周9-7-Sunday 高效提分训练（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢应用文+读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，覆盖Week 5和Week 9内容，聚焦特殊句式（强调句、倒装句、虚拟语气、省略句）在应用文写作（道歉信、推荐信）及“战胜挑战”主题读后续写中的应用，辅以情感细节描写微技能训练，提供例句、翻译、补全练习及背诵任务等学习支架。 资料特色突出，融合新课标核心素养，通过强调句升级道歉信语句、倒装句优化读后续写片段等实例，提升学生语言表达能力与思维品质，情感细节描写练习助力丰富写作内容，既帮助学生掌握提分技法以应对升学考试，也为教师提供系统教学素材，提升教学效率。

Sunday　高效提分训练 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 言之有“艺”(三)——特殊句式 习提分技法 特殊句式能使句式生动,吸引阅卷老师 强调句和倒装句 强调句型“It is/was+被强调成分+that/who+其他成分”可以加强语气,突出某些人物或事件的重要性;运用部分/全部倒装句以示强调。 It is your detailed explanation on the topic that appeals to me most.就是你对这个话题详细的解释最吸引我。 Following the speech is a one-hour lecture on the history of Chinese music.演讲之后是一小时的中国音乐历史讲座。 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 虚拟语气和省略句 虚拟语气可使语气委婉,常用于请求和建议的情景;用省略句可避免不必要的重复。 If it had not been for your assistance, I would not have made such rapid progress.要不是你的帮助,我就不会取得如此快的进步。 When asked about happiness, we usually think of something extraordinary, an absolute delight.当被问及幸福时,我们通常会想到一些不同寻常的事,一种绝对的喜悦。 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 练提分好题 Ⅰ.特殊句式用于应用文写作 根据汉语提示补全或用特殊句式升级下面的道歉信,并背诵全文。 Dear Nancy, I’m sorry to tell you I cannot go to the show with you next Saturday. I am writing to apologize to you. The reason why I am not available is that we volunteers are to launch a campaign at that time ①______________________________ ______________________ (用强调句升级). As a registered volunteer, it is it is at that time that we volunteers are to launch a campaign 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 my responsibility to participate in public welfare activities. ②__________ _________________ (我真的希望你能原谅我,用助动词强调动词). Meanwhile, if it is convenient for you, ③_________________________ (我建议我们另安排日期). If it is not ④______ (用省略句升级), let me know what time suits you. 　　Sorry again for any inconvenience caused. Yours, Li Hua I do hope you can forgive me I suggest we fix another date If not 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 Ⅱ.特殊句式用于读后续写 根据汉语提示用特殊句式补全或升级下面的“脱险类”读后续写片段,并体会细节描写。 When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed. ①________ ____________________________________________________________ (直到一个医生走进屋子,我才意识到我在医院,强调句). After a few minutes, my parents hurried in anxiously. They held my hands and kissed me on the face.“I’m sorry,” I murmured. They comforted me, “Thank It was not until a doctor came into the room that I realized that I was in a hospital 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 goddess, you’re OK! But do remember safety comes first!” With tears in my eyes, I nodded. I would never forget the terrifying experience ②________________________________________ (用倒装句升级) and neither would I show off again. Never would I forget the terrifying experience 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 微技能小练　读后续写之情感细节描写(一) 根据汉语提示或用所给词的正确形式补全下面与“高兴”相关的细节描写并背诵。 1._________________________________________ (他脸上掠过喜悦的神色). 2.__________________________ (满心欢喜), John raced home in no time. 3.I felt __________ (happy) and relief flooding over me. 4.Holding the gift close to her chest, the girl ______________________ (开心地跳着出去). A look of joy/happiness flashed across his face Filled with/Full of pleasure happiness danced out happily/joyfully 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 5.He was beaming at the students, his arms opened wide, as if nothing could have __________ (please) him more than to see them all there. 6.Stars appeared in the sky, _____________________________________ ________ (高兴地向他们眨眼睛). 7.As they hugged each other tightly, _______________________________ (高兴的泪水涌上了他们的眼睛). pleased twinkling their eyes at them in happiness/ delight tears of joy welled up in their eyes 第 1 页 Week 9　道歉/婉拒信&“战胜挑战”读后续写 $