读后续写技能提升篇（十八）-2027届高三英语二轮复习写作备考专项讲练

该高中英语高考复习任务单聚焦读后续写“紧张”情感描写，系统整合教材语料与拓展素材，按词汇积累、佳句赏析、场景应用分层构建考点体系，通过填空任务驱动学生自主梳理情感表达逻辑，形成从基础到应用的知识网络。 亮点在于分层场景练习与自主诊断设计，如“学以致用”“趁热打铁”“拔高提能”三级场景填空，学生可对照答案自主检测语言能力。融入倒装、独立主格等句式训练，提升思维品质，助力学生个性化构建情感描写表达体系，教师可依学情精准指导，实现因材施教。

读后续写技能提升篇（十八） 2027高三二轮写作专项备考 【情感 — 紧张】 一、积累教材续写语料 —— 有效强化教考衔接 【词汇积累】 动作描写 clap； applaud； put on； escape； overcome； behave 人物描写 incredible； dazzling； energetic； romantic； appealing；definitely； rude 情感描写 emotion； anger； grief； explosive； grateful； disappointed；awkward； on the edge of one’s seat； 【佳句积累】 1.The voices themselves sounded really unique — some of the female voices were so high that I was sure they could break glass! （夸张） 这些嗓音本身听着格外独特 —— 有些女生的音调高到我笃定能震碎玻璃！ 2.But, in fact, I was on the edge of my seat! Feeling the strong emotions of love, anger, fear and grief in the performance, I could easily recognise the theme of Hamlet. （情感描写） 但实际上，我看得全神贯注、心都揪着！沉浸在表演里爱恨悲惧交织的浓烈情绪中，我一下子就读懂了《哈姆雷特》的主旨。 3.The teacher was very strict, making me so nervous that I would forget my lines. （情感描写） 老师格外严厉，害得我紧张到频频忘词。 4.Feeling extremely discouraged, I almost gave up. （情感描写） 我满心颓丧，差点就此放弃。 5.Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgement that something else is more important than fear. （主旨升华） 勇气并非毫无畏惧，而是心中认定，有远比恐惧更值得坚守的事物。 二、拓展续写话题素材 —— 精准构建表达基石 情感描写：紧张 【经典词汇】 1.nervous adj. 紧张的 2.tense adj. 紧张的，焦虑的 3.uneasy adj. 担忧的，不安的 → uneasiness n. 担忧，不安 【亮点短语】 1.uneasiness 不安 2.palms sweat 手心出汗 3.a nervous glance 紧张的一瞥 4.a flood/wave of tension 一阵紧张 5.with one’s heart in one’s mouth 提心吊胆地 6.tremble/shake with anxiety 因焦虑不安而颤抖 7.one’s heart flies into one’s mouth 心提到嗓子眼 8.with/have butterflies in one’s stomach 心里发慌 9.feel one’s throat tightened and one’s mouth dry感到喉咙发紧、嘴发干 【出彩佳句】 1.So violently did his heart beat that he felt on pins and needles. 心跳如此剧烈，他感到如坐针毡。 （倒装句；比喻句） 2.He was about to respond when he felt his tongue tied and palms sweating. 他正要回答时，感觉舌头打结，手心冒汗。 3.Trembling nervously, I bit my fingernails and kept my head down and my eyes fixed on the floor. 我紧张地颤抖着，咬着指甲，低着头，眼睛盯着地板。 4.My heart in my mouth, I didn’t move an inch, staring at what was happening. 我的心都提到了嗓子眼儿，一动不动，盯着眼前发生的一切。 （独立主格结构） 三、重锤锤炼写场景 —— 积累内化应用提升 【学以致用】 场景导入：演讲比赛登台前，“我” 便开始紧张。“我” 在忐忑不安中登上了舞台，观众的掌声鼓舞了 “我”，化解了 “我” 的焦虑，让 “我” 顺利完成了比赛…… With butterflies in my stomach, my heart pounding wildly and palms sweating, I paced back and forth backstage. When my name was called, 1.___________________(我是如此的激动以至于) that I felt my throat tightened, my mouth dry and my legs trembling uncontrollably. 2.______________________(极度的不安所淹没；过去分词短语作状语) However, I stepped onto the stage,3.________________________ (心提到了嗓子眼；独立主格结构). 4._________________ (尴尬又紧张；形容词短语作状语), I forced a smile and glanced at the audience. Then, to encourage me, the audience clapped explosively, which melted away my inner anxiety. Beyond my expectations, my speech went smoothly and the audience were 5. ___________________ (极为激动), 6. _____________________(都为我的表现鼓掌；独立主格结构). 【趁热打铁】 场景导入：高考成绩查询通道开放，我攥着手机坐立难安，满心忐忑。屏幕加载的短短几秒仿佛度日如年，看到总分那一刻，积压许久的不安消散，长久付出终有回响。 With butterflies in my stomach, my heart pounding wildly and palms sweating, I stared at the phone screen nervously. When the score page finished loading, 1._________________________（我是如此的紧张，以至于喉咙发紧）, my mouth dry and my legs trembling uncontrollably. 2._____________________(被巨大的不安裹挟；过去分词短语作状语) However, I fixed my eyes firmly on the numbers on the screen, 3. ____________________ (心提到了嗓子眼；独立主格结构). 4.___________________________ (焦灼不安；形容词短语作状语), I held my breath and counted the digits of my total score. Then, to my great surprise, the satisfying score washed away all my inner anxiety. Beyond my wildest expectations, all my years of hard work paid off and my parents stood beside me, 5. __________________ (激动不已), 6. ________________________(全都为我的好成绩欢呼；独立主格结构). 【拔高提能】 场景导入:文艺汇演即将轮到我上台表演，后台等候时我满心慌乱不安，手心不停冒汗。听见主持人念到我的名字，我紧张到双腿发颤，可看到台下老师鼓励的目光后，心中的焦虑慢慢消散，从容完成了表演。 With butterflies in my stomach, my heart pounding wildly and palms sweating, I paced back and forth behind the curtain. When the host called my name, 1._____________________that I felt on pins and needles (我的心跳得厉害，整个人如坐针毡;倒装+比喻）while waiting backstage 2.____________________ (被强烈的不安笼罩；过去分词短语作状语) However, I took a deep breath and moved toward the stage, 3.______________________(心提到了嗓子眼；独立主格结构). 4._____________________ (局促慌乱；形容词短语作状语), I lowered my head and dared not look at the audience. Then, catching sight of my teacher’s warm smile, the tension inside me faded away little by little. Beyond my expectations, I delivered my performance calmly, and all the spectators were 5. _______________________ (看得十分投入), 6. _____________________(全都为我的表演热烈鼓掌；独立主格结构). 参考答案 【学以致用】 1.so nervous was I 2.Overcome by extreme uneasiness 3.my heart in my mouth 4.Awkward and nervous 5.on the edge of their seats 6.all applauding my performance 【趁热打铁】 1.so anxious was I that I felt my throat tightened 2.Overcome by overwhelming uneasiness 3.my heart in my mouth 4.Anxious and restless 5.on the edge of their seats 6.all cheering for my good grades 【拔高提能】 1.So violently did my heart beat 2.Overcome by intense uneasiness 3.my heart in my mouth 4.Awkward and panicked 5.on the edge of their seats 6.all clapping loudly for my show 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $