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Thursday 练应用文写作
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Writing 1 德育 | 感谢网友寄来的生日礼物
假定你是李华,在生日来临之际,你收到了美国网友Nancy寄来的礼物。请你用英语给她写一封感谢信,内容包括:1.礼物已收到;2.表达谢意;3.回赠礼物。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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教考衔接:外研B1U4,外研B3U1;请参考素材7 “感谢”,附录一~二
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审题谋篇
文体:感谢信
人称:第一、第二人称
时态:一般过去时(描述收到礼物)、一般现在时(表达当前的感受和事实)、一般将来时(发出邀请)
读者意识:Nancy是对中国文化感兴趣的美国友人,需让她感受到礼物被真心喜爱,回赠具有文化特色的礼物
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Dear Nancy,
I am so happy to receive your gift.致谢 Thank you so much for such a great camera with which I can take many interesting photos to record my colorful life.原因
Knowing you are interested in Chinese culture, I have chosen a collection of (一些) traditional Chinese music records for you. Therefore, you can enjoy a lot of famous music played by different unique instruments of China such as the pipa, erhu and guzheng.回赠的礼物
美文诵读
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Thank you again and I hope you will come to China and experience wonderful traditional Chinese music in person (亲自) with me.表示感谢+发出邀请
Yours,
Li Hua
美文诵读
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佳句 Thank you so much for such a great camera with which I can take many interesting photos to record my colorful life. (介词+which引导的定语从句)
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Writing 2 德育 | 感谢好友帮助
假定你是李华,你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前,你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.分享获奖的喜悦;2.感谢他的帮助;3.邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
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Dear Peter,___________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
教考衔接:人教B1U5,外研B1U2,外研B1U4;
请参考素材7 “感谢”,素材2“邀请”,附录一~二
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审题谋篇
文体:感谢信
人称:第一、第二人称
时态:一般过去时(描述对方的帮助)、一般现在时(表达感受、感谢和邀请)
读者意识:交换生好友Peter不仅是帮助者,也是共同庆祝的伙伴。邮件需让他感受到:①他的帮助是决定性的;②他的朋友珍视这份情谊;③他作为朋友被真诚欢迎和需要。
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Dear Peter,
I am thrilled to share with you that I just won first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week! This accomplishment is undoubtedly a result of your invaluable assistance (无价的帮助).分享获奖的喜悦
Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition,which I really appreciate.感谢帮助 To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit. It would be a pleasure to have you as my guest and to thank you in person for all your help.邀请做客
美文诵读
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Thanks again for everything you have done for me.再次致谢
Yours,
Li Hua
美文诵读
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佳句 Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition,which I really appreciate. (非限制性定语从句)
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