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高二校本资料 英语大课间小练
读后续写句式与微段落训练(五)with复合结构
句型一:with + 宾语 + 现在分词(主动/进行)
结构: with + 名词/代词 + doing(表主动或同时发生)
With tears rolling down her cheeks, she whispered, "I forgive you."
(泪水顺着脸颊滚落,她轻声说道:“我原谅你了。”)
He walked into the room, with his heart pounding wildly against his chest.
(他走进房间,心在胸腔里狂跳不止。)
With the sun setting in the distance, they finally sat down and talked things through.
(夕阳在远处缓缓落下,他们终于坐下来把事情谈开了。)
练习:
他站在那里,双手微微颤抖着。
He stood there, ______________ slightly trembling.
她走出教室,泪水模糊了双眼。
She walked out of the classroom, ______________ clouding her eyes.
我们坐在长椅上,晚风轻轻拂过脸庞。
We sat on the bench, ______________ gently brushing against our faces.
整句翻译:他紧紧地拥抱着朋友,所有的误会都随着泪水一同流走了。
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句型二:with + 宾语 + 过去分词(被动/完成)
结构: with + 名词/代词 + done(表被动或已完成的状态)
With his pride shattered, he finally lowered his head and apologized.
(自尊心被粉碎后,他终于低下头道了歉。)
She sat in silence, with her eyes fixed on the ground, unable to say a word.
(她沉默地坐着,眼睛盯着地面,一个字也说不出来。)
With all misunderstandings cleared up, they laughed and hugged like before.
(所有的误会都化解之后,他们像从前一样笑着拥抱在一起。)
练习:
他坐在角落里,内心被深深的愧疚所占据。
He sat in the corner, ______________ with deep guilt.
所有的分歧都解决后,他们终于松了一口气。
______________, they finally breathed a sigh of relief.
她静静地看着远方,思绪完全被回忆占据。
She looked into the distance quietly, ______________ completely occupied by memories.
整句翻译:问题解决之后,两个人相视一笑,重归于好。
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句型三:with + 宾语 + 介词短语/形容词/副词(状态描述)
结构: with + 名词/代词 + 介词短语/adj./adv.(表伴随状态)
With a warm smile on her face, she walked over and took his hand.
(脸上带着温暖的微笑,她走过去牵起了他的手。)
He sat quietly with his head down, too ashamed to meet her eyes.
(他低着头静静地坐着,羞愧得不敢直视她的眼睛。)
With tears of joy in their eyes, they embraced each other tightly.
(眼中含着喜悦的泪水,他们紧紧地拥抱在一起。)
练习:
她冲进房间,脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。
She rushed into the room, ______________.
他站在门口,手里紧握着一封道歉信。
He stood at the door, ______________.
两个人面对面坐着,心中充满了难以言说的情绪。
They sat face to face, ______________.
整句翻译:眼中闪着泪光,她终于鼓起勇气说出了那句话。
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微段落写作(抄写并欣赏优秀范文)
范文一(天台上的和解):
I found him standing alone on the rooftop, with the cold wind blowing through his hair. With his back turned towards me, he didn't notice my approach. I walked up to him, with a faint smile on my lips, and gently tapped his shoulder. He turned around, with tears glistening in his eyes, and hugged me without a word. At that moment, everything was forgiven.
我在天台上找到了独自站着的他,冷风吹过他的发梢。他背对着我,没有注意到我的靠近。我走到他身边,嘴角带着淡淡的微笑,轻轻拍了拍他的肩膀。他转过身来,眼中闪着泪光,一言不发地抱住了我。那一刻,一切都已原谅。
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范文二(操场边的重聚):
She was sitting on the bleachers, with her knees drawn up to her chest, looking lost in thought. With the afternoon sun casting long shadows on the ground, I approached her carefully. I sat down beside her, with an old photo in my hand, the one we had taken on graduation day. She looked at it, with tears welling up in her eyes, and said, "I missed you so much."
她坐在看台上,双膝蜷在胸前,若有所思。午后的阳光在地面上投下长长的影子,我小心翼翼地走近她。我在她身边坐下,手里拿着一张旧照片,那是我们毕业那天拍的。她看着照片,泪水涌上眼眶,说道:“我好想你。”
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实战写作(微情景,综合运用三种句型)
请根据以下三个微情景,各写一段 50-70 词的读后续写片段,每段必须同时运用本课所学的三种with复合结构(with + doing,with + done,with + 介词短语/形容词/副词)。
微情景一:与母亲在厨房的对视
你和母亲因为一件小事闹得不愉快,一整天没有交流。晚上你走进厨房,看到她正在灶台前忙碌,背影略显疲惫。你靠在门边,看着她……
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微情景二:与朋友在雨中的告别
最好的朋友即将转学离开,你们在雨中告别。他撑着伞站在车站,你跑过去送他最后一程。雨水打在伞面上,谁都没有先说话……
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微情景三:与同桌在教室里的破冰
你和同桌因为一次座位划线的事闹了矛盾,好久没说话。一天放学后,教室只剩你们两个人。他默默地收拾书包,你发现自己桌角多了一块他悄悄还回来的橡皮……
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【参考答案】
句型一答案:
with his hands
with tears
with the evening breeze
He held his friend tightly, with all misunderstandings flowing away with the tears.
句型二答案:
with his heart occupied
With all disagreements settled / With all disagreements resolved
with her thoughts
With the problem solved, they looked at each other and smiled, making up with each other.
句型三答案:
with a bright smile on her face
with a letter of apology in his hand
with indescribable emotions in their hearts
With tears shining in her eyes, she finally gathered her courage and said those words.
实战写作(三篇微情景范文)
微情景一范文:
I leaned against the kitchen door, with my eyes fixed on my mother's busy figure. She was stirring the soup, with her shoulders drooping slightly from tiredness. I walked over, with a lump in my throat, and hugged her from behind. She turned around, with tears of relief shining in her eyes, and held me close. No words were needed.
微情景二范文:
We stood at the bus stop, with rain drumming against the umbrella. With my best friend boarding the bus soon, I struggled to find the right words. With tears blurring our eyes, we hugged each other tightly. I handed him a gift, with my name carved on it, and whispered, "You are my brother forever."
微情景三范文:
I noticed a small eraser on the corner of my desk, with my name neatly written on it. With my heart beating faster, I looked over at my deskmate. He was packing his schoolbag, with his head down and ears turning red. I walked over and gently tapped his shoulder. He looked up, with a shy smile on his face, and whispered, "I'm sorry."
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