2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---最珍贵的曲奇饼干 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案围绕读后续写核心考点，系统整合文本分析（角色、视角、情节线等）、情节构造及续写框架等模块，通过问题链（如细节问答）和任务单（续写框架构建）引导学生自主梳理语篇逻辑与情感脉络，形成从文本解读到创意表达的完整知识网络。 亮点在于诊断性文本分析与分层任务设计，如开篇设置细节问答自测文本理解，续写框架通过“衔接句设计-情节发展-情感升华”分层任务培养思维品质与语言能力。每个环节配有反思表记录逻辑漏洞，助力学生个性化提升，教师可通过学情精准指导，有效培养自主复习能力与应试素养。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I had been so busy with work that I had little time to spend with my nine-year-old son, Mike. Last summer, when I finally had a day off, Mike told me the school would be hosting a cookie auction (拍卖). Each student was supposed to bake cookies with their father. I’d never baked cookies, so we followed the instructions carefully. We opened a packet of instant cookie mix, added the required ingredients, shaped the dough (面团) into small rounds, and confidently placed them on a baking tray in the oven. Taking them out after fifteen minutes, I was surprised that the cookies were not the golden and perfectly shaped ones I’d seen in ads. In fact, some were unevenly baked, while others had spread too much on the tray. Mike, however, cherished this opportunity to work with me and was so happy that he didn’t seem to notice the problem. After letting them cool, we tried decorating the cookies with icing. As a finishing touch, I sprinkled (撒) a few chocolate chips on top, hoping to add a bit of chocolate flavor to the cookies that didn’t look very appetizing. Mike gave me a proud grin; he thought they looked good. By then, we were already running late. When we finally hurried to the auction, I was stunned. A long table was filled with a fantastic array of exquisitely designed cookies. In contrast, ours looked embarrassing: some were misshapen, the icing had melted, and the chocolate chips were scattered everywhere. I felt a flush coming to my face, but Mike didn’t seem to be ashamed of our creation. He solemnly placed our cookies at the end of the table. I gave Mike eight dollars, telling him to bid on the cookies he liked, hoping he would get some nicely made ones to make up for the embarrassment our cookies might bring him. 注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右；(2)请按如下格式作答。 Paragraph 1: Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. Paragraph 2: Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The father was busy and seldom accompanied Mike --- _________________ --- They baked cookies together but made imperfect ones --- _________________ --- They arrived at the auction and saw many fancy cookies --- _________________ --- The father felt embarrassed but Mike treasured their work 4. 细节问答 Why did the father want to bake cookies with Mike? ：___________________________________ What was wrong with their homemade cookies?：_________________________________ How did Mike feel about their imperfect cookies?：________________________________________________ Why did the father feel embarrassed at the auction?：__________________________________________ What did the father prepare eight dollars for?：_____________________________________________ What is the difference between the father and son’s attitude towards the cookies?：_________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 父亲平日工作繁忙，很少陪伴儿子迈克→_________________ →父子二人首次合作烤饼干，成品粗糙、外形不完美→儿子满心欢喜，十分珍惜这次亲子时光→赶赴学校拍卖会，看到他人精致的饼干，父亲倍感尴尬→_________________ →父亲给儿子钱想买精致饼干弥补遗憾→（续写）拍卖会顺利进行，父子的饼干意外受人青睐→（续写）儿子珍视专属亲子成果，让父亲领悟陪伴重于完美 6．情感线 Father: guilty and attentive→___________→embarrassed and uneasy→___________→moved and enlightened（续写） Mike: joyful and grateful→___________→proud and sincere 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句（摘抄原文对应句式） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. 衔接句1——How did the auction go? What was people’s reaction to their ugly cookies? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. 衔接句2——Why did Mike treat the cookies as treasure? What insight did the father gain? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：很快，拍卖师拿起第一袋饼干，拍卖会开始了。 →①各式各样精致的饼干被相继拍卖，现场氛围热烈→②父亲内心忐忑，担心自家粗糙的饼干遭人嫌弃→③出乎意料，父子的手工饼干因饱含温情收获众人出价与认可； 第二段：迈克递出八美元，笑容灿烂，仿佛手中的饼干是稀世珍宝。 →①迈克满心自豪地拿回饼干，视若珍宝→②他坦言陪伴的过程远比完美的成品珍贵→③父亲深受触动，领悟亲情陪伴才是最珍贵的财富。 四.段落续写 Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 父亲：平日忙碌疏于陪伴孩子，细心弥补、略带自卑、善于反思；迈克：单纯善良、珍惜亲子时光、重视陪伴、不慕完美、心怀感恩 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The father was busy and seldom accompanied Mike ---The father spared time to bake cookies with Mike to make up for companionship --- They baked cookies together but made imperfect ones ---Mike cherished the precious parent-child time greatly --- They arrived at the auction and saw many fancy cookies --- Their rough cookies looked extremely plain and awkward --- The father felt embarrassed but Mike treasured their work 4. 细节问答 Why did the father want to bake cookies with Mike?：He was occupied with work all year round and had little time to accompany his son, so he wanted to seize the chance to bond with Mike. What was wrong with their homemade cookies?：The cookies were unevenly baked, misshapen, with melted icing and scattered chocolate chips, looking unattractive. How did Mike feel about their imperfect cookies?：He was extremely proud and cherished them deeply, ignoring their imperfect appearance. Why did the father feel embarrassed at the auction?：Their rough, ugly cookies contrasted sharply with others’ exquisite and well-designed works. What did the father prepare eight dollars for?：He wanted Mike to bid on beautiful cookies to make up for the embarrassment their shabby works brought. What is the difference between the father and son’s attitude towards the cookies?：The father cared about the outer perfection and felt ashamed, while Mike valued the warm baking process with his father. What does the story tell us?：Family companionship is far more precious than perfect results. True warmth lies in sincere time spent together. 5．情节线 父亲平日工作繁忙，很少陪伴儿子迈克→难得休假，答应陪儿子参加学校饼干拍卖活动 →父子二人首次合作烤饼干，成品粗糙、外形不完美→儿子满心欢喜，十分珍惜这次亲子时光→赶赴学校拍卖会，看到他人精致的饼干，父亲倍感尴尬→父亲羞愧不已，儿子却坦然珍视亲手制作的成果 →父亲给儿子钱想买精致饼干弥补遗憾→（续写）拍卖会顺利进行，父子的饼干意外受人青睐→（续写）儿子珍视专属亲子成果，让父亲领悟陪伴重于完美 6．情感线 Father: guilty and attentive→disappointed and uneasy→embarrassed and anxious→surprised and touched→moved and enlightened（续写） Mike: joyful and grateful→proud and sincere→proud and treasuring 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：疏于陪伴孩子的父亲抽空和儿子共同烤制饼干，成品粗糙简陋、让父亲倍感尴尬，而儿子格外珍视这段亲子时光，最终让父亲明白：亲情的温暖陪伴远胜过完美的结果。 英文：A busy father spent a day baking imperfect cookies with his son. Feeling embarrassed about their plain work at the auction, he intended to buy fine cookies for his son, but the boy treasured the warm parent-child experience, teaching the father that sincere companionship beats perfect results. 8. 句式 状语从句：I had been so busy with work that I had little time to spend with my nine-year-old son, Mike. 宾语从句：I hoped he would get some nicely made ones to make up for the embarrassment our cookies might bring him. 定语从句：The cookies that didn’t look very appetizing were decorated with chocolate chips. 非谓语动词：Taking them out after fifteen minutes, I was surprised at the ugly cookies. 并列句：Some were unevenly baked, while others had spread too much on the tray. 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：最美的亲情不在于完美的成果，而在于用心的陪伴与真诚的相守，陪伴是最珍贵的成长礼物。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. 衔接句1：Various delicate cookies were auctioned one after another, and the author felt extremely nervous until their imperfect cookies won people’s recognition and bids. Paragraph 2: Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. 衔接句2：Mike cherished the cookies as a precious memory of their time together, making the author realize the true meaning of family companionship. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：很快，拍卖师拿起第一袋饼干，拍卖会开始了。 →①各式各样精致的饼干被相继拍卖，现场氛围热烈→②父亲内心忐忑，担心自家粗糙的饼干遭人嫌弃→③出乎意料，父子的手工饼干因饱含温情收获众人出价与认可； 第二段：迈克递出八美元，笑容灿烂，仿佛手中的饼干是稀世珍宝。 →①迈克满心自豪地拿回饼干，视若珍宝→②他坦言陪伴的过程远比完美的成品珍贵→③父亲深受触动，领悟亲情陪伴才是最珍贵的财富。 四.段落续写（满分范文） Soon, the auctioneer lifted the first bag of cookies, and the auction began. One delicate cookie work after another drew warm applause and active bids. Standing in the crowd, I was overwhelmed by embarrassment, fearing our ugly cookies would be laughed at. However, when our cookies were displayed, the audience was touched by their unique simplicity and the warm father-son story behind them. Many parents bid generously, thinking such sincere works were far more meaningful than perfectly decorated cookies. Mike handed over the eight dollars, smiling as if the cookies were treasure. He bought back our own cookies without hesitation, his face lit up with pure joy. When I asked why, Mike told me softly that the time we spent baking together was the happiest moment. Those imperfect cookies held the best memory of our precious bond. Deeply moved, I came to realize that perfection never matters. What truly counts in family life is wholehearted companionship and sincere love. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $