2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---一场迟到的舞会之约 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题的核心考点，涵盖情节逻辑、情感线索、人物塑造等要素，通过文本分析（角色、时空线、细节问答）构建知识网络，以问题导向设计探究任务，引导学生自主梳理情节线与情感线，形成续写的整体认知框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层任务设计，开篇设置细节问答自测题帮助学生定位薄弱环节，结合情节构造与续写框架模板，培养学生的语言能力和思维品质。每个模块配有情感线分析任务和反思总结表，助力学生个性化提升，教师可通过学情数据精准指导，有效支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Avant was only six years old when he first heard his grandmother’s long-held dream. For years, Heller, the grandmother, had watched countless movies featuring prom (毕业舞会) scenes, longing to experience such a grand gathering in person one day. Young Avant took her sincere wish seriously and made a firm promise that he would invite her to attend his own high school prom when the day came. But as the years passed, heavy schoolwork and daily chores gradually got in the way. The promise began to feel like a distant memory. When Avant entered his third year of high school, he had nearly forgotten all about it. One evening, Avant walked past his grandmother’s room and saw her watching a prom scene from a movie. She was smiling softly at the screen, but there was something sad in her eyes. Deeply touched by her hidden longing, his heart was filled with guilt instantly. That night, Avant lay awake, thinking. The promise came back to him, clear and sharp. He decided not to let it slip away again. His own prom was just a month ahead, but he could just manage to afford a formal suit for himself, with no money left to buy a lovely dress for his grandma. Faced with such a problem, he resolved to do everything he could to fulfill this promise. He began to take various extra part-time jobs after school and even on weekends, no matter how tough the work was. He put every penny he earned into a small box beneath his bed. Whenever tiredness overwhelmed him and he felt like giving up, he would think of his grandmother’s gentle face as she watched that movie scene-and he pushed himself a little harder to stick to his goal. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Day by day, Avant’s small money box grew heavier. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With all preparations ready, Heller and Avant waited for the big day eagerly. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Avant promised to take grandma to his prom at six --- _________________ --- Avant nearly forgot the promise in high school --- _________________ --- Avant felt guilty and decided to keep his promise --- _________________ --- Avant kept working part-time to earn money 4. 细节问答 What was Grandma Heller’s long dream? ：___________________________________ What promise did Avant make when he was little?：_________________________________ Why did Avant almost forget the promise?：________________________________________________ What made Avant recall the forgotten promise?：__________________________________________ What problem did Avant face before the prom?：_____________________________________________ What did Avant do to solve the problem?：_________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 幼时的Avant承诺带奶奶参加自己的高中毕业舞会→_________________→高三的Avant偶然发现奶奶的遗憾，满心愧疚→_________________→为兑现承诺，Avant坚持课余兼职赚钱→（续写）Avant攒够资金，精心为奶奶准备礼服→（续写）二人奔赴舞会，圆满兑现诺言，收获温暖与感动 6．情感线 Avant：sincere and earnest→___________→guilty→___________→persistent and determined→grateful and warm（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Day by day, Avant’s small money box grew heavier. 衔接句1——Did Avant finally get enough money? What preparations did he make? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: With all preparations ready, Heller and Avant waited for the big day eagerly. 衔接句2——How was the prom experience? What was the final ending? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：日复一日，Avant的存钱罐越来越沉。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：一切准备就绪，奶奶和Avant满怀期待等待舞会到来。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 4、 段落续写 Day by day, Avant’s small money box grew heavier. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With all preparations ready, Heller and Avant waited for the big day eagerly. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Avant：信守承诺、懂事孝顺、坚韧执着、知错能改的少年；奶奶Heller：心怀美好梦想、温柔善良、内心留有遗憾的老人。 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Avant promised to take grandma to his prom at six --- Heavy study made him forget the promise gradually --- Avant nearly forgot the promise in high school --- He saw grandma’s hidden regret and felt guilty --- Avant felt guilty and decided to keep his promise --- He had no extra money for grandma’s dress --- Avant kept working part-time to earn money 4. 细节问答 What was Grandma Heller’s long dream? ：She longed to attend a high school prom in person. What promise did Avant make when he was little?：He promised to invite his grandma to his high school prom. Why did Avant almost forget the promise?：Heavy schoolwork and daily chores occupied his time. What made Avant recall the forgotten promise?：He saw his grandma’s sad and longing look when watching prom movie scenes. What problem did Avant face before the prom?：He could only afford his own suit and had no money for grandma’s dress. What did Avant do to solve the problem?：He took various part-time jobs in spare time to earn money persistently. What does the story tell us?：We should cherish every promise we make, keep sincerity and gratitude in heart, and repay our family with practical actions. 5．情节线 幼时的Avant承诺带奶奶参加自己的高中毕业舞会→繁重学业让他渐渐遗忘诺言→高三的Avant偶然发现奶奶的遗憾，满心愧疚→他决心弥补过错、坚守承诺→为兑现承诺，Avant坚持课余兼职赚钱→（续写）Avant攒够钱款，精心购置礼服，悄悄为奶奶准备惊喜→（续写）二人如约参加舞会，奶奶圆梦，Avant深刻领悟信守承诺与感恩的意义 6．情感线 Avant：sincere and earnest→neglectful→guilty→determined→persistent and dedicated→grateful and warm 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：少年Avant幼时许诺带奶奶参加毕业舞会，因学业一度遗忘，发现奶奶的遗憾后满心愧疚，通过坚持兼职赚钱兑现诺言，用行动诠释了承诺与孝心的珍贵。 英文：Little Avant promised to take his grandmother to his high school prom but forgot it due to heavy schoolwork. After noticing his grandma’s hidden regret, he kept working part-time to earn money and finally fulfilled his promise with sincerity and perseverance. 8. 句式 状语从句：But as the years passed, heavy schoolwork and daily chores gradually got in the way. 非谓语动词：Deeply touched by her hidden longing, his heart was filled with guilt instantly. 宾语从句：Young Avant took her sincere wish seriously and made a firm promise that he would invite her to attend his own high school prom. 定语从句：For years, Heller, the grandmother, had watched countless movies featuring prom scenes, longing to experience such a grand gathering. 并列句：He began to take various extra part-time jobs after school and even on weekends, no matter how tough the work was. 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：一诺千金，坚守初心，真诚的承诺与持之以恒的付出，能温暖岁月、圆满遗憾，彰显孝心与担当。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Day by day, Avant’s small money box grew heavier. 衔接句1：After weeks of hard work, Avant finally earned enough money and bought a delicate dress for his grandma secretly. Paragraph 2: With all preparations ready, Heller and Avant waited for the big day eagerly. 衔接句2：They attended the wonderful prom, grandma realized her long-cherished dream, and Avant learned the true meaning of promise and gratitude. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：日复一日，Avant的存钱罐越来越沉。 →①历经数周辛苦劳作，Avant成功攒够钱款→②他悄悄挑选、购置了精致的礼服送给奶奶→③奶奶又惊又喜，眼中满是感动与幸福； 第二段：一切准备就绪，奶奶和Avant满怀期待等待舞会到来。 →①舞会如期举行，现场盛大美好，二人尽情享受时光→②奶奶圆满实现多年梦想，笑容灿烂动人→③Avant倍感欣慰，深刻懂得坚守承诺的珍贵。 四、段落续写（满分范文） Day by day, Avant’s small money box grew heavier. After weeks of exhausting part-time work, he finally accumulated enough money. Without hesitation, he went to the clothing store and picked out an elegant and suitable dress for his grandmother secretly. When he handed the dress to Heller, the old lady was totally stunned. Her eyes sparkled with tears of joy and relief, never expecting that her grandson still remembered the childish promise after so many years. A warm smile spread across her face. With all preparations ready, Heller and Avant waited for the big day eagerly. On the prom night, Grandma dressed up beautifully and attended the grand ceremony with Avant. Surrounded by cheerful music and warm lights, they enjoyed every precious moment. Grandma danced gently and happily, realizing her lifelong dream. Watching her joyful face, Avant felt immense pride and warmth. He learned that keeping a promise is never easy, but sincerity and perseverance can always light up others’ lives. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $