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Sunday 高效提分训练
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言之有“艺”(五)——三大句式添亮点
习提分技法
写作中运用三大从句,可使文章语言更为丰富
运用定语从句,让表述更丰满
在写作中可利用定语从句表达信息或转换句式。 This semester our school offers many optional courses to the students, each of which appeals to many students.这学期,我们学校为学生们开设了许多选修课,每门课都吸引了很多学生。
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运用名词性从句,让表达更多样
在写作中可利用名词性从句表达信息或转换句式。 It is known that table tennis is a national ball in my country, so that you should know what my favorite sport is.众所周知,乒乓球是中国的国球,因此你应该知道我最喜欢的运动是什么。
运用状语从句,让逻辑更清晰
在写作中可利用状语从句表达关键信息或转换并列句。 However tough the task is, there is no doubt that we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed.不管任务多么艰巨,我们都将毫无疑问地克服所有困难并取得成功。
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练提分好题
Ⅰ.三大从句用于应用文写作
用恰当的引导从句的关联词补全下面的图表类应用文,并背诵全文。
I’m pleased to share the results of a survey ①________________ was conducted on students’ weekly exercise habits. According to the data, 40% of students engage in physical activities for 2~4 hours weekly, while 28% exercise 4~5 hours. It is alarming ②__________ 18% remain below 2 hours, and only 14% meet the recommended standard of over 5 hours.
that/which
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The findings are concerning. ③_________________________ regular exercise enhances both health and academic performance, many prioritize studies over sports due to academic pressure or low motivation. To address this, we suggest ④______ schools set aside more time for PE classes and organize fun activities like relay races to spark students’ interest.
Let’s remember: a healthy body fuels a focused mind. Start moving today!
While/Though/Although
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Ⅱ.三大从句用于读后续写
用恰当的引导从句的关联词补全下面的“旅行与探险类”读后续写片段。
While the group went in for tea, I laid on the ground, nearly crying from the physical pain from the challenging hike. At that moment, I truly didn’t think ①__________ I could do it. But then I opened my eyes to the beauty ②__________ surrounded me —numerous wild flowers all over the rolling mountains, feasting cows and high-altitude villages, ③__________ were the type of beauty you truly can’t find anywhere else—and realized
that
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that ④_____ I gave up now I’d never forgive myself. The hotel owner was very kind, ⑤__________ brought me warm water and some medicine. He also suggested ⑥__________ I bring some oxygen just in case, and I did so, ⑦__________ turned out to be life-saving.
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微技能小练 读后续写之情感细节描写(三)
根据汉语提示补全下面与“感动、感激、温暖和宽慰”相关的细节描写并背诵。
1.All those present to listen to her sad story ____________________ (感动得落泪).
2.______________________ (被深深地感动) and feeling a lump in my throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly.
3.________________________________ (感激的泪水在她的眼眶里打转) as she accepted the flowers.
were moved to tears
Touched/Moved deeply
Tears of gratitude welled up in her eyes
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4.I finally sat down and cried, and ________________________________
_______________(温暖和解脱交织的感觉涌上心头).
5.________________________ (她感到既温暖又宽慰) on the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner.
6.Alice saw the tall building where her office was. _________________________ (她如释重负地松了口气).
a mixture of warmth and relief flooded over me
She felt warm and relieved
She breathed a sigh of relief
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