读后续写技能提升篇（十二）-2027届高三英语二轮复习写作备考专项

该高中英语高考复习任务单聚焦读后续写技能提升，系统整合情感、环境、动作描写的词汇佳句，通过教材语料积累、话题素材拓展、场景分层练习构建考点网络，以"学以致用""趁热打铁"等任务驱动学生自主内化语料，形成从基础积累到综合应用的认知框架。 亮点在于场景化自主诊断与精准能力提升设计，如"小猫失而复得"等填空练习引导学生自我检测语料运用，"拔高提能"续写任务融合必用词汇与修辞要求，培养语言表达能力和思维品质。教师可通过学生练习反馈把握学情，助力个性化指导，有效提升学生自主复习效率与考场续写实效。

读后续写技能提升篇（十二） 2027高三二轮写作专项备考 一、积累教材续写语料 —— 有效强化考场衔接 【词汇积累】 情感描写：amazing; shock 环境描写：rain cats and dogs; path; breathtaking 动作描写：seek; determine; concentrate; hold your horses; stare; brave the elements; encounter; survive; freeze 【佳句积累】 1.When I finally stepped out of the trees, the view was breathtaking. （动作＋环境描写） 2.While I was concentrating on photographing this amazing scene, I suddenly had a feeling that I was being watched. Slowly, and with the camera still held to my eye, I turned … and froze. （动作＋环境描写） 3.Time stood still as the bear and I both waited to see who would move first. My legs started shaking. （动作描写） 4.My most frightening but magical experience was now captured forever in a single image. （主旨升华） 二 拓展续写话题素材 —— 精准构建表达基石 情感描写：喜悦与快乐（二） 【经典词汇】 1.thrilled adj. 激动的 2.giggle v. & n. 咯咯笑 3.joy n. 高兴；喜悦→ joyful adj. 高兴的 4.merry adj. 高兴的→ merrily adv. 高兴地 5.cheer n. 欢呼声；欢乐的气氛→ cheerful adj. 快乐的；高兴的 6.happy adj. 高兴的→ happily adv. 高兴地→ happiness n. 快乐,幸福 【靓点语块】 1.laugh heartily 哈哈大笑 2.be wild with joy 欣喜若狂 3.beam with smiles 笑逐颜开 4.in high/cheerful spirits 兴高采烈 5.clap one’s hands with delight 高兴地拍手 6.a mixture of excitement and delight 既兴奋又开心 7.be seized by joy/be overcome with happiness 非常高兴 8.a sense/wave of joy and happiness sweeps/floods over sb 一种/阵喜悦和幸福席卷某人 【出彩佳句】 1.Hearing the good news, he jumped up and down with joy. 听到这个好消息，他高兴得手舞足蹈。 2.When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his bright smile lit up the whole room. 当母亲亲吻婴儿的脸颊时，他灿烂的笑容照亮了整个房间。（夸张） 3.The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 （比喻） 4.A flood of joy/pleasure welled up in him. 喜悦涌上他的心头。 （无生命名词作主语） 5.He was in high spirits, feeling on top of the world. 他情绪高涨，仿佛站在世界之巅。 （动词- ing短语作状语） 3、 重锤锤炼续写场景 —— 积累内化应用提升 【学以致用】 场景导入：小猫失而复得，“我” 怀着喜悦的心情抱它回家…… Suddenly, a skinny cat came into sight and I froze in shock. But the cheerful thought that it might be my cat urged me to step forward and stare at the cat. It turned out to be my long-lost cat and 1.___________ (一种快乐和幸福的感觉席卷了我；无生命名词作主语). Hearing me calling its name, the cat mewed at me merrily/happily. With my cat in my arms, 2._______________________(我像一只快乐的小鸟一样哼着歌，蹦蹦跳跳地往家走/比喻). . I was in high spirits, 3.______________(仿佛站在世界之巅，动词-ing短语作状语) When I told it that I had determined to stay at home and keep it company, the cat let out a mew of cheer. 【趁热打铁】 场景导入：手机失而复得, 开心回家 Suddenly, a familiar phone outline came into view and I froze in shock. But the hopeful thought that it might be my missing phone pushed me to walk closer and stare carefully at the object. It turned out to be my lost cellphone, and 1._______________（一阵狂喜瞬间席卷了我;无生命名词作主语，喜悦情绪渲染）Hearing me call out its phone ringtone, the screen lit up brightly at once. Holding my phone tightly in my hand, 2.__________________________（我情绪高涨，仿佛站在世界之巅；情绪升华）I quickened my pace back home, 3._____________________（全程咧嘴笑着，就像小孩得到了心仪的礼物；比喻，动词-ing作伴随状语）When I gently wiped off the dust on its surface and told it how anxious I had been looking for it these days, the phone popped out a warm notification, as if responding to my delight. 【拔高提能】 场景：走失孩童失而复得 I took my five-year-old son Tom to a crowded downtown supermarket to buy daily supplies. Drawn by a colorful candy shelf, I concentrated on picking snacks for a second and forgot to hold his hand. When I looked up, Tom had disappeared. Desperation wrapped around me at once. I rushed through every aisle, called his name loudly and sought help from shop assistants, but no one had seen him. The noisy supermarket felt endless, and I was nearly driven to tears. Just as I planned to ask the staff to broadcast a search notice, a small familiar voice drifted to my ears. 续写开头 Paragraph 1: Suddenly, a tiny trembling figure walked into my sight and I froze in shock. Paragraph 2: Crouching down to hold my son firmly in arms, I walked out of the supermarket slowly. 写作要求： 1.必用词汇：shock, freeze, stare, seek, concentrate, cheerful, merry 2.必写情绪句型（二选一）：A sense/wave of joy swept over me；in high spirits, feeling on top of the world 3.语法修辞：①动词 - ing 伴随状语 ②比喻句 4.写作手法：动作 + 环境结合描写，结尾主旨升华句 参考答案 【学以致用】 1. a sense of joy and happiness swept over me. 2. I hummed and skipped towards my home like a happy bird. 3. feeling on top of the world 【趁热打铁】 1. a wave of wild joy swept over me. 2. I was in high spirits, feeling on top of the world. 3. grinning from ear to ear like a child who had got his beloved gift. 【拔高提能】参考范文 Paragraph 1 Suddenly, a tiny trembling figure walked into my sight and I froze in shock. The eager thought that it must be Tom pushed me to dash forward and stare hard at the child. He leaned against a shelf, staring cheerfully at a box of cartoon candies. It was my lost boy, and a wave of warm joy swept over me. Hearing me shout his name merrily, Tom ran towards me, tears rolling down his round cheeks. I ignored the bustling crowd around and pulled him close without hesitation. Paragraph 2 Crouching down to hold my son firmly in arms, I walked out of the supermarket slowly. I was in high spirits, feeling on top of the world, weeping happy tears like a person who retrieved his whole world. The warm street lamp light wrapped us as we stepped onto the quiet path home. When I told Tom how frantically I’d concentrated on seeking him everywhere, he let out a soft merry giggle and buried his face into my coat. This scary yet precious experience made me realize nothing matters more than the safety of my family. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $