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Writing 1 道歉信 | 德育 | 向外教道歉用AI生成作文
假定你是李华,外教Mr. Chuck发现你的作文完全由AI生成,将其判为不及格。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1.承认错误;2.做出许诺;
3.补救措施。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
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Dear Mr. Chuck,_______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
考教衔接:人教B1U1,外研B1U1,人教B2U3;
请参考素材9 “道歉/婉拒”,附录一~二
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审题谋篇
文体:道歉信
人称:第一、第二人称
时态:一般过去时(承认错误行为)、一般现在时(表达认识和道歉)、一般将来时/情态动词(承诺和提出补救措施)
读者意识:直面问题,不能含糊,以最诚恳的态度承认严重的学术不端行为(使用AI代写),通过深刻的反思、坚定的承诺和具体的补救方案,寻求老师的谅解,并挽回个人信誉与师生信任
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Dear Mr. Chuck,
I’m sincerely sorry for submitting an AI-generated essay.致歉 I realize it cost my integrity (损害我的诚信) and deeply regret my actions.承认错误
This shortcut reflects poorly on my commitment to learning, and I take full responsibility (承担全部责任).反思问题本质 I promise this will never happen again.承诺改正 From now on, I will complete all assignments independently, focusing on developing genuine writing skills through careful practice and
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research.具体行动 To make up for (弥补) this, I’ll rewrite the essay manually this weekend, consulting only approved materials.提出具体补救方案 I welcome any additional tasks you might suggest to regain your trust.重获信任的诚意
Sorry again and thank you for your understanding. 再次致歉+感谢理解
Yours,
Li Hua
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佳句 From now on, I will complete all assignments independently, focusing on developing genuine writing skills through careful practice and research. (分词短语作状语)
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Writing 2 婉拒信 | 德育 | 谢绝朋友去动物园的邀请
假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友Wilson邀请你本周末和他一同去动物园看大熊猫,但你有事不能陪他前往。请你给他发封邮件谢绝邀请,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明理由;3.另约时间。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
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Dear Wilson,__________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
教考衔接:人教B2U2,外研B1U5,北师大B2U5;请参考素材9
“道歉/婉拒”,素材10“观点、意见和理由”,附录一~二
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审题谋篇
文体:婉拒信
人称:第一、第二人称
时态:一般现在时(表达当前的状态、感受和事实)、一般将来时/情态动词(说明冲突,提出替代方案)
读者意识:邮件需让交换生朋友Wilson 感受到:①他的邀请被重视和感激;②拒绝是因为确实存在的、合理的优先事项;③非常希望在未来兑现这次聚会
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Dear Wilson,
While I appreciate your invitation to visit pandas this weekend, I might disappoint you by regretfully declining it.感谢邀请+表示歉意
There happens to be an event of great importance specially held for the elderly in the nursing home this weekend. As a volunteer there, I have been earnestly longing for (热切渴望) the chance to do something meaningful for the elderly.说明理由 I must express my sincere apologies to you for the regret I may cause.表示道歉
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If it is convenient for you next weekend, I’d be delighted to accompany you there.另约时间 Eagerly expecting your reply.期待回复
Yours,
Li Hua
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佳句 While I appreciate your invitation to visit pandas this weekend, I might disappoint you by regretfully declining it. (while引导的让步状语从句)
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