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Ballet was a way of life in Kelly’s family. Her elder sister Serena was now dancing at a college. Though Kelly’s mom always wanted her to follow in her sister’s footsteps and Kelly herself was good at ballet, her love for ballet had faded years before, and she was eager for a new challenge.
One day at school, as Kelly left the dance studio, she walked past the gym, fascinated by boxers training inside the boxing ring (拳击赛场). She was deeply impressed by how hard they hit and how fast they moved. In fact, she’d long been attracted to boxing.
She pulled a piece of paper from her backpack. On the familiar Oakwood High School Club Sign-up Sheet was the phrase: BOXING CLUB TRYOUT (选拔). That was what Kelly really wanted to do. She knew her mom had high expectations for her when it came to ballet. Tired of trying to keep up with her sister, Kelly was ready to carve (开辟) her own path.
The next day, she gathered her courage and told Serena about her new passion. At first, Serena didn’t understand and thought she was just joking. But when she saw Kelly was serious, she replied, “You know Mom wants you to be a ballet dancer, right? Besides, boxing is only for boys, and you’re so good at ballet. Lean into your strength, Kelly.”
“But this is where I want to put my strength,” Kelly insisted, “and what exactly does ‘only for boys’ mean, anyway? Boxing is a sport for everyone!”
Gradually, touched by her determination and passion, Serena began to understand and support her. Kelly could feel it. Her sister was going to respect her decision, no matter what. But that was nothing compared to the preparations for the tryout, where she was required to show her footwork (步法) and punching (击打) abilities with other candidates (候选人). Boxing didn’t come naturally to Kelly, but she had made up her mind to stick with her choice.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式作答。
Para 1: Then Kelly began her training for the tryout, keeping it a secret from her mom.
Para 2: The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted.
一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
Kelly’s family was ballet-oriented --- _________________ --- Kelly was fascinated by boxing and desired to try out --- _________________ --- Kelly told her sister her decision and argued for her dream --- _________________ --- Serena was moved and chose to support her
4. 细节问答
What was Kelly’s family expectation for her? :___________________________________
What was Kelly tired of doing?:_________________________________
What new sport attracted Kelly deeply?:________________________________________________
Why did Serena disagree with Kelly at first?:__________________________________________
What did Kelly insist on?:_____________________________________________
What did Kelly need to do for the boxing tryout?:_________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
凯莉成长于芭蕾世家,母亲希望她追随姐姐的芭蕾道路→_________________ →凯莉厌倦芭蕾,被拳击运动深深吸引,想要报名拳击选拔赛→姐姐起初反对,认为拳击不适合女孩→_________________ →凯莉坚定自我、勇敢反驳,打动姐姐获得支持→决心刻苦备赛,开辟属于自己的道路→(续写)秘密刻苦训练,突破自我短板→(续写)成功入选,坚持热爱、活出自我
6.情感线
Kelly: bored and confused→___________→determined and brave→___________→diligent and persistent(续写)
Serena: confused and disapproving→___________→supportive and encouraging
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式
宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句(摘抄原文对应句式)
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9. 本文主题
成长励志类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Then Kelly began her training for the tryout, keeping it a secret from her mom.
衔接句1——How did Kelly train? What difficulties did she overcome?
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Paragraph 2: The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted.
衔接句2——What was the result? How did others react and what realization did she gain?
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三.段落续写框架
第一段:随后凯莉开始为选拔赛训练,对妈妈保密。
→①凯莉利用课余时间偷偷训练,克服拳击零基础的短板→②姐姐默默陪伴、鼓励她,帮她纠正动作→③哪怕疲惫受伤,依旧坚持,全力备战选拔;
第二段:接下来的周一,拳击选拔赛结果公布。
→①凯莉凭借努力成功入选拳击俱乐部→②坦然告知家人,收获理解与认可→③打破固有标签,领悟坚持自我、勇敢逐梦的意义。
四.段落续写
Then Kelly began her training for the tryout, keeping it a secret from her mom.
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The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
Kelly:擅长芭蕾、不甘被定义、勇敢追逐热爱、坚定独立的少女;Serena:起初保守、最终理解并全力支持妹妹的温柔姐姐;Mom:对女儿抱有芭蕾方面的期待,有固有思维的传统家长
2.视角
第三人称
3.时空线
Kelly’s family was ballet-oriented --- Kelly lost interest in ballet and longed for new challenges --- Kelly was fascinated by boxing and desired to try out --- She determined to break the family expectation to pursue her dream --- Kelly told her sister her decision and argued for her dream --- She challenged the stereotype that boxing was only for boys --- Serena was moved and chose to support her
4. 细节问答
What was Kelly’s family expectation for her?:Her mom expected her to learn ballet and follow in her sister’s footsteps.
What was Kelly tired of doing?:She was tired of following her sister’s path and living up to others’ expectations.
What new sport attracted Kelly deeply?:She was greatly fascinated by boxing and dreamed of joining the boxing club.
Why did Serena disagree with Kelly at first?:She thought boxing was only for boys and Kelly should stick to her advantage—ballet.
What did Kelly insist on?:She insisted that boxing was a sport for everyone and she wanted to pursue her true passion.
What did Kelly need to do for the boxing tryout?:She needed to show her footwork and punching abilities and compete with other candidates.
What does the story tell us?:We should break stereotypes, stick to our true passion and bravely carve our own path in life.
5.情节线
凯莉成长于芭蕾世家,母亲希望她追随姐姐的芭蕾道路→凯莉对芭蕾失去兴趣,渴望全新挑战 →凯莉厌倦芭蕾,被拳击运动深深吸引,想要报名拳击选拔赛→姐姐起初反对,认为拳击不适合女孩→凯莉拒绝被固有标签束缚,坚定追逐本心热爱 →凯莉坚定自我、勇敢反驳,打动姐姐获得支持→决心刻苦备赛,开辟属于自己的道路→(续写)秘密刻苦训练,突破自我短板→(续写)成功入选,坚持热爱、活出自我
6.情感线
Kelly: bored and confused→fascinated and eager→determined and brave→firm and persistent→diligent and persistent(续写)
Serena: confused and disapproving→touched and respectful→supportive and encouraging
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:身处芭蕾世家的凯莉厌倦了既定的人生轨迹,挣脱世俗刻板印象,不顾家人固有期待,勇敢追逐拳击热爱,凭借坚持与努力突破自我,开辟专属人生道路。
英文:Growing up in a ballet-focused family, Kelly got tired of the fixed life path. She broke the stereotype that boxing was only for boys, stuck to her true passion, and worked hard to pursue her unique dream bravely.
8. 句式
状语从句:One day at school, as Kelly left the dance studio, she walked past the gym.
宾语从句:She knew her mom had high expectations for her when it came to ballet.
定语从句:That was what Kelly really wanted to do.
非谓语动词:she walked past the gym, fascinated by boxers training inside the boxing ring.
并列句:Boxing didn’t come naturally to Kelly, but she had made up her mind to stick with her choice.
9. 本文主题
成长励志类:打破世俗刻板印象,拒绝被他人定义,坚守本心热爱,勇敢走出属于自己的人生道路。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Then Kelly began her training for the tryout, keeping it a secret from her mom.
衔接句1:Kelly trained hard in her spare time, overcoming physical exhaustion and technical difficulties with her sister’s company and encouragement.
Paragraph 2: The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted.
衔接句2:Kelly succeeded in joining the boxing club, gained her mother’s understanding, and learned the meaning of adhering to self-choice.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:随后凯莉开始为选拔赛训练,对妈妈保密。
→①凯莉利用课余时间偷偷训练,克服拳击零基础的短板→②姐姐默默陪伴、鼓励她,帮她纠正动作→③哪怕疲惫受伤,依旧坚持,全力备战选拔;
第二段:接下来的周一,拳击选拔赛结果公布。
→①凯莉凭借努力成功入选拳击俱乐部→②坦然告知家人,收获理解与认可→③打破固有标签,领悟坚持自我、勇敢逐梦的意义。
四.段落续写(满分范文)
Then Kelly began her training for the tryout, keeping it a secret from her mom. She practiced boxing diligently every day after school. Without professional foundations, she struggled with basic footwork and punching skills and even suffered from muscle soreness and minor injuries. However, she never thought of giving up. Serena spared her spare time to accompany and guide her, helping her correct movements and build confidence. With persistent training, Kelly made steady progress and became more skilled and confident day by day.
The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted. To everyone’s surprise, Kelly stood out among numerous candidates and successfully earned a place in the boxing club. She finally told her mom her choice and efforts. Unexpectedly, her mom was moved by her perseverance and passion, choosing to respect her decision. Kelly realized that dreams have no fixed boundaries and gender limits. As long as we stick to our true hearts and keep working hard, we can carve our unique path and shine brightly.
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