切，符合跨国好友交际语境。 【详解】 1. 核心高分词汇 真诚感谢：thank you → express sincere / heartfelt gratitude 热情招待：welcome → warm reception 款待：entertain → treat sb. to 参观：visit → show sb. around 难忘的：wonderful → unforgettable 2. 句式升级（简单句→高分复合句） 普通句：You took me to visit many places, and I learned a lot. 升级句：You patiently showed me around famous local attractions, which helped me have a deeper understanding of London’s culture and customs. 普通句：Thanks again and I hope you can come to Beijing. 升级句：Again, please accept my heartfelt gratitude. I sincerely invite you to visit Beijing in your spare time. 【点睛】高分句型 【高分句型1】which引导非限制性定语从句 You patiently showed me around famous local attractions, which helped me have a deeper understanding of London’s culture and customs. 亮点：补充说明对方招待带来的收获，句式流畅高级，摆脱简单句堆砌，丰富文章层次。 【高分句型2】递进叙事结构 You kindly picked me up and treated me to delicious local food. 亮点：用并列动词短语细化招待细节，内容真实不空泛，完美贴合题干“简述招待经历”的核心要求。 10. （2026·四川内江·期中） 假如你是李华，你在洛杉机（LosAngles）旅游期间，朋友Cathy带你游玩了美国黄石国家公园（Yellowstone National Park），回来后你想对她表达自己的感谢之情。请根据以下要点给Cathy写一封信。 1. 感谢Cathy的热情款待； 2. 黄石公园各种美景令人印象深刻； 3. 邀请Cathy暑期来四川旅游。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 信件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Cathy, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Cathy, How is everything going? I’m writing to convey my sincere gratitude for your warm hospitality during my trip to Los Angeles. I really appreciate you sparing your precious time to guide me through Yellowstone National Park. The stunning lakes, unique geothermal scenery and diverse wildlife there left a deep impression on me. It was truly an eye-opening and unforgettable experience. I warmly invite you to visit Sichuan during the summer vacation. I’m looking forward to sharing local scenery and delicious food with you! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】 本篇为高考高频感谢信应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，写信感谢朋友Cathy在洛杉矶之行中陪同游玩黄石国家公园，同时描述公园美景、邀请对方暑期来四川游玩。全文需覆盖三大核心要点，词数80词左右，语气真诚友好、行文简洁流畅，贴合亲友间书信交际场景。 【详解】 1. 核心高分词汇 热情款待：warm welcome → warm hospitality 宝贵的时间：free time → precious time 迷人的：beautiful → stunning 印象深刻：impress me → leave a deep impression on me 大开眼界的：meaningful → eye-opening 2. 句式升级（简单句→高分复合句） 普通句：Thank you for taking me to visit Yellowstone National Park. 升级句：I’m writing to convey my sincere gratitude for your warm hospitality during my trip to Los Angeles. 普通句：The beautiful scenery of the park impressed me a lot. 升级句：The stunning lakes, unique geothermal scenery and diverse wildlife there left a deep impression on me. 【点睛】高分句型 【高分句型1】spare time to do 高级句式 I really appreciate you sparing your precious time to guide me through Yellowstone National Park. 亮点：精准表达感谢，细化对方付出，摆脱空洞道谢，贴合题干“热情款待”要点，句式地道自然。 【高分句型2】并列名词主语结构 The stunning lakes, unique geothermal scenery and diverse wildlife there left a deep impression on me. 亮点：多角度描写黄石公园特色美景，细节丰富，紧扣题干要求，内容饱满不单调。 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $