读后续写技能提升篇（十）-2027届高三英语二轮复习写作备考专项讲义

该高中英语读后续写专项复习讲义聚焦高考写作核心考点，围绕情感、动作、人物描写构建知识体系，按“教材语料积累-话题素材拓展-场景应用锤炼”逻辑组织内容，通过词汇梳理、佳句赏析、场景填空训练等环节，帮助学生突破描写难点，体现复习的系统性和针对性。 资料突出语言能力与思维品质培养，创新“词汇-语块-佳句-场景”递进教学策略，如在“偶遇恶狼”场景中，要求用动词-ing短语作状语、倒装句等语法结构强化表达，设置恶狼、黑熊、野豹分层场景练习，保障复习效果，能有效提升学生应考能力，为教师把控复习节奏提供精准指导。

读后续写技能提升篇（十） 2027高三二轮写作专项备考 一、积累教材续写语料 —— 有效强化教考衔接 【词汇积累】 情感描写：homesick（思乡的）；opposing（对立的）； confusing → confused（令人困惑的→感到困惑的） 动作描写：come across（偶遇）；intend（打算）；recognize（认出）；contact（联系）；remind（使想起） 人物描写：creative → creativity（有创造力的→创造力）； unfamiliar（陌生的）；wicked（邪恶的）；odd（古怪的）；negative（消极的）；positive（积极的）；aware（意识到的）；unique（独特的） 【佳句积累】 1.This got me thinking how English can be a crazy language to learn. 这让我不禁感慨，英语真是一门古怪难学的语言。（心理描写） 2.If “hard” is the opposite of “soft”, why are “hardly” and “softly” not an opposing pair? If harmless actions are the opposite of harmful actions, why are shameless and shameful behaviors the same? 倘若 “硬” 是 “软” 的反义词，为何 “几乎不” 和 “柔软地” 却并非一组对立词？如果无害行为是有害行为的对立面，那为何无耻的与可耻的行为含义却别无二致？（排比） 3.You also have to wonder at the unique madness of a language in which a house can burn up as it burns down, in which you fill in a form by filling it out, and in which an alarm is only heard once it goes off! 你也不得不惊叹这门语言独有的古怪：房屋焚毁可以既说烧尽（burn up）又说烧塌（burn down）；填写表格既可以说 fill in 也可以说 fill out；警报响起来，反倒要用 “熄灭（go off）” 来表达。（排比） 二、拓展续写话题素材 —— 精准构建表达基石 主题：情感描写：恐惧、惊恐 【经典词汇】 flee v. 逃跑 quiver vi. 轻微颤动 choke/suffocate v. 窒息 shiver n. & vi. 颤抖；哆嗦 afraid adj. 害怕的；恐惧的 shrink/cower vi. 蜷缩；畏缩 speechless adj. 说不出话的；无语的 horror n. 恐怖；惊恐 → horrible adj. 可怕的；恐怖的 uneasy adj. 不安的；担忧的 → uneasiness n. 不安；担忧；局促 【靓点语块】 1.palms sweat 手心冒汗 2.in a cold sweat 出冷汗 3.knees feel weak 双膝发软 4.sweat with fear 吓得直冒汗 5.be dead with fright 吓得要死 6.be overwhelmed by horror 非常恐惧 7.be full of/filled with horror 充满恐惧 8.send a chill down/up sb’s spine 令某人脊背发凉；令人毛骨悚然 9.one’s throat tightens 某人的喉咙发紧 10.be scared out of one’s wits 吓得魂不附体 11.freeze with fear/terror/fright/horror 吓呆 12.knees knock with fright 因恐惧而双膝颤抖 13.make one’s blood run cold 让人毛骨悚然 【出彩佳句】 1.Fear swallowed her. 恐惧吞噬了她。 2.He was rooted to the spot with fear. 他吓呆了。 3.Her eyes were wide with terror. 她惊恐地睁大了眼睛。 4.A wave of panic swept over her. 一阵恐慌掠过她的心头。（无生命名词作主语） 5.A slight feeling of fear slowly crept up on him. 他慢慢感到一丝恐惧。（无生命名词作主语） 6.She sweated with fear, standing there tongue-tied. 她吓得直冒汗，站在那里说不出话来。（动词 - ing 短语作状语） 7.Her breaths came in quick gasps, and her heart was pounding so hard as if it were about to burst out of her chest. 她急促地喘着气，心怦怦直跳，就像要从胸口跳出来一样。 三、重拳锤炼续写场景 —— 积累内化应用提升 习题 1：偶遇恶狼 场景导入：那只恶狼的出现让 “我们” 脊背发凉。看到狼的血盆大口，“我” 的儿子吓得几乎要晕过去。一阵恐慌向 “我们” 袭来…… When the wicked wolf came up, hardly could you imagine how alarmed we were. The scary situation did scare us, 1._______________________（令我们脊背发凉；动词 - ing 短语作状语）. 2.___________________（极度恐惧；形容词短语作状语）, I felt my legs quivering and my palms sweating. Beside me was my son, 3._________________________（他的心跳得如此厉害，仿佛要从胸膛里跳出来一样；非限制性定语从句；as if 引导方式状语从句）. Seeing the wolf’s bloody mouth, he was nearly dead with fright, standing there tongue-tied. 4._________________（一阵恐慌向我们袭来；无生命名词作主语）. 5.________________________________（我们感到如此害怕，以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软；倒装句）. 习题 2：林间偶遇黑熊 场景导入：漆黑密林里一头黑熊猛然挡住去路，浓烈的腥气扑面而来，我们瞬间浑身僵硬，恐惧感席卷全身…… As the fierce bear suddenly blocked our way in the dark woods, barely could we realize how terrifying the situation was. Its strong smell frightened us, 1.________________________（令我们浑身汗毛倒竖；动词 - ing 短语作状语）. 2.________________________（满心惶恐）, my body trembled constantly and my hands were soaked in sweat.（形容词短语作状语）Next to me stood my younger sister, 3._________________（她牙齿不停打颤，仿佛下一秒就要哭出声；非限制性定语从句 + as if 从句）. Staring at the bear’s sharp claws, she was frozen with terror, unable to utter a single word. 4.________________________（一股巨大的恐惧感笼罩了我们；无生命名词作主语）. 5.________________________（我们如此心惊胆战，呼吸急促双腿发软；倒装句）. 习题 3：雨夜突遇野豹 场景导入：雨夜赶路时，路边草丛猛然窜出一头野豹，碧绿的双眼死死盯着我们，所有人瞬间被恐惧裹挟…… When a wild leopard dashed out of the bushes on the rainy night, hardly could we believe what we had seen. Its glowing green eyes terrified us deeply, 1.________________________（让我们脊背一阵发麻；动词 - ing 短语作状语）. 2.________________________（满心惊惧不安;形容词短语作状语）, my whole body stiffened and my palms were covered with cold sweat.Right beside me was my travel partner, 3.________________________（他心跳剧烈，仿佛马上就要跳出胸腔；非限制性定语从句 + as if 从句）.Watching the leopard’s sharp fangs, he was speechless with fright, rooted to the ground. 4.____________________（强烈的恐慌慢慢爬上心头；无生命名词作主语）. 5.________________________（我们害怕到喉咙发紧，双腿不停打颤；倒装句）. 习题1 参考答案 1. sending a chill down/up our spines 2. Extremely frightened 3. whose heart was pounding so hard as if it were about to burst out of his chest 4. A wave of panic crept up on us 5. So afraid did we feel that our throats tightened and our knees felt weak 习题2 参考答案 1.sending our hair standing on end 2.Greatly scared / Extremely frightened 3.whose teeth were chattering constantly as if she would burst into tears any second 4.A strong wave of horror swept over us 5.So terrified did we feel that we gasped for breath and our knees went weak 习题3 参考答案 1.sending a sharp chill running down our backs 2.Deeply uneasy / Extremely terrified 3.whose heart was pounding wildly as if it would jump out of his chest 4.A strong sense of panic crept up on us 5.So scared did we feel that our throats tightened and our knees kept knocking 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $