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高二校本资料 英语大课间小练
读后续写句式与微段落训练(十二)--动作链
句型一:连续动作链(用and连接多个动作)
结构: 主语 + 动作1 + and + 动作2 + and + 动作3(动作先后发生,推进情节)
常用动词: turned around / stood up / walked over / reached out / grabbed / pulled / hugged / whispered / stepped back / knelt down
He turned around, walked over to her, and gently took her hand in his.
(他转过身,走到她身边,轻轻地把她的手握在自己手中。)
She stood up, brushed the tears from her cheeks, and forced a brave smile.
(她站起来,擦去脸颊上的泪水,挤出一个勇敢的微笑。)
He rushed out of the classroom, ran all the way to the station, and threw his arms around his best friend.
(他冲出教室,一路跑到车站,张开双臂紧紧抱住了最好的朋友。)
练习:
1. 她深吸一口气,推开门,走了进去。
She ______________, ______________ the door, and ______________.
2. 他放下书包,拿出那封皱巴巴的信,又读了一遍。
He ______________ his schoolbag, ______________ the crumpled letter, and ______________ it again.
3. 我转过身,擦去眼角的泪水,朝他露出了一个真诚的微笑。
I ______________, ______________ the tears from the corner of my eyes, and ______________ a sincere smile.
4. 整句翻译:他站起来,走到窗边,望着远方,陷入了沉思。
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句型二:伴随动作链(用分词连接同时发生的动作)
结构: 主语 + 动作1 + 现在分词短语 + 现在分词短语(同时发生或伴随进行)
常用动词: holding / carrying / wearing / clutching / grasping / trembling / nodding / shaking / whispering / smiling
He stood at the gate, holding a bunch of flowers and waiting anxiously for her arrival.
(他站在门口,捧着一束花,焦急地等待她的到来。)
She sat on the bench, clutching the old photo album and staring blankly at the faded pictures.
(她坐在长椅上,紧握着那本旧相册,呆呆地看着那些褪色的照片。)
He walked into the room, carrying a gift box and humming a tune he hadn't sung in years.
(他走进房间,提着一个礼盒,哼着一首多年没唱过的曲子。)
练习:
1. 她站在校门口,手里紧握着一封信,焦急地等待着他的出现。
She stood at the school gate, ______________ a letter and ______________ anxiously for him to appear.
2. 他走进教室,手里拿着一本旧书,脸上带着神秘的微笑。
He walked into the classroom, ______________ an old book and ______________ a mysterious smile.
3. 他们并肩走在回家的路上,沉默着,各自想着心事。
They walked side by side on the way home, ______________ and ______________ their own thoughts.
4. 整句翻译:她坐在窗边,手里捧着一杯热茶,静静地看着窗外的雨。
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句型三:递进动作链(动作 + 方式状语 + 目的状语)
结构: 主语 + 动作 + 方式状语(with/in)+ 目的状语(to do / for)
常用结构: with trembling hands / in a low voice / with tears in eyes / with all his strength / to express / to break the silence
He reached out his hand with trembling fingers, trying to bridge the distance between them.
(他伸出手,手指颤抖着,试图弥合他们之间的距离。)
She spoke up in a soft but firm voice, determined to clear up all the misunderstandings.
(她用温柔而坚定的话语说出了口,决心要消除所有的误解。)
He stepped forward with a pounding heart, ready to say the words he had kept inside for years.
(他走上前,心怦怦直跳,准备好说出那些藏在心底多年的话。)
练习:
1. 她用颤抖的声音说出了那句话,试图让他明白自己的心意。
She ______________ the words ______________, ______________ to make him understand.
2. 他张开双臂,用尽全身力气,想要给他最好的朋友一个拥抱。
He ______________ his arms ______________, ______________ to give his best friend a hug.
3. 我走上前,内心充满了勇气,准备结束这场冷战。
I ______________, ______________, ______________ to end the cold war.
4. 整句翻译:他蹲下身,用温柔的语气,试图安慰那个哭泣的小女孩。
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微段落写作(抄写并欣赏优秀范文)
范文一(雨中的等待与重逢):
I stood at the bus stop, holding a worn umbrella and staring intently at every approaching car. My heart pounded with each passing minute. Finally, I spotted her familiar figure, rushed forward through the rain, and threw my arms around her. She froze for a second, then hugged me back, whispering in a trembling voice, "I thought you wouldn't come." I held her tighter, determined never to let pride separate us again.
我站在公交车站,握着一把旧伞,专注地盯着每一辆驶近的车。时间一分一秒过去,我的心怦怦直跳。终于,我看到了她熟悉的身影,穿过雨幕冲上前去,张开双臂抱住了她。她愣了一秒,然后回抱住我,用颤抖的声音低声说道:“我以为你不会来了。”我把她抱得更紧,决心再也不会让骄傲将我们分开。
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范文二(深夜的道歉与和解):
I pushed open the door, tiptoed into the living room, and found my mother still sitting on the sofa. She looked up, her eyes red-rimmed and weary. I knelt down beside her, reached for her hand with trembling fingers, and whispered, "I'm sorry." She patted my head gently, pulled me into her arms, and held me close without saying a word. We both knew that love had never left — it was just waiting for us to reach out.
我推开门,踮着脚尖走进客厅,发现妈妈还坐在沙发上。她抬起头,双眼红肿而疲惫。我跪在她身边,用颤抖的手指握住她的手,轻声说道:“对不起。”她轻轻拍了拍我的头,把我拉进怀里,一言不发地紧紧抱着我。我们都知道爱从未离开——它只是在等待着我们伸出手去。
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实战写作(微情景,综合运用三种句型)
请根据以下三个微情景,各写一段 50-70 词的读后续写片段,每段必须同时运用本课所学的三种动作链结构(and连续动作链、伴随动作链、递进动作链)。
微情景一:与弟弟在天台上的和解
你和弟弟因为游戏机使用权的问题大吵一架,之后几天谁也没有理谁。一个周末的傍晚,你拿着游戏机走上天台透气,发现他已经坐在那里,手里拿着你们一起拼好的乐高模型。你走过去……
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微情景二:与好朋友在失物招领处的重逢
你不小心弄丢了朋友送你的手链,找了很久都没找到,心里愧疚极了。几天后你路过学校失物招领处时,看到朋友正好从里面走出来,手里攥着那条手链。他/她抬头看见了你……
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微情景三:与奶奶在花园里的对话
你因为情绪低落和奶奶发了脾气,事后懊悔不已。第二天清晨你走到花园,发现奶奶正蹲在花丛中,戴着草帽,小心翼翼地给花浇水。你站在她身后,看着她佝偻的背影……
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【参考答案】
句型一答案:
took a deep breath; pushed; walked in
put down; took out; read
turned around; wiped; gave / flashed
He stood up, walked to the window, looked into the distance, and fell into deep thought.
句型二答案:
clutching; waiting
carrying; wearing
remaining silent; lost in / keeping silent; lost in(两句均可)
She sat by the window, holding a cup of hot tea and watching the rain quietly outside.
句型三答案:
uttered / spoke; in a trembling voice; trying
opened; with all his strength; wanting / hoping
stepped forward; with full courage in my heart; ready / determined
He knelt down, in a gentle voice, trying to comfort the crying little girl.
实战写作(三篇微情景范文)
微情景一范文:
I walked onto the rooftop, holding the game console, and found my brother sitting there with our Lego model. He looked up, his eyes red-rimmed, and turned away silently. I sat down beside him, placed the console between us, and whispered, "Let's play together." He hesitated for a moment, then picked up the controller, a smile finally spreading across his face.
微情景二范文:
She stepped out of the lost-and-found office, clutching my bracelet and looking down at it with relief. She looked up and saw me standing there, frozen. I walked over with a pounding heart, reached out my trembling hand, and said, "I'm so sorry I lost it." She placed the bracelet gently in my palm, gave me a warm hug, and whispered, "You found me. That's what matters."
微情景三范文:
I stood behind Grandma, watching her bent figure carefully watering the flowers. With a lump in my throat, I knelt down beside her, took her wrinkled hand, and said, "I'm sorry for yesterday." She turned to me, her weather-beaten face breaking into a gentle smile, and patted my head. "Come help me water," she said, handing me the watering can. We worked side by side, our hands brushing against each other, and all the guilt in my heart slowly melted away.
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