读后续写技能提升篇（十九）-2027届高三英语二轮复习写作备考专项

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写“尴尬羞愧”情感描写核心考点，以教材语料积累为基础，拓展话题素材为支撑，场景锤炼为应用，构建词汇-佳句-场景的递进式知识网络。通过高中英语学习任务单设计，引导学生自主完成词汇梳理、佳句仿写及分层场景练习，系统形成情感表达的知识体系。 亮点在于分层场景任务与即时反馈结合，如设置“学以致用”“趁热打铁”“拔高提能”三级场景填空练习，学生可对照参考答案自主诊断。此设计培养语言能力（情感精准表达）和学习能力（自主应用提升），帮助学生建立个性化表达策略，教师能通过学生练习情况实施针对性指导，有效支持因材施教。

读后续写技能提升篇（十九） 2027高三二轮写作专项备考 【情感：尴尬羞愧】 一、积累教材续写语料 —— 有效强化教考衔接 【词汇积累】 人物描写 loose； frank； independent 动作描写 help out； take a breath； pull one’s weight； resolve； adjust； forgive； criticize； deceive 情感描写 agony； let down； let off steam； sink； concern； annoyed；embarrassment； tear； tangled 【佳句积累】 1.I’m crazy about basketball, and pretty good at it too, which is probably why I was so mad when we lost our last match. （情感描写） 我酷爱篮球，球技也相当不错，这大概就是上一场比赛输掉时我大发雷霆的原因。 2.Filled with anger, you tend to say whatever comes to your mind. （情感描写） 人在怒火中烧时，往往会口无遮拦，想到什么就说什么。 3.Disappointed by his behaviour, I said all this to my best friend. （情感描写） 他的所作所为让我满心失望，于是我把这一切都倾诉给了我最好的朋友。 4.I was just letting off steam really, because I was so angry, but then my friend went and told everyone else what I’d said. （情感描写） 我当时只是怒火攻心想发泄情绪而已，可转头朋友就把我说的话到处宣扬。 二、拓展续写话题素材 —— 精准构建表达基石 情感描写：尴尬与羞愧 【经典词汇】 1.awkward adj. 令人尴尬的,使人难堪的 → awkwardness n. 尴尬；难堪 2.shame n. 羞愧，羞耻 → ashamed adj. 感到羞愧，感到羞耻 → shameful adj. 丢脸的，可耻的 【靓点语块】 1.give an embarrassed cough 尴尬地咳了一声 2.blood rushes to /colour floods one’s face 脸通红 3.in an embarrassed voice/tone 用一种尴尬的声音/语气 4.hear the embarrassment in one’s voice 听到某人声音中的尴尬 5.an awkward/embarrassed silence/moment/pause尴尬的沉默 /一瞬 /停顿 6.hang/drop/lower/bow one’s head in shame/embarrassment 羞愧 /尴尬地低头 7.burn/blush/flush/be flushed with embarrassment/shame 因尴尬/羞愧而脸上发烫 /发红 【出彩佳句】 1.Jack hung his head in shame when he realized he had done something wrong. 当意识到自己做错了之后，杰克羞愧地低下了头。 2.Overwhelmed with shame, I slammed the door and cried myself to sleep. （过去分词短语作状语） 我羞愧难当，砰的一声关上了门，自己哭着哭着睡着了。 3.I felt ashamed of myself for getting so angry without knowing the truth. 我为自己不知道真相就这么生气而感到羞愧。 4.When I realized that my feelings were written all over my face, a wave of embarrassment came over me. 当我意识到我的情绪全写在了脸上时，一阵尴尬涌上心头。 5.Feeling awkward, I was lost for words and left quickly. （动词 - ing短语作状语） 我感到很尴尬，不知道说什么才好，就赶快离开了。 三、重锤锤炼续写场景 —— 积累内化应用提升 【学以致用】 场景导入：瑞恩在公交车上摔倒后，周围的人没有帮助他，反而嘲笑他，让他羞愧不已…… Ryan got on the bus hurriedly, tripped over someone’s foot and fell flat onto the floor! All the air seemed to disappear and 1.______________________________（他感觉好像全世界都在注视着他）. What made him more annoyed was that everyone on the bus laughed at him crazily instead of helping him out. 2._____________________（深吸一口气后；动词 - ing 短语作状语）, Ryan struggled to his feet, dusted his jacket and headed for an empty seat, 3. _______________________（他的脸因尴尬而烧得通红；独立主格结构）. He lowered his head, 4. ________________________________（琢磨着如何掩饰内心的难堪；动词 - ing 短语作状语）. 5._______________________________ （他感到如此羞愧，几乎要哭出来；“so … that …” 引起的倒装句）, his shoulders trembling. 【趁热打铁】 场景导入：自习课上台分享作文，我慌乱踩空台阶重重摔倒，台下同学哄笑一片，难堪与羞愧瞬间将我淹没…… I walked towards the platform to share my composition, tripped over the step and fell heavily to the ground! All the class went quiet and 1.________________________（仿佛所有人的目光都死死锁定在我身上）. What made me more upset was that my classmates burst into loud laughter instead of helping me out. 2.________________________（深吸一口气平复心绪；动词 - ing 短语作状语）, I forced myself to stand up and tidied my messy uniform, 3.________________________（脸颊因羞愧火辣辣发烫；独立主格结构）. I hung my head low, 4.________________________（不停琢磨该如何掩盖内心的窘迫；动词 - ing 短语作状语）. 5.________________________（我羞愧到极致，眼眶瞬间蓄满泪水；so…that… 倒装句）, my whole body shaking slightly. 【拔高提能】 场景导入：逛超市时我走神分心，手滑没扶住购物车，整车撞翻了侧边零食货架，商品散落一地，周围顾客纷纷侧目，巨大的尴尬与羞愧席卷了我…… I wandered around the supermarket absent-mindedly and lost control of my shopping cart, which crashed heavily into the snack shelf. Goods scattered all over the floor and 1.________________________（我感觉全场顾客的目光都落在我身上）. What made me more annoyed was that passers-by stopped and stared instead of coming to help out. 2.___________________（深吸一口气稳住慌乱的情绪；动词 - ing 短语作状语）, I bent down to pick up the fallen goods one by one, 3.___________________（脸颊因难堪烧得通红；独立主格结构）. I lowered my head all the time, 4.________________________（暗自琢磨该如何缓解这份内心的窘迫；动词 - ing 短语作状语）. 5.________________________（我羞愧到极点，差点当场红了眼眶；so…that… 倒装句）, my fingers trembling nervously. 参考答案 【学以致用】 1. he felt as if the whole world were watching him 2.Having taken a deep breath 3.his face burning with embarrassment 4.wondering how to hide his inner embarrassment 5.So ashamed did he feel that he was close to tears 【趁热打铁】 1.I felt as if every single classmate was staring straight at me 2.Having taken a deep breath to calm myself down 3.my face burning hot with shame 4.wondering how to cover up my inner embarrassment 5.So ashamed did I feel that tears welled up in my eyes 【拔高提能】 1.I felt as if every customer around was focusing their eyes on me 2.Having taken a deep breath to calm my messy mood 3.my face burning with embarrassment 4.wondering how to ease my inner awkwardness 5.So ashamed did I feel that I was on the verge of tears 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $